First one right now:


So What, Who Cares?

I'm peekin' through
Super model store glass
They try to read me with that ugly stuck-up look
Try hiddin' when
They walk past
But it all clings to me like a fish to a hook

If I wanted to
I would go out tonight
If I wanted to
Guitars would scream my name
Ya, if I wanted, oh baby I might
Just maybe, hunny, but it'd all be the same

So what, who cares?
I don't know why
All the girls try so hard just to please
If we're all the same
We're not gettin' anywhere

Looky, looky,
At the loser
With the steadfast grin
Whadda punk;
Whadda girl;
That stupid belt and safety pin
Guess Hurley shirts
And plastic bracelets
Never won the kinda friend
That Jane someone
Hung around with
Way back when (in high school)

No darling...
I won't live your puppet lives:
Of cherry shirts and bleached hair and high heel phases
Sorry dude...
I won't wear those punk girl ties
Still, I'm outside,
While you all run around this funny maze (and popular haze)

So what, who cares?
Ya, I dont know why,
Everyone tries so hard just to please
If we're all the same
We're not gettin' anywere

What a pill; babe, don't you see?
They don't care a bit, so why do we?
Stick around, sugar, and then:
High school dramas wither - and end
'Till maybe, hey, they'll all just go away
Away, away, a-way!


Kinda long, i don't know...

I like it! I liked your descriptions and how you showed your feelings at wanting to be yourself. Good job! :flowersmile:

Wow, I'm in a poetic mood...and reviewing everything; lol
This is really good! It's better than many songs out there, and although some lines may need some work the overall structure is well written. Keep writing!

Thank u sooo much!! Nice comments^.^

This one I wrote because I had an assignment in my world literature class. I hate the repeating part because no matter how many times I change it, I can never get it right :/

Rock Dream

It's been a long time since I felt normal
Been long since I knew what the hell is hopeful
No one can understand my pain
No one can see why I complain
I got a guitar on my wall and in my pocket
If they don't get it, well then screw it

In this rock dream
Your life can be
What you want, what you want
To make this
I won't believe, won't believe
Anything but me

So life hasn't been all that it seems
All I need to see is that wax-on gleam
Wanna play to a crazy punk rock crowd
My amps are 50 watts & my music's loud
No one said there were rules I had to follow
Just chocolate flavored obstacles that I can swallow
And when I'm playin at Warp Tour, You know I'm legit
'Cause I'm frickin jammin' with Good Charlotte!

In this rock dream
Your life can be
What you want, what you want
To make this
I won't believe, won't believe
Anything but me