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02-03-2010, 04:47 PM
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| Formerly: luna_severus_26   Abraxan
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Bradley Tristan Bryant Second Year | Why it Rains - Sa13+ irregular triangles & & the work in progress
Banner by ImAGrape (and will be back once I get it fixed) Hey guys!! Welcome to Why it Rains by me, luna_severus_26. I've rated it sa13+, so be aware of that. I hope you guys enjoy my poetry. Feel free to make comments on my work. Alrighty then, I think that's about it! My first poem's below this, Enjoy!!!
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ Beneath The Walls
Have you ever wondered,
What lies beneath the walls?
Screaming, lusting, dreaming
And waits until you fall?
What scares you most and lives in hiding.
What only shows, to do its bidding.
It scares your insides,
makes you scream,
But turns your nightmares into dreams.
What I'm describing you want to know,
And Ridikkulus will help you so.
It'll make you laugh and chase it away,
and won't be back 'till another day.
The boggart's defeated,
and you have won.
Put it away,
and you'll be done.
Good luck.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ okay that was my first poem! it was a bit abstract but I hope you liked it. Hopefully they'll get better as I go. Feel free to comment.
- luna_severus_26
__________________  I am my mother's only one. It's enough... only love is all maroon, ____________
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02-05-2010, 06:35 PM
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02-09-2010, 04:08 AM
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| Formerly: luna_severus_26   Abraxan
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Hey again!  I've got another poem that I originally posted after Peeves wrecked potions class. Hope you like it, I'm working on another one that I'll have up soon  ! Remember to comment and enjoy!
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Back and forth,
And back and forth.
We wash the floor
back and forth.
Wishy washy,
clean the room
cuz Peeves was here
and brought our doom.
Wash the tables, wash the floor
So Kaz won't be mad no more. ...
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Okay well enjoy and let me know what you think (I promise the next one will be longer  )
- luna_severus_26
__________________  I am my mother's only one. It's enough... only love is all maroon, ____________
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02-09-2010, 06:28 PM
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| | Doxy
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I read that in Potions class and sang it in my head all day! You're so creative at those..
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02-09-2010, 07:56 PM
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I love both there great keep writing!
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02-09-2010, 08:41 PM
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| Formerly: luna_severus_26   Abraxan
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Bradley Tristan Bryant Second Year | irregular triangles & & the work in progress
Haha thanks!  I'll have to think of another one... Here's one! (no offense to any gryffindors, it just sounded funny)
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxx Why no one likes a Gryffindor You see them screaming everyday,
the ones that like to block your way,
they're too outgoing
for their own good,
they poke us underneath our hood.
We Slytherins,
you see,
highly disagree.
We keep to ourselves,
or those we know well
but aren't as brave as thee.
Of course we'll take a bet,
but not to risk our neck
because we chose brains over brawn,
we already know what's wrong.
Gryffindors, to us,
are showoffs and such
so nobody likes a Gryffindor,
if you're one of us.
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okay well I hope you liked it! Again, no harm intended Gryffies! 
-luna_severus_26
__________________  I am my mother's only one. It's enough... only love is all maroon, ____________
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02-09-2010, 09:32 PM
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I love that one the best! Its definately my fav |
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02-09-2010, 09:36 PM
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| Formerly: luna_severus_26   Abraxan
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Bradley Tristan Bryant Second Year | irregular triangles & & the work in progress  thank you! *bows* I'm glad you like it!
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02-10-2010, 03:33 AM
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| Formerly: luna_severus_26   Abraxan
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'kay people, 'nuther poem!  and I promise this one's not about Gryffindors  ! And also, (and I'm putting this in bold cuz it's important) Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeaaase Comment!!! it makes me happy  ! Okay 'nuf of me pestering you, enjoy!
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxx The Kitchens
Back, long ago,
there were two boys.
Fred and George were their names.
And they had a secret,
you know,
about somewhere they tended to go.
When Gryffindor won a match,
or after supper, they needed a snack,
above the dungeons, but below the great hall
they went.
Along a brightly lit corridor they traveled
until, upon a painting they came,
of a fruitbasket no body watched.
Ah, but the twins were clever yet vain.
They checked for any lingering Hufflepuffs,
or perhaps, a teacher that came by
Once they saw it was clear
they tickled the pear,
In the painting I told you about prior.
Now, let's stop for a moment,
you must think it quite queer,
to tickle a pear in a painting.
But that pear, do you see?
Was the key, you see,
To getting into the kitchens,
where house elves, they cooked
and didn't mind work,
were happy to do the twins' bidding.
Up hidden passages they came,
back from their ways,
with armfulls of food
and treats.
And this, I'm afraid,
is the end of our tale,
of these two marvelous boys.
But fear not!
It's still there,
I mean, the pear,
you just have to find, the painting.
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Tada!! Hope you like this one! (see I told you I wouldn't poke at any Gryffindors!)  seriously though, Please Comment! I'd love to hear what you think! Bye guys!
- luna_severus_26
__________________  I am my mother's only one. It's enough... only love is all maroon, ____________
____gluey feathers on a flume... sky is womb and she's the moon. ♦ ♦
Last edited by Zoom; 02-10-2010 at 03:36 AM.
Reason: 4got stupid color thing!
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02-10-2010, 02:38 PM
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| Formerly: luna_severus_26   Abraxan
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Bradley Tristan Bryant Second Year | irregular triangles & & the work in progress
Hello!  okay, I'm gonna try this again, PLEASE COMMENT.....  hahaha! Okay but seriously, I feel pathetic asking and I wanna know what you'd like to see! Alright, let's see.... hmmm.... 'kay got an idea!  hooray for ideas! Lemme know what you think.
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Felix Felecis
Have you ever really wondered,
what a potion's like?
How it tastes? How it smells?
How it looks? Won't you tell
me what you'd do,
if you had a potion
that made your dreams come true?
Okay, mabey not that
I suppose made you lucky
would be a better term,
so this poem isn't mucky.
But say, for a moment
your dreams did come true.
I'd think that lucky,
wouldn't you?
This potion has a name,
Felix Felicis, so I've heard.
Bright gold in color,
perhaps some more words?
I've heard it makes you giddy,
but its affects, really depend
the person that you're talking about
might have met their end.
To much, a very bad thing,
2 tablespoons, all you need
for one very lucky day
so don't become anxious with greed.
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yay! More poems! Okay, let me know what you think and I'm always open to suggestions. 
- luna_severus_26
__________________  I am my mother's only one. It's enough... only love is all maroon, ____________
____gluey feathers on a flume... sky is womb and she's the moon. ♦ ♦ |
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02-10-2010, 04:42 PM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Finn-Stella Daniels Third Year | I love your poems!!! They are just TOO awesome! Don't stop writing, bub! 
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02-10-2010, 04:45 PM
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| Formerly: luna_severus_26   Abraxan
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Yay! Thanks person!
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02-10-2010, 10:09 PM
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| Formerly: luna_severus_26   Abraxan
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Bradley Tristan Bryant Second Year | irregular triangles & & the work in progress Snape's Memories
Lily Evans, don't you see?
You're the one that meant the world to me.
Your soft red hair, you're bright green eyes,
you're the one that made me cry.
But you never really saw my heart,
even though you made it start.
I taught you about magic, and what you were,
but you didn't believe me, at least not at first.
And then there we were, two friends together;
you were my sunshine in dark, cloudy weather.
But you ran off with him, you left me alone,
my heart dropped to my stomach as though it were stone.
As years went by, you said farewell
but I went on loving you, even still.
And then came the night, you left me forever,
you past through the veil, you and him together.
But Lily, I say, I love you even still;
I just need to know why you don't love me as well.
- Sev
__________________  I am my mother's only one. It's enough... only love is all maroon, ____________
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02-10-2010, 10:13 PM
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| | Abraxan
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02-10-2010, 10:15 PM
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| Formerly: luna_severus_26   Abraxan
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Bradley Tristan Bryant Second Year | irregular triangles & & the work in progress
Thanks! Naw, I'm not that good. I like the last one best.
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02-10-2010, 11:10 PM
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Ha, see I told you I'd come. These are GREAT! Keep it UP!!
Now, if you ever need an idea....hmm....let's see. How about quidditch?
<3
Write on, Hannah, write on.
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02-11-2010, 12:34 AM
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| Formerly: luna_severus_26   Abraxan
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Ooooh good one Alex! Thanks!  Next poem will be about quidditch! Errm.... later. Haha
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02-12-2010, 01:36 AM
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| Formerly: luna_severus_26   Abraxan
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Okay peoples! First quidditch poem's gonna be about a snitch  ! I'm probobly gonna write four or five quidditch poems all together, we'll see how it goes!
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Snitch
Little snitch,
in my hand,
how you glint
oh so grand.
I am the seeker,
you are the ball,
never will I let you fall.
Never having,
touched the skin
of a person
we still win.
One hundred fifty points
thus you give,
this little ball
for which I live.
Without it,
the game is never over
and our poor seekers
would be sober.
So important,
yet so small,
We caught the snitch!
we've won it all.
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yay!! First quidditch poem!  I'd love to hear what you think!
__________________  I am my mother's only one. It's enough... only love is all maroon, ____________
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02-12-2010, 11:53 PM
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| Formerly: luna_severus_26   Abraxan
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Okay, break from Quidditch now, VALENTINE'S DAY POEMS!!!!! Yays!
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Harry
I remember
the day I first
saw you.
Your jet black
hair and
bright green eyes,
I wanted you
for my Valentine.
I was only one year
younger but
your best friend,
my brother,
told me I never had a chance.
My very first year,
you saved my life
and that's when I knew
you were a hero.
Eventually,
as the years past,
I knew I had to
give up.
But my fourth
year came,
You saved my dad,
and once again
my heart began to beat.
My fifth year came
and I started to know
that you could feel it too.
The beating inside me,
ever so constant,
now was shared with you.
And then you told me,
it'd never last
and I knew it was true.
You had a duty, to fulfill
but still, my heart,
belonged to you.
Your seventeenth birthday,
I had no gift
except my love to give.
That year,
with you gone,
I felt so very empty.
Luna and Neville,
were my very best friends,
and so we fought, to the end.
But when we heard
that he was back,
something inside me screamed.
I knew you were gone
and I was brought to tears
by the very means.
In Hagrid's arms,
I saw you dead,
and I couldn't believe
it was true.
You couldn't be gone,
or I'd gave gone with you.
And there you were,
alive and well
my ever lasting love
we fought till the end
and Voldemort's death
when you were mine,
once again.
The years have past
and I love you still,
and I know that you love me.
So I'll ask again, Harry,
won't you be my Valentine?
- xoxo Ginny
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02-13-2010, 06:23 PM
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02-13-2010, 08:48 PM
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| Formerly: luna_severus_26   Abraxan
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Kk  sorry, I'll get that fixed soon
__________________  I am my mother's only one. It's enough... only love is all maroon, ____________
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02-14-2010, 09:21 PM
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| Formerly: luna_severus_26   Abraxan
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Bradley Tristan Bryant Second Year | irregular triangles & & the work in progress
NEW POEM!!! Quidditch this time, go nuts...  . Alright well here's the poem.
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Bludgers
Those nasty little things,
that get in your way.
Knock you off your broom
and ruin your day.
Hit at you by beaters,
carrying their bats
trying to help their team win,
if only it was simple as that.
Give you a broken arm,
toss you left and right,
those nasty little balls
are worse than a bite.
Sure their part of quidditch,
and make the game more fun
but couldn't we do without them?
That way we would've won.
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Just saying, I totally don't agree with certain parts of this.  beater's myfavorite position!
__________________  I am my mother's only one. It's enough... only love is all maroon, ____________
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02-16-2010, 03:01 AM
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Cute!
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02-16-2010, 02:01 PM
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| | Doxy
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All of your poems are great! Hope you make more |
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02-17-2010, 09:21 PM
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| Formerly: luna_severus_26   Abraxan
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Bradley Tristan Bryant Second Year | irregular triangles & & the work in progress
Thanks! I'm feeling really dull so the next one will probobly come out tommorow... or after that, sometime soon.
__________________  I am my mother's only one. It's enough... only love is all maroon, ____________
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