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12-18-2003, 07:01 PM
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| | Hinkypunk
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Well, here goes nothing.
Every night I see him,
always haunting my dreams.
But then people tell me:
Dreams are not as bad as they seem.
Yeah right, they weren't there.
Him getting stronger,
my soul growing bear.
Though try as I might,
every night,
the dreams do not go away.
For they are here to stay.
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12-18-2003, 07:02 PM
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| | Crup
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wow  thats really good.. it manages to express alot in so few words! well done! can i ask wot ur inspiration was?
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12-18-2003, 07:04 PM
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| | Hinkypunk
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Yeah. It has do to with Ginny's experiences with Tom at the CoS.
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12-18-2003, 07:07 PM
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| | Crup
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great! u got any more..... really well written
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12-18-2003, 07:13 PM
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| | Hinkypunk
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Erm, not right now sorry.
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12-18-2003, 09:27 PM
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| | Hinkypunk
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He's gone. I cry.
All I can say is why?
Why did he have to go?
Those voices in the veil.
Sounded so frail.
He went with them. He's lost.
I'll make sure Lestrange will pay the cost.
^not the best poem in the world. Still, it makes me cry. | |
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12-18-2003, 09:34 PM
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| | Crup
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mm very moving.. poor harry.
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12-19-2003, 01:19 AM
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| | Hinkypunk
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You are always by my side.
You comfort me when I cry.
Best Friends
When I'm down
and wear a frown,
you are always there
because you care.
Best friends
But then one day your loved one died.
I was at your side when you cried.
Best friends 'til the end!
^Dedicated to those who care about their friends. (Which should be all of you.)
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12-19-2003, 01:22 AM
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| | Kneazle
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nice Cara, i never thought you would be a poet
__________________ I love how people respect my privacy and knock... if they knocked I could say that.
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12-19-2003, 01:23 AM
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| | Hinkypunk
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Hi Potterfreak! Yes it is amazing I'm a poet isn't it? I scare myself.
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12-19-2003, 01:27 AM
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| | Kneazle
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its Ryan, how quickly you forget...
__________________ I love how people respect my privacy and knock... if they knocked I could say that.
I am immortal. Heaven doesn't want me and hades is afraid I will take over.
Join my Rp. High Magic
Read my FF. Dark Days Ahead
My site Not done but hey... I could use help
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12-19-2003, 01:29 AM
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| | Hinkypunk
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I remembered your name. I was typing so fast I just put in what ever name first came to mind.  | |
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12-26-2003, 01:30 PM
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| | Hinkypunk
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Here's a more happy poem:
Snow white owls in the sky,
flowers on the ground.
These wonderful things,
never bring a frown.
Heaven sent angels,
sparkling snowflakes.
I love these wonderful things,
along with a piece of cake!
^Probably wasn't a very good poem.
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