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06-21-2007, 10:52 PM
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| | Grindylow
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|  Addie's Attempts Poetry - Sa13+
Hogwarts
Hogwarts - the name strikes emotions
But begin with the word
Informal, casual, almost...undignified,
Yet we all know
Hogwarts is that special place
Education only begins the learning
Life is what it really teaches
Life is what you really need to know
Alive in itself, a building of stone
Brought trouble with people
Students amock, hither tither
Teachers learn from pupils together
The world turns upside down
And Hogwarts stands strong
To some, it means little other
To others, it means everything
Yet we all know
Hogwarts is that special place
Knuts, Sickles, and Galleons...
Love is the currency of truth.
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07-31-2007, 02:04 AM
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| | Bowtruckle
Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: well...my nose was in the middle of DH, but I finished it, apparated here and idk where my nose is..
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Hogwarts RPG Name:
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Nice!
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08-05-2007, 04:52 PM
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| | Horklump
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Thats very good.
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08-05-2007, 10:57 PM
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| | Crup
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Oh, I really like that! The words flow really good together. Nice! | |
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09-02-2007, 09:21 PM
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| | Grindylow
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Thank you guys! Another coming shortly.
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10-17-2007, 05:24 AM
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| | Skrewt
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Hogwarts RPG Name:
"Princess" Iris Sunrider
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Oh I like it! I look forward to reading more!
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02-17-2008, 06:38 PM
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| | Thestral
Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: District 7
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Hogwarts RPG Name:
Marshall Davies
Third Year  x8
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This is very good!  I hope you post some more poetry really soon.
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06-16-2008, 06:07 PM
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|  SS 100 TriumphantBicorn
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Hogwarts RPG Name:
Noel Regan
First Year | Horses Forever! l l Writer for Life l Yearbook alumnus
Pretty good 
I found the last line quite effctive indeed.
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07-15-2008, 04:07 AM
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| | Grindylow
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Mundungus Fletcher
Flickering lights upon my doom,
Darkening outlines closer loom,
Defying the dead or celebrating life,
Either way, involved deep in strife,
Clapping buckles on knees too weak,
Harsh words, cutting like a beak,
The lamp's golden light dies out,
Merciless ramblings he begins to spout,
Ages imprisoned in this horrid cell,
Clutching secrets I refuse to tell,
Leaving life holds naught but relief,
Martyred, more than just a measly thief.
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