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10-05-2007, 09:43 PM
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#76 (permalink)
| | Erkling
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the first post was a little weird, i must admit...i mean, draco...talking to the nurse....it made me laugh. but it was good! AND I LOVED THE SECOND POST! it was really really good!!!!! lovvvveeedddd IT!!
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10-05-2007, 09:48 PM
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#77 (permalink)
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thanx! New post soon! | |
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10-06-2007, 02:07 AM
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LOVED IT!
DUM DUM DUM
Good for you, Draco.
Love you
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10-06-2007, 02:13 AM
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#79 (permalink)
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thanx Adge. love ya kid! new post soon! Probably tomorrow morning. I realized I write really well when I'm in my room, late at night, on my laptop, listening to music. So that is how I will write from now on. And I feel like typing tonight! Expect a pot (or maybe even more!) tomorrow lovlies! | |
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10-06-2007, 03:14 PM
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NEW READER ALERT!
i absoltely love this story!
PAMS! | |
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10-06-2007, 03:23 PM
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thanx! new post soon! | |
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10-07-2007, 01:43 AM
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|  DA News OfficerBicorn
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Hey Tara! Just caught up! These posts are lovely, and I can't believe what a b*tch Deja is being! She doesn't deserve someone as nice as Draco! PAMS darling!
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10-07-2007, 02:46 AM
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#83 (permalink)
| | Erumpent
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thanx Katie! New post tomorrow, probably! | |
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10-07-2007, 06:23 AM
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|  Chapter 12
Chapter 12
After a whole week of suffering, Madame Pomphrey released me from the Hospital Wing right before dinner, no sign of Draco there to help me. I cried the whole week, think about him, wishing he’d visit. I longed just to see even a single strand of his platinum blonde hair. But no such luck. He hadn’t been around all week.
I walked down the stairs, a little wobbly, looking around for Draco, but there was no sign of him. But as I walked, I had the strangest feeling that I was being watched. But I just shook the thought from my head and continued down the stairs slowly. I finally reached the Great Hall. By the time I had gotten there, dinner was already half way over. Everyone froze from eating and stared at me, quizzical looks plastered on both the students and teachers faces. Dumbledore gave me a polite nod, and I walked over to the Slytherin table, trying my best to ignore all the stares. I sat down at the end, everyone still silent and staring at me.
“Is there a problem!??,” I exclaimed, and suddenly the Great Hall erupted with noise again, everyone returning to their meals.
I put my head in my hands, not even bothering to eat. I wasn’t in the mood. I had other things on my mind. I scanned the table to find Draco sitting as far as he could sit from me. He was already looking at me when I looked at me, but then he lowered his head, acting as if he were eating dinner.
My heart sunk. He hadn’t forgiven me. And by the hurt expression he tried to hide on his face, I could tell that it could very well possibly take a while for that to happen, if ever.
I wrung my hands in my lap. My Slytherin uniform had gotten a little big due to the lack of proper nutrition I had received. I looked down at my hands for what seemed like eternity, and then I looked back up at Draco. He was looking at me. I gave him a look that said ‘I’m truly sorry’, but he gave me a stone cold look that said ‘I don’t want to hear it’.
Fresh hot tears brimmed the edges of my eyes. Everyone started getting up from dinner, Draco following in the pack. He walked past me, but when he got to the door, he turned and looked at me one last time, shook his head, and disappeared.
I waited patiently for everyone to leave. And then I lost it. I cried uncontrollably, probably the hardest I’ve ever cried in my life. It was just me and the house elves.
“Miss, what is upsetting you?,” one asked me.
I looked down at the frail creature, trying my best to stop crying.
“It’s a person…,” I said.
“Is there a chance that it is Mister Malfoy, miss?,” the elf questioned.
“How did you-”
“Oh…Mister Malfoy has spent many nights in the Slytherin common room, crying his eyes out over a girl he called Déjà. I was just a guessing that since you we’re in Slytherin, that perhaps you were the miss he was upset about,” the elf said.
“Oh,” I muttered, looking down at my hands.
Draco had cried about me just like I had cried about him.
“If you are the miss Déjà he cries of, you must have hurt him terribly. All he does is sit there, crying, repeating her name…,” the elf said.
“I know…I’ve hurt him badly…I wish I could take it all back,” I said.
“You can’t take it back…it’s too late for that, miss. But perhaps you could prove to him that you feel the same way,” the elf said. “Prove that he should forgive you.”
“I don’t know how…,” I said. “And even if I did know how, it’d be hard. Draco is very stubborn.”
“Well miss, please try to fix it. It hurts us elves to see him in such pain. He’s never been like this before, in all of the years I’ve known him…and that’s been since he was born. I used to work at the Manor he lives in. But I was freed,” the elf announced.
I just nodded.
“I’m Dobby, miss. I may no longer serve the young mister, but it still bothers me and the others to see him this hurt, miss. For his sake, please fix it…please miss,” the elf begged, and then he disappeared out of sight, and the Great Hall darkened.
I whipped away the tears from my face and tried to compose myself. I stood up and slowly walked toward the Slytherin dungeons. I finally got there and said the password to the door. I could have sworn I heard someone crying, but when I opened the door, I just found Draco sitting in a large chair, his head in his hands. I walked past him and up the stairs to my dorm. I didn’t care if the door squeaked too loudly. I didn’t care about anything. I just cared about trying to somehow get Draco back.
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10-07-2007, 07:10 AM
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#85 (permalink)
| | Erkling
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aww i liked this chapter a LOT!!! i dunno why, but i did! i feel so bad fer draco!! poor draco!! BAD BAD DEJA! heeheee
*Kate* | |
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10-07-2007, 06:31 PM
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#86 (permalink)
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Thanx Kate! New post in a couple of minutes! But in the mean time, I have a new FF up so please go read it!
Say I Ain't Right.
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10-07-2007, 08:18 PM
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| | Erumpent
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| Chapter 13
Chapter 13
The next day I woke up to snow falling. I was cold, but I moved a little faster today. I got up and got ready for class, wearing my warmest Slytherin robes. I walked out into the common room, but not a single trace of Draco was anywhere. I sighed and walked out, my school bag hanging off my shoulder. I went to the Great Hall for breakfast, but there was no sign of Draco anywhere. I really must have upset him.
I took a seat at the end of the table, grabbed a muffin and some coffee, and quickly ate. I finished off my coffee and began to make my way to class. The Potions class was the furthest away, and I couldn’t walk as fast as usual due to pain. I was three-fourths of the way there when the late bell rang. I moaned, trying to walk faster. About four minutes later, I arrived in class.
“Miss Donatella…welcome back. Please take a seat,” Snape said.
I looked around the classroom and there was only one empty seat open. The seat next to Draco.
I swore under my breath and took my seat as Snape muttered something about me not worrying about my project that was due for him. He said he’d give me an ‘O’, because he knew I’d receive one even if I actually did my project. I didn’t really care, though. A good grade wasn’t what I wanted.
Snape assigned potion for us to make, and I quickly began to work. I got everything ready, and I reached for a piece of tree bark. As I did, my hand brushed Draco’s, sending shivers and sparks up my arm. I quickly pulled back, and looked at him. He was shaking from the feeling, too. But he looked at me for a moment, and then he looked away, working on his project as if I wasn’t even the person who was next to him. Flinging myself off a bridge and landing into a shallow pond full of sharks would have felt better than the strong silence between Draco and I. It was all I could do to control myself from breaking down and crying, and telling Draco I made a huge mistake and begging for mercy. But I didn’t know what to do. Instead I did my work completely wrong, since my thoughts were all on the boy next to me. But Snape still gave me an ‘O’, warning me to be more cautious next time.
I could see Draco glancing at me out of the corner of his eye. But when the bell rang, he sped out of the class before I even finished getting my books in my bag.
And that’s how it was. I spent the rest of the day all alone. Meal times, in between classes, free periods, class time, you name it. I was alone. And I had never felt worse in my life.
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10-07-2007, 11:31 PM
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#88 (permalink)
| | Erkling
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uh huh see thats what she gets now! hmph. she was sooo mean to him before...she DESERVES IT! lol...rawr! hmph. i liked this chapter a lot! heehee!
*Kate* | |
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10-08-2007, 02:35 AM
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lol thanx Kate. new post tomorrow! | |
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10-08-2007, 12:08 PM
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| | Imp
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loved the post!!!!!!!!!!!!!
PAMS! | |
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10-09-2007, 12:07 AM
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#91 (permalink)
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thanx! New post in a couple of minutes! | |
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10-09-2007, 01:06 AM
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| | Erumpent
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Chapter 14
Weeks passed and I found myself one of the very few students at Hogwarts. It was Christmas morning, and Draco wasn’t here. He left for holiday, a bitter cold longing beating in my chest.
I sat up, the end of my bed piled with gifts from my parents. I opened all of them, not even really caring. I felt emotionless. Like my whole reason for existing, for smiling, for laughing, for having emotions was gone like Draco.
I finally was down to one last gift. I knew it wasn’t from my parents, because they wrote their names on the gift tags. This one just simply said ‘To: Déjà’.
The gift was a rectangle box, about the size of your average hardback book. It was wrapped in silver wrapping paper and topped with a green wrap-around bow. I pulled on the bow and it came off. I gently ripped off the paper to reveal a black velvet box. I opened it softly and gazed down at the sight in front of me.
Laying on white silk was the most beautiful piece of jewelry I’ve probably ever laid my eyes on. It was a long silver chain, a large pennant attached to it. The pennant was a silver star covered in diamonds. I knew it had to have been expensive. It took my breath away to look at it. I slowly lifted it from the box and clasped it together around my neck. I rubbed my hand over the star, feeling a certain warmth to it. It felt warm, like a person. I continued to rub my hand over it, surprised that anyone would care enough about me to give me a gift as extravagant as this.
I spent my Christmas alone. I barely even ate at the Christmas feast, just a small piece of turkey. I was too busy toying with the necklace, racking my brain for anyone who would have send me the necklace.
It was almost like a mood ring, only instead of changing colors, it changed temperatures. It was if it was changing to someone’s feelings, not my own. I felt it get warm, and then it get cold. I wanted to know badly who gave it to me. | |
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10-09-2007, 01:31 AM
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#93 (permalink)
| | Erkling
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i have a feeling it isnt draco...hmm...darn....gur argh...lol. just talking, er, typing to myself...
*Kate* | |
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10-09-2007, 02:01 AM
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#94 (permalink)
| | Erumpent
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lol thanx for the comment! New post tomorrow! | |
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10-09-2007, 08:43 PM
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| | Erumpent
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| Chapter 15
Chapter 15
New years came and left, and students were arriving back to school, expressions on their faces clear that they would rather be back at home. But I didn’t care. Either way, I was a miserable mess.
Draco still ignored me when he arrived back. I was hoping the Holidays would somehow affect him and make him forgive me, but no such luck. He was still not talking to me.
It really hurt. I longed to hear Draco laugh at me, to say my name. To tell me how beautiful he thought I was, even though I thought otherwise. To hear him beg me to help him with homework, or to ask me about my latest vision. To see him smirk at me, or purposely try to upset me. But all I was left with was the occasional glances he gave me. His face completely blank each time.
One evening, I was eating dinner in the Great Hall, the overwhelming feeling of being watched engulfing me. I looked down to see Draco’s chin rested on his bawled up fists, looking directly at my necklace. When he noticed I was looking at him, the necklace seemed to burn my skin. I winced in pain and pulled it off my chest. I looked at Draco, giving him a look that asked why he was looking at me, and the necklace began to feel cold like ice. I tried to take the necklace off, but it wouldn’t budge. Draco’s eyes still lingered on the pennant.
Finally, I couldn’t take anymore. I had reached my boiling point. I jumped up and went over to Draco, yanking him by his wrist and pulling him into the closest empty classroom. I slammed the door behind me in fury.
“What the hell is your problem! Why are you staring at me!?,” I exclaimed, my voice echoing off the walls.
“I wasn’t,” he said, not looking at me.
“Yes, you were! You were staring at my necklace! And each look you gave me made the necklace change!,” I yelled.
“You’re insane,” Draco rolled his eyes.
“No I’m not! Each look you gave me made the necklace change from hot to cold,” I said.
“Good,” he said.
“What do you mean? Why are you acting like this?,” I asked, nearly begging.
“I have nothing to say to you,” Draco muttered, brushing past me and out of the room, making my necklace burn.
Out of anger, I picked up several books and flung them across the classroom. My necklace changed from hot to cold, as if it was sad.
I stormed up to the Slytherin common room and into my dorm as I tried to rip the necklace off, but it didn’t work. I tried every spell known to wizards to remove it and none of them worked. After hours of trying, I passed out on my bed out of exhaustion. The necklace reminded me of how Draco used to be.
It was impossible to get rid of. | |
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10-10-2007, 05:13 PM
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OMG!!!!!!! HELP! I think i'm ganna have a heart atack! THIS IS CRAAAZZZY!!!! I need to, HAVE TO know more!!!!
PLEASE, please, please PAMS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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10-10-2007, 09:43 PM
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#97 (permalink)
| | Erumpent
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thanx! new post soon! | |
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10-10-2007, 11:00 PM
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#98 (permalink)
| | Erkling
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that was weird...now im confused....=( lol...but all shall be revealed...so i shall be patient. lol
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10-11-2007, 12:55 AM
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#99 (permalink)
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lol thanx! New post, probably tomorrow! | |
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10-11-2007, 01:13 AM
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| DA News Officer Bicorn
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PAMS soon Tara! I gotta know who sent that darn necklace!
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