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08-05-2005, 05:51 AM
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| | Doxy
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Genevieve Lacroix Sixth Year | Trinity's Poetry This poem was written for someone who was/is very dear to my heart. Recently, I lost this person, and I needed a way to express my pain. This...would be it. Memories Never Die He won’t be forgotten. Loved by many, Especially me. My daddy, Who loved me with everything he had. I will remember him... Not for any of the toys or gifts. He was proud of me, No matter what. I also remember what he used to say: “Any guy you bring home...I’ll sit there with a gun on my lap...but if he likes the Raiders, he’s ok.” Or “If any guy doesn’t open the door or pull out your chair, he isn’t worth it.” I’ll miss him. I think I will more than anyone... Simply because I was his little girl. Loved by many. No, My daddy won’t be forgotten. -Trinity Hello, My name is Trinity. I wrote this poem for my father who on July 17th, 2005, passed away. He was very dear to my heart. Poetry is the only way besides crying that I know how to express my feelings. My mother asked me to write this for our local newspaper when we put the obituary in it. I felt as if I was contributing a bit to my daddy...who I loved unconditionally.
Trinity
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08-18-2005, 10:58 PM
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| | Bicorn
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Wow Trinity im sorry for your lost and that poem is WIcked
Btw its really good i love it
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08-19-2005, 01:25 AM
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|  Singer Dugbog
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Melissa Graduated |
I loved poems and yours was so good. Im to big of a chicken to write mine on here for everyone to see. |
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08-30-2005, 11:42 PM
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| | Doxy
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Genevieve Lacroix Sixth Year |
Thanks you guys! I should probably post more. Here you are: Song for mi amor Some time ago it all began You shine like sparkles In the winter sand. Your smile spreads, like the sand, I wish it never, never ends. You miss me, I miss you. There’s nothing I can do, But wait for you. Trying hard to control my heart, I hope we never part. I never wanted anyone like this, I* pray you’ll feel it in my kiss. You miss me, I miss you, There’s nothing I can do, But wait for you. ©Trinity 2004
I got this inspiration from one of my loves, he's away in Iraq right now. I can't even begin to describe how much I miss him right now. This might be some insight into those feelings.
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10-06-2005, 10:30 PM
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|  Singer Dugbog
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Melissa Graduated | OK HERE GOES! Hope you like it! : Theres something in my head,
thats always knocking, always picking.
Even when I go to bed
My toes are tapping, legs are kicking.
The Rhythm makes me dance
it puts me in a trance.
Without it I am dead,
cuz my heart stops a ticking. |
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10-25-2005, 12:45 AM
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| Library WriterSirius AuthorLeftySS100 Triumphant Chimaera
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Eunice Murray Fifth |
You have amazing poetry. I'm so sorry about your dad; I can see he meant a lot to you by the way you wrote your poems. They're very right-from-the-heart type of poems. Great job!
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12-11-2005, 04:29 AM
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| | Doxy
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Genevieve Lacroix Sixth Year |
Thank You very much!
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