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Old 04-17-2004, 05:30 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Okay so here are some of my poems: Please tell me what you think...

I used to think
I used to think
I needed you
Just to have a good day
I used to think
You were the one and only
Who made each day amazing
Now I see
How naive
I can be
I now see
You are not for me

Control
I can't control this feeling
To powerful for healing
I want to runaway
But yet I sit and stay
I can't control
My thoughts
I can't control
My actions
When your around
All my feelings
Thoughts and dreams
Become a mess
I can't control my thoughts
And my feelings that are for you


Let it slip
I let it slip
I let those words
cross my lips
to someone
not completley trusted
what will i do
what will i say
when things dont
turn out my way
will i deal
or will i never ever heal
so let this not be
my biggest mistake
to have let it slip

okay I don't really like this one but whatever.

Paper
My heart is beating rapid
as i see the paper passed
from your hands
to anothers
then passed to me
my hands tremble
as I open up that peice of paper
is it a yes
is it a no
I will soon know
I read the words
half expecting what i see
the words say
YES
you want to be with me

Tell me what you all think??
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Old 04-17-2004, 05:38 PM   #2 (permalink)
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wow...I like your poems! they're great!
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Old 04-18-2004, 12:39 AM   #3 (permalink)
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thanks so much!
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Old 04-19-2004, 03:00 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Wow, they're amazing!!! They're great!!!



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