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04-27-2008, 07:36 PM
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#226 (permalink)
| | Nogtail
Location: my caged mind Join Date: Apr 2007
Posts: 324
Hogwarts RPG Name: Aurora Jullian Marks | new reader OMG
noooo dont die
hes become so cute and loveable
dont kill uncle draco
p.s
you should have named it "dam hormones"
cause they say it like 6 times |
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04-28-2008, 08:47 PM
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#227 (permalink)
| | Gnome
Location: Uk, my house :] Join Date: Jan 2007
Posts: 81
Hogwarts RPG Name: Leonie Longbottom First Year | New Reader! Just read your other story and then moved onto this omg i love it!
its so awsome
full of drama!
PAMS PAMS PAMS please?
loveyoux
Serena |
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05-06-2008, 02:47 PM
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#228 (permalink)
| | Doxy
Location: Leicester, UK Join Date: May 2008
Posts: 424
Hogwarts RPG Name: Krysta Hedwig Sixth Year Ministry RPG Name:
Kye Black Magical Creatures | Hi, I just wanted to say that I'm really enjoying this fan fiction. You're a very talented writer. I read your first story at the weekend and just started this today (I've just got to the Wedding, and am crying my eyes out, sigh.). I'm going to go and read some more...
Update: OMG! This is getting really exciting now. Can't wait for the next part. I really hope Draco's ok...
Last edited by Krysta : 05-07-2008 at 12:54 PM.
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05-16-2008, 05:15 AM
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#229 (permalink)
| Sgt. Gryffindor Kappa
Location: *runs far away* Join Date: Aug 2007
Posts: 994
Hogwarts RPG Name: Alycya "Aly" Weasley Second Year Ministry RPG Name:
Edith "Edie" Griffiths Minister's Office | OMG NEW READER!!
This is really good!! Krissy, well done!!!!
Keep it up. Very very emotional ... i like it!
Love always
Jade xxxx |
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05-16-2008, 07:10 AM
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#230 (permalink)
| | Skrewt
Location: my own world Join Date: Jul 2007
Posts: 1,263
Hogwarts RPG Name: Kristyn Moon (Krissy) Third Year | Chapter 26: Let me tell you a story… well, this is it my dear readers...the conclusion is here. I hope all your questions are answered. please comment within the next week and then I will have it transferred to "finished fics". It's been a bumpy road, and a lot of writing but I am happy with the results. I'm taking a break from fic writing for a bit, but I will post a one shot telling Draco and Monique's story since I've had several PMs asking for it.
Thank you so much for staying with me through TWENTY-SIX chapters!
Love you all,
Krissy “Wake up…” Hermione whispered over the hospital bed. She held Minnie close to her chest. She had obviously been crying.
Opening her eyes slowly Ginny blinked realizing she was in St. Mungos. “ The babies?” she rasped.
“They are being measured in the nursery right now. Don’t try to speak, just rest.” Hermione whispered through tears.
“Draco?” Ginny mumbled fighting to keep her eyes open.
Hermione shook her head with tears streaming down her face. Ginny let out a low groan as she fell into a deep drugged sleep.
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“It’s just a few days mate. Don’t get too down, you know how it is when you AK someone. The Ministry has to conduct an investigation.” Harry gave Ron a week smile as they sat in the waiting room of the hospital.
“I Know, I just can’t believe I took a life… never like that.” Ron whispered.
“She would have killed Ginny and the babies! You had to take that horrible Narcissa out! You had no choice!” Harry said putting his hand on his friend’s shoulder.
Ron nodded and looked at Harry with tears in his eyes. “I was too late to save him though…”
Harry shook his head. “No you weren’t mate. You did what you could.”
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A few hours passed and Ginny woke to the sounds of her babies whimpering. Reaching for the nearest bassinet she whispered. “Hello little love, don’t fuss. Your mommy is here.” Holding the baby close to her she nuzzled the soft cheek and let the tears fall. “I’m sorry you never got to meet your uncle Draco. He died saving our lives you know.” She let out a heart wrenching sob relishing the solitude with the babies.
“We’ve met.” a familiar voice said from the corner of the room.
Ginny gasped as she turned to see Draco sitting in the corner of the room in a wheel chair.
“You! But Hermione…” Ginny was shaking and crying as she rocked her newborn son.
“I shouldn’t have made it, I was a goner but the healers worked a miracle.” Draco said with a half smile.
“actually you saved me… when I laid on top of you my mother stabbed me in the spine with a large piece of glass. When I passed out from shock you took my wand and apparated us, including the babies, to the hospital. I honestly don’t know where you found the strength after going through such a hard labor.” He said as he reached out and gently stroked the baby boy’s cheek.
“So then you’re ok?” Ginny asked as she looked at Draco with tears of happiness streaming down her face.
“well, no. I’ve lost the use of my legs. There was nothing that could be done. The nerve endings were severed… but I’m alive because of you Ginny.” He said when he saw her face fall.
“And we are alive because of you.” Ginny murmured gesturing to the children sleeping peacefully in the room.
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“Hand me my grand-babies this instant!” Molly said with a big smile as she scooped up her grandson from Harry’s arms. Harry grinned. “You hold in your hands Mister Draco Caelin Potter.” Harry said with a grin.
“Draco huh? Sound’s like a trouble maker.” Molly said with a wink as she saw Ron pushing Draco’s wheelchair into the burrow’s living room.
“Don’t look at me Mrs. Weasly I wanted them to name him “Lucky” since he was the one with the chord around his neck.” Molly just smiled and kissed Draco on the forehead.
“No, this is the perfect name for him, he’ll be a hero. Just like his namesake.”
Ginny walked in carrying the two girls. “Mum I want you to meet Elisabeth Lily Potter, and Monique Malfoy Potter.” she smiled down at two girls, one with bright red hair, the other with jet black.
Taking all of the babies into her arms Molly smiled down at the three little blessings. “ Let me tell you a story that begins with your Dad saving the wizarding world… It started when he was just one year older than you…” |
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05-16-2008, 07:22 AM
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#231 (permalink)
| | Mooncalf
Location: Colorado Join Date: Aug 2005
Posts: 520
Hogwarts RPG Name: Rilen Taylie Green Third Year Ministry RPG Name:
Gayle Night Magical Education | You made me cry ,G, and for that you shall be punished. Your lucky the tears were worth it.
Awww, Draco Elisabeth and Monique. |
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05-16-2008, 09:27 AM
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#232 (permalink)
| | Doxy
Location: Leicester, UK Join Date: May 2008
Posts: 424
Hogwarts RPG Name: Krysta Hedwig Sixth Year Ministry RPG Name:
Kye Black Magical Creatures | Love the ending touch! |
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05-16-2008, 10:11 AM
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#233 (permalink)
| Sgt. Gryffindor Kappa
Location: *runs far away* Join Date: Aug 2007
Posts: 994
Hogwarts RPG Name: Alycya "Aly" Weasley Second Year Ministry RPG Name:
Edith "Edie" Griffiths Minister's Office | Naww that was soo cute!! I loved it so much!!
I'll miss this fic though! You did a great Krissy.
Love always
Jade xxxx  |
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05-16-2008, 07:54 PM
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#234 (permalink)
| Inferius Spelunker ~Charming~ Kneazle
Location: Australia Join Date: Apr 2007
Posts: 3,204
Hogwarts RPG Name: Kayla Winters Fourth Year Ministry RPG Name:
Multiple Characters Special Ops | Aww Krissy that was brilliant and very well written. I loved it and I'm going to miss reading your fic. It feels weird when you finally finish doesn't it. Anyway have a rest love and I look forward to your one shot.
*huggles*
Mel  |
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05-16-2008, 08:03 PM
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#235 (permalink)
| | Nogtail
Location: my caged mind Join Date: Apr 2007
Posts: 324
Hogwarts RPG Name: Aurora Jullian Marks | NNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
dont be over
but im glad
uncle draco didnt die  |
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05-16-2008, 08:13 PM
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#236 (permalink)
| DRFC Co-Pressie K.O. Harry's Smile Guard of Dan’s Curiosity b> Griffin
Location: In a world with Dan Join Date: May 2006
Posts: 9,142
Hogwarts RPG Name: Lilly Young Second Year Ministry RPG Name:
Keylee May Magical Games & Sports | Awww i caught up finally. Bu sad its the end. I loved every minute of this ff and going to miss it terably |
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05-24-2008, 02:18 AM
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#237 (permalink)
| | Hippocampus
Location: In my mind Join Date: Jan 2008
Posts: 278
Hogwarts RPG Name: Billy-Jean Bennet First Year | Finished????
AWWWW
Thank you sooo much for writing such a wonderful fan fic
love voldyXOXOXOXOXOXO |
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05-28-2008, 12:18 PM
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#238 (permalink)
| | Imp
Location: njoin my hols Join Date: Feb 2006
Posts: 117
Hogwarts RPG Name: Bloom Fifth | i loved the ending!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
awesome fic!!!!!!!!!!! |
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06-07-2008, 08:37 AM
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#239 (permalink)
| | Bowtruckle
Location: In Edwards arms Join Date: May 2008
Posts: 252
| i loved your stories and have been reading them for ages. i didn't read the bright beginning as soon as it came out but have just finished the whole story. please if possible write more on this. if you can write about the kids growing up and when they go to hogwarts maybe but please you are great. please post again and tell us if you are writing any other magnificent stories k. |
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06-21-2008, 05:50 AM
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#240 (permalink)
| | Skrewt
Location: my own world Join Date: Jul 2007
Posts: 1,263
Hogwarts RPG Name: Kristyn Moon (Krissy) Third Year | Well Kiddies I have left this page up far longer than I intended. I will be writing a one shot in the near future. If you want to be on the list of notices PM me please!
thank you all for being such faithful readers!
Love,
Krissy Moon |
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