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What Became of Sirius Black

Only one pair was still battling.
Sirius saw Harry watching as he fought Bellatrix Lestrange with confidence and ease.
His eyes widened, and his senses became precise, tuned in to her attacks.
He ducked as a ball of red light fired from her wand at him.
It narrowly missed him, but he intended to make his avoidance look natural by laughing at her.
To impress Harry, he decided to mock her.
“Come on! You can do better than that!” He yelled at her, his voice echoing so that everybody could hear him.
Then he saw it; the blinding light, heading towards his chest.
There was no way of avoiding this one.
He was still half heartedly laughing, but the fear in his mind was becoming reality.
He had lost.
He faced Harry and began to fall backwards, seeing his Godson running down the steps, wand drawn, and Dumbledore too, turning to see with his own eyes, the evidence that Sirius had been beaten.
Upon the dais, only one thing mattered to Sirius, and that was following the voices.
They were calling to him now, behind him, through the veil, and although he was longing to continue on in this world, he was unsure of why it had chosen to banish him.
He arched his body to fall through it, and unconsciously landed in the darkness of another place.

Silence crept around the cavern, the whispers had faded, and a life age seemed to pass as he lay there motionless.
Stirring only at the sounds of the footsteps around the room; none of them had found him yet.
As he lay there, he thought about many things.
Harry, and what he would be thinking right now, wondering if he had done anything rash now he thought that his godfather was dead.
James, and how he must have felt a similar feeling one time, but how lucky he hadn’t been, for Sirius had not died, and James had.
Bellatrix Lestrange, and had she been killed by Dumbledore?
Or Harry! Maybe he had killed her! Or maybe she had killed him..

As he laid there, these thoughts spiralling around his mind, out of control, he realised that too much time was wasted already, and that he needed to move.
Sirius tried to blink, but even found that increasingly difficult, the heat upon his chest telling him that he was bleeding.
He moved his eyes down to look at his body, wondering if there was any chance he could stand again.
He managed to close his eyes, and carefully tried to twitch his left leg.
It didn’t respond at first, but then gradually, feeling began to return to his limb.
He gritted his teeth together, and with all his might, forced his leg to move.
It moved, only an inch at first, but an inch in the right direction.

He bent his knee and then copied the action with the other, leaning his neck forward to get a better view of his surroundings.

He was beyond the veil, there was no clear picture of the dais from where he lay, only a dark behind from which the back of the veil hung.
Sirius looked down at his chest.
The once familiar tattoo he had bore had been destroyed by a large circular scar.
The scar was raw red, and burnt as he touched it with his fingers.
He dragged his body over to the stone built archway, and digging his fingertips into the wall he dragged himself to his knees.

“Arghh!” He yelled, trying to muffle his scream by biting into the collar of his coat.
He didn’t want to attract any notice to himself, the people in the room could be anyone, and as far as anyone knew, he was still a wanted criminal.

He looked on the floor for his wand; it appeared to be a yard or so through the veil.
He continued to drag himself to his feet, every part of his torso aching with frustration at his inability to move.

His eyes rolled into his eyelids as he pulled himself the last few inches to his feet, and he leaned his back against the wall, panting for breath.

He staggered around the side of the archway, not walking through the veil this time, and looking on the floor he saw his wand.
He dropped to his knees before it and grasped the handle of it in his palm, relieved that it, like him, hadn’t been found.

He pointed the wand at himself and closed his eyes as he transfigured into his bestial form.

Now with the support of four legs instead of two, he began to move out of the cavern, retracing his steps in, noticing that there was nobody in the place apart from himself.
The voices through the veil had deceived him again, tricking him.
They firstly denied him his death, and then forced him to believe that he was in danger of being found.
It didn’t take him long to make his way back out into the main entrance of the ministry of magic, however, he couldn’t understand why he hadn’t seen a single soul besides himself.
He ran into the telephone box, opposing the now broken statues, frowning at them as he turned himself back to human form.

His hands grasped the handle of the phone box as he wrenched it open and practically fell inside it, letting the door swing shut behind him.
There was no need for a password to get out, thankfully, and he waited patiently as the elevator took him back up to ground level.

As he emerged into London, he glanced through the glass door of the phone box before pushing open the door and falling out onto the concrete before him.

He dragged himself to his knees and spotted a muggle newspaper besides him in a rubbish bin.
It was the headline on the front page that grasped his attention.

He picked it up between clenched fists and read.

“Mysterious Murders by Hooded Murderer”

He guessed that it could most probably be Voldemort, but this was no new thing to his knowledge.
However, this did mean that he was killing muggles again, for the sake of it.
Sirius threw the newspaper back inside the trash can and transfigured himself into animal form again for increased stability.

He began to walk into the square until he reached the Leaky Cauldron.
This was his way back to Harry.

Sneakily he hid around the corner from the door, awaiting a wizard to open the door before he carefully followed inside, and made his way inconspicuously through the crowd to the back of the inn.
He still knew the pass to Diagon Alley, and after riskily turning back to his human form he tapped the stones that allowed him his access.

The walls opened up and allowed him inside, but not before he returned to his animagus shape.

People didn’t even notice the black dog creep through the streets, making his way around the various wizards, almost tripping a few up, but none of them seemed to flinch.

It was only when he arrived at a shop that was free of customers that he entered.

It was named LLS, and there was nobody serving either.
For this reason, Sirius allowed himself to take back human form, as he staggered over to the fireplace at the back of the shop.
He looked around for the small pots that were usually kept besides the fires.
He saw it, a little grey one, and inside it was what appeared to be dust.
It was floo powder.

Sirius stepped into the fireplace and threw the floo powder down, shouting out loud the address next door to his old house.

It was foolish of him to use a monitored floo network, but he was desperate, and couldn’t think of any other way to get to Harry quickly.

He finally arrived in a heap at the base of a fireplace in number 11 Grimmauld Place.
He knew that this house was empty now; it had been for several months.

As quickly as he could he made his way to the front door and clambered out onto the street.

Number 12 was just a few footsteps away.

He began to move towards it, but the floor seemed to be unstable once more.
He looked down at the scar on his chest and cringed as it stung deeply.

He fell to his knees again and heard a familiar sound behind him.
A sharp, cold feeling began to surround him.
And all the happiness of being alive started once again to vanish.
He knew what it was, but he was confused as to how it had found him.
A dementor.
Sirius turned his head around, expecting to see a tall cloaked shape floating towards him.

But he was surprised to see that it was no dementor.

It was Harry.

And Lupin, Moody and Tonks.

They were heading towards number 12 too. For how long, he did not know, but a smile began to force upon his face, although he was searing with pain.

“Harry!” He croaked, falling lower onto his stomach, reaching his head up to look at them all.
Harry ignored him and continued walking.
“Harry! It’s me!” He said.
But none of them responded.
Sirius yelled and grasped his chest in pain as they walked past him.
Touching at his scar he noticed Harry stop.
Harry blinked and looked behind him, Moody stopping and let his eye check behind him too.
“What is it Harry?” Remus frowned, looking at him earnestly.
“My scar...” He gasped.
“Quick, get him inside-” Moody ushered them impatiently.
“-we can talk once we are in, it’s too dangerous to discuss anything in open.” He growled.
Harry let Lupin guide him inside as Tonks opened the door.

Sirius gave a longing look for one of them to speak to him.
“Remus!!” He shouted at the top of his lungs, the pain seeming to lessen now that Harry was moving away.
“Alastor! Tonks!” He gasped for breath, trying to drag himself to his feet desperately.
He clambered to his feet and made a run for the door.

Harry was only several steps away from him, yet Sirius continued to shout and call his name.
“Harry! I’m not dead!” He ran through the body of Alastor Moody, and Tonks, straight into his house where his mother stood before him.
“Harry!” He gasped, realising what had just happened.
He reached out to Harry, his hand not even touching any solid form of him.
His fingers went through Harry, and didn’t even make him flinch.
Mrs Black looked at Sirius.
He stopped and his eyes widened as his fate dawned on him.
This was the afterlife as he had chosen.
He had wanted to continue on in this world.

A tear appeared from his eye as he realised all of this.
And nobody could see him cry.
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I'm going to do more, but not a continuation.

I'm going to do something clever with different perspectives, this is like the small brick of the building.

You'll see!

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It is to be based around Sirius, but it will have perspectives of him from other characters too, and all the stories will entwine to create one big loop.
But I'm saying no more.
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Yes this is my first update And it is from the viewpoint of Remus Lupin. Please note that the events in my fanfiction does not entirely fit in with the real story of the Order of the Pheonix. It is a fanfiction, and is therefore my own version of events. Thankyou for reading and please enjoy

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“Sirius must be just behind the curtain, he, Harry would pull him back out…
But as he reached the ground and sprinted towards the dais, Lupin grabbed Harry around the chest, holding him back.
‘There’s nothing you can do Harry’
‘Get him, save him; he’s only just gone through!’
‘It’s too late Harry.’
‘We can still reach him.’ Harry struggled hard and viciously, but Lupin wouldn’t let go…
‘There’s nothing you can do, Harry … nothing … he’s gone.’”

-Order of the phoenix

Remus Lupin growled in frustration as he tried desperately to stop Harry from chasing Bellatrix Lestrange, but the strength and determination of the young wizard was enough to test even Lupin’s durability.

Harry broke free of his grasp and made a dash up the staircase.

Lupin fell backwards, unnoticed by Harry, landing on his back upon the sharp stone stairs, tumbling down several of them and falling past Dumbledore, who hastily rushed after Harry.

Lupin gathered his thoughts quickly and knelt up, looking around the cavern.
Mad Eye was pulling Tonks to her feet steadily, glancing over at Kingsley who was now rolling on the floor, writhing with pain.
Lupin clambered to his feet and quickly as possible, staggered over to him.
“Kingsley…” He mouthed his name as he approached.
The wizard sat himself up and looked back at Lupin.
“I’m ok; just make sure that Harry…” He droned off, adding a yelp to the end of the sentence.
“Dumbledore has followed him.” Remus said quickly before adding brief and forced smile.
“If you’re sure you’re ok…” He added before glancing over at Mad Eye again, who had managed to revive Tonks and was helping her to her feet.

“I’ll be right back.” He frowned, before stretching his wrists with his hands and gripping his wand tightly.
Carefully he climbed several of the steps leading onto the platform where the archway stood.
The curtain was no longer drifting, only hanging straight in a mature yet opalescent manner; it’s semi-see through fabric distorting Remus’ view into what was beyond the veil.
“Sirius…” He whispered softly before frowning and letting a deep desire to give in and bear a tear take over.

“Remus!” Moody shouted as he came back down the stone staircase, from which he had just led Tonks up.

Lupin turned around and slowly made his way towards Kingsley.
“Yes Alastor?” He looked up at Moody.
Moody grimaced and nodded towards the bound death eaters that stood gathered in the centre of the cavern by invisible ropes.
“Two of us will have to stand guard; the others must lead the others up to the exit safely.” He began to plan out the route to Lupin.
“That’s not a possibility Alastor, two of us are injured, and it would not be such a wise idea to leave until the authorities take over.” Lupin said.

However they had no longer to decide; the very moment that Remus finished his sentence, darkness filled the room and spread amongst them all personally, each projecting their fears into an unseen reality.

Until the figure revealed himself, and suddenly, hate replaced fear.

Remus gritted his teeth and pointed his wand at the figure that had fired the spell from his wand.
It was Lucius Malfoy; he had avoided being noticed since Lupin had blasted him away from Harry and Neville.

Lucius sneered and brushed his flowing blonde hair from out of his eyes, the hood no longer hiding his face, aiming his wand back at Remus.

Mad Eye, whom had kept his wand drawn, aimed also at Malfoy.
Kingsley was in no fit shape to fight, and therefore lay there in silence, watching in hope that evil would not overcome its righteous end.

Remus stared into Malfoy’s eyes and clenched his teeth together.
Malfoy pursed his lips and shouted his spell loud and fast.

Lupin ducked below the jet of light that flew towards him, spinning back on his legs, doing a full turn before landing on his knees and aiming high at Malfoy’s torso.
“INCARCEROUS!” He yelled and his hand shuddered at the recoil of his wand as more of the imaginary ropes began to fire at Lucius Malfoy.

Malfoy was hit in the lower stomach, and it knocked him backwards against the crowd of jeering death eaters behind him, binding him to them.
His wand fell to the floor, leaving nothing more for him to do than await Azkaban.

Remus sighed in relief, and after regaining his balance, he walked over to Kingsley.
“Come on.” He said, offering a hand to Kingsley, lifting him off the floor once finding his hand firmly grasped in his own.

Mad Eye grunted and began to make his way back up the staircase, grabbing Neville on the way up and dragging him to the top where the others were.
Lupin carefully guided Kingsley up the stairs; the authorities were on their way.
The air had already gone cold.
Remus shuddered at the thought of Azkaban.
He thought of Sirius, and how so much of his life had been wasted.
At a glance down at the dais he almost thought he saw an unfamiliar figure skulking around the back of there.
But after blinking he could no longer see anything.

“Remus-” Mad Eye growled again.
“-let’s go.” He finished.


It was a long haul back through the ministry of magic, and one which none of them would forget in a hurry.

The entrance was eerily silent, and there was no sign of either Harry or Dumbledore.

They piled into the elevator, which seemed to fit them all inside surprisingly enough, and they made their way inconspicuously to the surface.

Upon arrival back to the ground, Mad Eye raised his eyebrows.
“Don’t open the door.” He said, and Lupin soon saw why.

A group of muggles were talking not 5 paces from the telephone box in which they all stood, unseen by the shielding magic of the elevator to the Ministry of Magic.

One of them was clutching a newspaper; they seemed to be talking intensely about murder.

“I don’t like this at all.” Mad Eye said to them all.
“Me neither, but lets just get back to base.” Lupin said blankly.
Kingsley winced and knelt down again.
“He needs medicine.” Tonks said.
“I know that already, we can get supplies from diagon ally. We will treat him by hand” Mad Eye said.
“Yes, it’s too dangerous for any other actions to be taken, let’s just keep to ourselves for tonight.” Lupin agreed.
“The…muggles…have…gone.” Kingsley pointed out, gasping at the stinging in his sides.

Together they made their way out into the street and later successfully purchased the necessary ingredients to heal Kingsley Shacklebolts wounds.
The medicine didn’t come cheap, but it was essential.
“Can you apparate back with Kingsley, Tonks?” Mad Eye asked.
“He needs dealing with quickly.” He finished.
Tonks nodded, clutching the brown paper bag of potions in her fist.
“What about us?” Lupin looked at Moody.
“These young ones can’t apparate, as well you know.” Mad Eye replied.
“Well then what do you suggest?” Lupin frowned.
“And the floo network is monitored, too risky.” He continued.
“So what are our options?” Remus sighed.
Moody jumped into the side of the road, holding out his right hand.
“Alastor?!” Lupin exclaimed.

The Knight Bus appeared as like the silhouette of a ghost, emerging from the main road although apparently invisible to the muggles.

“This is our ride.” Mad eye grinned.


Harry had avoided the Dursleys for as long as he could, but he figured that there was only one way he could possibly find any happiness this summer.

After a long ride through muggle transport he had finally arrived where he had set to meet Remus Lupin.

“Harry!” He grinned and embraced him before stepping back and putting his hands on Harry’s shoulders.
“Are you okay?” He asked.
“I, I think so.” Harry nodded and forced a smile.
He flinched and looked over Lupins shoulder.
“Is that?” Harry began.
“Yes.” Lupin grinned.
“Moody and Tonks, they insisted on coming.” Lupin explained briefly.
“And it’s no bad thing.” He smiled.

They walked together up the street towards Grimmauld Place.
“So have you been doing anything new over the holidays?” Lupin asked him, struggling really for anything to say.
“Not really, except avoiding my relatives.” Harry forced a grin.
“That’s not exactly a new thing I’ve heard.” Lupin grinned back, remembering the many years he had heard about from Dumbledore.
“Well I suppose.” Harry said, continuing to walk.
Moody and Tonks overtook, making their way to the door of number 12.

Harry stopped and looked behind him.
“What is it Harry?” Remus frowned.
“It’s my scar…” Harry grimaced.
“Quick, get him inside-” Moody said to Lupin.
“-we can talk once we are in, it’s too dangerous to discuss anything in open.” Lupin heard him mutter.
“Harry suddenly felt a little weak and leaned sideways.
Lupin grabbed him and began to guide him inside the appearing building.
Moody gasped and touched at his chest.
Tonks looked around at Moody and did the same.
“Harry, are you alright?” Lupin tried to say, but Harry froze in the doorway as something cold brushed through his spine.
The hairs on the back of his neck stood up.
“Sirius.” He said.

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this is great I love it!!! I can't wait for more!! Its Excellent!
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This is totally awesome so far! I love it, it's written beautifully. I can't wait for more! PAMS!
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Thankyou everybody for your praise

Compliments are always welcomed with my deepest thankies :p

I'll post the next part tommorow, which will come from the perspective of my third character in this themed story.

I wont say who until I have wrote it all, because changes are likely to be made.
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LESTAT!!!!!!! lol, awesome..i love it
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I love the way you write, you are incredibly talented. I cried when I read both installments. Please update soon, I already am in love with this.
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OMG LESTAT!!!!!!I ACTUALLY LUV IT!!!!i kinda didnt get the part about Harry comin out of nowhere...........aaaaaaa........what the heck!!!!
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OMG LESTAT!!!!!!I ACTUALLY LUV IT!!!!i kinda didnt get the part about Harry comin out of nowhere...........aaaaaaa........what the heck!!!!
LOL Thanks!

Harry didn't come out of nowhere o.O
Sirius was outside of number 12 Grimmauld Place, and Harry was walking down the street towards it with Lupin and Moody and Tonks.
They couldn't see Sirius because he wasn't really there.

And if that isn't the bit that you meant, and you meant the part in the second installment, well that is because it is a different time.

The bit where Harry appears and meets Lupin is set in the summer holidays, a while after Sirius' death.
I didn't feel as though it was necassary to include a "2 months later" banner etc, because it is a terrible cliche, and also, I thought that the opening sentence to that section of the story would suffice:

"Harry had avoided the Dursleys for as long as he could, but he figured that there was only one way he could possibly find any happiness this summer."

That briefly explains that it is now in the summer.

So I didn't feel the need to explain it further, but if there are parts that anyone doesnt understand, feel free to ask, and I will gladly explain ( within reason, I'm not giving away any plot details :p )
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