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04-24-2004, 08:38 AM
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| | Dementor
Join Date: Apr 2004
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wHy?
tHey wOnDeR wHy
wHy i'm LiKE tHIs
wHy i ThiNK i'm wOrThleSs, nOThiNg
wHy?
i'LL tEll yOu wHy
tHose kIds
tHe jErks wE call pOpuLaR
tHe oNe's wHo jUdge
baSed tHe cLothEs yOu wEar
aND tHe " iCe " tHat hAnGs aRounD
oUr nEck
i haTE yOu
* yEll * ihAte tHe...
yOu sHouLd gO
wHY aRe yOu...
leAve * tEars * le...
gOodbYe
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04-24-2004, 10:18 PM
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| | Puffskein
Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Kansas, USA
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I thought that was insteresting. I like your style. The way you do your letters like that. It's cool! Post more! :flowersmile:
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04-25-2004, 01:44 AM
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| | Mooncalf
Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Nevereverland
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^ I agree... it has a cool "angle" or whatever- its not pathetic though!
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04-25-2004, 03:37 AM
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| | Dementor
Join Date: Apr 2004
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^ tHANks
gOOdByE lOvE
you don't love me
you loved the silent girl
who'd listen to your petty complaints
the girl who gave you anything when you asked
i'm to say, she went away
and the loud mouthed, hyper, weirdo
you see now
here before you
is here to stay
you don't love me
thats why you have her
didn't think i'd find out
i say thanks to your friend
the one who told me whats up
the one who cared
the one saved me from my idiotic belief
he saved me from saying i love you
my only mistake
was letting him go before...
before...
before i could tell him how i really felt.
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04-25-2004, 07:18 AM
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| | Snidget
Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: California
Posts: 2,766
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Please tell me who you're taking about Victoria?Please!!!!!!!!!It sounds like you're talking about me,I don't know why,but it does. :/
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04-25-2004, 07:53 PM
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| | Ramora
Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Canada
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Lovely, thanksss for replying in mine, btw. 
:rose:
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04-25-2004, 09:08 PM
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| | Dementor
Join Date: Apr 2004
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Quote: Originally posted by Harrypottersmatchdouble@Apr 24 2004, 11:52 PM
Please tell me who you're taking about Victoria?Please!!!!!!!!!It sounds like you're talking about me,I don't know why,but it does. :/ mIss mAtChDoUbLe i haVE nO iDeA wHaT yUr TaLkInG aBoUt, aNd iF YoU muSt nOw ThAt PoEm iS AbOuT mY eX-bOyFrIeNd, cArLos, aNd ThE eNd Was AbOuT hiS fRiEnD, ErNeStO, whO I ReAllY lIKeD. hE MoVeD.
Also, mISs bloOm YUR pOeMS arE BoOtIFuL. ThAnK yOu.
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04-26-2004, 01:20 AM
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| | Snidget
Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: California
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Oh yeah you told me about him.
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04-28-2004, 07:33 AM
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| | Ramora
Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Canada
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Thanksss Mercy , so are yours.
PAMS :rose:
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05-11-2004, 04:50 AM
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| | Streeler
Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Wilmington Delaware
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 ello im firelily aka leah mae i think your writing style is different and thats a good thing mind you how long have you been writing ive been writing for 6 years but i think mine suck to if you want to read them go to firelily poems but u dont have to keep writing love and your poems are cool leah mae | |
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06-01-2004, 03:51 AM
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| | Dementor
Join Date: Apr 2004
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fooled
you know you had me fooled
when you called me beautiful
or said you loved me
you had me fooled
when you held me in your arms
nibbling on my you told me your secrets, fears
but you left out one
her, that girl
you had me fooled all this time
but i now see the truth
and i'm leaving you in the past
where you belong.
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06-15-2004, 05:19 AM
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| | Streeler
Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Wilmington Delaware
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thats really good love keep writing leah mae | |
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06-16-2004, 10:42 PM
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| | Horklump
Join Date: May 2004 Location: Buffalo New York
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I like your style of writing your poems are not pathetic and neither are you I think your poems are like mine. Keep posting. Heres a little thing that I made up that can keep you going
The door to darkness Can either be the door to death or oppurtunity but which ever fate you get you gotta stick with
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06-19-2004, 06:45 PM
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| | Horklump
Join Date: May 2004 Location: Buffalo New York
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Cmon we need the poetic genius. We want more. Heres somethin els that il keep ya goin. The human mind can be as peace ful as a flower or as destructful as voldemort.
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06-30-2004, 05:11 AM
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| | Dementor
Join Date: Apr 2004
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^ thankx eminem.
this poem suks to me but i hope whoever reads enjoys.
if i...
if i were to stop being different
do you think people'd notice me
if i dressed like michelle and alex
do you think that they would see
if i acted like madison and krista
do you think that they would like me
if i...
if i should change to be like them
do you think that i'd be happy
no!
if i were to change from different mode
that makes me so unique
i choose not to be like them
i choose to be unique
i choose to just be me
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07-13-2004, 11:28 PM
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| | Dementor
Join Date: Apr 2004
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i look into the mirror and see myself
well not really me but someone else
the girl i see is pretty with long hair
with eyes so shy when someone stares
with lips so smooth, she gives a smile
teeth of white shining like the sun
but it doesn't show who i really am inside
the ugly, lonely, frozen me
who i tried to kill, who i want to die
but she just won't leave me be.
i hope you like it, better than the other one. the begining is wat i see when i look in the mirror sometimes and the end is wat i see when i look inside myself some or most of the time.
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07-26-2004, 05:02 AM
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| | Streeler
Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Wilmington Delaware
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ur good and i think only time wiil make you better | |
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08-01-2004, 08:17 AM
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| | Dementor
Join Date: Apr 2004
Posts: 98
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^ thanks for posting leah maei was afraid no one liked my poems. i must say miss leah mae that your poems are very buetiful keep posting.
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08-14-2004, 01:41 AM
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hey mercy they very good! keep those posts comin!!!!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!
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