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Believe 06-29-2006 12:31 AM

What the Girls Think - Sa13+
 
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Hello Everybody. My name is Cai and this is my first FF. This FF is about what Hermione and Ginny are thinking. Mostly about Harry and Ron. Ginny will be in blue and Hermione in red. It takes place after Dumbledore died where Ginny is in heartbreak and Hermione is in denial. I hope you like it!

<3 Cai

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Ginny


I was laying down on my bed, staring up at the ceiling. Hermione was downstairs, most likely bickering with Ron. Harry is coming in today. I want to see him so bad. I know we can't be together, but I still love him. I wonder if he loves me. He said he didn't want me to get hurt, but you know boys. They say one thing, but mean another.

I miss him so much. I feel so cold without him comforting me. I feel so lost without him helping me. I feel like the target without him protecting me. I know he wants me to be safe, but how can I? I feel so...... frail. I hear something downstairs. I think it might be Harry.

I run downstairs, but before I reach the bottom, I slow down my pace. I don't want to look too eager you know? There he was. The love of my life. With his hair messier than ever and his eyes greener than emeralds. He looked at me and shivers went up my spine, like they used to.

"Hey Ginny," he said quietly. He smiled slightly and then looked down at his shoes.

"How are you, Harry?" How are you? I haven't seen him in over two months and all I can say is how are you? Ugh!

"I'm good. And you?" he asked quietly again.

"Fine," is all I managed to say. I feel like I'm eleven again. I can't even form a sentence around him.



Hermione


Do you know how awkward it is to stay in the same house as Ronald Weasley? Well, I'm telling you it's very awkward. See at first, you enjoy yourself, but then he insults you, like he makes fun of S.P.E.W. and you wish you could be anywhere else but here.

And Ginny. She's not really icing on the cake right now. Either she talks about Harry non-stop or talks about me liking Ron. Can you believe it? She thinks I like Ron. The nerve of her! Don't get me wrong, Ginny is my best girl friend, but I have to draw the line somewhere. The worst part is that Harry actually agrees with her.

They think I'm in denial. I am not! They also thought I was jealous when Ron was dating Lavendar. I was not! Why should I care if Ron wants to snog Lavendar? He can snog anyone he wants. I could care less. I do not like Ronald Weasley! Although, he is very cute when he gets embarrassed. His ears get all read and his face- Wait! I do not like Ronald Weasley!

Believe 06-29-2006 01:08 AM

Cai!!!! You made a FF!!!!! I love it!!!! You never told me you were making one!!!! I'm the first to post too!!!! I love how Hermione is in denial!!! Poor Ginny... although I loved it when she thought she was eleven again!!!! PAMS!!!!

Believe 06-29-2006 01:51 AM

Awww Laura, you're so sweet! I'm glad you like it......I wanted to surprise you! ha ha! I'll post soon or something!

<3 Cai

Dan crazy 06-29-2006 02:22 AM

This is good!!!!!!! Poor Ginny. I wish Harry would suck it up and say he loves her, cuz every1 knos he does. Hermione like Ron!!! Even tho she won't admit it!!! She's so stubborn!!! PAMS!!!!!!!!!
<3 Lili

Believe 06-29-2006 03:40 AM

Hello Lili! Welcome to my fic! I'm glad you like it! I know Harry should just suck it up, but he doesn't want Ginny to get hurt.......ha ha! Hermione is stubborn! ha ha!

But I have bad news for any new readers out there and Lili......I'm going to be gone for a week starting on Saturday. I'm going to the beach for the fourth of July with Laura and some other friends! woo hoo! I'm sorry though! I'll leave a long post for everyboy though. Sorry again!

<3 Cai

jk fan 06-29-2006 01:17 PM

:cry: noooooooooo not you two. do you all live close to each other or something???? that's not fair. i've always wanted to meet my SS freinds. i've made that my life-long goal.


oh and i lover your story. i guess i have to be patient.

okay i'm done being patient. pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease come back :faint: wait did you even go yet?

Believe 06-29-2006 02:45 PM

I'm sorry Hibbah! I leave on Saturday so I'll leave you a good post to hold you down......thanks for reading!

<3 Cai

Marauder#5 06-29-2006 02:57 PM

rock on, man! this is an awesome fanfic! and funny. 2oo!

it's a good thing u made it hp/g, b-cause i'm a HUGE shipper for them! i luv it!

i feel bad for ginny, though. and hermione sooooooooooo likes ron(no duh)!!!

great job! keep 'em coming, dude!

lol

-Puja, aka M#5

Believe 06-29-2006 03:00 PM

Thanks Puja! I'm glad you like it! I'm a h/g + hr/r shipper all the way! I'll post later today!

<3 Cai

Believe 06-29-2006 03:20 PM

Wow Cai... you have three new readers! That's great... so now you can't leave us all hanging... you have to post!

jk fan 06-29-2006 03:50 PM

so do you Laura *shakes finger at you*

Quote:

I'm sorry Hibbah! I leave on Saturday so I'll leave you a good post to hold you down......thanks for reading!

<3 Cai
it better be long :(

whende 06-29-2006 04:36 PM

Pams!!!! It's sooooooooooo good so far. I like Hermione's part. Hey, this is special. This is the first ff I've replied to. Lucky you. Oh, and Pams... again.

Oya 06-29-2006 04:37 PM

aeesome!!! And funny at the same time
i like it a lot!!!!!!

tatewin 06-29-2006 04:43 PM

Great start! I am looking forward to reading more! :hermy:

Parvati_Patil55 06-29-2006 04:43 PM

I like your post it's cool and that is probably exactly how Ginny and Hermione would feel. Have fun on you vaction and get back soon so you can post soon.
You have a new reader ME!!!!!!!

Believe 06-29-2006 05:06 PM

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Originally Posted by Laura
Wow Cai... you have three new readers! That's great... so now you can't leave us all hanging... you have to post!

I'll post soon......I promise!

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Originally Posted by Hibbah
it better be long

I'll try to make it long...

Quote:

Originally Posted by whende
Pams!!!! It's sooooooooooo good so far. I like Hermione's part. Hey, this is special. This is the first ff I've replied to. Lucky you. Oh, and Pams... again.

Aww thank you! I feel so special! This is your first reply in a FF.....wow! :loved:

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Originally Posted by oja
aeesome!!! And funny at the same time
i like it a lot!!!!!!

Thank you! I'm glad you like it!

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Originally Posted by tatewin
Great start! I am looking forward to reading more!

Thank you! I'll post soon!

Quote:

Originally Posted by Parvati_Patil55
I like your post it's cool and that is probably exactly how Ginny and Hermione would feel. Have fun on you vaction and get back soon so you can post soon.
You have a new reader ME!!!!!!!

Thank you! I'll try to get back as soon as I can....I love new readers!

So I'll post later today.....I'm not exactly sure when but I will.

<3 Cai

Believe 06-29-2006 05:23 PM

Alright well I decided that I'm officially bored, so I'm going to post right now!

<3 Cai

Believe 06-29-2006 06:21 PM

Chapter
 
Hey everybody! I thought I'd give you a treat and post now! Now bare with me, I have a slight (very slight) bit of writer's block on Ginny's part but I have a great part for Hermione. Hope you like it!

<3 Cai

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Ginny


It's early August now and we just finished celebrating Harry's brithday. I didn't give him much, just a scrapbook with some pictures of Hermione, Ron, him and, of course, me. He said he really liked it. I wish he would have shown a bit more enthusiasm. Hermione gave him a new broom servicing kit, the updated and advanced version, and Ron gave him a book on the Chudley Cannons......again! Over all, it was a nice party.

Tonight was the worst though. Ron played a trick on Hermione. He made her hair look like a big fuzzball. You know, bushier than usually. She was mad! Big time! My brother was dead and buried. But all Hermione did was run into my room, crying. I felt bad for her, although it was funny. Harry insisted that Ron should go talk to her. So he sulkily walked upstairs towards my room.

That left me and Harry alone. I was nervous. I didn't want to say something stupid. So I decided not to say anything at all. But then the most uncomfortable, awkward silence came. I took out a book, placed it on my lap and looked down at it. Though, I wasn't reading it. I couldn't help but feel like a pair of green eyes were watching me. I looked up hesitantly and saw Harry looking at me while he was laying down on the couch. He didn't look away. My eyes poured into his and he smiled slightly. I forced myself out of the trance.

"What?" Oh no! I snapped at him. I didn't mean to. It just sort of spilled out.

Harry looked expressionless, keeping his gaze on me, and said, "Nothing."

Nothing? NOTHING?!?! You stare at me through an uncomfortable silence for nothing? Ugh!

"Then why are you staring at me?" I snapped at him again. What is wrong with me? Stop snapping at him!

Harry stared at me for a few seconds with a sad expression. I made him sad. Noooooooo! He looked into the fire, sat up on the couch and said, "Ginny, I'm sorry."

I could tell it was hard for him to say this. I wanted to sit next to him and tell him it was okay. But I couldn't. I had so many mixed feelings inside my head right now. I was happy that he was sorry. I was mad that he broke up with me in the first place. I was sad about how I acted towards him. Ahhhh! I can't take it anymore.

I put my book down and headed towards my room. I couldn't stand to be there anymore. I missed Harry so much, and being in the same room as him makes me miss him even more. As I enter my room, I see Ron sitting next to Hermione. His hand was rubbing her back and he was inches from her lips. They immediately pull away from each other when they heard me come in. Darn. Bad timing!



Hermione


Everything was fine that day until I looked in the mirror that evening. My hair was out of control. I knew what this meant.

"RONALD WEASLEY!" He is going to get it this time. I'll make sure of it.

The arrogant git walked into the living room with a huge smile on his face. Can you believe it? He actually thought this was funny!

"Yes Hermione?" he said, trying really hard not to laugh I could tell.

"Do you think this is funny?!?!" I yelled pointing to my hair. And do you know what he did? He burst out laughing! I couldn't believe it! I put the countercurse on my hair and it instantly went back to its normal bushiness. Ron wouldn't stop laughing.

"I can't believe you!" I shouted, feeling tears in my eyes. I ran upstairs towards Ginny's bedroom, hoping no one would follow me. I locked the door and landed on my bed. I buried my face in my pillow and cried. I don't know why I was crying. I was mad more than upset. I guess it was out of humiliation. Even though it was only Ron, Ginny, and Harry, I was still embarrassed.

I heard someone trying to open the door. "Go away!" I yelled between sobs to whoever it was.

"Oh, come on, Hermione. It was just a joke." It was Ron. Oh what does that prat want now.

"I said go away!" I yelled again. That obviously didn't work because I heard him mutter 'Alohomora' and he walked right in. He sat himself on the floor next to me. I moved my head to the other side, not wanting to look at him.

"Hermione, I'm sorry." Yeah, right! I knew he wasn't sorry. Harry or Ginny probably made him say that. If he was so sorry, why did he do it?

I didn't answer him. "I didn't mean to hurt you so much. It was seriously just a joke."

"Why must you always play jokes on me?" I asked before I really thought about it. I didn't really want him to answer me. But he did anyway.

"I don't know. I guess because it's funny," he said. And then he started laughing again! Now I was mad. I lifted my head to face him and he instantly stopped laughing. I gave him my ever famous death glare. Though his reaction was not what I thought it'd be. He just stared back looking into my eyes. He had a look of longing in them. I don't know why though.

We sat there, staring at each other for a few minutes. Then he placed his hand on my back. Shivers ran up my spine. Again, I don't know why. He started rubbing my back gently. The odd thing was that I didn't stop him. Actually, I enjoyed it. His strong hand moving up and down my small back. It was.......sweet. The silence was broken when Ron said, "Hermione, I really am sorry."

I didn't really know what to say. I smiled a weak smile. I guess I actually believed him that time. What was happening to me? Was I going crazy? The next thing I knew, his face was inching towards mine. It was slowly getting closer. I knew he was about to kiss me. Oh my goodness, Ron is going to kiss me! Pull away! Slap him! Do something! And I did do something. I couldn't believe what I was doing, but I was actually moving towards him. We were an inch apart from kissing each other when Ginny came in the room.

Ginny has the worst timing in the world!

Luna Potter 06-29-2006 06:29 PM

I like it alot. Your doing what JKR is only doing with Harry going inside heis head! :albus:

carmu 06-29-2006 06:30 PM

hey new reader!
this is really good!
ginny really does have stinky timing!
PAMS!

Believe 06-29-2006 06:35 PM

Wow Cai! You have 10 readers! I loved that post! It was perfect!!! Ginny and Harry was awesome... poor Harry!!!! poor Ginny!!!! But then Ginny and walking in on Hermione and Ron.... AMAZING!!!!! PAMS!!!!

Marauder#5 06-29-2006 08:07 PM

WOWEE! this wus really good! poor ginny, i no how much she wants 2 b w/ harry...........................it's sad..............

i personally think that hermione wus over reacting a bit 2oo much! i mean, at least she got her hair back 2gether!

great job, again!, hey, i'm not a reader anymore, but, still, keep me posted, or else(kidding!)

lol

-Pooj, aka M#5

Marauder#5 06-29-2006 08:07 PM

WOWEE! this wus really good! poor ginny, i no how much she wants 2 b w/ harry...........................it's sad..............

i personally think that hermione wus over reacting a bit 2oo much! i mean, at least she got her hair back 2gether!

great job, again!, hey, i'm not a reader anymore, but, still, keep me posted, or else(kidding!)

lol

-Pooj, aka M#5

Marauder#5 06-29-2006 08:25 PM

okie this wus an accident........................i posted the same post 2ce..........

Dan crazy 06-29-2006 11:50 PM

WHAT?????????????? Ginny u....grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr!!!!!!!!!!! Ginny has such bad timing!!!! Ron was gonna kiss her!!!!!!!!!! AHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I still feel sry 4 Ginny, but she ruined the moment!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *gasp* Ginny should've knocked or sumthing, or stayed w/ Harry, or like gone outside or SUMTHING!!!!!!!!! Poor Harry. Ginny made him sad. :( plz PAMS!!!!!!!!!! Well, when u get back.

~Lili~


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