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THE GREEN CARPET
Bathed in dew drops,
bewitchin the onlookers,
the green carpet robs
the nature's beauty.
Swept by gentle winds,
touched by cottony clouds,
like diamonds you shine,
when dusk descends.
Drained by the creek,
that cascades down the hill,
the numerous thorny heads,
mop the gloom of nature.
Bare-without you
the earth would have been
as you steal-
the nature's beauty.

Hey this is pretty good. Post some more, I want to see what else you have.

THE SUNSET

The last rays of the sun,
turned the sky into a shade of orange.
Within seconds did it vanish,
drawing over it,
a sheet of twinkling stars.
The numerous heads,
shone like diamonds
beside the shining pendant,
that illuminated the dark streets.
The crickets chirped far below,
in tune to their twinkling.

THE LADY

In the midst of mist and fog,
the silvery moonlight gushing through the trees,
standing by the wispering stream
I saw the maiden of my dreams.

Her snow-white skin
glistening in the moonlight
Her golden curls,
swaying in tune to the gentle breeze.
I wish she were mine,
The warmth of her embrace i seek.

-my friends 'n i wrote this.we wrote it from the point of view of a boy.....

does anyone like my poems?????

i love them..cool! i love writing poetry..how long does it take for you to write a poem?

well really i take days to write one.i keep rackin my brain.

i have a poem on DAN i'll post it next...

My friend and i wrote this.........

In and out of my mind on your broomstick you fly,
You are the apple of my eye,
the icing on my cake,
Oh!Daniel,I don't fake.

You are so handsome and so gallant
in acting you posses an immense talent
Daniel!I am crazy about you,
Fans like us you have a few.

Your eyes are as blue as the ocean,
in which we swim with much anticipation
You are encrusted like a jewel in my mind,
after you,I am blind.

Like a pendant you shine in my heart
which struck it like a dart.
You are the Captain of the ship of my dreams,
where we travel to look for an island fresh and green.

Swaying past my eyes,
like a shooting star,
with your bright red scar
I think you have travelled far.

Arrrrg i get irritated wn there r no replies...............

nice one..write one about Draco!

Nice poems Sasch!

thank you.....yeah i'll try writin abt Draco...