I haven't written much poetry before, so please give me feedback.

The House of Black

Born in a house of darkness,
Nurtured in a house of courage.
The fall of a house of love,
His life changed forever.

Trapped in a house of horror,
His mind a house of pain.
Escaped to a house of rock,
He watched for his revenge.

Reunited in a house of shreiking,
Again in the house of darkness.
Died in a house of mystery,
Lost, but not forgotten.

Very nicely done, I, too haven't written much poetry before this year, you've got alot of talent, great job. :up:

very well written and very well presented i like it! :sun: