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Author’s note: This fic is based on Severus Snape as I portray him in the “Parseltongue and Purebloods” series of RPs. I am writing this for two reasons: 1) I wanted to write a fic in which Snape was the main character and 2) I wanted to give a little background, as much for my own benefit as for readers of the “P&P” series of RPs.


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Chapter One: Happy Birthday


It was a cold yet, peaceful winter evening. Light snow was falling, blanketing the ground in a shimmering whiteness. Two gentlemen, wizards to be exact, were walking down a narrow alleyway, speaking in hushed tones; whispering of a dark lord. “I heard he’s gone after the Potters again,” the younger of the two men said, his eyes darting back and forth as he nervously walked next to his companion.

The second gentleman, slightly older and wearing similar black robes to his younger friend replied, “What does that make it then? Three times those two have escaped? I don’t know how they do it; if we can’t find a way to defeat him soon, he’s bound to catch up with them and when he does…”

“Bite your tongue. They have their little one with them now. Not even six months old, yet. I’m sure Dumbledore will come up with some way to keep that young family safe.”

“Let’s hope so.”

A street lamp flickered on and off, briefly illuminating a small room several stories above the two men. The flicker of light was just long enough to reveal two dark figures but, only if one had been able to see through the enchantment placed upon the room, preventing sights and sounds from escaping. One of the figures stood just to the left of the solitary window, staring out into the storm. “Don’t tell me you’re still bored,” said a woman as she left a whimpering bundle in the corner and came to stand by the man.

The man remained staring silently outside but, before the woman could pry, the door creaked open and another cloaked figure stepped into the room. “What’s going on?” he asked as he lowered his hood and looked between the two standing at the window.

“Snape is bored again,” the woman said incredulously while pointing at the tall, thin, man who was doing quite a good job of ignoring the proceedings going on behind him as he continued his surveillance of the night sky.

“Perhaps, my dear, it is because you’ve been selfishly keeping the prisoner to yourself all afternoon,” he said, gently kissing the woman’s forehead. “After all, why should you be having all the fun?”

The man hit the floor, screaming, and Snape turned to watch as the woman pointed her wand at the man, now struggling to his feet. “You should know better than to talk to your wife like that,” he smirked before turning back to gaze at the glistening snow.

The woman came over and placed a small hand upon Snape’s shoulder, looking at his pale, pointed, profile while she asked, “What’s so interesting out there?”

Snape watched as two men rounded the corner of the building and disappeared from sight and then, turned to face the room one more, the woman’s hand falling from his shoulder. The room was small, but large enough for the four inhabitants to move about. The walls were eggshell white, except for the corner which housed the prisoner where the walls were speckled with red. “It’s been two days,” Snape said, walking over to the bundle in the corner and hauling it upright.

Turning back to his companions and reaching a hand in his pocket, he watched an excited smile play across the woman’s face and said, “He seems to have stood up to your ministrations, Bella. How about I take a crack at him?”

Her smile faded and the woman, Bella, was about to protest when the door creaked open a second time, admitting yet another man. “The Dark Lord wants a report, now ,” the man said, shaking. “What did you find out?”

“Just a moment,” Snape sneered, and placed the vial he had brought out of his pocket, to the prisoner’s lips.

After extracting the necessary information from the prisoner, Snape let the man fall to the ground. “Well, I think that about covers it. How about we go out for a drink at the Leaky Cauldron to celebrate Snape’s birthday?” asked Bella’s husband.

“Sure,” Snape reluctantly replied in a bored voice, and the three old friends, if that is what you would call them, began to walk out the door. However, just before Snape closed the door, he pointed his wand at the whimpering bundle and muttered, “ Avada Kedavra .”

The man fell silently limp and the door creaked shut.
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I love it Kris.

But being mildly stupid me, I dont get some bits. The group is a group of death-eaters, right? I dont get what the bundle is, or am I not supposed to get that? And the woman isn't Krist's mum is she, it's Bellatrix?
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I love it Kris.

But being mildly stupid me, I dont get some bits. The group is a group of death-eaters, right? I dont get what the bundle is, or am I not supposed to get that? And the woman isn't Krist's mum is she, it's Bellatrix?
No you aren't stupid; not even mildly. I was sort of vague on purpose. But, the bundle was supposed to be the 'prisoner' and you are correct about the group being death eaters and the woman is Bellatrix. Do I need to make that a little more clear, somehow? I wrote this in the car on my drive from MI, so it wouldn't surprise me if it's not entirely coherrant.
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Because I know a little of what is expected, I kinda assumed she might've been the 'other half'. I'll be deliberately vague so as to not spoil it for others.

I get it now. No-one else will have the trouble I had. It was my min complicating matters.
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Wow, great description and realism. I'm a bit cunfuzzled in oarts like Marcella, but I think it's realy giving off a very vague and gripping effect. Keeps you hooked at least, good job!
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You're a really wonderful author... even though it was rather long, I felt like I was only reading for a second. I was very interesting. Please post again soon!
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Because I know a little of what is expected, I kinda assumed she might've been the 'other half'. I'll be deliberately vague so as to not spoil it for others.

I get it now. No-one else will have the trouble I had. It was my min complicating matters.
Yeah, I was thinking that might be the problem you were having. I also think it might have something to do with the fact that it's only just started. If you had a bit more of the story it might make more sense so I suppose you just have to wait it out a bit.

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Sorry about the length. Would it make it easier to read if the posts were shorter? To be perfectly honest, I've had RP posts that are that long or even longer
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What?! There isn't more? Why isn't there more? I thought once I read down the bottom of the page there would be another post. *sigh* Oh well, I look forward to reading more of this. I really like the beginning... although, now it's going to drive me nuts until I find out who the prisoner was and what he told them before he died.

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No, no... that's not what I meant. I'm glad it was long.
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Uhh Kris your FF is great...I like the not-quite-knowing-whats-goin-on ...!

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Uhh Kris your FF is great...I like the not-quite-knowing-whats-goin-on ...!

Oh good; at least someone does I'm finding that it's really tough to write in this style when you are just posting bits and pieces at a time. I think it would be easier to read in 'book' form. But, oh well. You guys will just have to suffer along and hopefully everything will become clearer. (Although I have a sneaky suspicion that it's going to get even more confusing before it all starts to come together). So, bear with me
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Snape caught up to his friends, Bellatrix and Rodolphus Lestrange, as the couple stepped out into the street. “You killed him, didn’t you?” Bella quietly hissed. “Why do you insist on spoiling my fun, lately? You were never so neat and clean before. I’m sure we could have gotten some more entertainment out of the mudblood.”

Rodolphus turned his head to watch his friend’s reaction to his wife’s complaints. As usual, Snape showed no outward signs of what he was thinking; he still had on that same sneering expression he always wore. “He outlived his usefulness,” Snape said, nonchalantly.

They arrived at the Leaky Cauldron, obtained a table in a corner of the dark and noisy bar, and ordered their drinks before speaking again. “It’s no wonder you’ve been so bored lately. You haven’t taken the slightest interest in playing with our ‘guests.’ You’ve been Mr. Methodical with your fancy potions, direct questioning, and immediate disposal of them once we’ve reported,” Bella pouted, draining her shot of firewhiskey and pouring a new round for her and the boys. “I thought you’d at least want to have some fun on your birthday.”

“Since when have you cared about my birthday,” Snape sneered.

Rodolphus stared at Snape as he sipped his glass of firewhiskey. “I think we need to find our friend a woman, my dear.”

Snape sneered. “That sounds like a fine idea but, I don’t know any decent purebloods that would go out with him. I mean, just look at that hair… and his facial expressions leave much to be desired. Who wants to look at that sneering face all the time?” Bella said, frowning. “However…”

Her eyes twinkled and a mischievous grin spread across her face, “We could always persuade someone to spend an evening with dear Severus… It is his birthday, after all.”

“I think it’s time for me to leave,” Snape said, getting up and stalking off towards the door; he was not in the mood for one of Bella’s little games.

He walked out into the frosty night and began to wind his way back to his flat. He could have apparated easy enough, but Snape wanted to feel the cold wind against his pale skin. His thoughts were troubled, as they had been of late. With each new victim they grew closer to finding the Potters again and the chances of couple surviving decreased. Not that he cared what happened to that arrogant, pompous, Potter with that mudblood wife of his, and their child. But, there was another person who would keenly feel their death and Snape could not bear it if she were so aggrieved.

Rodolphus had been right about one thing: Snape did need a woman. But, the problem wasn’t finding one who would look past his greasy hair and off-putting demeanour as he had already found said woman. The problem was winning her away from her family and preventing his friends from murdering her. Though he was sure he could manage the latter, he knew the former was hopeless. In fact, he hadn’t seen Faith at all in several months, as she had failed to keep him up to date with her whereabouts. No doubt it had something to do with that brat of Potter’s.
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I wouldnt mind... :whisle:

Hmm Faith...cant wait to find more out!!!

Kris its really good! :sorcerer:
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This is a wonderful Fan fic. I know I'll be jelous of Snape's Sig. Other but meh, Snapes in it... it's well written... consider me here for the long haul. :flowersmile:
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wow this is a great ff i cant wait to read more.

i love how it jumps around it just means u have to concentrate more.
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Yay! Great post, I like the plot.. but it would be great if it were ME he was thinking of lol
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Hm.... very very interesting someone beat me to the quote i liked.... oh, well i'll post it again!

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hehe Snape... come on you can put on a HAPPY face!!!! "If your happy and you know it put on a sneer..." there we go Snape is happy... :whisle: great posts i love all the details...

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Yeah, I always play Snape as a human being. We don't really get to see much of that side of him as the HP stories are told from HP's point of view, of course. So, if he doesn't seem quite like JK's Snape, that's why. I'm trying to delve a bit deeper into his head and give us a look at what's behind that sinister sneer.

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Hillsdale (southeast corner) and we came via I-80 through Ohio.

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I'm glad, cause we're going to be doing quite a bit of jumping I'll try to make this as painless as possible. But, I have a feeling it's going to work out better in my head and notes than in actual practice. Please feel free to ask for help along the way if I forge to put in some key information.
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awesome. I have never been there... and I probably don't live very far away from there either...

jumping? jumping is always fun...
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Severus does have a heart, hurrah!!!

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I like this because he's sort of admitting what he mighten have admitted in HP and it also leaves you wondering who Faith is.
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Oh dear, I'm afraid you'll be nuts for quite a long time as I hadn't planned on divulging that information It's inconsequential.
Meh, I'm always on the border of insanity anyway.

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OOOO Kris. THis is SUPER! You do Snape so well. I don't know why, but I was shocked at his killing of the prisoner so non-chalantly. HA! But it fits,and I think it's great Kris. Your details are excellant and you are really painting a good picture..like I have a the whole scene like crystal clear in my head. Awesome. I love it Kris. I can't wait to read more.



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