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08-23-2009, 04:25 PM
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Aw! Those two poems were so good! I felt all soft and emotional on the inside (i'm usually emotional but i went over the top with those two poems). I love the way you write! Great post! Loved it! Can't wait for more!
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PS: I used your favourite statements again! Hehe!
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08-23-2009, 04:36 PM
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Originally Posted by Rania  Oooh. =] Which publisher did you go to? I live in Pakistan, luff, so I don't think you're going to have the same publishers around as I do. But I know I started being "serious" about my poetry by sending it to magazines that accepted poetry from freelancers. 
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08-23-2009, 11:13 PM
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I live in Pakistan, luff, so I don't think you're going to have the same publishers around as I do. But I know I started being "serious" about my poetry by sending it to magazines that accepted poetry from freelancers.
Ah ha! That sounds like a great place to start, eh? Quote:
Aw! Those two poems were so good! I felt all soft and emotional on the inside (i'm usually emotional but i went over the top with those two poems). I love the way you write! Great post! Loved it! Can't wait for more!
Kita
PS: I used your favourite statements again! Hehe!
Hurrah! They make me feel all soft and emotional on the inside too heehee.
And yay Firenjen! New readers are the dopenist! More soon. Thanks for reading, you guys!
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08-24-2009, 01:19 AM
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these are awesome!
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08-24-2009, 02:14 AM
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Originally Posted by therealginnyweasly these are awesome! New readers = my favorite thing in life currently. Thanks for reading and come back in some time! =] Here's a double post. Hope ya don't mind the double-lubbin! Sirius's Last Word to Harry
Reach, reach, reach
reach across that gap.
But careful as to not go there.
Far beyond the white caps rough
the sea curls out into a different world.
Mermaids lurk high in the waves
water rolling, rolling fast.
The current there
will catch you.
Seek that separate
world of western wonders.
Recall when you hold your wand high
the places you've seen
your eyes have seen
the images of this
place I've been made
glad to leave.
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08-26-2009, 11:25 AM
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Wow! Simply wow! That was amazing! You've portrayed their feelings really well! I feel like crying - just because it's Sirius and he died! Great post! Loved it! Can't wait for more!
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08-28-2009, 03:35 PM
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Originally Posted by Rania Far beyond the white caps rough
the sea curls out into a different world. Beautiful description. <3 Quote:
Seek that separate
world of western wonders.
Western wonders? Why western, though? Is there a reference I'm missing out on? Sorry if I sound silly, but I didn't exactly get it.  Quote:
the images of this
place I've been made
glad to leave.
-hugs my Sirius-
* * * Another awesome poem! Adored it, more please.
-sits to wait for a new poem-
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Maxie, Western as in; passing on into the west. AKA; the realm of death. heehe
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om my gosh i loved that one sooooo much post more soon
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Good Stuff Rania (I merged your DoublePost)
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Rania, I am amazed. Your work is just fantastic!! Keep up the good work!!
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08-31-2009, 03:52 PM
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Originally Posted by Rania Maxie, Western as in; passing on into the west. AKA; the realm of death. heehe  I see now. Silly me. =D
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Beyond the Black Veil
We can only suppose where the souls of old go.
We can only imagine what world is beyond
that spectral, illusive veil.
When once we pass
the imagines that last will be our light
and our guide to where we'll roam.
Perhaps I'll roam with you
floating freely and watching the world
whirl on slowly.
Perhaps I could still feel.
If so,
I would immediately take your hand
into my own and we would roam
together side by side.
A ghastly, grim grin we'll bear
as we sway
with august breezes.
The new season will take souls past us,
the alterations of new days will swiftly
bring old life quite near us.
Remember to hold tight my hand,
that current of souls -
the familiar faces of old
will beckon you to reunite and follow.
Don't lose the light of our love once we pass that veil.
I swear I shall not go without you
Lots of dark poetry lately. I must be going through my 'blue phase.' hah. I'll have some light, cheerful ones soon. =]
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Wow! That was really good! It made me feel so sad because of Sirius. You're really good! Great post! Loved it! Can't wait for more!
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Very good, I can't wait to read the light stuff too.
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your poems are fabby fantastic!!
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Don't lose the light of our love once we pass that veil.
I swear I shall not go without you
Whoa, pretty beautiful. Intense in its own way, too. Quote:
I'll have some light, cheerful ones soon. =]
Two words: Can't wait. 
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