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06-15-2011, 02:37 AM
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Hi my name is Sarah and I love poetry and writing. I decided to try to write some Fan Fiction poetry. This is a romance, try to figure it out.
Disclamer: the characters, and most of the events are based on the Harry Potter books by J.K. Rowling.
Teardrops on my Window- Sa13+
those eyes a startling green
like a leaf
my teardrops
like rain upon that leaf
oh you are my lover
my brothers friend
my tongue tier
my crier
raindrops on a leaf
teardrops on my window
how else can I explain
this crazy love for you
love at first sight
before I even met you
I didn't know your name
who could tell you were famous
and still I look out my window
see you with my brother
ignoring his little sister
not knowing her lover
raindrops on a leaf
teardrops on my window
how else can I explain
this crazy love for you
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06-15-2011, 11:44 AM
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06-15-2011, 08:57 PM
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thanksies Droo
here is the next part
I come down the stairs
there he is
he says hello
but I flee
why oh why
why is he here
it's my home
what's his reasoning
and still I watch
out my window
with tears
watching my lover
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those eyes look
into my own
'are you okay'
they seem to say
he is my savior
without him I'd be dead
'come grab hold
we must leave'
then out of that
hatred place
'my diary
where is it'
it's where I confide
my hopes and my dreams
'gone, dead'
my lover says
'but how'
how is it dead
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no one realizes
that I still love you
now I've given up
I date others
but still
my heart loves you
I watch you
wishing that
I was yours
yet still
you do not
realize this love
not realize my
teardrops on my window
are for you
they all will
see me before
I sleep
wodering why
these tears
do weep
but I still do
I love you to
please don't forget it
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quidditch cup
he acts like
a friend
I smile
reply back
like a friend
why can't
he realize
my love
so I no
longer have to
cry over him
and again
I fear for
him
when the
death eaters
take over
'are you alright
where are you'
my silent questions
we find you
near the dark mark
oh how I feared
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oh no, now how I fear
how could he be choosen
he isn't even of age
this is now my fear
him competing
him getting hurt
I sit
watch him walk up
slowly, unsurely
he seems not to know
how he made it this far
how he was choosen
it makes me scared
I sit and watch
the teachers looks
I will sit
patiently
through all this commotion
praying that my
teardrops on my window
won't be over him hurt
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Oh I love these... you seem to have a flow and rhythm that some other poems on here (or it could just be me) and also the fact that it doesn't rhyme! I love poems like these, keep up the good work!  | |
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oh thank you 
this next one is supposed to be set to music so interpret the rhythm how you want theres an angel crying out
out of words meant for you
see these tears upon my heart
these tears for you
and how can I say
how can I hear you
how can I tell you
these words pouring out in my head
I love you 'til the end
wish you weren't her friend
can't you hear these crys
these crys for you
I love you 'til the end
wish you weren't her friend
but I keep calling out these crys
these crys for you
smile at you
look at your face
blank, 'ole
nothing for me
I smile
hear you laugh
I sigh
I cry
and how can I say
how can I hear you
how can I tell you
these words pouring out in my head
I love you 'til the end
wish you weren't her friend
can't you hear these crys
these crys for you
I love you 'til the end
wish you weren't her friend
but I keep calling out these crys
these crys for you
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