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Old 08-26-2007, 04:26 PM   #126 (permalink)
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aww don't tell me Draco is sad!??
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**tis glad you all liked teh post**
Forgot to update at like, the hours I was awake today and online (midnight - 4am), so I'm updating now before shopping!
There isn't really much to this chapter actually... but it's something! And a bit of a cliffie (depending on how you think of it).
And I was out of chapter ideas, but trust me, this isn't the worst one (there's one that's totally random and kinda funny in a weird and messed up way coming up).
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Chapter 13
Out of the Closet


“What happened?” Ginny whispered as she and Hermione headed towards Gryffindor Tower minutes after their scene.

“You see Gin, in the plan we’re supposed to...”

“You know what I mean!” Ginny cut in indignantly.

Hermione sighed. “Look... I think there’s more to this idea than what meets the eye.”

Ginny’s eyebrow rose. They went up the last flight of stairs and stopped their conversation when they reached the Fat Lady.

“Buckbeak,” Hermione said after a moment’s thought - the password had changed to Hagrid’s hippogriff’s old name just the day before. The door swung open, and the two passed through the portrait hole.

“So, you were saying...”

“Not here,” Hermione whispered when she saw clutters of students in the common room.

The two passed through silently and ran up the stairs. They were quiet on the walk down the hall, and even when they stepped into Hermione’s room. Ginny shut the door and spun around to face Hermione.

“What happened?” she asked.

“What with exactly?” Hermione asked back in a parroting tone.

“With you making it bloody obvious that we staged that!”

“Oh, that...” Hermione’s cheeks burned. Ginny started to smirk.

“Ooh, what’s the story behind this one?”

“We kind of snogged...”

Ginny gapped. A few incoherent noises came from her mouth as she attempted to say... something. Hermione listened for a few minutes, but when Ginny didn’t stop, she slapped her friend across the face. Ginny was shocked momentarily.

“Thanks,” she said in a sarcastic tone, moaning and rubbing the cheek Hermione struck.

“You would’ve blabbered on if I didn’t,” Hermione retorted.

“Oh yeah... you snogged him?!” Ginny squealed suddenly and recoiled when Hermione’s hand rose, which was really just to signal a ‘shush’.

“What don’t you get about it? I’ve said ‘I snogged Malfoy’ two times already! Well now three, but…”

“WHY?!” Ginny cut in loudly.

“BECAUSE!” Hermione yelled back. She brought her voice back down and said, “Because one thing led to another – we didn’t plan anything, it just happened. We fixed up each other’s robes to make it appear like… you know what I mean. He zoned out while looking at me, I snapped him out of it. It became to quiet, so I asked him small things like ‘is it the closet?’. It came to ‘ever been in a closet with a girl?’ and ‘would you like a better reason for being here?’ and we kind of started snogging…”

Ginny started pacing; her habit when she’s either nervous or deep in thought.

“What happened after? You took awhile to come out, but then you two disappeared and it took me forever to find you!”

“Five minutes isn’t forever, Gin!” Hermione cut in. “And I just pulled Malfoy aside to ask if we should just put this all behind us.”

Ginny snapped her attention to Hermione. “What’d he say?”

“He... he said ok,” Hermione said after a moment. “In a nod...”

Ginny sighed and sat on her bed. “What else did he say?”

“That’s all he said, I swear!” Hermione exclaimed.

“You stink at lying, you know that, right?”

Hermione stuck her tongue out at Ginny and sat down on the bed across from her. She looked down at her feet.

“It’s not what he said...”

“You just have to make this difficult,” Ginny snapped. “What’d he do?”

“It’s not what he ‘did’ either.”

“What else is there? How did he look? That’s a redundant question to... wait a minute...”

“Exactly!” Hermione cut in. “Anyways, before he said ‘ok’, deep, I mean deep, in his eyes, there was a flicker of hurt or... brokenness.”

Ginny’s eyes slowly widened. Her mouth moved, but no words came out. She stood up and started pacing again. After a few moments, she spun around on the spot and turned to Hermione, a look of shocked realization on her face.

“What...?” Hermione asked cautiously.

“Malfoy suggested this charade, right?”

“Obviously!” Hermione scoffed.

“He came up with all these ideas...?”

“Yeah.”

“He never likes to help people unless there’s a gain for him...”

Hermione’s eyes widened when she realized what Ginny was getting at.

“You mean...”

“Yes, Hermione. He might just have feelings for you.”

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Old 08-26-2007, 05:06 PM   #129 (permalink)
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*squeels*
They are such a cute couple Draco and 'Mione.
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*SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE*

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Old 08-26-2007, 07:24 PM   #131 (permalink)
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YES! realization!
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Old 08-26-2007, 07:30 PM   #132 (permalink)
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AHH! Draco likes Hermy. This gunna get more interesting.

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Old 08-26-2007, 11:09 PM   #133 (permalink)
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yay! i loved the new posts! and of course draco likes hermione, they're made for each other...
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Old 08-27-2007, 02:18 AM   #134 (permalink)

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ZOMG!! are you blind!! he snogged you of course he has feelings for you and since you snogged him you totally like him too!!! MAN!!!!!!! for the smartest witch of your age, Hermione, you're being very clueless right now!!!!!!!!!!



great realization chapter!
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*Ahem* Of course he has feeilings fo you!! Honestly Hermy I thought you were smart XD
But i would love to be in Hermione's postition
PAMS! I looove this story! *Clings*
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Ive fianly read ALL of your fan fics, and caught up with this one and i have to say, on this site you on on my list of top writers with a few others.
I loved the whole cupboard idea, and even better the part were they kissed.

Im not a big + fan, but i have to say you make it seem natural for them.

I hope you post soon, cant wait to see where it all leads.

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I wanted to see Harry's reaction! Post about that, I wanna see him mad! PAMSIOD!!!

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Lol! Who wouldn't?

I'll post sometime today, I promise.
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I said I'd post today! It might be 3 hours later than I planned, but it's here!
And you don't see Harry's reaction in this chapter, but there's an awesome chapter after this with a chase scene, fight scene... yeah, that's the next chapter. You'll see in the next few days (but definitely before September 4th, which is when my school starts)
Oh yeah, bit of a cliffie at the end
And I have a prewritten message I wrote... awhile back. Here it is:

I had a little (ok, a lot) of trouble with this chapter cause I wrote it after getting D.H and during reading so it’s kinda weird to write about a year that’s already been written but w/e! Hopefully it’s ok
And I finished D.H today (July 23, 2007) a few hours before writing this (2 hours before – finished at 7:44pm)
Enjoy!
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P.S: Yes, I wrote this chapter back in July. I'm working on chapter 25 now actually. The story is coming to an end soon, so probably no more than 30 chapters, and there WILL be a sequel most likely, I have the plot all done out (it was done out in the beginning of August thanks to a song).
Anyways...



Chapter 14
Ron Finds Out


Hermione slowly woke the next morning. She puttered around her dormitory, changing and brushing her hair. When she finished brushing her curly, yet somewhat bushy, brown hair, she looked in the mirror and thought, I should try something new today. She didn’t know why, but she felt like doing a bit of straightening to her hair. After using a series of different spells, her hair was straight underneath, but curled lightly on top.

I should do this more often...

Hermione smiled at her reflection and fixed her clothes. She had finished her homework on Friday, so she had the entire Sunday off. She left her dormitory and ran into Ginny.

“Did you straighten your hair?” Ginny asked as she held Hermione’s hair and scrutinized it.

“I tried; this is the best I got it to be.”

“It’s better than fully straightening it, I think,” Ginny responded with a smile as she dropped the section of Hermione’s hair. “So what’re you going to do today? Anything?”

“I’m not sure yet – I don’t plan anything on weekends,” Hermione responded as she walked down the stairs, Ginny following close behind. They were stopped by Ron, who stood as a barrier in front of the last stair, arms crossed and appearing rather angry.

“Ron, you’re kind of standing in our way,” Ginny said with an obvious tone.

Ron glared at her, and then Hermione.

“What?” Hermione asked, confused.

“You and Malfoy?” he growled deeply, obviously attempting to control his anger.

“Well... yeah, I suppose...”

“What the bloody hell is wrong with you? It’s MALFOY!

“Look, I should’ve told you about this, but...”

“But you decided to go and romp around in a closet, didn’t you?” Ron cut in. “How sick can you get?”

“Look, Ron...”

“Decided not to tell your friend about any of this, did you? Keep it from him, only making it obvious to Harry...”

“RON!” Hermione and Ginny yelled, cutting him off.

“WHAT?!”

“Look... I need to tell you something very important, but you can’t tell anyone...”

“That you’re with Malfoy? Everyone knows that, Hermione.”

“Just listen to me for one second, Ronald!” Hermione snapped, finally using his full name. Ron backed off slightly, knowing full well she was now furious. “Can I bring you, and Gin, somewhere else to talk about this?”

“No, we’ll talk about it right here,” Ron responded stubbornly. Hermione glared warningly. “Fine, fine... it better not take long though!”

Ron backed away and let Hermione through. She pulled him out of the common room and down the hall, Ginny watching Ron from behind to make sure he didn’t make a fuss. Hermione stopped in front of a tapestry, thinking for a moment.

Screw Harry and him telling me not telling anyone she thought as she pushed it out of the way. “Now be careful because it gets dark fast...”

“Why here?” Ron practically squeaked.

“It leads to a lighted opening. Now come on!”

Hermione led the other two down the hall and up the cold, hard stairs. She felt her way up, and then saw the light get brighter. After a few minutes, they finally made it up. She peered around; checking to make sure Harry wasn’t hiding anywhere.

“Ok, look,” Hermione started.

“Why here?”

“Well... only Harry knows about this place, and he showed me...”

“He showed you but not me?”

“ANYWAYS!” Ginny cut in loudly. She looked at Hermione and said, still knowing full well what was about to happen, “What is this about?”

“Ok, Gin, you don’t need to play, it’s just Ron that needs to know,” Hermione responded flatly.

Ron glared at his sister. “You knew about the two but didn’t tell me?”

“Well she’s telling you know!” Ginny snapped back. “But you’re not letting Hermione talk, now shut up and listen for once.”

Ron was silent and turned back to Hermione.

“Ok, look... ever since that French b... girl,” Hermione corrected herself. “Has been hanging around Harry... Well, when Harry showed me this place, he indicated I should keep it secret, but in a sense that started a fight... it was only a fight, but I kind of made him think we were broken up – he went to Jaimie, they talked and... kissed. I’m assuming after their first snog session a few weeks ago that they’re together.

“Anyways, I went down to the lake and took my anger out on seeing them kiss, and a shadow of a person I kept on seeing appeared again. I chased the person through the forest and tackled them to the ground – it was Malfoy.”

Hermione saw Ron’s anger building, but he was still listening. “He came up with a plan to help me get back at Harry... we appear as though we’re a couple in front of Harry.”

“What about the closet? Why the hell were you two... you know...”

“Ok, so when Harry wasn’t mad enough, he, gin, and I had to come up with some plans to make him jealous and angry. First it was an innocent kiss...”

“WHAT?!” Ron exploded. “YOU... YOU... YOU ACTUALLY KISSED THE FERRET?!”

“RONALD BILIUS WEASLEY! SHUT UP AND LISTEN TO HERMIONE!” Ginny shouted at him. Ron jumped away at the use of his entire name, and by his sister at that.

“C-c-continue,” Ron stammered.

“Small things like that is what Draco...”

“D-D-Dr... why the hell are you using the ferret’s first... never mind,” Ron added with a squeaky, high pitched voice when Ginny started to advance on him with an angered expression.

“Is what Draco and I did,” Hermione repeated with a hard tone. “To try and make Harry jealous. So, when our first idea wasn’t good enough, and when Harry got back at me by snogging in the common room with Jaimie, Draco came up with a better plan to get back at Harry – we go into the closet, ruffle up our clothes and when Ginny said a specific sentence, we come out and appear like we’ve done something.”

“So you... and him... never did... anything?”

“Well... not really.”

Ron looked suspicious.

“Nothing else happened, Ron. Give it a rest,” Ginny snapped, knowing Hermione would get herself into trouble if she tried to lie.

Ron rolled his eyes. He then sighed and said to Hermione, “You know what? If you have to resort to this to get Harry’s attention, what’s the point?”

“If he has to resort to using another girl to get me jealous, what’s the point?” Hermione pointed out. “Don’t try to blame this on me – Harry started it.”

“And how did he start it exactly?” Ron asked as he leaned against the stone banister, looking at Hermione with a hard curiosity in his eyes.

“He was... oh no, you don’t!” Hermione realized what Ron was trying to do.

“Don’t what?”

Hermione’s eyes widened at the new, male voice that had joined the conversation. She slowly turned to the opening that led back into the castle and saw...

“Harry? What’re you doing here?”

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Oh crud! *curses*

did Harry hear everything!!!???? pleaase let it be a no...just...the 'How did he start it' part!!!!


awesome chapter! *pokes Ron* *gangs up with Ginny*


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Hermione is going to extreme lengths to get Harry's attention. I'd be happy with Draco, and just leaving it there XD

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harry for listening in on a private conversation, i hope he didnt hear everything that was said.

Great post, and im really looking forward to the next one

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You never know if he was just walking up and heard the last thing Hermione said. Maybe he was just standing in the darkness, listening and waiting...
You'll find out in the next chapter

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*gasp*
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Yep, that pretty much explains it.
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