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Old 08-22-2005, 10:47 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Default Typical poetry of a 14yr old poser.

I made a mark on my arm today.
With a razor blade, sharpened by hate.
Only to make the pain go away.
This seems to be my fate

I watched the blood flow down my arm.
That left a trail of pain and tears.
I see their faces, etched with alarm.
How horrible their fears.

I can hear the panic in their voices.
And the desolation that followed.
Take your time on making choices.
Don’t see the words I’ve swallowed.

I need you…..
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Old 08-26-2005, 05:44 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Is everything as it seems?
The people we cherish,
The people we look up to
Are they REALLY gone?
Are they really lost?
So far away from what they used to be?
Do they ever leave?
Do they ever truly leave us?
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Old 08-26-2005, 05:49 PM   #3 (permalink)
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He looked so strong,
So amazing, so invincible.
Unbreakable…..
As he struggles,
I look upon with horror.
This illusion has been shattered.
I no longer can see the wise
Unbreakable man I used to.
As I look upon with horror,
This amazing man.
Looks so broken.
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Old 08-26-2005, 09:24 PM   #4 (permalink)
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omg your poems are good..
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Old 08-26-2005, 11:40 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Old 09-06-2005, 10:59 PM   #6 (permalink)
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My heart,
still pounding beneath my breast,
broken so many times,
has no visible scars.

My eyes,
Darting back and forth,
Blinded by tears,
Still see through the pain.

My soul,
Lost beyond the veil of my heart,
Tainted, and impure,
Prays for salvation.

My thoughts,
Racing inside my mind,
Unsure, and imperfect,
Are my greatest weapon.

Are you ready for the final battle?
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Old 09-10-2005, 10:40 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Great job on the poetry. It's really nice and written well. Keep posting and adding!
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Old 09-11-2005, 03:48 AM   #8 (permalink)
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wow. i really like your poems. there's so....sad....but kinda beautiful....

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Old 10-24-2005, 11:42 PM   #9 (permalink)
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Wow, you're poems are really deep and intense. I can really see the emotion in them. They're great
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Old 11-09-2005, 09:52 PM   #10 (permalink)
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Thanks for the comments everyone. I haven't been on in awhile, but, thanks all the same.
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Old 12-03-2005, 12:52 AM   #11 (permalink)
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wow, It think your poetry is amazing.
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