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10-01-2003, 01:38 AM
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| | Skrewt
Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: California
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My nature poem. Tell me how you like it after reading it:
SEA WORLD
Sea animals everywhere
The water is everywhere too
Coral is rough
But sand is smooth
It’s very quiet
Except for dolphin noises
Everywhere looks blue
And at the bottom
Looks tropical
The sea water
Tastes very salty
It smells so fish-ish
When fish look for food
When huge whales and sharks
Are finally wandering around
I see, hear, feel, and smell
The big sea around me
As a sea world | 
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10-01-2003, 01:40 AM
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| | Skrewt
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very cool  :up: gifted you!
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10-01-2003, 02:04 AM
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| | Skrewt
Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: California
Posts: 1,320
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Yes, very gifted I am. Music Music can controMusic is like poetry
It's sad
It's angry
It's happy
Classical, pop, and blues
Rap, R&B, and Rock
Whatever it is, it's music
Music is life
Music is your mind
Music can control you
And you can control music
Instruments are needed
Singers and lyrics may be needed
I love music
I hate music
My feelings of music never change
Even though it may
It makes us all feel a little better
That is why
Music lives on forever
And Ever | |
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10-01-2003, 02:34 AM
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| | Skrewt
Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: California
Posts: 1,320
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Homework
You hate it
You don't want it
You'd die not to have homework
From Kindergarden to College
Makes you scream to world
Makes you stressed
Hate your teacher if they give you homework
Wanna rip it?
Wanna destroy it?
You live with it
It's never over
It feels homework is there forever
Favorite subject is easy
Worst subject is harder
Push it away
Don't do it
Says your evil side
Do it
Get over it
Says your good side
Yet homework is your life
I love it when there's nothing
I hate it when there's something
Stop the homework
What does it teach us?
Does teach us
To be responsible?
To get more practice?
I don't care
I want it to disappear
I feel the same way
About homework like you do
Yet homework is our life
Don't worry
If you try to not think about it
It will disappear soon | |
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10-01-2003, 02:58 AM
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| | Skrewt
Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: California
Posts: 1,320
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Stressed Out
Leave me alone
I'm stressed
I've got to much to do
Practice, homework
Parents, teachers, friends
I hate you
You see me
In a pretty mood?
I think not
I'm shutting everyone
Out of my life
I mad at the world
The world's mad at me
People wanna know
What's wrong with me?
I don't want no one to know!
Thats not your buisness
It's mine
Don't talk to me
I'm having a bad day
A bad week
A bad month
A bad year
A BAD LIFE!
I wanna scream
I wanna talk back
I'm getting stressed out
It's loud.....how can I do my homework?
How can practice?
What's my purpose in life?
Being stressed out for every little thing?
Just stay out of my life
All my friends know
That I just broke up
With my boyfriend
So why can't they understand?
And why can't you?
Why can't anyone?
Don't you dare call me selfish
You'll make my life more like heck
Just leave me alone
I'm dealing with too much
Leave me to die
Right in my room
I'm stressed
But nobody notices
Maybe I can just go
And enter my stressless world
With bunnies and chocolate.
(finished! Thanks.)
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10-01-2003, 03:00 AM
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| | Abraxan
Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: In a communist reigime
Posts: 6,181
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Nick lestrange
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wow dead good...
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My third eye is blind, my heart is open | |
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10-02-2003, 12:30 AM
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| | Skrewt
Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: California
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This one's really kiddish. It was an assignment but I wanna know what you think of it. Laugh at it if you want.......
My version of Silverstein's poem "Thumb Face"
How do I look thumb faced?
Is it too kooky?
Do you think I can have a cookie?
I can even open a case
While playing the poofy base
I do these things
Because I'm thumb faced
My thumbs walk
While my mouth talks
All I know
Is that I have
A thumb face | |
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10-02-2003, 10:46 PM
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| | Skrewt
Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: California
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Friendship
Friendship lasts forever
But some don't
Only because they're
Not real
Friends are your family
They don't decieve one another
They don't betray you
But if they do
It's only because
Your friendship
Is so not real
They don't not let you
Do anything
They don't make descisions
Without you
But if they do
It's only because
You friendship
Is so not real
They help you
They're there for you
But if they're not
It's only because
You friendship
Is so not real
They stand up for you
They agree and disagree
But if not
It's only because
Your friendship
Is so not true | |
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10-04-2003, 12:37 AM
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| | Skrewt
Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: California
Posts: 1,320
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Bubblegum
They're big!
They're small!
They're wide!
They're tall!
Guess what it is?
It's Bubblegum!
They're pink!
They're yellow!
They're blue!
They're orange!
Guess what it is?
It's Bubblegum!
They mess up your face!
You get in trouble for it!
They're sticky
But yummy!
Guess what it is?
It's Bubblegum!
BUBBLEGUM! BUBBLEGUM!
GOOOOOO BUBBLEGUM! | |
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10-05-2003, 04:19 PM
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| Formerly: Saawariya   Veela
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thats really good.
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