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Old 06-16-2007, 11:59 AM   #26 (permalink)

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Gosh, Alice is so lucky. Great post Hollie!
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Old 06-16-2007, 08:22 PM   #28 (permalink)

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Isn't she just? LOL!

We all wish we were Alice, Don't we Sky?
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Cool Chapter 4 =]

Heya, I had a bit of writer's block .. soo. Anywayz here it is for you such cool people

"It's a bit late for you to be up isn't it?"
"No. I like the night. It's quiet"
"Yeah, I suppose"
"What about you? Isn't it past your bedtime?"
Draco laughed slightly "Well, we do have curfews"
"Oh Well. no one will see me. They might see you"
"What do you mean?" Draco raised his eyebrow.
"Never mind" I said trying to change the conversation.

We were outside of Hogwarts. The air was cool, the stars were bright, It was my favourite time to be outside. Draco & I walked down to the lake where the moon's reflection was glistening over the water.


"Wow. I've actually never been outside at this time." Draco said, amused.
"You stick to your curfew then?"
"Everyone does. If you got caught, you would be in an immense amount of trouble"
"Why? What's so wrong with being outside at night?" I asked.
"Over there is a start" He pointed towards a dark space of trees.
"The Forbidden Forest" He announced."Spooky place, wild monsters and creatures. and we've even got our own monster lover"
"Who?" He pointed to a small hut, with the chiney smoking, and light through the shut curtains.
"Well, who's that then?"
"Hagrid. He's a half giant, but he's a stupid oaf so I suggest you don't go near him"
I just sighed and turned to face Draco. "Did you say Monsters and creatures?"
"Yeah. Why?"
"What type of .. creatures?" I wouldn't of mind knowing if any of my kind where in that forest.
"Uhh .. Centaurs, Hippogriff's and can I just say, Hippogriff's are horrible! One nearly tried to kill me" He said matter-of-factly. I raised my eyebrow, whil picturing Draco being attacked by a Hippogriff. And boy, didn't it look funny.
"What's so funny?"
"OH! Uhh .. nothing" I didn't know I had been also laughing aloud.
"Anything else?"
"Unicorns, Werewolves, othe little creatures"
"WAIT! WHAT?!" I yelled, springing up from the rock I was sitting on.
"I said unicor-"
"I KNOW YOU SAID THAT!" I yelled again before he could finish.
"What is wrong with you?" Draco asked getting fustrated, also standing up now.
"W..w..w werewolves?" I stammered.
"Yeah. So?"
"We've gotta go" I said, power walking back to the castle. Draco grabbed by hand again.
"What's wrong with werewolves? I know, they are a bit scary. But they're not around the lake"
Suddenly there was a loud howl coming from the trees which were around the lake. I wrapped my arms around Draco's waist without hesitating, becuase I couldn't really reach his neck. He wrapped his arms around my shoulders and sqweezed me. He was obviously more scared than me. But I should be more scared.
"Not..a..a.around the lake then, huh D..D..Drao?" I stammered again. Looking up to his face, he was just as pale as me, he actually looked dead.

A warm breeze wafted to over to us and it made us feel so much better. Draco got his voice back and stopped suffocating me. We both walked slowly back ot the castle without talking, standing close to each other and holding hands, slightly.
"That was.. a little bit silly to be scared of right?"
"For you, I should of been petrified" Draco ignored me and gripped my hand tighter as we walked into the castle. I knew he didn't want to get caught.
"We're not going to get caught. Don't the teachers sleep?" I whispered.
"I just don't want to get you into any trouble. Not on your first day either"
"Well, technically it's my second day. It's half four" I said. He chuckled at me and let go of my hand. We were in the common room. The fire still blazing, it all still very quiet.
Draco looked at me and smirked, but still breathing quite deeply.
"I suggest you don't go for your midnight strolls again"
"Don't worry, I won't"
"Good" he smiled and walked up the staircase to the boy's dorm.


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Oooh that was so good. But i don't understand why she was afraid of werewolves when she's a vampire. Maybe i'm just having a blonde moment and forget why hahaha but yeah .... anyway awesome jobbb!!! loved it. Post more sooonnnnn!!!

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Anna, Yeah you are having a blonde moment .. or it may be me!
But I think Werewolves can kill vamps .. I think I read it somewhere LOL
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hahaha sorry i meant like since she's a vampire, isn't it easier for her to kill a werewolf then a normal person. Hahaha i knew she was afraid because they can kill her but i just figured that since she's a vampire she would be able to kill them more easily then a normal human and wouldn't be as afraid of them.
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Old 06-23-2007, 10:03 PM   #36 (permalink)

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Meh. I dunno, just go with teh flow
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then continue to go with the flow Hollz it takes you to very good places
do I really have to say it again *sigh* okay, okay

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It was two hours until breakfast. Until everyone woke up. Half an hour since my walk with Draco. Boy, was he warm. That's all I could think of, how warm he was when I clinged onto him when I was scared. I'd never felt anything so warm, I'd always been cold, like I was dead. Even though I felt frightened, I also felt .. happy. He kind of gave happy energy to our surroundings, even though he was in Slytherin and had cold grey eyes. Apparantly. Not to me. My eyes were much colder. My eyes actually gave you a cold shiver down your spine.
I carried on thinking about Draco until 7:00am. Hayley was the first to wake up.
"Wow-" She said staring at me.
"- How long have you been up?" She asked me, whilst getting up but still wondering why I was dressed and wide awake.
"I went for a walk earlier"
"How long's earlier?" Hayley brushed her long black hair and pushed it out of her face.
"About .. two hours?"
"Really?! Weren't you tired?"
"Nope. That's why I went for a walk"
"Where d'you go?"
"Outside, the lake to be more specific" Hayley looked at me after the word Lake.
"By yourself?"
"No. Draco came along too" Hayley smirked at the thought and came to sit on my bed.
"Sooo? What happened?"
"What do you mean?" I asked, I actually didn't know what it meant.
"Did you make out?"
"What!?" I yelled jumping up from my bed. Hayley just giggled. I sighed and sat back down.
"No. We did not. I was planning to go by myself, but for some reason he couldn't sleep either." Hayley sighed too and stood up. She put her uniform on and grabbed her bag. I did too.
"It's weird, Draco normally sleeps like a baby every night" Hayley said as we walked out the door.

After a few minutes, Pansy, Draco and Blaise came down one by one. We all started walking to the great hall for breakfast and I was pretty sure Draco kept side glancing at me. He was probobly doing it because I was aswell. So he had every right too. I kept getting surge's of happy energy running through me. Was it Draco? Or was I just being weird?. Breakfast was boring. No speech from the head thank god. I just wanted to go to my lessons, to take my mind of Draco. I mean OK, he is quite good looking....NO! Imagine! A vampire actually developing a crush on a human? It's like a human having a crush on some chocolate. Having a crush on your means of food. Freaky.
"So, what's first on your timetable?" Asked Hayley, disturbing my daydream. I went through my bag until I finally found my timetable.
"Potions" I read aloud.
"Oh we're all in that! That'll be a laugh" Hayley smiled.
"Why?"
"Snape" Draco said. "On the Slytherin side all the time. Unfortunatly we have it with the Gryffindor's"
"Are they that bad?"
"Ha! We're the bad ones. They are just there. In the same classroom. That would make an Slytherin throw up" Everyone started laughing. I tried to put on a fake laugh but I gave up soon after. Why did I end up in Slytherin??.

The affect Drao had on me didn't wear of in Potions, he sat next to me which made it a whole lot worse. Although happier, it made me happier, like I wanted him to be there even though It made me think about him more, which I didn't want. I was utterly rubbish at potions. Mine and Draco's potions smelt like a rubbish tip which stunk the whole class. But all Snape said was good try, then gave us a B+. What the hell? It was crap! And that Hermione girl whom I met on the train did very well. Although she didn't get the colour it was supposed to be, it was still better than mine. You know what grade Snape gave her? Ane E-. Yep. Draco winked at me and leaned in closer.
"He's our head of house, what d'you expect?" I guessed he was answering the questioned look on my face when I watched Hermione stamp her feet and shove her books back in her bag.
Next we had a free period, so I was free to do what I liked, studying wasn't going to be one of my options. Hayley and Pansy asked me if I wanted to go with them to the lake. I turned them down, I wasn't going to go anywhere near there after what happened last night. Draco felt the same way as his beautiful face went white, just by hearing the words 'go' and 'lake'.
"Well, alone again" Draco smirked, leaning back in his chair. I just smiled and looked into the burning fire in the fire place. I felt all warm and happy again.
"You OK?" Draco asked.
"Yeah, quite happy actually"
"How come?" Draco chuckled.
"I don't know, whenever I'm around you I just feel, happy..."
Me and Draco stared at eachother for a few more seconds. His eyes making me feel all warm and fuzzy, like I was on drugs. And my eyes making Draco feel cold and bitter, yet we couldn't look away.
"..Really" Draco said quietly. "I've never had that affect on people before" He smiled and broke the stare.
"You like feeling warm?"
"Sort of, it's kinda nice"
"You sound like you've never been warm before"
"It's been a while" Draco looked puzzled like he did at the lake.
"Never mind" I shook by head and looked into the fire again.
"Your eyes change colour" He said still looking at my eyes. I looked at him weirdly, like he was talking crazy.
"Just before I see you, your eyes are very pale blue. nearly grey. That's my colour eyes. And after a few minutes, they go, sort of an orangey colour. Then when I leave, they go blue again" I blushed slightly, he might of got the jist, even though I didn't.
"Maybe they change colour because I'm around you"
"Maybe" Draco smirked. We stared at each other again. Like we couldn't possibly tear our eyes away form each other. I noticed that I was moving in closer, and so was he. I couldn't let this happen! I wanted it to happen, but I also couldn't it would make me.. dangerous. Before we got any closer the bell went and time for our next class. We smiled at eachother and walked to our next class, to meet up with Hayley.


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great! MAKE THEM KISS
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ZOMG!! You're such an amazing writer!! I was literally almost falling of my chair and then the bell rang... Seriously, what's with bells and interrupting important moments?
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Aww Thankyou guys!
Already have done mah Tara
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Make them Kiss already.....!!!
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It's not my fault they didn't kiss! It was the bell
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So close...stupid bell. lolz.
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HEY!

I've missed quite a bit, but I'm back now, and THIS IS AMAZING!!

I agree!! MAKE THEM KISS!

Good job building the suspense, though!

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Thankyou Adrienne and Sky Captain! *Salutes*

There'll be another post soon, and it'll get better!
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ahhh that was so cutee!!!
hahaha eek they're falling in love
but they didn't kisss
ahh well, plenty of time for that hahaha
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Yep! Plenty of time mah Anna! Thanks for the comment!

I'll post tomorrow =]

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