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Hey everyone! I really hope you enjoyed my first fan fic. This is the sequel and will be darker, but I hope you like it. Let me tell you, it's hard writing a sequel so please forgive me if this time around it sucks. Hey ZippyBubbleButt!

Chapter 1--Chapter 2--Chapter 3--Chapter 4--Chapter 5--Chapter 6--Chapter 7--Chapter 8--Chapter 9--Chapter 10--Chapter 11--Chapter 12--Chapter 13--Chapter 14--Chapter 15--Chapter 16--Chapter 17--Chapter 18--Chapter 19--Chapter 20--Chapter 21--Chapter 22--Chapter 23--Chapter 24--Chapter 25--Chapter 26--Chapter 27--Chapter 28--Chapter 29--Chapter 30--Chapter 31--Chapter 32--Chapter 33--Chapter 34--Chapter 35--Chapter 36--Chapter 37--Chapter 38--Chapter 39--Chapter 40--Chapter 41--Chapter 42--Chapter 43--Chapter 44--Chapter 45--Chapter 46--Chapter 47--Chapter 48--Chapter 49--Chapter 50--Chapter 51--Chapter 52--Chapter 53--Chapter 54--Chapter 55--Chapter 56--Chapter 57--Chapter 58--Chapter 59--Chapter 60--Chapter 61--Chapter 62--Chapter 63--Chapter 64--Chapter 65--Chapter 66--Chapter 67--Chapter 68--Chapter 69--Chapter 70--Chapter 71--Chapter 72--Chapter 73--Chapter 74--Chapter 75--Chapter 76--Chapter 77--Chapter 78--Chapter 79--Chapter 80--Chapter 81--Chapter 82--Chapter 83--Chapter 84--Chapter 85--Chapter 86--Chapter 87--Chapter 88--Chapter 89--Chapter 90--Chapter 91--Chapter 92--Chapter 93--Chapter 94--Chapter 95--Chapter 96--Chapter 97--Chapter 98--Chapter 99--Chapter 100--Chapter 101--Chapter 102--Chapter 103--Chapter 104--Chapter 105--Chapter 106--Chapter 107--Chapter 108--Chapter 109--Chapter 110--Chapter 111--Chapter 112--Chapter 113--Chapter 114--Chapter 115--Chapter 116--Chapter 117--Chapter 118--Chapter 119--Chapter 120--Chapter 121--Chapter 122--Chapter 123--Chapter 124--Chapter 125--Chapter 126--Chapter 127--Chapter 128-Birthday Post--Chapter 129-Birthday Post #2--Chapter 130--Chapter 131--Chapter 132--Chapter 133--Chapter 134--Chapter 135--Chapter 136--Chapter 137--Chapter 138--Chapter 139--Chapter 140--Chapter 141--Chapter 142--Chapter 143--Chapter 144--Chapter 145--Chapter 146--Chapter 147--Chapter 148--Chapter 149--Chapter 150--Chapter 151--Chapter 152--Chapter 153--Chapter 154--Chapter 155--Chapter 156

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Check out my other fics: There All Along-Sa9+ (Pre-UDDUP)
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Hermione Granger's brown eyes shone with tears as Ron held her close to him, protective and masculine, attempting to shield her from this pain, misery and despair. The eerie cold that loomed in the foggy graveyard on a muggy August day chilled her very bones, pity and sadness squeezing her heart as she watched, helplessly, the horrid scene before her.

The tall, now-more toned, figure of a 17 year-old orphan with impossibly untidy, jet black hair clung, screaming at the top of his voice, to a hollow wooden casket as Moody, Mr. Weasley and Bill tried to pull him away. His emerald eyes glossed over with grief and denial, it was quite apparent that Harry Potter was not in his right mind. The horrible truth had not yet penetrated into his troubled brain; one already haunted by dead parents, dead godfather, dead classmate...and those two horrible red eyes. Those were now permanently embedded. One more death -- this death -- seemed to have unhinged him; he could not take it any longer.

"GET HIM OUT OF THERE!" Harry Potter screamed, clawing at the coffin before him. "HE NEEDS AIR! HE NEEDS TO BREATHE! HE'LL SUFFOCATE IN THERE! DON'T YOU UNDERSTAND? HE'LL DIE! HE'LL DIE IN THERE! GET! HIM! OUT!"

"Potter! He's already dead!" Moody growled over his screams. He dug his wooden stump of a leg into the soft soil to help with resistance. "Accept it, boy! Let him go!"

But Harry didn't hear. All he could do was fight, push forward to lift the wooden top, to hold on for dear life. "NO. HE'S. NOT!" he moaned, his words strangled with effort. Angry tears began to stream down his face as he kept trying to explain. "HE PROMISED! HE PROMISED HE WOULDN'T LEAVE! HE SWORE HE WOULDN'T LEAVE ME TOO!"

With tremendous effort, the men managed to detach the boy from Remus Lupin's casket, which remained undisturbed by the commotion around it. The countless number of flowers covered the top, along with pictures and memories, cards and candles, and engraved last farewells from his loved ones.

Harry's grew louder and more shrill, his fingers bleeding with splinters. At a loss, Moody was almost tempted to slap him across the face to startle him from his hysteria. But as he raised his right arm across his chest, a faint female voice reached him.

"Can you bring him here?"

The men exchanged weary looks as Harry strained against their arms, and then slowly moved forward, guiding him towards a young woman with long black hair. Dressed in grieving black with all of the other mourners, she wrapped her thin but strong arms around a now-trembling Harry. At first, he tried to twist and writhe out of her embrace. But as she gripped him firmly, holding him close to her athletic frame despite his efforts, he found himself calming. Bleary though she was through his eyes, Harry could still see clearly all the pain and loss dwelling in Tonks's magenta eyes.

"I know," she said, her voice cracking. "I know. He promised me, too, Harry."

And with that, Harry slumped forward into her shoulder and surrendered to his own tears and pain. Together, they sobbed, the truth finally carving itself onto his already scarred memory. She really understood. It took something like this to take the color out of her happy face, the laughter from her eyes. Today, she was colorless, humorless, empty...just like him. He realized, of course, that, in most ways, this was probably harder on her. Inside of her, half of her heart had died with the man inside the coffin.

"He's gone, isn't he?" Harry sobbed, angrily. "He's gone like Sirius."

Tonks sniffed against his cheek and patted his back, her nose and eyes dripping. She rocked back and forth and whispered, "When he made us that promise, that was his love talking." She let out a shaky breath. "In the end, we both knew he could have never guaranteed that he -- or any of us -- would live through this war."

Harry nodded against her, his moans now muffled. He knew. But why make a promise that you know you can't keep? If he knew he couldn't be 100% sure, why say it at all?

Tonks pushed back and looked into his eyes, her whole face blotchy and covered in tears. "Remus...he loved so fiercely, Harry. And he died courageously and honorable...like the man he was." She managed a small, sad smile as Harry nodded grudgingly. "Now, we...we haven't said our..." She paused to collect herself. "We haven't said goodbye yet. So let's go together, okay?"

It felt as though he were lifting a ton of bricks as he and Tonks rose off of the ground together and made their way back towards the casket. On the side of the mahogany casket was Lupin's name in gold along with his dates of birth and death. Under those, it read:

LOVE, COURAGE AND UNDERSTANDING ALL MANIFESTED THEMSELVES IN THIS EXTRAORDINARY MAN. GODSPEED. GOD'S GRACE.

Tonks released his arm, and Harry felt himself trudge heavily forward to inscribe his farewell. He stared at the box for a moment, completely at a loss of what to say. I love you? You were one of the best people I've ever known ever and I'm going to miss you so much, it hurts? Was there an eloquent or poetic way to say those things? He didn't know how to put it. But he didn't really have to because he felt his right arm raise, and his wand began to write...

"To the world, you may be one person. But to one person, you may be the world."
I will miss you, Remus.
All my love,
Harry


Harry stared at the inscription for a moment and nodded before he willed himself up and went to stand next to Mr. Weasley. It was now Nymphadora Tonks's turn to say her goodbye, and it was proper that she do it without him.

She lifted the lid with a dead creak to look at the man she loved. It wasn't really him though. It was just his body, his shell. With his spirit gone, his pale, frozen face was expressionless and...old. For a moment, Tonks tore her eyes away from him to engrave her final farewell on the inside lid. It surprised a number of the congregation how much poise Tonks conducted herself when she was famous for being a clumsy, gangly person...

My Remus,
You were my first, my last and my true love. Know that I loved you with every part of my being. I would have been the happiest bride and mother. I will see you one day in Paradise. Goodbye for now.
Your Nymphadora


And as she removed her brand new, modest engagement ring from her trembling finger, she placed in on her love's chest, leaned in, and kissed his lifeless lips. With a soft, "I love you," her tears had streamed onto his face, and dozens of spectators watched as her heart shattered before them.

As Tonks finally backed away, her whole body shaking, the casket's lid slowly began to close, it hovered above its spot in the earth, and lowered. Once the loud crash of it hitting its new home rang out, Harry could have sworn he could feel Lupin somehow...in him; as if he was giving him one last embrace before making his way up to Heaven to watch over Harry...

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"Harry?" Hermione called softly from behind the locked door of Ron's room. "Harry, please come out. We're all so worried about you. Harry, please. You need to eat something... Harry?"

Harry ignored her. He had locked himself in there two days previous immediately after the funeral, and he did not intend to come out for as long as physically possible...no matter how hungry he was. He had closed the dark blue curtains over the windows, shutting out all trace of light and warmth of the daylight. Hermione's soft taps on the door died away, and he gave a deep sigh of relief. He was grateful that the whole household ignored the concept of opening locked doors by magic. He probably would have tried to curse them even if they hadn't...

His empty, tired eyes began to sting and water; he had been staring at the same place on the ceiling so long that he little dots appeared before him when he looked away and around the room. Behind the curtains, he could hear a group of blue birds singing merrily just outside, and it took all self control to resist the temptation to stun the stupid things. Completely overcome with sorrow, he never wanted to look at another living being as long as he lived. He felt trapped. )No, it was not the fact that he had cut himself off from humans and shut himself inside the dark and lonely room.) He was trapped inside his own troubled mind.

The scene kept playing over and over in his head:

Pain beyond pain engulfed him, his scar searing with excruciating torture as Voldemort possessed him. Harry felt himself strike out at Dumbledore. He lunged at the terrified Hermione. He sunk his teeth into the Kingsley's warm flesh. Then, the pain ebbed as the Dark Lord's black spirit protruded from Harry's open mouth. But then a figure in the mist appeared. Lupin, bruised and bloody, came breathing heavily as though he had just run a race. Hope rose into Harry, for he remembered what this man had said to him mere minutes before coming.

"Before we go," Remus had said, "I want you to know something -- I will be with you for this. No one can take on what you have to take on. No one can alter that prophecy. No one can lift that burden from your young shoulders; you carry it unwillingly. After all, you never asked for it, and it cost you your parents and godfather...and classmate. I wish with all my heart that I could do it, but I know I cannot. However, that does not mean that I will sit by and watch you face that burden all alone. No. I will be with you until the end. I won't be taken from you like Lily, like James, like Cedric, and like Sirius. Because I love you like a son, Harry. And with that love comes a promise that I will always be with you and will not leave. I swear."

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He was going to die. Something in those two red slits on the maniac-like grinning face told him that Death lurked nearby. Indeed, he was not afraid of Death. Dumbledore made sure of that when he said it was merely another adventure that each and every human being must take. But his heart tore as he realized what his death meant. That he had broken his most solemn promise to the boy whom he had learned to love like his own. That boy, he saw, was becoming a man who would do wonderful things to fulfill his destiny. And that boy looked at him with hope.

"I'm so sorry, Harry."

He knew the boy thought he had apologized for his late arrival. But he was so sorry that he would break his promise, that he would be taken away from this boy who had already suffered four losses -- three of whom were ones who loved him with everything they were. Well, if he was to go, Harry would not go too. He would protect Harry until his last breath. And so, he straightened his aching shoulders proudly, lifted his grave eyes to meet Death staring back. He would die upright and honorable like James, like Lily, like Sirius, who also died to save the life of this extraordinary young man who was meant to love, to accomplish extraordinary things. He was not 100% sure leaving Harry to live in this cruel and harsh world was the kind thing to do, but if James, Lily, and Sirius could sacrifice themselves to save this child, then so would he.

With one last look at the poor boy, Remus waited patiently as Voldemort raised his wand and yelled, "Avada Kedavera!"

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Harry lay on the damp ground, staring into the blank eyes of Lupin. He was unmistakably dead, but that thought would not process. He ignored the sensible voice in his head that screamed the truth. Voldemort had begun to curse himself. But Harry did not know why as he stared down at his mentor. The little voice in his head tried to tell him that Lupin's sacrifice renewed the shield of love protecting him, so Voldemort had to find another way to destroy him. If Harry was in his right mind, he could have looked into those two red eyes and seen that Voldemort knew exactly what that something was. As he went to shake the motionless Remus awake, he barely heard the Dark Lord hiss his last words before evaporating into thin air...

"The next time we meet, Harry Potter, shall be the last."



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Harry nearly hit the ceiling. He was so caught up in replaying the horrific scene that he hadn't heard another knock on his door. The dull 'click' rang into his ears, sending a jolt through him. His heart pounding, he looked toward the door, and there stood the silhouette of a 16 year-old red head filling the doorway, wand in one hand, the other placed on her hip. The sight of her made him want to die.

For two days, the entire household had accepted his haven, all of them honored his wish to be alone, all kept his door locked, all kept his privacy in mind. Yet, there was Ginny Weasley walking toward him with that female 'I-can-help-you-because-I-am-all-knowing' look, completely disregarding his privacy. The others were probably all downstairs talking about him and how sorry they felt. The pity shining in her eyes made him furious. He didn't need their pity; he needed them to leave him alone. They all thought they knew how he felt, what he needed to do and when he needed to do it. At least they had the decency to think these things downstairs and away from him. But here was Ginny.

She had no business barging in on him, thinking she could erase the pain. She could never know, never begin to fathom how he felt. The only one who knew was Tonks, but she wasn't there. Well he would give her a piece of his mind and then... then...

He suddenly had no idea what he would do because Ginny had reached him and sat down beside him. She put her hand onto his shoulder and looked at him with her melancholy eyes. Just like that, he forgot his outrage, until...

"Harry, are you okay?" she asked softly.

His temper boiled again. What a stupid question to ask! He moved away from her and clenched his jaw. "What are you doing here?" he hissed. "Why couldn't you just leave me alone?"

"Everyone's been saying we've got to leave you alone to sort this out on your own," she admitted. "And maybe....I don't know, maybe they're right. Maybe it's okay that you sit here in the dark without food or light or people and wallow. But I think you need to be around other people to...breathe, to live and move and grieve and talk and cry and... Just sitting here behind a locked door? You'll drive yourself mad, Harry. Losing someone is hard..."

The fuse blew.

"BUGGER OFF!" he bellowed. "YOU SHOULD HAVE LISTENED TO THEM AND LEFT ME ALONE! I DIDN'T LOSE LUPIN OR SIRIUS! MUM AND DAD DIDN'T GO MISSING! THEY'RE DEAD! THEY WERE MURDERED, AND NOTHING YOU SAY CAN CHANGE THAT! I CAN SPEND THE REST OF MY MISERABLE EXISTENCE TRYING TO FIND THEM, BUT NO MATTER WHERE I LOOK -- THE DEEPEST OCEAN, THE DARKEST CAVE, THE HIGHEST MOUNTAIN -- I WILL NEVER FIND THEM! THEY'RE NOT HIDING! THEY DIDN'T JUST UP AND RUN AWAY! THEY'RE DEAD! GONE FOREVER! AND THE LAST THING I NEED RIGHT NOW IS FOR YOU TO COME BARGING IN HERE THINKING YOU KNOW WHAT'S BEST..."

"I just want to help," Ginny said, soothingly.

"YOU CAN'T HELP! NO ONE CAN! BUT ESPECIALLY NOT YOU!" Harry shouted.

"Harry, you need a friend," Ginny said quietly, her gaze sad but steady.

He let out a humorless half-laugh. "Yeah? A friend? That's what I need, huh? Great! THEN GO GET ME ONE!" Harry spat.

Clearly startled, Ginny took a step back. "What's that supposed to mean?"

"YOU'RE NOT MY FRIEND!" he exploded, uncontrolled. "YOU'RE JUST RON'S LITTLE SISTER, AND THAT'S ALL YOU'LL EVER BE! I... I HATE YOU! STANDING THERE LIKE YOU UNDERSTAND, LIKE YOU KNOW EXACTLY HOW AND WHAT I FEEL! YOU CAN NEVER KNOW!"

"Look, Harry," Ginny said, trying to control her temper, her breathing fast. "Remember that we all lost Sirius. We all lost Lupin. And you're right. I don't know everything that you've been through, but don't forget that Tom Riddle used me when..."

"SO TOM RIDDLE USED YOU, BIG DEAL! THAT'S ONLY A SPECK OF WHAT I'VE GONE THROUGH! AND I SAVED YOU, DIDN'T I? DIDN'T I? YOU THINK WRITING IN SOME STUPID DIARY IS THE SAME THING AS...." He kicked at the post of Ron's bed, the mattress shifting so it knocked into Ginny's leg. "YOU'RE COMPLETELY IRRELEVANT IN THIS WAR AND IN MY LIFE AND ALWAYS WILL BE! JUST GET OUT! GO AWAY!"

Harry's breathing was deep after his outburst. Ginny's face was reddening fast, her blue eyes wide with shock, tears brimming them. Any moment she would cry, and he was glad. Usually, he could not stand it when girls cried. He remembered he had been completely mortified when Cho sobbed on his shoulder at her graduation last year, and Hermione always found something to blubber about these days. The mere thought of a girl crying all over the place made him cringe. But not this time. He wanted to inflict as much pain on anyone but himself, and who better than the one who invaded his privacy? He wanted her to sob and apologize over and over while pleading for his forgiveness. But he waited for nothing.

Ginny's expression turned to cold fury, her glare dangerous. Well, at least the pity was gone... As she opened her mouth to speak, her voice was hard and as sharp as if she had slapped him across his face. Each syllable was as cold as you please, the pity and sympathy completely gone.

"You're joking, right?" she asked. "This is a joke?"

Harry didn't respond; he just stood there huffing and puffing, staring back at her, not sure whether or not to fear what was undoubtedly about to come.

"You think you're the only one hurting, the only one who's scared and confused, the only one who is affected by all of this? I feel like the world is coming to an end, yet I know it's worse for you because I know what the outcome must be for you; life or death. We all understand, Harry. We all know that this is worst for you. No one has ever denied that.

But don't you sit there feeling all angry and misunderstood, believing you're the only one in the entire world who can feel that kind of pain. But you know what? You're not." Her glare was so intense, he wasn't sure whether tears or steam were about to fall from her eyes. Either way, they were starting to get glassy, and he thought he would feel satisfaction, knowing that, for once, he had gotten under someone's skin rather than the other way around. But he didn't. Her words rang in his head, and he suddenly felt a bit nauseous.

"So the truth comes out," she said, voice quavered. "I'm irrelevant to you; just Ron's little sister? So the help I've given you, the torment I've gone through for you doesn't matter to you? Those months doing Dumbledore's Army, helping you with Occlumency, supporting you when everyone was calling you a liar were what? Meaningless? I thought you of all people would get it. Those months weren't just for you. They were for myself. I was only eleven years old and sharing my deepest secrets with him; Secrets about my family, my friends, my feelings for you."

Harry's heart involuntarily started hammering against his ribcage. She looked furious as her eyes burned with angry tears. He had to listen to her now. For nearly six years, he had heard about the famous crush she had on him from Ron, Hermione, the Weasleys...everyone. Sure she had been shy, but he never really knew before. Now, it was coming from her.

"Those secrets were used against me. I told him how Fred, George and Ron teased me mercilessly, and that Bill was the only one who didn't treat me like the kid sister. I told him how devastated I was when he, my only ally growing up, moved away. I told him how I was scared I wouldn't make friends at Hogwarts and how I would be the worst at all my lessons. He listened to me and offered comfort and advice. I trusted him the way I couldn't trust anyone. So then I told him about this boy; he was skinny and had glasses and messy hair. The boy with the lightning bolt scar would never notice me because he was so brave and loyal and good. He was a modern day hero, and he was my brother's best mate. I loved this boy. And I trusted Tom so why shouldn't I trust him with this secret, the deepest and darkest of all of them?

I remember so clearly how he told me I could be the greatest Weasley; how I could make friends with the best of the best and learn to get that wonderful boy to love me back if only, if only I trusted him." The corner of Ginny's mouth turned upward in a lopsided smirk as she continued, darkly, "I couldn't pass it up. But...I found myself confused all the time, not remembering what I had been doing. I once caught myself in the middle of strangling a rooster, and I got scared. I knew something was wrong, and I had to get rid of it. But when you found it, I panicked. What if he told you what I told him? I couldn't risk it, so I stole it back. So he continued to suck me into his world of dark manipulation."

She shuddered. "But those eyes...They aren't the red slits you see, Harry. They're dark and shiny and clever and cruel. And they laugh at me. They haunt my every nightmare. He stands there every night in the Chamber and charms me to him until I can feel his cold, long fingers on my skin again. I see my childhood horrors, my worst fears, and relive them until I wake up screaming, gasping for air to breathe. Sometimes I feel I should just let myself suffocate in my sleep so I don't have to fear the dark."

A lonely tear managed to escape her eye and ran down her flushed cheek, and she hastily brushed it away with her hand. He simply stared back. He had had no idea.

"All this I endured," she whispered, "so you would love me. I was a silly girl. But in the DA, I had something to prove to you and to myself; that I wasn't that silly little girl who trusted the funny magic book anymore. I had changed and wanted to learn how to fight and be prepared and be enough. But now I see what a waste it was. Didn't you just tell me I don't understand? I'm irrelevant? You hate me? I may not be in love with you anymore, Harry Potter, but I still have feelings, and what you just said, hurts more than anything Tom ever did."

She moved away, to the door. "I'm getting out. I'm going away... I hope you feel better."

"Ginny, wait!"
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OMG I just finished reading all of 'There all Along' and this one. They are absolutley amazing! You deserve flowers: :flowersmile: :flowersmile: :flowersmile: :flowersmile: :flowersmile: :flowersmile: :flowersmile: :flowersmile: :flowersmile:

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Your writing a sequel?! Perfect! :flowersmile: :flowersmile: Keep posting!! It's really amazing! :sorcerer: Post soon! :flowersmile:
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Oh my goodness!! I found it!! This is a really god story so far!! Post more soon!!
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Omg, I just finished reading and I had tears in my eyes from when Harry is thinking about Remus's death. i was also starting to tear when he was yelling at Ginny. I don't know why. But this is really good. I love it!!! :heart:
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Ginny froze, her hand on the cold doorknob. Dusk had fallen, the shadows on the now navy blue walls disappearing. She felt cold despite the ever-growing heat. Did she hear regret in his voice just then? She wanted to comfort him, to hear his fears and secrets, but she would not turn just yet. She had to wipe away the tears first. And she did not want him to see what was so clear in her blue eyes and her heart. She had told him she no longer loved him. This was an outright lie. She did love him still, but she knew he would never love her, so she would stay with the one she would love second best -- Dean.

"Ginny, please."

She took a deep breath and attempted to rid the emotions in her eyes. She had become an expert at hiding feelings from the world to keep herself safe. Except, she was fighting a losing battle. She had just revealed her darkest secret to him, and she couldn't hide that kind of pain.
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YEA!! I actually found you story!! I am a HUGE R/Hr shipper and I loved There All Along, so Im really happy you decided to go ahead with the sequel. Just the beginning had me in tears, Ron sheilding Hermione and Harry fighting for Remus's life. The part with Tonks made me cry too, her first love! Post more please. And some flowers for you wonderful writing: :flowersmile: :flowersmile:
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Brilliant!! You write very well! :flowersmile: I love Ron and Hermione and I'm a Hary/Ginny shipper just as much! :sorcerer: Post soon! :flowersmile:
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I never read 'There all Along' but wow this is really good!
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"Ginny...look at me," Harry said quietly.

The pain in his voice was unbearable. Hastily brushing aside a few more tears, she turned to look at his pale face. She saw that tears flowed down his face too.

"Ginny, I didn't mean it," he said. "Look, I'm sorry, okay? I'm sorry that I said those things. Because...God, I don't...I don't hate you, Ginny. I don't. I just...I was just so mad and upset and hurt. And I'm just so...God, I'm so scared. And I know I shouldn't be, and I'm sorry for that."

He shuddered, and she found herself sitting beside him, his head rested on her shoulder while they both wept softly.

"We're all scared, Harry." she whispered. "All of us."

Harry sat up, trying to calm himself. He was ashamed at his behavior. His father would have never sat here crying like a baby, and neither would Sirius or Lupin. He looked into her eyes. They were strikingly blue; he had never noticed before. He didn't know if he could tell her, but if he didn't tell someone, anyone, he would go insane. He took a deep breath.

"I'm 17 years old," he said. "I'm just a..a kid. I'm supposed to be a man, but I think about the prophecy, and I'll either have to kill or be killed. I'm the only one who can do it, and I'm scared. I don't want the responsibility. I want someone else to do it because I'm sick of people dying. I'm sick of Voldemort and Death Eaters and betrayals and secrets and...I just want it to be over."

Before he knew what was happening, he found Ginny sobbing into him, his arms around her. He noticed how femininely small she was, but at the same time, she was athletic and strong. As he awkwardly tried to soothe her, he caught her whispering," It'll be okay." She grabbed a fist full of his shirt and gripped tightly. She then, looked up. "You won't have to do it alone. Not this time. Not anymore."

As she sank back into his chest, he fully appreciated her. She had grown up into a poised and fiery young woman and a good friend. He couldn't figure out how he had never noticed her unwavering friendship and support even after their journey to the Department of Mysteries. He would get through this just as he had when Sirius died. He would and could face the challenges that lay ahead, waiting for him; the challenges that would be his triumph or his doom. He had found strength in her and knew he would find the same in the rest of them. It seemed odd that he just realized, as Ginny continued to cry, trying to comfort him and herself, that she didn't seem so young anymore. After all, she was only a year younger.

They continued to cry to find some goodness in their tears. He pulled her closer and took in her spirit. Things would be better. But now, he would sleep, if only Ginny would get off him. His eyelids began to droop, and Ginny's breathing became steady. She had cried herself to sleep. He would wake her up in a moment... just one more moment. He would rest his eyes first though.

Soon, the two were asleep, Ginny snuggled in his arms. And though the world went on and the others were sorting out their own problems, they slept. for the first time in a long time, the demons that haunted their dreams each night left them alone.
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How sweet! That was really deep. Lost me for a sec! Wow, great writing! :flowersmile: :flowersmile: Post soon! :sorcerer:
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That was so good!!! I can't wait for more!! Post more soon please!!
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awsome post!! very emotional for them. very good

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This is getting really good, its just so much darker that There All Along. But still really good, Im not a huge fan of H/G, but as long as Ron and Hermione are together, Im happy!! Post more! Post more!
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I still love it. I can't wait till you post some more.
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I really like this!!!!! add more ASAp! luvz... KT*
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Where bare you?! You haven't writen in 2 or 3 weeks!!! I don't want this fic (along with a lot of other great Ron and Hermione ffs) going to the finished fics place untill this fic is finished!!!!! Please wirte soon, you are a terrific writer!!!! :flowersmile:
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Originally posted by hermione032192@Aug 5 2004, 08:03 AM
Where bare you?! You haven't writen in 2 or 3 weeks!!! I don't want this fic (along with a lot of other great Ron and Hermione ffs) going to the finished fics place untill this fic is finished!!!!! Please wirte soon, you are a terrific writer!!!! :flowersmile:
Do you know any other really good R/Hr FFs here at SS?? I've read alot of them already, but do you know of any other titles?? Thanks!

Where are you?!?! I really want to know what happens--please post soon!!
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Heylo r+h4ever1!
Im back from my holiday and just finished reading the next parts of UDDUP.
Its Absolutely Brilliant!
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I had tears in my eyes through it all.
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None at all! I don't know of any, this is the only one. (Which is another reason why r+h4ever1 should POST!!) But you said you read most of them, cane YOU give ME some titles? Thanks! :sorcerer:
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Hermione sat in Ginny Weasley's dark room by herself, crying as she had never before. It was becoming a trend around the Weasley house these days. The sounds ripping from her chest rivaled anything Moaning Myrtle ever dreamed of, and Hermione's whole body shook as wave after wave of sobs overcame her. She had done it, but a part of her, all of her really, was in complete shock and somewhat denial. She was still convinced it had to be done for all of their sakes, that it was the right thing to do, but she still felt as if her heart had been ripped out of her chest and beaten. How could things be the same again?

She was in love with Ronald Weasley. She had been for a long time...probably for as long as she had known him. Yet, as she sat by the dying fire with him, feeling the heaviness in her heart, she had ended their relationship as a couple. Ron hadn't said much; she didn't know whether he was just in shock or if he simply had nothing to say to her. They swore they would stay best friends like they always had been, but she didn't see how this could be; not when she felt the way she did. She went into another fit of sobs as she continued to dwell on his crushed face, his quiet tears, his gentle touch. But it had to be this way. Their main priority now was Harry.

"I HATE YOU!"

Hermione heard Harry just above her, and she was sure, more than ever, that Ginny had done a very foolish thing by invading Harry's mourning like that. And while she was reassured by the yelling going a floor higher that she had done the right thing by leaving him alone, she was hurt at the harsh words Harry had decided to use. The pain in his voice behind that lonely door made Hermione ache with pity. She was sick of pain. She was sick of death and despair. And after all that had happened, she knew that her reasons for ending it with Ron were justified.

Justified or not, however, didn't seem to matter to her heart. Her chest literally squeezed as her mind drifted tauntingly back to Ron's long, strong arms, his soft, gentle kisses, his comforting, funny, kind words and whispers. She couldn't help but imagine him wrapping her up so close to him she couldn't see or smell or feel anything that wasn't him while he told her over and over that everything was going to be just fine. It wasn't until her brain forced her to think of how it felt when his lips traced her eyelids all the way down to the soft, sensitive spot on her throat that she shook her head. All of that was impossible now. She had to let him go before they both ended up hurt.

Determined to shake him off, she wiped her eyes and nose with her sleeve and opened up her copy of Hogwarts, A History.She wiped the tears from her eyes and picked up her copy of Hogwarts, A History. She sat there for minutes staring at the same spot, not really seeing any specific words, just pretending that the combination of letters were somehow better than thinking of Ron.

BOOM!!

Hermione jumped, and her book went tumbling to the floor. She glanced over to the corner to see Ginny's desk jumping up and down violently. A boggart. Heaving a weary sigh, Hermione lifted herself from the chair and went to grab her wand. The last time she had to face a boggart was in third year during her Defense Against the Dark Arts exams. When the boggart manifested into her worst fear, it became Professor McGonagall telling her that she had flunked all of her exams and would be kicked out of Hogwarts. She let out a shaky laugh at the absurdity. After all she had been through since then made this seem trivial and childish. If she could face Death Eaters and Voldemort, she could handle a stupid boggart. With a lazy, almost bored flick of her wand (two adjectives considered contradictory for Hermione), the drawer opened, and Hermione readied for McGonagall to appear before her.

So it made sense the surprise she felt when Harry Potter walked out instead, blood pouring out of his eyeless sockets. Hermione's eyes grew wide with horror as she watched her best friend fall over onto the ground with a hallow thud, unmistakably dead.

She screamed -- really screamed as she had never in her entire 17 years; It was a blood-curdling shriek that shook and rattled her whole body. She, however, could hear nothing. All sound seemed to have lifted as she stared at Harry's dead body. She completely forgot that it was not real; that it was a boggart, and Harry was in the next room all alone. Suddenly, the image changed with a CRACK! into Ron. Her heart jumped and her stomach churned. He opened his mouth to say something, but blood trickled out instead. And as he, too, fell to the ground, a dagger stuck out of his back. He began to gasp for air and bleed as he gradually and painfully died before her eyes.

Hermione was now on her knees covering her ears as she wept and screamed, "RON!" The image went limp, finally dead. "NO!"

"HERMIONE!" shouted about three voices at once.

She lifted her head in response. Sound and pain came rushing back to her as she heard her own wails and screams as well as George, Bill and Ron's shouts. The image turned into a dead Mr. Granger. As Hermione continued to scream in horror, Bill yelled "Riddikulus!" and the boggart exploded in a wisp of smoke.
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Poor Hermione!! That is sad. That was a really good post!! I can't wait for more; post more soon please!! Sorry this post isn't long a friend woke me up like thrity minutes not even that and it is 7:52 am here. I stayed up until like midnight because I didn't have bad camp today early in the morning and she though we did. Anywho good post.
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