it can be light..it can be heavy..it changes with my mood..this one is about the world..i had to write it for my english project..

THE WORLD

A sea,
of sparkling blue water,
Paradise for the underwater creatures,
It's shells, treasure of the world,
A place where dreams come true.

By the shore of the great sea,
Lies a magic forest,
A soothing place,
of green trees and fresh air.

But now,
The wonderful world is gone,
Destroyed by dirty minds,
In a blink of my eyes,
Smokes clouding my future,

I WANT A NEW WORLD!
I WANT TO BREATHE AGAIN!
I want nature to gain back it's pride,
So I can live in a world of freedom.

how was it?

OCEAN

Ocean...
Peaceful and calm,
Beautiful, scenic, everything nice...
But you can't be sure what lies beneath,
Deep down inside,
It's not so sweet,
You can drown...

Storm...
Big waves hit the shore,
Hurting it's fine, white sand,
Not caring, ever hitting,
But the shore can't run,
It wont.

And waves...
They come and go.

(u guys may think i'm too in love with this world n nature..but read carefully..to me, the ocean portrays a guy's love..forever undecided..)

They are great! I especially liked the Ocean one.

I also alike the Ocean one, really rocks!

I actually tought it was aout love in generall and that you can't run from anything.

Nice poems

(thanx evryone!! here's another one..)

GOODBYE

Sleep, my darling, don't you cry...
I'm only here to say goodbye,
When you're up at the break of dawn,
You'll find that I'm already gone,
So take care, baby, don't be afraid,
I'll be ok, things will be great,
'Cause if we're together, we'll just fight,
Between us things would never be right,
I think now it's time for someone else,
Who could give you all her best.

(it's not really great but i felt happy after i wrote it..heartbroken that time,for ur info..lol!)

(and another one)

STAR

As I gaze up to the sky,
There's a million of stars and they're so bright,
But only one caught my eye,
The biggest of all, the brightest with light.

You're so special, nothing else matters,
Making my nights a little bit brighter,
How I wished i could just gaze at you forever,
Being away from you I hoped never,
And now, star, that we're together,
Forever, I hope, we shall love each other...

<span style='color:darkred'>That part(s) is so nice.

Especially "Making my nights a little bit brighter"</span>

(this is kinda mushy)

YOU WERE THERE

You were there,
When times are rough
When things're not right,
To correct it all.

You were there,
When I'm not loved,
When my heart is broken,
And you mended it.

You were there,
To catch me when I fall,
As a shoulder to cry on,
To comfort me.

You were there,
To save my soul,
To wipe my tears,
And confront my fears.

You were there,
To care,
To share,
To love,
And I hope,
Forever you are there,
Cause you're the only one I care.

(btw thanx for all the comments)

MY LOVE

I can still remember,
The third of November,
The sun shining,
I see your face smiling,
It's like I'm dreaming.

It was a bright afternoon,
But you'll be leaving soon,
Leaving me behind,
I think I lost my mind,
Dazed by the fact you're so fine.

But never would I have expected,
That I would be rejected,
Someone like you,
Made me feel so blue,
Still my love remained true.

And the year ended,
But my love never faded,
Closer we became,
But it's still the same,
You're not mine and the truth remain.

(this suck!)

It does not!!!
Its good!!!

<span style='color:darkred'>Hush!
That's rude to say somthing like that when it's great!
So say to yourself "It's great". </span>

LOVE, MISS, CARE, WISH

Look into my eyes, you'll know my love is true,
One simple smile my broken heart you mend,
Very deeply I'm in love with you,
Everyday I wonder if it ever could end.

Months pass by, another year ended,
I sat alone thinking of you,
Still never did my love faded,
Sweetheart, it didn't, it actually grew.

Careful with my heart, I don't want it broken,
Ain't never easy giving it away,
Roughness isn't what I chosen,
Endless love is what I want you to say.

Wish you were here coz I'm so lonely,
I miss you so much, I can't deny,
So how are you now, feeling good lately?
Honey, to tell you the truth, a tear actually dropped when you said goodbye.

These are great poems! I like 'Star' and 'You Were There'... Keep it up!

there is no specific title or anything for this poem. i just felt like writing it.

Wrapped up in love and sealed with a kiss,
A chain of sentence with unknown ending,
A spill of words with sea deep meaning,
Which started with a promise of endless sharing,
And only be finished with a seperation by death.

I shall remain as forever yours...

those were great! keep writing!