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Eerised · 02-24-2005, 02:34 AM

Hello! I've never been in here before, but since I have alot of poetry I figured I should have a look around and maybe post a bit. I write alot. I love to write, but I warn you that if you prefer happy poetry over angsty sad angry type then you might not like mine very much. Ill start off with one that isnt all angsty its just...different. I dont know. But I like it. I write from personal experiences alot. That is practically where all my inspiration comes from at least for poems! i also have a fic on here not in this section obviously for anyone who likes my writing. Its in the romance section, if you are interested. Its called Serendipity...I changed the title a little so it says Serendipity: A story about love...but now the permanent title is Serendipity: a story about love in times of war......So yeah please give it a read if you like my writing!anywho...here goes...

Paradox

The dark moon is feint beyond the haze
Stars in the night, Mystic clouds fizzle to dust,
Flashes of white lights break soft visions of desire
Vapored sounds lost in darkness silence escapes me

Fire sparks into a hot haze tracing words unknown across your lips
A demension beyond,
Thoughts funneling in Heavens a far,
Dreaming...lovely silky meteors burning into space beyond,
My Paradox.

Okiez! Thats it for now! I hope you all enjoy it. I know it makes very little sense, but it really isnt supposed to make sense.Well tata!

-Aria

Leeness · 03-25-2005, 09:46 AM

this is a good poem, i love it andiwould like to congradulate you because it is so difficult to make un-rhyming poems (well for me anyway) keep it up

Eerised · 03-27-2005, 11:44 PM

Thank you, sir...uh...lady...um person. I do my best. Well I might as well post another poem now that I am here...heehee.

Hush
I sit in silence. I dare not share my heart. I've done it once before and it ripped me apart, but the trouble is that I did it again and I do it now, I just wish I were dead, but I cannot stop and this love for you is making me rot. I'm rotting away day after day, stuck in my silence, stuck in my pain.
Hush, little girl. Hush now and sleep. Tomorrow will be better. Hush, do not weep.

My head keeps on spinning. My heart still is ripping, ripping in the silence of my darkest hour, whilst in a love affair that has me devoured. I try to keep quiet. I try not to speak. I've tried so hard that I'm starting to bleed. Hush. They tell me. It'll be alright. We will protect you on this dark night. Hush, Hush little girl. We wont let you get hurt. But this was a lie that I should have seen from the start.

How can you help me? How can you care? When the one I love most wouldn't even dare. But still all I hear is hush, Hush little girl, we will always be there.
I've kept quiet. I've done what they've told but all it does is make me cold. Cold with heartache, cold with despair and all I ever wanted was for someone to care.Hush, Hush, little girl, you don't need him. Hush, Hush little girl. Just go to sleep.

I've tried to hush. I've tried to sleep, but this love has done such awful things to me. Its made me feel, but these feelings must be kept in and I wonder why I even bother to live. Hush, Hush, little girl, you will be alright. Hush, Hush, little girl, you have no reason to weep in the night.

But I do, I tell them, the voices in my head. I love someone who would rather me be dead. Hush, little girl, come. Stop your crying. Hush, Hush, little girl, we know you feel as though you're dying. But the problem is that they don't know. Only I do and that must never be told. Hush, Hush little girl.
Hush.

Ok...thats all for now. I know its really kinda sorta long but...i hope you like it. Its one of my more treasured works of poetry. Well Tata!
-Aria

Eerised · 03-28-2005, 07:53 PM

Hello, again. I wrote another poem last night and since I'm here I figured I might as well post!

All I have...
Staring into the darkness of space. The stars have gone and my hope is begining to fade. Take me away from my darkness ad pain, all I had left is starting to wane.

All I had was one star shinning bright but now I've nothing no glimmmer of hope glinting in the night. All I have is a love stronger than hate but I fear that you cannot love me, you are begining to stray.

I look out into the darkness. I feel the world pressing in, and yet through the haze I can still see him...
The clouds have not parted and the moon is still hidden, yet its light still shines through the darkening mist.

All I have is darkness, my light isn't shinng. The glint in my eyes, the life and fire has gone out in the night...and yet I still fight to be with you. All I have is a single star whose light is fading fast and yet I'm holding on for all I have is a love that I know will last..for all I have is you...

Okay!I hope you enjoy it.
Tata!
-Aria

Eerised · 03-28-2005, 10:53 PM

Okie dokie, then I was on here again and I thought hey how bout I post more poems. So that is just what I am gonna do.

Finding Myself.....

Lost in a world.
Young and Alone.
Confused and dazed,
You don't even want to know.

Finding myself in a
Darkness unknown.
Falling forever.
An emotional wreck,
Just wishing for death.

Holding onto a love
I can never have.
Finding out that
I am fading fast.

I'm finding myself.
I'm finding my fears,
Trying to fight off all of my tears.

The pain in my heart never will subside.
I'm lost in the dark,
stuck on the outside.

I can hear the song that used to be so strong.
I can feel the pain that used to be love.

I ask myself over and over again,
"Why can't I find myself?
Why wont my pain end?"

Ok so that is all for now ladies and sirs...of course there is really only one person who is bothering to read so maybe just you, person, whose gender I know not. ok yeah I am done now.
Tata
-Aria

The Boogeyman · 03-31-2005, 01:22 AM

this is nice I like it.

Eerised · 04-01-2005, 08:19 PM

Thank you so much! I like that you like it...I love knowing that someone other than me appreciates my poems....I am so watching Harry Potter (PoA) right now! heehee....So anywho..this is a poem that I wrote a couple days ago....on tuesday night I think....yeah It was tuesday...ok I hope you 2 people like it!

Only a Dream...
Light filters through. My head is racing with thoughts of you. There you are sleeping peacefully next to me in bed. Last night was wonderful and nothing can compare. Yoour kiss was perfect, it made everything seem right. You and me together in flight. A passion ignited. A love set loose. You and me together, its a dream come true. When you held me tight, I knew right then that you had been what was missing in my life. When you whispered softly in my ear, "I'm in love with you", when you played footsie with me in bed, lying naked in the moon light, I knew that if my life did now end that everything would be just fine because I'd found happiness and love.

I watched you sleep so peacefully. i clung close to you, happily. I heard your heart beating in my ear, I could feel your chest rising and falling, it felt so good to be so near...
All my fears had melted away, all my pain had begun to stray, for here I am laying next to you, happy and content, just us two. I found love and I knew it would not wane and I kew you would not stray....

Then I felt myself pulled back to earth, my eyelids flew open and I look for your face, but I find that you are gone and have been replaced by all my old fears and now I feel the tears burning as they stream down my face. Darkness is flooded all around, the light is gone never to be found. I feel the cold, I search high and low, I find no evidence that ever a soul had slept in my bed right beside me, I've come to discover that it was all only a dream....

Okay, thats all. I hope you all enjoy. I am actually quiet fond of this poem so I do hope you all enjoy it as much I as I enjoyed writing it! Tata!

-Aria

The Boogeyman · 04-03-2005, 05:22 AM

yah that's a good one. That's a good deep one.

Leeness · 04-04-2005, 02:13 PM

yay great new updates, please post more soon

Eerised · 04-05-2005, 05:38 AM

Hello again! How is everyone? I am glad that you really like my poetry. This is another poem about a boy. At the time I liked 2 boys one of them was the one the last poem was about and the other is just a friend in my eyes now. So yeah here it is and I hope you like it!...

When you hold me...

I didn't even know I did till yesterday, when I looked into your eyes and you took my pain away. I love you because you are you. I love you because your eyes are blue. I love you for your smile. I love you for the way you make me feel. When I'm wrapped in your arms and everything is surreal.
When you hold me I feel safe, I feel wanted and adored. When you hold me I feel comfortable and complete. When you look into my eyes all my problems fade away. When you hold me in your arms the whole world melts away...
When you smile at me, I know that I'm in love. When I'm having a bad day and then I see your face, it's like Fate telling me this is my place here in your arms.....
When I hear your voice my heart rejoices. When you sing I fall into you, and when we are apart I miss you with all my heart....I'm just not the complete without you...
I dream of you at night and sweet visions of you fill my waking hours. All i truelly want in life is for your heart and mine to beat in time with one another.
When you hold me in your arms and I can hear your beat, i know its where I belong and I just can't help but feel so complete....
When you hold me....

Okay. I hope you like that one too. While I was re-writing it well typing it all i could think of was I really like that boy...sometimes love can be such a pain! But where would this world be without it?
Je Dour Toi! (<------That is to the boy I like...its french!) Well tata!
-Aria
PS
My birthday is so this thursday!!! 16 woot woot baby!

OtterySt.Catchpole · 04-13-2005, 04:49 AM

Hey Aria...it's Ottery...

...so I was down here and I was like. "I don't read enough poetry." Probably because I hate it so much...it sounds nice, don't get me wrong, just ask me to give you the meaning or do an analysis of a short poem, and I'd just rather write a paper on a novel thanks much.

So Here's what I loved...dissected for your cringing pleasure...

Quote:

Originally Posted by hpoenixrose13star

Hush

Great title, my favorite episode of Buffy is titled Hush too...

Quote:

I dare not share my heart. I've done it once before and it ripped me apart, but the trouble is that I did it again and I do it now, I just wish I were dead, but I cannot stop and this love for you is making me rot.

While I can honestly say love has never made me rot...I can say I've been there for the rest...

so, besides it sounded nice, and it got my attention.

Quote:

My heart still is ripping, ripping in the silence of my darkest hour, whilst in a love affair that has me devoured.

Quote:

We will protect you on this dark night. Hush, Hush little girl. We wont let you get hurt. But this was a lie that I should have seen from the start.

Nice imagery...the ripping heart, and I love how it sounds 'in the silence of my darkest hour' I'm all jealous...and 'we will protect you on this dark night'...who? Who? You know it can't be anyone good. I liked that.

Quote:

How can you help me? How can you care? When the one I love most wouldn't even dare.

Aint it the truth...

Quote:

I've tried to hush. I've tried to sleep, but this love has done such awful things to me. Its made me feel, but these feelings must be kept in and I wonder why I even bother to live. ...you have no reason to weep in the night.

I liked that...'this love has done such awful things to me.' and 'you have no reason to weep in the night' but I do...sorry I mean...it sounded really good, nice work.

Quote:

I love someone who would rather me be dead.

Ottery's advice is ditch that zero and get yourself with a hero...word.

Eerised · 04-16-2005, 06:36 AM

Ottery!!!! I love you! I am glad that everyone has liked my updates. Ottery I know exactly what you mean about having to write papers on poetry....I can read it and write it and that is all! So your favorite episode of Buffy is Hush too! Thats one of my favorites! Its os creepy and I love the music! So anywho....I have finally returned and OMF do I have more poems for you guys....some of them I dont think are really appropriate because of the subject matter so I cant post Temptation is Sin or ... to the power of 3 Note to everyone there is a 3 letter word where the dot dot dot is.....its not something that I would think people want to have posted on a site for people of all ages. Spring is over and I am 16! My birthday was last thursday April 7th! So I have been busy with school again and I have been seeing the boy I like again...and by that I mean I see him from time to time while walking and sometimes say "Hey!" and he'll say "Heyy..." which is how he says it its the cutest thing in the world. So I have had lots of inspiration lately to write poems! Here is:

Without your Love

Falling through a haze. Watching pixie dust fade away,
Twinkling in the light of day. Haloed darkness, Dull dim light,
Melodies shiver through space and into the twighlight....

A masquerade, mimicking darkness, a parade of turquoise stars feint inside my mind.
Superfloues colors, swirling, twirling, whirling...

Heart is melting, Thought is taking form, Reality is no more.
Dripping through my hands, Radiant love and a dark past.

What thoughts are funneling through my mind, divine pleasures lost in time.
Vapored mist. Eyes are wide... Sifting through the Universe, searching....
Tunnels of stars, Galactical and Universal are our thoughts and hearts....

Mind-boggling visions of noise. Fizzle into blackness. A dream,
A reality, tracing a nonexistent love back to its sorce...

Ice is flowing,
Fire is stock still,
Wind is blowing, This is right....and this....

Soul is chilling,
Heart is cracking,
Mind is tearing,
Blood is clottig...I am dieing...without your love...
Without your love...my world is all wrong....
This is wrong....

Ok that is all for now! I hope you enjoy it! I like it! If anyone had any desire what so ever to read some of the more mature works I have managed to create just email me. My old email is gone and I share one with my sister....who is never even on here so I dont know why she even bothers having a screen name. So its.... mermaidofthestars13@netscape.com Okay well I hope you enjoy and thank you again for your reviews I am glad you enjoyed them!
-Aria

Lemonlimeoranges · 04-16-2005, 07:58 PM

*New Reader* This is really good! Keep up the great work. I love your new poem, Without your Love, its very rich in detail and very good!

Eerised · 04-17-2005, 08:54 AM

Thank you, Californiababi! I am glad that you like it. Ive been writing alot lately, of course, thats what tends to happen when you have a whole lot of strong emotions building up inside. Well I wish I could post one of my favorites but I cant its not appropriate as stated in my last post.....However I am going to post and if you want to hear, well, read the others that I cant post email me! So here is more!....

Stuck in a Childish Loop

Far, far off, in a land once so bright lived a girl who fought to stay sane in the night. She was only a child inside of her head....but she had grown up so fast...now she felt dead. No time to enjoy the simple things in life. Death had crept in and the little girl had run away in fright. Now here she was just a few years later, 16 and alone, yet still 6 years old in her mind....She laughed and played sitting alone in a corner, but far, far away, in the depths of her mind, she was running with friends, not haunted by death and pain, not stuck in the real world, just singing lullabyes.

Then one day darkness finally found a way in. The darkness spread throughout the land, taking with it all that she had..."While playing Ring Around the Rosie, with my imaginary friends we all fell down...but I was the only one dead..."

Darkness takes me back to the world. Age makes me no longer that little girl. A smile fake upon my face, I know now I am stuck in this place.
Stuck in a childish loop. Stuck in a world, alone in a group. Playing Ring Around the Rosie, with my inaginary friends. We all fall down but I'm the only one dead.

"Mommy! Mommy!",I call for her, but no one comes, I am stuck here for sure. Stuck in a cildish loop then pulled out no longer alone in a group but alone by myslef and I know I need help but I cant find it so I just get up and dance like I did when I was young....which was not so very long ago.....When I had naught a care in the world...still stuck in a childish loop...falling down a dark tunnel....still stuck in a childish loop...

Okay! Thats all Sorry about the punctutaion job. I am so tired. I cant think! Tata and Good night!
-Aria

The Boogeyman · 04-17-2005, 08:56 AM

Hey sorry I haven't been here to read, but the last one is really good. Keep up the good work.

eirun · 04-17-2005, 02:35 PM

iiiiiiiiiiiiinteresting!
had a hard time reading through the bright fonts
but i went through OK!

Eerised · 04-17-2005, 09:42 PM

Another new reader woohoo! sorry about the font....green is my favorite color and I dont want to use just black....I want more of a personality for my poems....the color I see them in sort of....If you highlight the pages then you can read it better.....Okay I am now going to post but first I would like to say:

A Very Happy Birthday to You, Ottery!!!!!!

Okay, now I can post.....

Lonely Gaze

I lay in the darkness of the night, looking, searching for the light. The stars don't shine and the moon has lost its glow, I think it might be time for me to go. My eyes are fixed unblinkingly, staring off into the distance trying to measure it all.
How far off you are from here....
I see your light flicker. A glimmer, a shimmer, my love, I hear a mummer, your voice so nice. I feel like ice sitting here alone in the cold night. I know where you are. I see you. I see her....Hands moving over her body. Breathing her in. She is your sweet surrender.

Falling from Grace, I still see your face....I know it, you may not show it but its plain as day. I feel it. There you are far away, laying with her in bliss. Carresing her, pressing up against her, and messing with my brain all the while....Now Im lieing here in pain. Time flies by, the wind blows. I feel the reality of it setting in. I can feel that familiar burning in my eyes, I can hear all the lies, I know I am going to cry and then my heart might just die...

You say you care but would you dare to feel me as you do her. I feel my heart begin to tear as I watch you give it all to her. I gaze at you. A lonely gaze, far off and in a daze. I feel trapped within a maze. Trying hard to find the light of day, unable to figure out the way that I must go...Something is burning in my heart, I am being ripped apart. The tears are come, the fears are near, the pain I feel will be the end of me my dear...

Laying in the darkness, gazing far off into the blackness of space, i know I have lost you, a broken heart is an aweful price to pay....

There you go. I know its not the greatest one, but I was trying to find one that wasnt inappropriat and that I hadnt postd yet. I have alot of poems but I was looking in my yellow journal and that one only has 15 poems in it. I think I'll post Broken Mirrors next and then Image of Perfection which is basically a continuation of Broken Mirrors....Okay then I best be off. Happy Birthday once again,, Ottery!Tata!

-Aria

Eerised · 04-21-2005, 09:12 PM

So I am back. I have been having a great week so far. Alot of mimum days due to testing so I havent been bringing my backpack to school just a stupid purse(<-----cant stand purses) so I havent been bringing my journal either which means no new poems at least not new like I just wrote them today new....Old as in I just wrote this last week old...which in truth isnt old at all....I exagerate! So yeah today was so good.....but Ive had 3 people tell me Im in love which is so NOT true.....I cant be in love....nope.....I just really like a boy. I mean for all the people who love love just because you smile constantly even at the tiniest thing that the person does, it doesnt mean you are IN LOVE! Or just because a billion people tell you you are glowing or sparkling (<---my favorite) It does NOT mean that you are IN LOVE!!!! Or when you smile just by saying their name and nothing can make your day bad just because of them....it just means that you like them strongly right? I am sooo not helping my case am I?.....Please tell me you agree somebody!!Okay I have ranted long enough...now onto poetry....

Broken Mirrors

I turn around only to look into my own eyes. Every where I turn all I see is the one person I despise....I've made so many friends, I am bound to this world, there are so many ties and yet I'm still just a lonely little girl. If I left, however, you shouldn't bother to weep. I am not worth it.My existance is pointless, a broken heart beating only for itself.....

I look back and there I am.Then I feel it pulsing. The rage inside...rising slowly to the top, just waiting to be set free. Then I feel it the glass penetrating my skin, the warm blood flows down my arms as I fall to pieces from within. My mind is not working and my soul is burning with the desire to end my own life. The broken mirrors before me, reflecting images of my pitiful life...

Looking down on myself, I know that is how it should be. All the mirrors falling down to pieces just as I fall to the ground. My hands are bloody and my eyes are streaming, my heart still is beating though I wish it werent so....

Crash me, thrash me, tear me to pieces, break me, rape me, just please take me....end my stupid, pointless existance. Take me away so people dont have to see me every **** day. Break the mirrors with images of me. Just let me rot and once I'm gone burn my body and find my soul. Trap it in a box and never let it go. No more me. No more do you see?...No? Good thats the point of a dead me...

Broken mirrors, bloody hands, burning eyes, a mind going mad, and a sad soul burning through the night, though I may try to burn out the light. A mind loosing its grip on reality, a heart burning up, a life thats a waste of everything....
All the (effing) mirrors. All they see is me. If I can hardly stand that, I'd hate to know what you must think.

Mirrors falling. Time is stopping. Bloody hands......but finally...no more me....

Wow I really hated me that day. I tried to edit the bad language as best I could. It might have broken the flow but Iz gotzta keep it clean. Now dont worry if anyone is. I am not suicidal or anything. This is how I vent. My dad and I had gotten into a fight that day and after words I was full of self-loathing....but dont worry. The bloody hands thing and all that is because I broke the mirrors with my fist and all that.....so anywho. Um....Also I would like everyone to do me a favor next time they post, if you post before nexy monday(april 25). Could you tell me which poem is your favorite, I have a project and I am trying to figure out what poem I should use. I might use Hush because its one of my favorite ones and the boy I like loves it...but thats not why Im choosing it if I do....well, I best be off. Gotz things ta do.Tata!

-Aria

PS
After this one...is Image of Perfection, which as I have already said is basically the second part to this poem. Its a 2parter!

Eerised · 04-30-2005, 12:40 AM

Oh, no replies.....oh well....I am sorry to say that this is not another poem posty thing...I am just here to tell you all that I am incredibly sick and haven't the energy to really post more than a note telling you lot about it. I hope that you all get around to reading the last poem I posted and once I am better I will post as soon as I can... Tata!

- Aria

P.S.
If the person you like is sick and you have the chance to kiss them...DONT! You'll get sick, too! And it sucks! Just a word of advice to you lot.

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