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09-08-2007, 04:55 AM
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|  Déjà Vu - Sa16+
Hey everyone! This is Tara, back with yet another FF! This is my 24th FF here on SS, so I hope you all love this one as much as the others! Enjoy!
Much love!
XOXO,
Tara
Summary
Déjà Vu Donatella isn’t your average girl. Apart from being extremely, almost painfully, beautiful, she is psychic. Her visions are never clear, and the future can sometimes change from how she originally pictured it. And to top it all off, Déjà is practically cursed. Bad things constantly happen to her, but there is always someone to save the day. Draco Malfoy, being in love with Déjà, constantly follows her, appearing everywhere she is. But he always only pops up at the best or worst times. And when one really bad incident takes place in Déjà’s life, will Draco be there to help? Or will Déjà find herself at the true fate of one of her visions?
Chapter 1
I am the type of girl disaster seems to have fun to striking at. People tell me that besides that, my beauty is almost too much to bare, but I don’t believe them. Honestly, I’m not that pretty, or at least that’s what I think. And I always seem to have bad stuff happen to me, even though I see it before it happens.
You see, everyone in my family has a different gift. My father can read people’s minds, and my mother can see into the future. Before she had me, she knew I too was going to be a psychic. She says that’s why she named me Déjà Vu. My first name is Déjà while my middle name is Vu. So all together, my name is Déjà Vu Donatella. Which is weird, seeing as my last name means ‘beautiful gift’ in Italian, and my mom thinks being psychic is a beautiful gift. I think otherwise. My visions just annoy and confuse me. As if my life wasn’t already hard enough to understand. And just like Draco, my visions seemed to always follow me and annoy to a point of insanity.
I sat, gazing out of the window, waiting to go to Hogwarts. I heard the door open, and I automatically knew who it was, even without being psychic.
“Oh honestly Draco, don’t you ever go away!??,” I spat, looking up at the tall, blonde figure that always seemed to consume my sight.
Draco plopped down next to me and slid his arm around my shoulder.
“So you’re resorted to calling me ‘Draco’ again. Thanks,” Draco said, smiling down at me.
I shrugged his arm off of me and moved over on the seat, stretching out my legs so that Draco now sat at the end of my feet.
“What? You don’t like me being here?,” Draco asked, attempting to look hurt, but I could see it was all he could do to not flash off that famous smirk of his.
I rolled my eyes at him, and pulled out a book. I began to read, but I could feel Draco’s eyes lingering on me the whole time.
“Don’t you have prefect duties or something like that to attend to?,” I asked, getting sick of his grey eyes consuming my body.
“Who cares about those when I can be here with you,” Draco said, attempting at a smile.
But with him being a Malfoy, it just didn’t work. His smirk creeped upon his face once again. As usual. Oh God.
“Honestly, Draco, you’re like a stalker,” I sighed, looking away.
“Oh come on Déjà, admit it. You, like all the other girls in the world, are madly in love with me,” Draco smirked, leaning back in his seat.
“Or not,” I replied.
I stood up and Draco tried to pull me back, but I was too quick for him, and was already out of the compartment door before he could get a hold of me.
“Try to be careful this year,” Draco whispered, his lips brushing my ear as he talked. “I’ll be watching…”
I turned to look at him, but not a single strand of white-blonde hair was in sight. All that was in my vision was other people’s plain hair atop their heads. I sighed and went back into my compartment, wondering when Draco would strike again. Draco deserved his name, he was very much like a dragon: full of fire, quick, and always seeming to be there. Another reason for me to be annoyed.
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Chapter 10
Chapter 11
Chapter 12
Chapter 13
Chapter 14
Chapter 15
Chapter 16
Chapter 17
Chapter 18
Chapter 19
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09-08-2007, 03:14 PM
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OOOOOOH
Nice start, I like it  | |
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09-08-2007, 03:14 PM
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thanx Adge! I'll probably post later today... | |
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09-08-2007, 07:32 PM
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Ooh, I love it! Can't wait to see what happens next 
PAMS! | |
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09-08-2007, 08:06 PM
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thanx Twinneh! | |
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09-08-2007, 09:00 PM
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Hm, I think this might be my favorite FF or yours so far. | |
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09-09-2007, 02:19 AM
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omg i loveee it! its really good. keep it going...! | |
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09-09-2007, 02:22 AM
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| | Erumpent
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thanx everyone! New post soon, perhaps tomorrow! (Sunday) | |
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09-09-2007, 03:13 AM
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this is a great story! i love it already! | |
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09-09-2007, 04:27 PM
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Tara, you think of the weirdest names! Interesting start, PAMS soon!
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09-09-2007, 06:39 PM
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| | Erumpent
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thanx everyone! I'll work on the next chapter soon! | |
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09-09-2007, 07:36 PM
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New Reader!
Interesting start!PAMS!
-Keza
P.S I LOVE CHRIS BREEZY TOO@ <3 <3 | |
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09-09-2007, 07:52 PM
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| | Erumpent
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thanx! I'm going to start the next chapter soon. Keep a look out! | |
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09-09-2007, 08:21 PM
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That name deserves an applause! *Claps*
I love it mah Tara 
PAMS! Plllleeeaaasssee, I seriously love this FF 
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09-09-2007, 08:23 PM
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thanx Hollz. I'm working on the post right now! Keep a look out for it! | |
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09-11-2007, 12:05 AM
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*keeps eyes out*.....AHHH!!! How do I put them back in??
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09-11-2007, 01:07 AM
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| | Erumpent
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lol Katie. I've already written half of the post, so I'm working on it right now. I've got a lot of drama going on right now, so please forgive me for not posting tonight. Sorry guys! I'll try to post tonight or early tomorrow (its 9:10 p.m. right now). And I see your location Katie...I'M HIDING TOM NOW!!! *hides Tom and runs away with him to write more for my FF* | |
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09-11-2007, 11:25 AM
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| Chapter 2
Chapter 2
Thank God, Dumbledore didn’t see fit to make us sit through another one of his long speeches this year. At least someone has some mercy.
I sat at the end of the Slytherin table, Draco next to me. No matter how hard I tried to get away from him, he always seemed to be there anyways. He was like a bad dream. But I’m sure all the girls of Hogwarts would refer to him as a sweet dream. Whatever.
“Seen anything good lately?,” Draco whispered, taking a sip from his goblet.
Draco was the only person besides my family who knew about my visions. He only found out because he is always watching me. He begged me for almost a year to tell him why I sometimes stared out into space for no reason. So I finally gave up and told him, making him swear to never tell anyone else. So far he hasn’t. And it’s the only reason I actually like him a little. It’s the only thing his big mouth has yet to blab. Shocking.
I felt a jerk in my neck, and all the sudden, my eyes went blank. I stared out into space, my vision playing like a movie at one of those muggle things called ‘cinemas’.
“You have messed up my plans yet again, Durvell. I’m getting pretty sick of it,” a voice said.
A flash of a cloak showed, and soon a tall, pale man was standing over a cowering boy, the boy holding his arms over the top of his head.
“Please, I’ll try to do better next time,” Durvell begged.
“You have one more chance, Durvell. ONE MORE. If you mess up one more time, your life and your pathetic family’s life will come to an abrupt end,” the pale man said, laughing, revealing a pair of white, pointy fangs. “I’ve been having a terrible thirst lately…you could be my next victim. I bet your wife tastes good…and lets not even think about your daughter…her fragrance is too much to bare…imagine the taste of her sweet blood…”
“Please, leave my family out of this…I beg of you,” Durvell begged again.
“Well then do the job right. I want that girl. Bring her to me, or you and your family will surely face the consequences,” the pale man said, and with a swish of his cloak, he was gone, running away at the speed of light.
And for a odd reason, my vision ended, but flipped right back to another one.
“Déjà, you’ve got to be careful!,” Draco exclaimed, carrying me down the hall like I was weightless.
“I’m sorry. I slipped. The rock was slippery…,” I replied. “It wasn’t my fault…”
“Well, I’m sure you’ve at least sprained your ankle…and I’m sure this will leave a mark too…,” Draco said, gently running a finger over the along the top of my eyebrow.
I winced back at his touch.
“Sorry,” Draco muttered.
“It’s fine,” I said. “Thanks for helping me, though.”
“I’d do anything for you, Déjà. I love you,” Draco said, laying me down on a cot in the Hospital Wing, stepping back and letting Madame Pomphrey go frantic around me.
“Draco, please don’t leave,” I asked, nearly begging.
Draco laughed. “I won’t. I promise.”
He plopped down in a chair next to my bed, running a hand through his hair as he looked over at me, smiling widely.
“What?,” I barked as soon as Madame Pomphrey was out of earshot.
“You look so innocent right now…that look on your face was weird, though, like someone was trying to push you into the lake…,” Draco said.
“Maybe there was someone…Draco, I’ve got to tell you something…I’m scared. I’ve been having all this stuff happen to me lately, you know!,” I hissed, looking at him.
His eyes bore back into mine. Draco took a hold of my hand.
“Don’t worry,” Draco said. “I’m here for you, I promise. I won’t let anything happen to you. I love you…”
My head jerked back, as if I was being pulled back from the table. I shook my head and looked over to see Draco smirking down at his plate.
“Have fun?,” he asked, smirking, already knowing what had happened to me. “You had two visions that time, didn’t you…?”
“Yes,” I whispered, pulling him close so I could talk to him. “First, I had a vision about a guy. He was getting threatened by this other creepy guy. They were somewhere dark…it wasn’t very clear. And then my second vision was about…”
But I stopped myself, not really wanting to tell him the vision. All the other students were staring, wondering why I was so close to Draco.
“What!??,” Draco and I both spat in unison, making everyone return back to their meal.
“Finish it,” Draco nudged me.
“Um…it was about me. I had slipped, and you saved me. But you had a bad feeling about the slip, like you thought it was someone else’s fault…,” I whispered in Draco’s ear, not noticing that each time I talked, my lips brushed his ear, and he was shivering from the feeling.
It was making him smirk. Again. Oh God.
“Well maybe it was,” Draco whispered back. “Maybe you have a stalker or something…”
“No Draco, don’t count yourself,” I replied.
“No, Déjà, I’m not your stalker. Just your boyfriend,” Draco winked at me.
“You are not my-”
“I will be soon enough,” Draco said, simply.
I rolled my eyes at him, making him smirk even more.
“What I meant was,” Draco continued, “maybe you have a real stalker. I mean, anyone would be a fool to not want you…don’t you see the way the boys have been falling all over you the past six years of your Hogwarts life?”
“Oh honestly Draco, I’m not that-”
“Yes you are, Déjà. Your beauty is almost too much to bare. I can’t believe anyone as striking as you would ever think that they weren’t pretty…,” Draco said, cutting me off again.
Gently, Draco ran his thumb over my cheek.
“You’re beautiful,” Draco muttered. “Everyone knows it. Face the facts. You couldn’t be ugly even if you tried.”
I rolled my eyes at Draco again, making him smirk more.
“I mean it,” Draco said. “Why do you think I always follow you…”
“I was hoping that was because you loved me for the inside of myself better than my appearance,” I said through gritted teeth.
Draco smirked even more. He always loved it when I got mad. I had such a temper, it made him smirk. I just wish Draco would go play in traffic. Like, muggle traffic, with the things they call ‘cars’ and everything. That would please me.
“I do. I really do love you. But your appearance is a plus…,” Draco said. “It’s what attracted me to you in our first year…”
“You’re so shallow,” I spat.
“No I’m not. I’m just insanely in love with the most beautiful girl in the world,” Draco replied. “I’m hoping one day she will feel the same…”
“Don’t count on it,” I said.
I rolled my eyes and Draco smirked even more. I could tell by the look on his face that he knew otherwise, that maybe one day I’d feel the same about him. Damn it. This wasn't going to work. | |
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I just wish Draco would go play in traffic. Like, muggle traffic, with the things they call ‘cars’ and everything. That would please me.
| aww i think draco's adorable in this story! and that part made me laugh...i likd it a lot!!
*Kate* | |
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09-11-2007, 11:33 AM
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lol thanx Kate. I always tell my friends to 'go play in traffic' so I thought I'd add it into the story lol. | |
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My friend told me to go play in traffic, and I got all upset, so he goes "I love you really" and gave me a hug
I lubb this story!
PAMS!
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09-11-2007, 08:15 PM
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thanx Hollz! New post, probably within the next few days! | |
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09-11-2007, 09:12 PM
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that was sooo cute! i'd die if draco said that to ME.... | |
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09-11-2007, 09:14 PM
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thanx! New post soon! | |
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09-12-2007, 06:50 PM
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Nice post! Tara, don't allow MY Draco to go out and play in traffic!
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