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Old 12-22-2004, 08:47 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Hey ppl, random poems about certain things!


Do you think it's a game?
To put me through so much pain?
Do you think it's cool
to ignore me you fool?

What's with the staring games
that you always put me through?
Why must you deny that your feelings are true?

When you eyes catch mine I soar inside,
A feeling so strange I cannot describe
The odd few glances are completely fine
But long staring sessions are confusing my mind.
Do you like me? Do you not?
Can you remember the dance?
Or have you forgot?

It would all be gr8 if u didnt switch between the two
One minute your drooling, then its like " who r u?"
Can you please clear your signals
they're being blocked
By your constant change of mind
and your losing track of thought.

Remember when those looks used to last so long,
Now I think I must have got it all wrong.
It may be like this everyday
But it's with my heart that I must pay
For the longing and love I feel for you,
What I must know is do u feel it too?

I've had enough, times running out,
just come over and make your move,
I've had enough, life's just too short,
Its time for you to choose.
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The way it's spiked
the way it curls
that jet black head
and it's cute little swirls.

The way you move
the way you walk
the sound of your voice
everytime you talk.

Those thick black lashes
and clear blue eyes
so true and perfect
I tell no lies
when I say to you
and I swear its true
that I've never seen such deep blue pools
so entrancing and appealing
so smart and full.

I study your face every chance I get
and marvel at its precision
Every inch of your face belongs to me
and your eyes are what I swim in.


lol, I might add to this at sometime, it took me 2mins
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Bahahahahahahahahahahaha

Stupid Marelle been at my user again, wait till I get her...........*shifty*
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As the dark decends into abyss
through a hole deep into the ground.
12 dark figures line the rim
their cloaks dragging the ground.
1 raises his arm over the circle
A light flashes from the tips
of those deadly fingers outstretched
now he places them to his lips.

A gasp raises one by one from the black cloaked men
and slowly they leave, 1....then 10.
Until the frail black figure stays
his form left standing on the edge


I don't really know what that was about???/Hmmmmmmmmmmmmm.........it kinda just popped into ma head......I might add to it later, oooooooo
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Blah, okies here we go.....



They say she looks just like her
she has the same blue eyes.
They say that it was such a shame
but it's only her who crys.
They comfort her poor mother
grieving for her young.
They point in her direction,
"well at least you've still got that one."

Filled with blinding fury
her heart contorts in pain,
at being her visual double
but never seeing her again.
Her face is always calm
as she slowly rips inside.
Maybe she'd be normal
if her sibling hadn't died.
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whoa, this is deep. Very nice.
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Ah thankies. Woohoo a reply, now I don't need to spam all over my own thread!lol

Senses - Part 1

An empty park in a suburban street
no noise, not a sound.
A swing on it's rusty hinges is blown by the wind,
some litter rolls along the ground.
Yet the park remains still in this afternoon,
The autumn sun a blazing.
A girl alone sits on a bench
and it seems she is intently gazing.

The beautiful sun shines gentley down
and glows on her soft face.
She gazes back into the sky
and decides she likes this place.
The sky's warm colours blosom
and she likes that it is near.
But little does her friend the sun
know that this child cannot hear.

I think I will make that like a series, that doesn't seem enough.
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