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08-03-2003, 05:17 PM
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Welcome to my poetry. All kinds of poems are used here, haiku's, rhymes, etc..
the first one is entitled Cry, it's a haiku to go with my ff *Cry* Cry
The Past Makes Me Cry
There was this guy who was great
But now he is gone
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08-03-2003, 05:34 PM
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this one is called Bring me Back, it doesn't really rhyme
Save Me
Wake Me
Protect Me
I Know I've been living a lie
But don't let me die
But you're the one
In my life, you're my sun
Bring me back
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08-03-2003, 06:14 PM
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| | Runespoor
Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Mee-ah-mee, Florida
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Peter Shane Fifth Year | Swimming Shakespearette
good keep it up.
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08-04-2003, 10:35 PM
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This one is called Friends 'Till Heaven
Of all the friends I've ever met,
You're the one I won't forget.
And if I die
Before you do
I'll go to heaven
And wait for you
I'll give the angels
Back their wings
And risk the loss
Of everything
Just to prove
My friendship is true
I'm thankful to have family and friends
like you
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08-05-2003, 04:47 AM
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| | Grindylow
Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: MIDDLE TN
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That poem reminds me of the two people I always write about in my poems.
(except one :whisle: )
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08-05-2003, 08:17 AM
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| | Runespoor
Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Mee-ah-mee, Florida
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Peter Shane Fifth Year | Swimming Shakespearette
It was great!
__________________ "He seemed impressed by the way you came in.
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08-05-2003, 08:35 AM
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| | Troll
Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: Sydney, Australia
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08-05-2003, 09:02 AM
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| | Troll
Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Wiltshire, England
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Cool! I especially liked the 'Friends Till Heaven one!'
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08-17-2003, 06:34 PM
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| | Ramora
Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: Muggle world :(
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| Quote: Originally posted by ~*Moe*~@Aug 4 2003, 05:35 PM
And wait for you
I'll give the angels
Back their wings I like it!
The part i quoted: I'm positive I've heard it somewhere else.
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11-02-2003, 07:29 PM
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| | Banshee
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Kyleigh "Kyle" Elizabeth Manning Minister's Office | ♡ ♡ ♡ An Unnecessary Obsession ♡ ♡ ♡ Quote: Originally posted by ~*Moe*~@Aug 4 2003, 05:20 PM This one is called Friends 'Till Heaven
Of all the friends I've ever met,
You're the one I won't forget.
And if I die
Before you do
I'll go to heaven
And wait for you
I'll give the angels
Back their wings
And risk the loss
Of everything
Just to prove
My friendship is true
I'm thankful to have family and friends
like you ~*moe*~ don't stop writing please write more!
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