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| | Finished Poetry Finished poetry threads come here to rest and be remembered. | 
01-11-2006, 10:01 PM
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Jay’z Potter Melodies Hello everyone! Greetings. Well, after a slight gap, I’m back with my Poetry, most of which – unfortunately – sucks. With both Hp and non-HP Poetry, my sole purpose has been to convey my emotions and feelings, so I apologize in advance if I bore you.
This thread is dedicated, first of all, to Aria (hpoenixrose13) and Nikki (Snooty Snitch), and then to the Beloved Sir Spots.
Inside of Ginny’s Trunk
An aged chest, worn-out and old,
Layered with dust; a dusty gold;
A rusty lock dangling down the front,
Ne’er opened without force and brunt;
Within, a straggly, unkempt mess,
Sets of robes, dress over dress,
But deep below, underneath this all,
Lies a black, aged package small;
‘Tis what contains her deepest, darkest fear,
A secret the soul at times just cannot bear,
‘Tis a diary, aged but still kept,
One ‘cause of which for hours she’s wept;
Every morn, when it’s still dark,
Before wakes up the earliest lark,
She cannot help but sit,
And write her account of her day in it;
She writes in it her innermost worries and fears,
The tensions and troubles she always bears,
She gets absorbed in it to the pole,
‘Cause in reply it comforts her soul.
The words actually get printed back,
Telling her there is naught she lacks,
And through saccharine phrases, for which she lusts,
The diary wins slowly more and more of her trust.
But now, to her horror, her life,
Is even more of a discord and strife;
For her verve is slipping away from her,
And everything that happens is all a blur;
And little though she used to suspect this chum,
Now she’s clever enough to it all sum,
Alas! From the diary’s clutches, she can’t escape at any rate.
Too bad, ‘tis such a sad ending, but then: it’s all fate.
Well, this was one of my worse pieces, because I’m not used to Potter Poems.  Hopefully, I’ll get better when I’ve become more used to it. For now, Ciao.
*Glomps Sir_Spots*  *He’s too nice*
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01-14-2006, 08:22 PM
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*is glomped* Jay, this is really good, nice work (and remember, flattery will get you EVERYWHERE!) *glomps back* 
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01-14-2006, 10:05 PM
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*glomps back* You're too sweet! *Luffs on Eric*
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01-18-2006, 06:48 AM
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OH my goodness!!!! You dedicated a thread partly to me!?!?! I am so flattered. Sweetie I absolutely love you. I wish I could write such wonderful poetry! How can you say that wasn't amazing!?!?! That was marvelous!!! Please post as soon as you get back from your trip thingy. I love you a bunch!
Wow..WOW...WOW!
Iam just speechless that was so amazing.
Okay, I go sleep now. Love you as always I will.
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01-18-2006, 07:01 AM
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wow you're good, i like your ryhmes, a passionate poem you got there.
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01-22-2006, 07:06 AM
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Thank you all who commented. Ariakins, you rock, love. You're too awesome. 8Smooches*
And lala_favhp, thank you so much for popping in. You're really sweet for doing that. *Glomps*
Love,
~~Jay~~
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01-26-2006, 10:33 AM
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| Wow...o_O **Adds a bit of the flattery Spots had mentioned** Hehe..:P ツ Zonko's Fanatic Forever! | Sirius Stalker | ShruckleNooferian ツ
Awesome,
The thing I love about your poems, is that they DON'T have to rhyme!
You add this unknown touch which creates the image and makes it exactly how you want it in our heads!
I loved the Ginny poem, and I definently agree with all who said you have talent! Keep them coming, 
Your new loyal reader,
~~RQT XD
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Fall out of bed, sing like a bird
Dizzy in my head, spin like a record
Crazy on a Sunday night..
You make me dance like a fool
Just the thought of you can drive me wild
Ohh, you make me smile.
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Great poem! 
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04-01-2006, 02:57 AM
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Dearest Jay:
Wow! These poems are amazing. *Glomps* I'd say more, but I seriously have to rush. *Smoochies* PAMS! They're excellent.
Love,
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I'm so sorry for not having checked this out in forever. Thansk for the great comments everyone. *Smoochies* I've another poem for you all coming soon.
Love,
~~Jay~~
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*Pops in*
Well, I was so bored, I just had to do something about it. So, I scribbled down a poem. It is actually all about Gryffindor, but it conveys my feelings about Gryffindor.
Name: Nobles tears and Spices
*I’m a total weirdo when it comes to naming poems*
Author: ~~Jay~~ *Duh*
A striking sheet of glittering gold,
Pinned with care to a scarlet rose;
Hanging from a scarlet peg,
A golden chain, a golden cross;
A Letter lying by the side,
Words in gold engraved upon;
Courage, Strength, Will and Daring,
With Patience dear, endure your loss.
The Gryffindors, valiant and bold;
Hawk-eyed, Noble, Souls Divine,
Gallant and brave, of Talent rare,
Wearing their tints of red-and-gold.
Love,
~~Jay~
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06-01-2006, 02:39 PM
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 for Gryffindor!  Jessica!
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07-03-2006, 03:42 AM
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that was excellent
since ur so good can u tell me wat u think of this
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11-26-2006, 02:30 PM
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Wow, your work is amazing, i love it! | |
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