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10-28-2005, 12:20 AM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: christine malfoy Graduated Ministry RPG Name:
christine malfoy | chrispotter's poems about Harry characters - Sa9+ ode to dumbledore
dumbledore, you are the wisest wizard.
your long silvery hair and beard.
the only person feared
you was voldermort.
dumbledore, your half-moon glasses
sparkled and glinted in the sun
and you the one.
dumbledore, you sured missed
since you died
and made everyone cry
the day you died.
what do think of this poem? is very good? please reply! I have written more what do think of them.
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01-25-2006, 06:02 AM
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1st POST!!!!!!
i liked the peom! i felt the same way when he died!
sooooooooo sad!!!!!
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01-25-2006, 11:08 AM
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Haha, Welcome to Sphinxs Sofa! I'm glad more of you are coming back!
I did like your poem, very playful in the beggining and melodramatic but good nevertheless!
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01-30-2006, 05:22 PM
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christine malfoy | dobby
dobby, you speak in third person
you try to save harry's live
serveral times
dobby, you take freedom
and clothes
because you are free
from slavery.
dobby, you are a weird little house-elf,
who likes freedom and pay
for work.
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01-31-2006, 06:28 PM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: christine malfoy Graduated Ministry RPG Name:
christine malfoy | ode to ron
ron, your hair so red
upon you lovely head.
you are harry's friend
until the end.
you are funny and witty
and make harry and hermione laugh.
you are a weasley all the way through.
you are pick on by draco,
but don't take it any way
not any day.
now you get even with him.
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02-01-2006, 05:08 PM
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christine malfoy | Severus Snape
Severus Snape, you are the Half-blood Prince,
but there is no escape
from the Unbreakable Vow.
Severus Snape, you excel in potions
with the notion
to poison your students especially Harry Potter.
Severus Snape, you are Death Eater,
but you say that you are reformed from evil ways.
You got everyone fooled
in your guise.
Severus Snape, the Dark Arts fascinate you,
so you invented several jinxes and hexes.
You got no escape for you for what you did.
Severus Snape, you murdered Dumbledore
because of the Unbreakable Vow.
Now you got to pay for your crimes.
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04-05-2006, 06:24 PM
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christine malfoy | When Tragedy Strikes
I was unaware that you were in pain.
I guess, I was too preoccupied with school.
I came to you for help again and again.
I never realized that, I was being a fool.
I expected you to reach me;
And I never realized that nothing is "free."
It only dawned on me; when you were in pain
and had to have surgery, that teachers are:
very, very special people, too.
And again, you are not just a teacher; you are a "star."
As a student, I look up to you with respect.
I pray that all your tragedies will end.
And that your body, mind, and soul will mend.
It is tough to think, that while you were away
In the hospital, that another tragedy happened, too.
Nobody could tell you about it right away
For fear of what the news would do to you.
So, when you get better; I am confident that
Your family will explain it all to you.
As your student, I want to say that "I love you, Mrs. Powell."
Christine M. Davis
Copyright ©2006 Christine Davis
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04-13-2006, 05:05 PM
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christine malfoy | Harry Potter Shippers
Hermione and Harry
can never be
more than just friends.
Neville and Luna
can never be
a couple
or neither can
Hagrid or Madame Maxine
cause it seems
that good old JK Rowling
sunk all these shippers down
as she dubunked other
rumors on these shippers.
Harry and Ginny are
met to be
and so is Ron and Hermione
they are the couples that
most likely shipped.
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06-24-2006, 09:39 PM
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christine malfoy | Draco Can't tell Hermione that He loves Her
by: chrisd2000
Draco can't tell her that he loves her
he can't say it.
Does he mean it?
He is love with a mud-blood
should it be wrong to
love her
or should he build this
hate and amonisty towards
her and her friends?
Draco loves with all her
his heart, but
where to start
he loved Hermione
from day one
from the first moment
he laid eyes on her.
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06-29-2006, 06:36 PM
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christine malfoy | Ode to Joe: my best friend by: Christine Davis I miss you my dear friend and that my heart is broken since you went away. My dear friend you were there for me when I was down and now I can never tell you how much that I cared for you. You were like family to me and now that you are gone there is an empty space in my heart and now there is a void that can never be replaced. Now I am alone crying wishing you were here to rid of the pain of the loss of your death. How I am to cope with that? My dear friend Joe.
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07-05-2006, 05:58 PM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: christine malfoy Graduated Ministry RPG Name:
christine malfoy | Ode To Joe P. Stewart:
My Best Friend Dear Joe,
I will always miss you
And treasure your memories
in my heart.
Right now my heart is broken
And I pray that God has taken
You up to Heaven with him.
I know that you were suffering in
pain; nut now you are in Heaven
With Jesus.
I will always miss you- Dearly.
I want think about the "Good-
times" that we had together.
And I wish that I could have been
There for you; and things would have
Been different....... You would still
Be alive! We would be able to
shoot pool together. I remember
your nickname, "Eightpocket."
Dear Joe, you were like an Uncle
To me; and you will sadly
missed by all of us; whose Hearts
and Lives you Touched. I
want you to know that, I love you!
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07-10-2006, 10:41 AM
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you are a nice poet..keep it up
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07-10-2006, 09:13 PM
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Why thank you very much! I several other poems I have written if you like
to have me post them.
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07-17-2006, 06:49 PM
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christine malfoy | Harry Potter Acrostic
by: Chrissy Davis aka Chrissypotter Hero from the age of one, who is A friend that is loyal and brave and that is Really is trying to save the wizarding world from the Return of Voldermort and his power. Yet Voldermort has tried to kill you several times
and hasn't succeeded yet. People say you are the "Chosen One and you are Only a young man whose destiny has to be fullfilled. Trust, loyalty, and bravery are things a Gryffindor like
you show. Training to defend yourself against the Dark Arts in your
fight against Voldermort. Even though you losted everyone you ever loved in
Voldermort's violent rampage of power and destruction. Revalations from your past are slowly
coming into the open for you to see about the
connection between Voldermort and you.
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07-17-2006, 11:19 PM
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christine malfoy | Snape Sour and Never nice that is A death eater, who is the Potions Master with Evil intentions.
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07-18-2006, 06:03 PM
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christine malfoy | Cedric Diggory Acrostic
by:Christine Davis aka Chrisd2000 Couragous Hufflepuff, who is well Educated and like by all. Daring deeds he has showed that is loyal and trustworthy and that is Respected by his peers, and who is very Intelligent person who Cares for all wizard kind because he is so unkind.
This Cedric Diggory, a brave, and loyal Hufflepuff.
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07-19-2006, 07:08 PM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: christine malfoy Graduated Ministry RPG Name:
christine malfoy | Ginvra Weasley Ginger red hair flowing down your back and In love with Harry Potter. Nice and helpful to others in need and a Vison of true beauty in Harry Potter's eyes. A Really gifted witch that knows how to curse
people you don't like. Amazing and truly a Weasley all on our
own. Wonderfully talented and gifted witch Even though you are 16 years old. A kind of girl you bring home to
mom and dad. Secretly in love with Harry Potter and
he doesn't even know it. Loving and caring invidual that gets teased for
being poor and comes from a big family. Eyes of honey brown that
gaze into warmly into Harry's green eyes as they across each other
gaze. Yes, she is all this and more.
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07-20-2006, 05:36 PM
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christine malfoy | Voldermort Acrostic Violent nature that makes you Obessed with immortily and cheating death. Longing to kill anyone who gets in his path
to reach his ulimate goal. Death Eaters obey your orders with violence
and hate. Evil and cruel man, who was once a handsome man
named: TOM RIDDLE, but anymore. Rage and pain you bring to all the family
members of the ones of you killed. Murderer of thousands and thousands
of wizards and witches at your hand or the your command. You are Obessive in killing Harry Potter, "The Chosen One." Rampage of killing and descrution you have brought
you the wizarding world and you are The last descendant of Salazar Slytherin,
who is a half-blood and hates it.
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07-21-2006, 06:01 PM
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christine malfoy | Hermione
You have your head
in stuck in book
and you never takes a look
at what you are doing.
In every class and every lesson
are you have them all done by heart.
You never parts dear and school books.
Snape calls you a know-it-all
in his class.
You pass every subject you take
and makes sure Harry and Ron do the same.
You are rather by reading instead
of persueing anything else
So you don't fall or
fail the subjects you take
Hermione.
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07-21-2006, 08:10 PM
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christine malfoy | Lily Loving and devoted mother who sacrificed your life to save your son from death. Your Inevitable death was unstoppable. You have Lovely auburn red hair and bright green eyes just like those of your son, Harry, who you gave your life for. A Young woman that was killed by Voldermort because you got in the way.
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07-22-2006, 07:12 PM
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christine malfoy | Draco Death Eater chosen at the age of 16 and you are to young to understand what you getting into. Resentment dwells inside you that are outshowed by that Mud-blood Granger. Anger and hate are all you know because you born a pure-blood. Cold grey eyes that get you whatever you want with a single stare. Original Slytherin bad boy, who gets whatever you need at a moments notice.
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07-25-2006, 06:23 PM
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christine malfoy | Fleur Delacour French female student from Beaubatons Academy who, Looks like a flower blooming in the sun as Every boy stops to stare at your beauty and charm. Usually your charm works and boys start swooning over you as your skin shows its Radiant glow as pale as the moon in the night sky. Fleur Delacour, whose beauty is compared to a flower that I say in the poem.
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07-27-2006, 05:56 PM
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christine malfoy | James Potter by: Christine Davis
Black hair you mess up to impress the girls
especially Lily Evans.
You tried and tried to make her
love you.
You are Maurader at heart
and given a chance
for a little romance.
You got a part
to play
and today
is the day
that you make your move
on Lily.
As you work charm on her
on the spur
of the moment
you give her a kiss
and how can she resist it
as the sun
fades into the night's sky.
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07-27-2006, 06:28 PM
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christine malfoy | Remus Lupin by: Christine Davis
You are called "Moony"
by all your friends
because of every full moon
you change into a creature
of the night.
With all your might
to you try to fight
the urge to stay sane
from the werewolf form you take
once a month.
A werewolf is what you
become
a creature that feeds off
the desire of killing and maiming
in which you fight
with all your will and sanity
to stay alive.
You are Marauder
there is doubt
about that and true
to word and you helped
Harry Potter,
the son of your
best friend, James Potter.
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07-27-2006, 06:53 PM
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christine malfoy | Fred Weasley
Fun and wit get you into trouble
with your double,
George. Red hair
and a flair
for rulebreaking
along with your twin
so you both can win
a game chance. Exciting pranks you pull and
how you create joke supplies
for you joke shop. Dariong and bold geinus
creating and blowing
things up. Wise beyond your years
and Even you and your twin
get into trouble
on the double
once in a while. Amazing and clever as you
are that you and
George
trick your parents
into thinking you are the other. Sly and cunning
that you pull pranks on
unwary Slytherin students. Love of fun,
pranks and tricks
to pull and making Endless supplies
of escape and to keep
your joke shop running. Yes, you are funny
with your twin at joke shop saying,
"U-NO-POO!"
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