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09-13-2005, 11:45 PM
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| Augurey
Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: left SS for good
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| When You Say You Love Me - Sa9+
Six children stood outside as the wind blew through their hair. Three of the children were Potters and the other three Weasleys. Cassie, Lori, and James Potter stood on the porch with their arms crossed. Dana, Andrew, and Arabella Weasley stood just below the porch. Cassie turned to look at the front door.
"Why do you think mum and dad wanted us all outside?" Cassie asked. Her parents, Harry and Ginny Potter had sent them outside so they could set something up.
"I dunno! Our mum and dad told us to to the same," Dana replied. Her parents were Ron and Hermione Weasley.
"Well, while we're out here anyone up for some Quidditch?" James asked. Cassie flipped her long black hair.
"Sure," Cassie replied.
"I want to play," Lori said trying her black hair into a ponytail.
"Anyone else?" James asked. Dana and Arabella nodded and hopped onto the porch.
"Andrew? Aren't you going to play?" Cassie asked. Andrew shook his head.
"No! I want to wait for our parents to let us back inside," Andrew replied. Cassie, Lori, Dana, Arabella, and James trotted off to the broom shed. There they took out their brooms. Lori gathered some apples to use as Quaffles. Together they all went to the small Quidditch pitch Harry and Ron had built. It was in Harry's yard, but he shared with his brother-in-law because he lived right next door with Hermione. Once the reached the field the kicked into the air not flying too high so they weren't seen by Muggles in the town below. Cassie grabbed an apple and threw it at the hoop the had made out of a long stick and a hula hoop Muggles used. Dana quickly stopped Cassie apple from passing through the hoop. While Dana was busy Lori took and apple and threw at the hoop. It soared through and Dana dropped a few few feet in the air as if in shock.
"Good one Lori!" Cassie yelled to her sister. James flew around above them looking for a small ball painted gold that Ginny had hidden in the bushes to play the part of the Snitch. Andrew soon came running across the field.
"We're allowed to go back inside now!" Andrew called. Cassie, Lori, James, Dana, and Arabella landed and dismounted their brooms. Then they ran toward the house to go inside.
Ok that's all for now! I hope u enjoy this story!!!! My name is Lily btw. Sorry it's short! I'll b waiting for replies!!!
Lily
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09-15-2005, 01:59 AM
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| Mr. Darcy *swoon* Gnome
Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Practicing for solo audition thingies for band...ack!
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Nice start, Lily, and I would like to hear more! Nice first post!
Laura
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09-15-2005, 02:01 AM
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| Dugbog
Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: my house
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hmmmm...i dunno wat to say on this one. i love when ppl write...i love to write myself and writing is truly one of the best things u can do!!! i therefore encourage u to keep writing! no bad comments today...keep with it !!!!
cheers!
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09-15-2005, 07:20 PM
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| Gnome
Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Stalking cuties in M.V.
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i really like it its a great start! PAMS! PAMS! PAMS!
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09-15-2005, 11:18 PM
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| Dog Star Owner Billywig
Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: kissing posters of E
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| LILYKINS! i'm not your first reader! *bursts into tears* yeah. but i'm your fourth reader! *all hopeful* anyway. Harry and Ginny's kids! yayyyy! one's named James! yayyyy! so i'll nickname him Jamesies Junior, cuz James is Jamesies. wait. i mean the Marauder James is Jamesies. yeah. PAMS!
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09-16-2005, 12:57 AM
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| Augurey
Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: left SS for good
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lol Amie I'm glad u checked this out!!!!!! here's a tiny bit more!!!
Everyone trotted back inside after James. Harry, Ginny, Ron, and Hermione stood smiling.
"Everyone we have a suprise!" Harry said smiling at his children, neices, nephews and then at his wife.
"Yes! I have opened a Pygmy Puff shop and you all get a Pygmy Puff! Color of your choice," Ginny said.
"Ooooo mum can I have a pink one?" Cassie asked.
"Sure sweetums. Let's go to Diagon Alley to my shop," Ginny replied.
"Uncle Ron? Aunt Hermione? Are you coming?" Lori asked.
"Yes," Hermione replied.
"Oh, and Dana we have a little suprise for you," Ron said leading his daughter into the backroom followed by his wife. Hermione closed the door and beamed at her daughter.
"What did I do?" Dana asked with big eyes.
"Nothing dear! Nothing at all. We have to give you something," Hermione replied. Ron reached inside his robes and pulled out a yellowish piece of parchment. He handed it to Dana. She took it and carefully ripped it open. It said,
Miss D. Weasley,
We are pleaseed to inform you that you have been accepted at Hogwarts School of Withcraft and Wizardry. Term starts Sptember 1. Your supply list has been attached with you ticket for the Hogwarts Express. We hope to see you there.
Sincerly,
Minerva McGonagall
Hogwarts Headmistress
Dana finished reading and looked up. Her parents were smiling. Her mum looked as if she was going to cry with excitment.
"So are we going to get my stuff at Diagon Alley when we go to get a pygmy puff from Aunt Ginny's shop?" Dana asked.
"If you would like to," Ron replied.
"I want to," Dana said.
"Then we will," Hermione said. The three of them exited the room and headed off with the others for Diagon Alley.
that's all for now!!! Hope u like it!!!
Lily
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09-16-2005, 01:00 AM
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| Gnome
Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Stalking cuties in M.V.
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i'm loving it! haha pygmy puffs lol anyways, its really good! can't wait for more! PAMS! PAMS! PAMS!
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09-16-2005, 02:01 AM
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| Dog Star Owner Billywig
Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: kissing posters of E
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| Donakins is going to Hoggy Warty Hogwarts!!! the joy! but what about the Potters? omg it would be so scary if they didn't get the letter. PAMS!
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09-16-2005, 11:15 PM
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| Augurey
Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: left SS for good
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o i totally forgot!!!! Dana is 11 Cassie is 10 Andrew is 9 Arabella is 8 Lori is 9 and James is 8!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm SOOOOOOOO sorry!!!! My bad!!! *smacks her forehead* OMG!!! I am SOOOOO stupid!!!! BTW does any1 like my siggie?????? I'll post soon.
Lily
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09-16-2005, 11:41 PM
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| Dog Star Owner Billywig
Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: kissing posters of E
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| Lilykins, i can't believe you forgot! well i CAN believe it but shut up. awwwwwww Jamesies Junior is only 8!!! but that means he won't be going to Hogwarts! *so sad* lmao yes, i'm sure you have power. (i'm talking about your siggy) it's very amusing. lol. |
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09-17-2005, 02:08 AM
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| Mr. Darcy *swoon* Gnome
Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Practicing for solo audition thingies for band...ack!
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Cute siggy and pretty nice post, Lily. Pygmy puffs...can u say a-d-o-r-a-b-l-e! Anyway, can't wait for more....nice job!
Laura
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09-17-2005, 02:10 AM
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| Billywig
Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Shreveport
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"will u please keep on, keep on, keep on, keep on, posting all through the night?"
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09-17-2005, 07:10 PM
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| Augurey
Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: left SS for good
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thanx 4 the coments of my siggie!!! I love it!!! *huggles her siggie* here's a tiny bit more.
The Potters and Weasley's shot out of the fireplace in Potter's Pygmy Puffs. Ginny took them to where they were all stored. Cassie made a beeline towards the pink ones. Lori and Arabella were gazing foundly and the purple ones with a blue stripe on them. Dana was petting some of the turquoise ones as the green ones gathered around her finger wanting to be petted too. James and Andrew were looking at the blue ones because in their opinion it was the only "boy" colored pygmy puffs. Cassie picked up a pink pygmy puff and carried it to her mum. Arabella chose a purple and blue one. So did Lori. James and Andrew both chose blue ones and Dana chose a green pygmy puff. Ginny put all the pygmy puffs into tiny cages and handed them to the right owner.
"Mum, what do you name a oink pygmy puff?" Cassie asked.
"Bubble Gum or Cotton Candy," Ginny replied.
"I think I'll call him Bubble Gum," Cassie said sticking her finger into the cage.
"Mum, what did you name your pygmy puff you had when you were 15?" Lori asked.
"Arthur," Ginny replied.
"Isn't that grandpa's name?" James asked.
"Yeah, it is," Ginny replied. Harry smiled at his wife and put his arm around their waist as they passed Florish and Blotts.
"Hey Hermione and I are going to take Dana to Florish and Blotts for her school stuff," Ron said as he stopped walking.
sorry wierd stopping point but my dad needs the comp! Enjoy!!!
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09-17-2005, 07:25 PM
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| Mr. Darcy *swoon* Gnome
Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Practicing for solo audition thingies for band...ack!
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mmm-hmm. Well, it is an odd place to stop, but I want to see where this goes, keep up the good work!
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09-17-2005, 08:04 PM
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| Dog Star Owner Billywig
Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: kissing posters of E
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| they all got Pygmy Puffs! yay! but... er... the one Ginny had was named Arnold. lol. but that's okay. you could change it cuz you're the author. but anyway. aww, Jamesies Junior notices it was his grandpa's name so fast. he's such a little smartiepants. i love him. PAMS!
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09-18-2005, 08:18 PM
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| Augurey
Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: left SS for good
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*smakes head* sorry i was speed-reading the part w/ the Pygmy Puffs in HBP! Oops!!! ok here's a tiny bit!Let's just say Ginny forgot his real name!!!
Hermione, Ron, and Dana ran into Flourish and Blotts. Dana pulled her list out of her pocket and started to collect the books she needed. She was about to pick up Hogwarts, A History when her father let out a loud gasp. Dana looked up to see Ron talking to a lady and a girl Dana's age.
"So you married that Malfoy scum did you?" Ron snapped.
"Yes I did," the lady replied. Dana lookede at the girl who was staring at her mother. She had sleek long blond hair and gray eyes. Dana watched her mother come up to Ron and Dana.
"Well well! Pansy and is this your daughter?" Hermione asked.
"Yes and why would you care you little Mudblood?" the lady called Pansy replied.
"Because I am the Transfiguration professor at Hogwarts and it is best if I learn my students' names quickly," Hermione replied.
"I never told you her name," Pansy snapped.
"Right! I never said you did," Hermione said back in her i-know-everything voice.
"My name is Maggie," Pansy's daughter said.
"Very nice well, we'll be going now," Ron said taking Hermione's arm and taking Dana's hand.
"You should leave! I'm sure the book store owner doesn't want scum like you in his store," Pansy said and disappered into the bookshelves with Maggie. Hermione took Dana's books and paid for them. The three left the bookshop and returned to the others.
that's all! I would love to post more, but I have ice skating in half an hour!! Luv ya!!
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09-18-2005, 08:29 PM
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| *Knee Deep in FFs* Lobalug
Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Anywhere that Draco is at is where you will find me
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Wow I like it so far hurry up with more.
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09-18-2005, 08:33 PM
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| Dog Star Owner Billywig
Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: kissing posters of E
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| OMG Lilykins! i'm going ice skating in half an hour too! with my friends! WOW! we must have the same minds. lol. back to the story. my, my, they met Pansy and her daughter, Maggiekins. but where's Draco? PAMS!
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09-25-2005, 12:49 AM
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| Augurey
Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: left SS for good
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ok I'm eating ice cream so let me finish then
i'll post!!!!! *eats quickly* ok I'm done!!!! BRAIN FREEZE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ok I'll live here's more.
"What took you so long?" Ginny asked when Ron, Hermione,and Dana returned.
"We ran into Pansy Malfoy and her little brat," Ron said.
"Oh, okay. Well, Ginny and I are taking everyone who wants to go for ice cream are you coming?" Harry asked.
"No, Dana needs a wand so we're going to the new wand shop that just opened," Hermione replied.
"Okay then," Harry said. He and Ginny disappeared into the crowd with Cassie, Lori, James, Arabella, and Andrew. Ron and Hermione took off with Dana to the wand shop.
That's all 4 now! Sorry it's short!!!
Lily
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09-25-2005, 01:46 AM
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| Dog Star Owner Billywig
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| lmao you eat icecream, and they eat ice cream! hehe. brainfreezes are cool. PAMS!
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09-25-2005, 10:21 PM
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| Bundimun
Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Why would I tell you?Is it of any importance to you?Well even if it is, I'm not telling you!
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omg this is such an awsome story.u write very well!!!
keep it up lily!
your fan,
Fifi
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09-27-2005, 01:07 AM
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| Augurey
Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: left SS for good
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Fifi ur not my fan!!! or r u??? OMG Amie i totally didn't notice that i put the ice cream into my story!!!! I am SOOOOOOOOO thick!!!!!!!!!!! *smacks forehead* DUH!! O well, here's a tiny bit more.
Dana walked into the wand shop with her parents to a completly empty store. After a minute a man walked out from behind shevles of wands. He looked up and saw Dana.
"Hogwarts?" he asked.
"Yeah," Dana replied running her fingers through her red hair. The man walked between the shelves and began pulling a few wands out. He opened a box and pulled out a wand.
"10 inches, maple, with unicorn tail hair," the man said handing Dana the wand.
ok that's all for now!
Lily
PS Right now I'm eating popcorn and drinking water!!!!!!!
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09-27-2005, 01:32 AM
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| Dog Star Owner Billywig
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| mmmm, popcorn's good. lmao you really are... how do i say this without offending you... lol i'm just joking. I do that sometimes too. i think. why do i get the feeling it's not gonna be the right wand? PAMS Lilykins!!
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10-02-2005, 01:47 AM
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| Augurey
Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: left SS for good
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Dana took the wand and glanced side-ways at it.
"What do I do with it?" Dana asked.
"Give it a small flick," the store keeper replied. Dana gave the wand a little flick and the hat the store keeper had on burst into flame. He quickly took it off and gave it a tap with his own wand and the flames went out.
"I am so sorry!" Dana cried her cheeks matching her fire red hair.
"It's a right dear. Worse...er, worse things have happened," the store keeper replied and took back the wand Dana had. He seached through the shelves and pulled out another wand.
"This one just might work," he said handing Dana the second wand.
that's all 4 now! I'll post a longer update soon.
Lily
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10-03-2005, 03:24 AM
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| Dog Star Owner Billywig
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| HA! i knew it wouldn't be the right wand. wonder how many more wands. PAMS!
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