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09-30-2006, 10:20 AM
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Thanks for checking out my thread! You'll find a lot of strange poetry here so don't be alarmed! Remember I warned you!
Here's the first one, it's all about Dumbledore.
White marble, strong fears,
Calling to me, persivere,
Harry Potter's got to,
go on in life without you.
Wise wizards, make big mistakes,
They admit it, forever awake,
I'll hand it to you Dumbledore,
You've handled it all so far.
Blood and sorrow, shed for you,
Painful memories, asking you to,
Forget all your pride,
And let your emoition run wild,
White marble pilliar.
It's not great but....
More to come!
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10-01-2006, 04:38 PM
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Hmm, this is off the top of my head...about Hermione
I've been the smart one, and followed all the rules,
Up until I met them, They thought I was a mule,
I cried because I was sensetive, and I hated them,
But then they rescused me, and picked me up from where I fell.
Then they were in trouble, I had to do something,
They were really grateful, i'm so happy I could sing,
And now I have some friends, I guess I should losen up.
Ha! Look at Ron, pretending he's tough!
Now I am sitting with my friends, raising a goblet to Harry,
Oh, I mustn't dilly dally!
The last lines are weird I know.
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10-02-2006, 09:00 PM
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Hmm a Ron:
I've only noticed, how pretty shecan be,
How very stupid it was of me,
To have fought with her,
and be with Lavender,
When my heart was with her.
I wonder if she feels the same way...
I would tell her any day,
If only I was certain that she feels the same way,
Hermone, does she feel the same way?
Hehe, it sound like a song in my head. Ah,well.
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10-07-2006, 01:39 PM
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a Dumbledore:
Deep breath, heart pounding,
Harry's face twisted in anguish, the choice,
Undoubtably painful, but must be done.
Shaking hand reach out for the goblet,
Scoop, the glowing liquid,
Trembling lips, take a sip,
coldness spreads through me.
Pain. Amounst swimming visions,
Voices, sounded in my ear,
Hate, failer, heat.
Suffocating pain, memories surfacing,
Please end the pain, twiching endlessly,
Horror in his eyes, just making it worse,
Got to keep going on,
Pain getting worse and worse.
Poking at me, treating me like dirt.
cold pain, blood lust screaming.
Make it stop.
Yea best one in a while!!!
hey if anyone's reading this rate the tread please!
Last edited by Obi-Wan K'Lari; 10-07-2006 at 01:48 PM.
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10-17-2006, 08:02 PM
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This one's about Sal in "Odd One Out" by emme_rlz:
In hope does glee over flow in oneself,
and bloom eternal,
In anger,and hate, prejudice is spreadthe world over,
ditring all love gained,
Peace is ever delicate, it is shattered purposly by fools. | |
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10-19-2006, 03:50 PM
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Doing one about Sal now are we? lol You are a good poet, and Nicole agrees. Post some more and watch me reply.
__________________ listen and you can hear the distant sounds
of someone humming a familiar song
the sounds of raindrops echo across the horizon
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10-19-2006, 03:59 PM
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hahaha! thanks! more to come!!!
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10-22-2006, 04:38 PM
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k another one 'bout Sam:
Suspitions, strange people,
She is my sister, but it's not so,
Her heart, is with her true family,
But I feel so lost without her.
Outspoken, loud, all the things I admire in her,
I am simply thoughtful,
Hope and instinks, stand by me,
Yet, she does not see it, thepain thati feel when she does not see me,
I have been there for her,
She's ready to give me up,
I often felt out of place, could it be that i am more thanme?
k now morrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeee!
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10-22-2006, 04:48 PM
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Sam? Which Sam? Sam in the Lost Girl? Loved it make more.
__________________ listen and you can hear the distant sounds
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10-23-2006, 12:05 PM
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hahaha! thanks! Yep the one in the Lost Girl!
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10-24-2006, 10:00 AM
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ok you deserve a poem Nicole. now to think of one....
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10-28-2006, 01:39 PM
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A poem for me? You are kidding me.
__________________ listen and you can hear the distant sounds
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10-29-2006, 01:12 PM
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^nope! You've been so nice too me!  | |
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11-01-2006, 06:06 PM
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Hi, your poems are great! They are the first things I read after becoming a member!
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11-01-2006, 06:20 PM
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^  Scottie! Hannah! Blaze! This is Hannah everyone! she lives in my country! i know her!
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11-22-2006, 01:56 PM
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Yeah Yeah! oh happy day... I never knew there was an artist in your soul.
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11-25-2006, 04:07 PM
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what? crazynessness. Oh well i'm Psycho so i'm no one to talk....  | |
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11-27-2006, 04:24 PM
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da di da dum...  is dancing to my music!
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11-27-2006, 05:32 PM
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oh well i should expose you to Nickelback......Brain Adams fan  hehehe.
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12-03-2006, 02:50 PM
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ok nonsence christmas poems
On the 12 days of Potter, the FCs gave to me;
A badge and the essence of me!
On the 2nd Day of Potter the FCs gave to me;
a bunch of graphics and the founder's gloves!
On the next days of Potter the FCs gave to me;
Who knows? I shall update as they give me.
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12-06-2006, 03:55 PM
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oh cool i like ur first poem it's really great :-)
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12-31-2006, 07:57 PM
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thanks it took me a while to write it....I was feeling poetic
any hoo:
On the 12 days of Potter, the FCs gave to me;
A badge and the essence of me!
On the 2nd Day of Potter the FCs gave to me;
a bunch of graphics and the founder's gloves!
on the rest of the 12 days of Potter my brain ran away;
and I shan't remember what happened then!!!!
hopefully I'll fell poetic again and post something acctually good.....   that doesn't invole smileys!
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01-22-2007, 04:10 PM
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this is something of the top of my head:
Looking, Hearing,
Listening is something else.
Gestures, Vocies,
Laughter, help.
Can't pay attention,
You are on detention.
Great, life has to go on.
it;s sooooooo funny one of my teachers is like "if you are not here but 10:30, you Are on detention" okay you can't tell how he says it but i can't change that.
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03-09-2007, 02:41 PM
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LOTR addiction!
The journey is weary,
The cold bitter,
The sprit withers,
How I long for heather.
Over the mountains we walk,
With the mountain we do not talk,
Yet she wispers heavy warnings that we cannot tell,
Until the Gandalf the Grey fell.
We carry on within ourselves,
The horror and hatred,
Of the wars and the journey,
To the gates of hell.
The beauty of Rivendell we left behind,
To Gondor we must find,
The King will return to the land,
And the One ring will be destroied.
The Ring is too strong,
I have held it too long,
Sam is not to know,
But I will not let you go,
My precious.
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03-22-2007, 05:43 PM
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okay this is about Luna from the strange world of my imagination: The dirty blonde hair,
The pierceing blue eyes,
The dangling radish earings,
They tell no lies.
Some think her crazy,
Some misunderstood,
Some disagree with her,
To the point of sainthood.
From the Crumplehorned Snorhack,
To kneazles in misletoe,
She will not desert you,
That I will always know.
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