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Old 04-27-2008, 07:36 PM   #226 (permalink)
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OMG
noooo dont die
hes become so cute and loveable
dont kill uncle draco

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you should have named it "dam hormones"
cause they say it like 6 times
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Old 04-28-2008, 08:47 PM   #227 (permalink)
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New Reader! Just read your other story and then moved onto this omg i love it!
its so awsome
full of drama!
PAMS PAMS PAMS please?
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Old 05-06-2008, 02:47 PM   #228 (permalink)
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Hi, I just wanted to say that I'm really enjoying this fan fiction. You're a very talented writer. I read your first story at the weekend and just started this today (I've just got to the Wedding, and am crying my eyes out, sigh.). I'm going to go and read some more...


Update: OMG! This is getting really exciting now. Can't wait for the next part. I really hope Draco's ok...

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Old 05-16-2008, 05:15 AM   #229 (permalink)
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OMG NEW READER!!

This is really good!! Krissy, well done!!!!
Keep it up. Very very emotional ... i like it!

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Old 05-16-2008, 07:10 AM   #230 (permalink)
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well, this is it my dear readers...the conclusion is here. I hope all your questions are answered. please comment within the next week and then I will have it transferred to "finished fics". It's been a bumpy road, and a lot of writing but I am happy with the results. I'm taking a break from fic writing for a bit, but I will post a one shot telling Draco and Monique's story since I've had several PMs asking for it.
Thank you so much for staying with me through TWENTY-SIX chapters!
Love you all,
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“Wake up…” Hermione whispered over the hospital bed. She held Minnie close to her chest. She had obviously been crying.
Opening her eyes slowly Ginny blinked realizing she was in St. Mungos. “ The babies?” she rasped.
“They are being measured in the nursery right now. Don’t try to speak, just rest.” Hermione whispered through tears.
“Draco?” Ginny mumbled fighting to keep her eyes open.
Hermione shook her head with tears streaming down her face. Ginny let out a low groan as she fell into a deep drugged sleep.
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“It’s just a few days mate. Don’t get too down, you know how it is when you AK someone. The Ministry has to conduct an investigation.” Harry gave Ron a week smile as they sat in the waiting room of the hospital.
“I Know, I just can’t believe I took a life… never like that.” Ron whispered.
“She would have killed Ginny and the babies! You had to take that horrible Narcissa out! You had no choice!” Harry said putting his hand on his friend’s shoulder.
Ron nodded and looked at Harry with tears in his eyes. “I was too late to save him though…”
Harry shook his head. “No you weren’t mate. You did what you could.”

************************************************** *************************************
A few hours passed and Ginny woke to the sounds of her babies whimpering. Reaching for the nearest bassinet she whispered. “Hello little love, don’t fuss. Your mommy is here.” Holding the baby close to her she nuzzled the soft cheek and let the tears fall. “I’m sorry you never got to meet your uncle Draco. He died saving our lives you know.” She let out a heart wrenching sob relishing the solitude with the babies.
“We’ve met.” a familiar voice said from the corner of the room.
Ginny gasped as she turned to see Draco sitting in the corner of the room in a wheel chair.
“You! But Hermione…” Ginny was shaking and crying as she rocked her newborn son.
“I shouldn’t have made it, I was a goner but the healers worked a miracle.” Draco said with a half smile.
“actually you saved me… when I laid on top of you my mother stabbed me in the spine with a large piece of glass. When I passed out from shock you took my wand and apparated us, including the babies, to the hospital. I honestly don’t know where you found the strength after going through such a hard labor.” He said as he reached out and gently stroked the baby boy’s cheek.

“So then you’re ok?” Ginny asked as she looked at Draco with tears of happiness streaming down her face.
“well, no. I’ve lost the use of my legs. There was nothing that could be done. The nerve endings were severed… but I’m alive because of you Ginny.” He said when he saw her face fall.
“And we are alive because of you.” Ginny murmured gesturing to the children sleeping peacefully in the room.
************************************************** **************************************
“Hand me my grand-babies this instant!” Molly said with a big smile as she scooped up her grandson from Harry’s arms. Harry grinned. “You hold in your hands Mister Draco Caelin Potter.” Harry said with a grin.
“Draco huh? Sound’s like a trouble maker.” Molly said with a wink as she saw Ron pushing Draco’s wheelchair into the burrow’s living room.
“Don’t look at me Mrs. Weasly I wanted them to name him “Lucky” since he was the one with the chord around his neck.” Molly just smiled and kissed Draco on the forehead.
“No, this is the perfect name for him, he’ll be a hero. Just like his namesake.”

Ginny walked in carrying the two girls. “Mum I want you to meet Elisabeth Lily Potter, and Monique Malfoy Potter.” she smiled down at two girls, one with bright red hair, the other with jet black.

Taking all of the babies into her arms Molly smiled down at the three little blessings. “ Let me tell you a story that begins with your Dad saving the wizarding world… It started when he was just one year older than you…”
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Old 05-16-2008, 07:22 AM   #231 (permalink)
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You made me cry ,G, and for that you shall be punished. Your lucky the tears were worth it.
Awww, Draco Elisabeth and Monique.
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Old 05-16-2008, 09:27 AM   #232 (permalink)
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Old 05-16-2008, 10:11 AM   #233 (permalink)
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Naww that was soo cute!! I loved it so much!!

I'll miss this fic though! You did a great Krissy.

Love always
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Old 05-16-2008, 07:54 PM   #234 (permalink)
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Aww Krissy that was brilliant and very well written. I loved it and I'm going to miss reading your fic. It feels weird when you finally finish doesn't it. Anyway have a rest love and I look forward to your one shot.

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Old 05-16-2008, 08:03 PM   #235 (permalink)
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NNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
dont be over
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uncle draco didnt die
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Old 05-16-2008, 08:13 PM   #236 (permalink)

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Awww i caught up finally. Bu sad its the end. I loved every minute of this ff and going to miss it terably
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Old 05-24-2008, 02:18 AM   #237 (permalink)
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Finished????

AWWWW

Thank you sooo much for writing such a wonderful fan fic

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Old 05-28-2008, 12:18 PM   #238 (permalink)
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i loved the ending!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
awesome fic!!!!!!!!!!!
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Old 06-07-2008, 08:37 AM   #239 (permalink)
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i loved your stories and have been reading them for ages. i didn't read the bright beginning as soon as it came out but have just finished the whole story. please if possible write more on this. if you can write about the kids growing up and when they go to hogwarts maybe but please you are great. please post again and tell us if you are writing any other magnificent stories k.
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Old 06-21-2008, 05:50 AM   #240 (permalink)
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Well Kiddies I have left this page up far longer than I intended. I will be writing a one shot in the near future. If you want to be on the list of notices PM me please!
thank you all for being such faithful readers!
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