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Old 08-21-2003, 11:11 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Water washes to the shore,
the "I love you's" in the sand wash away,
everything in life dissapears.
I think it was all too much to pay--
For a moment, just a moment with you
Taking step by step and day by day,
loving only one and giving it all away.
But when I stop to think, I'd go through it all over again--
For a moment, just a moment with you

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Old 08-21-2003, 11:29 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Nice! :up: I like the idea of a lost love shown with the "I love you" washed away in the sand.
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Old 08-22-2003, 12:59 AM   #3 (permalink)
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I like it!
 
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Thanks ya'll!
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lost love sux, you conveyed it nicely
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Old 08-21-2005, 12:05 PM   #6 (permalink)
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its nice.. good rhyming too..
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