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Old 10-22-2008, 10:04 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Righto... Abi's second ever FF... No Matter What Sequel... Skips into the Summer Holidays... Not much else to sat except ENJOY!

Chapter 1


Saturday morning brought Mrs Weasley's voice calling up the stairs.

"Boys! Hurry up!"

Harry, Ron and Jamie were up in the small attic room getting ready for their trip into Diagon Alley.

"You know... She's shouting at us and I bet the girls ain't ready yet..." Ron mumbled as he pulled a t- shirt over his head.

"Actually, we are ready..." Hermione's voice echoed the room as the three boys froze.

"Hey! What are you three doing here?" Harry asked as he hurriedly buttoned up his shirt and Jamie zipped up his jacket.

"Seeing what was taking you so long..." Ginny said as she rolled her eyes.

"You know, at least you all had jeans on..." Alicia said as she tried not to laugh as Ron grabbed a jacket and pulled on.

As they walked down the stairs, Fred and George came out of their room with a pile of boxes.

"What are they?" Ron asked as the twins lead the way into the kitchen.

"Boxes... What do they look like Ron?" George said as they walked out the back door.

"It's probably joke stuff..." Bill said as they all sat round the table.

"Oh well... Hey, anyone up for Quidditch today?" Ron said as he poured sauce over a stack of pancakes.

As Harry went to nod, Ginny shook her head.

"We can't... Practice and then Diagon Alley today..." She said as she raised a glass of apple juice to her lips.

"Perfect... I'm sick of practice..." Harry said as he helped himself to Ginny's drink.

"Well get used to it..." Alicia said as she sat next to Jamie, who just smiled.

A large barn owl swooped in and dropped six letters in Charlie's bowl of cornflakes. Pulling them out and handing them round, Charlie turned to Ron.

"Go now... There won't be as much people up there at this time of day..."


A couple of hours later found the six of them standing in Florish and Blotts. As Hermione wondered round looking at the different books, the others lined up to pay for their school books.

"Have you seen anything else lately?" Harry asked as he turned to talk to Alicia, who shook her head.

"No... It's the same things over and over again right now... I'll try again when we get back" She said. As the five of them stood talking, no- one saw the person approach Hermione.

"I'd appreciate it if you didn't point your wand in my face you know..." Hermione's voice echoed down the shelves and the group turned to see what happening, Harry, Ron and Jamie pulling their wands out.

"Shame isn't it Granger... Where'd Weaslebee and Potter? Left alone?" Malfoy looked up and down the aisle before turning back Hermione. "You lot really think your side will win this war, don't you?"

Harry and Jamie stood there while Ron edged forwards slightly.

"We don't think, we know" Hermione spat back and a smile crept onto Ginny's face.

"Funny Granger... But there's no hope for you seven... There never was" There was something in Draco's voice that Alicia didn't like. She didn't know what it was, all she knew was that her wand had appeard and she was walking toward the two talking.

"Really? I think your wrong..." Hermione started but was cut off as a red jet flew over her shoulder and hit Malfoy in the face.

"What the- ?" Draco turned on the spot, trying to locate his wand as Alicia drew nearer.

"I think that whatever your dad's told you Draco, he doesn't know what he's talking about" She spat at him as she stood next to Hermione and placed her wand in her pocket.

"Nothing you can see can help you... Surely you know that?" He said slowly as he looked over her shoulder. The others had obviously followed her down the row of books.

"Actually, everything she's seen has helped us. And I also think you should leave now... Or leave us alone" Harry said as he kept his wand raised.

Alicia placed a hand on her hip as Ginny stood next to her.

"See you at school..." She said as she gave a little sarcastic wave. Draco glared at the group in front of him before turning and walking in the other direction.

"Come on... Lets get everything else" Jamie said as he pulled at Alicia's arm.


Climbing out of the fireplace laden down with bags and boxes which were left in the kitchen, The six of them headed out for practice by the Orchard.
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Right... I can talk now... Sorry about the beginning of the post as I was in a hurry...

This is No Matter What's sequel which I started as soon as hit Chapter 10 (Although its only three chapter long right now)

It starts in the Summer Holidays just before Harry's seventeenth birthday and Jamie, Alicia, Hermione and Harry are staying with the Weasleys.

Strange things start happening as soon as they receive their school letters and carry on until... Well... until they stop.

Hopefully I can post the last two chapters of No Matter What before I get anymore readers as I'm not posting again till its done.

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Chapter 2


"How can you miss a tree Ron?" Jamie said as he helped Ginny.

"I don't know! Stop asking me questions!" Ron said as he flung his arms over his head.

"But you was standing right opposite it! And it wasn't a small tree..." Harry said as she opened the back door.

"I can't believe you Ron!" Ginny said as she kicked the living room door open.

"Just shut up okay! I didn't mean it! You really think that I'd aim for Hermione?" He said as he pointed to the unconscious girl being dragged by her shoulders by Ginny and Jamie.

"Ron, calm down... Gin, leave off for a bit... Alicia, can you go and find Mrs Weasley?" Jamie said as he helped the others get Hermione on the couch.

Alicia nodded, her tight, black curls bouncing as she did. Her green eyes were full of worry as she left the room calling out for Mrs Weasley.

The others sat round in the different spaces available, a silence dropping onto them as they fell into the chairs and onto tables.

Ginny looked round the room and then up at Harry.

"Will she be okay when she wakes up?" her voice was calm and so were her eyes.

Harry smiled and nodded at her. 'She can hide her emotions really well sometimes...' He thought to himself as he took her hand.

"Yeah... Sometimes" Alicia laughed quietly as she bent down to Harry's ear. "Come outside for a minute... I need to tell you something..."

Harry stood up and dropped Ginny's hand before walking after Alicia. As he reached the door, he heard Mrs Weasley sending Ron to get something.

"What is it?" He asked carefully as the door swung shut behind him. Something in Alicia's voice hadn't sounded good.

"Ron used that heat jinx Hermione found, not Bombarda..." She said slowly as she perched herself on the kitchen counter. "So why was Hermione blasted backwards into that tree?"

Harry had no answer. He just stared at Alicia with a confused look on his face.

"When you lot was walking back here, I went to the tree we was aiming at. I touched the trunk and it was warm... Ron hit the tree... Someone else hit Hermione" She added, trying to clear it up for him.

Now Harry's confused face had morphed into a look of total shock. He placed his head in his hands before speaking again.

"What? Someone else? No- one was using that curse! How can so-" Harry stopped in mid- sentence before looking up at Alicia.

She nodded and Harry sighed, running his fingers through his hair as he did.

"They know we're ready... They know we could beat them... They want us out" She said as she pushed herself off the counter and started to walk towards the door. "I'll tell them, you tell Ginny. If they're plan is what I think it is, she's next..."
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I'm happy that you like it. Can you wait like, 20 seconds?

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The door swung shut and Harry watched as it bounced slightly in its frame. It opened again as Ginny walked through the door and he watched it again before speaking.

"It wasn't Ron"

"What wasn't? What happened to Hermione?" She said as she sat next to him at the table.

"Yeah... It wasn't him" He said as he looked at her. The anger that had been in her eyes had gone and they stared back as he continued. "It was... Someone else" He had almost said the Death Eaters but he wasn't sure that he wanted to tell her.

"Someone else? Harry, thats kinda obvious..." Ginny said softly. The look on her face told him that she knew he wasn't telling her something.

Turning away from Ginny, Harry re-focused on the door. The plain wooden door didn't move but he could hear people moving on the other side of it.

"Harry? Whats the matter?" Ginny said, placing a warm hand on his shoulder. "I know your keeping something secret... What is it?"

"Its just... If they're aiming at getting rid of us now... If they're aiming at the protectors... Then your in danger..." Harry said, his gaze never leaving the door.

Ginny moved uncomfortable in her chair. No-one had told Harry Voldemort's plan to recruit her. And she really didn't want to, but...

"Harry... There's, something, I haven't told you..." Her tone was awkward, her voice hesitant. Harry turned to look at her as she looked away. He caught the look on her face and was worried. It was pained and full of sadness.

"Gin... Tell me" He said as he turned on his chair so he was looking straight at her.

"Last year at school... The last time Voldemort took over... He... said something" She said as she tried and failed to look at him. She just couldn't face him right now.

"What did he say? Did he say it to you? Did he hurt or touch you?" Harry could feel the anger building in him as he stared at Ginny.

"Yes, yes and yes... Your scar started hurting and Alicia ran to get Dumbledore... Harry, he was waiting for him. As soon as Dumbledore entered the room you stopped holding your scar... I noticed it... But too late... He grabbed my wrist and pulled me in close to make sure that Dumbledore didn't try anything..." She said, rushing to get it over and done with quickly, tears pouring down her cheeks as Harry turned her round to look at him. "He said that Jamie couldn't always protect Alicia and that Ron shouldn't let Hermione out of sight... He said that he would spare me so he could... so he could turn me into a Death Eater... When I asked him why me, he said it as because I was your girlfriend... Harry, he thinks you'll be dead so you can't stop him... Harry..."

Harry cradled the crying girl in his arms as the door opened again to reveal a worried Alicia and a recovered Hermione. Harry's face was full of anger and loathing and it was plainly scaring the two girls.

Alicia stared at Harry for a moment before whispering something to Hermione. Turning back to Harry, she spoke softly.

"Harry, please..." Her voice held a slight hint of pleading but Harry ignored it.

"None of you told me anything about it...Why?" His voice was hard and cold, making Hermione step backwards slightly. Ginny heard nothing.

"That's not the reason Harry... We knew how you would react... We don't hate you" Alicia said calmly as she stepped further into the room. Hermione followed her back stayed back. She went to speak but Alicia held her hand out.

Harry sat at the table hugging Ginny while Alicia and Hermione stood on the other side of the room. Harry's face hadn't changed but Hermione could tell that Alicia was communicating with him telepathically.

"I don't care! You still should of told me! She's MY responsibility! How would you like it if Jamie said that?" He shouted, causing Ginny to look up at him.

"Harry?" Her voice was quiet, but it was all Harry needed to withdraw from the conversation.

"Shhh... It's okay..." He said as he pulled her close and shot Alicia a warning glance.

Turning to Hermione, Alicia motioned that it was time to leave.

'Don't come near me again...' Was the last thing Alicia heard before the door swung shut on Harry's anger and Ginny's tears.
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Chapter 4


"He's still not talking to anyone apart from Ginny" Alicia said as she sat with Jamie in the living room.

"Ali, he'll be fine... You know that" Jamie said for the fourth time that day. "Harry can look after himself as well as others... Remember last year?" Alicia stopped pacing and looked at Jamie.

"I know... But still..." She sat down next to him and placed her head in her hands.

"Nothing will happen... You know that we can change anything that happens..." Jamie said as he lent back into the couch.

As Alicia went to reply, laughter filled their ears.

"Oh, hi..." Ginny said as she noticed them. As she stopped, Harry ran in and wrapped his arms round her. "We're going upstairs... We won't bother you..." She said as Harry turned to see who she was talking to.

"It's okay... We was just talking" Jamie said as he smiled at her.

As Ginny smiled back, Harry started walking through the room, practically dragging her along.

"Al... You just had to, didn't you? He might of actually spoke to us then..." Jamie said as he turned back round.

"Jamie, he has to speak to us soon! I thought-" She said as her voice raised slightly.

"Exactly... You thought at him... Let him think it out alone... And don't shout at me please" He said as he wrapped an arm round her shoulder.

"Fine..." She said and fell into a defeated silence.

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Harry sat outside talking to Ginny while everyone else was inside.

"You know Harry, you should start talking to them again... They were trying to help" Ginny said as she let a hand drop towards the water.

Harry looked down at her as she flicked some of the lake water and watched the ripples.

"But it didn't help... They should of told me in the first place Ginny. I wouldn't of cared if they'd told me earlier but this Battle is just round the corner and I'm not sure of anything anymore..." Harry said as he laid on his back.

"Harry... Your letting this battle take control of you... You need to cool off..." She said as she splashed a handful of lake water onto his face, causing him to splutter.

"Gin! Ooh... I'm gonna get you!" He laughed as he tried to grab her but she dodged it.

Chasing each other towards the house laughing, neither Ginny or Harry heard the voices coming through the open living room window.

Ginny reached the door before Harry and ran inside. As Harry ran in and grabbed her, he noticed she was talking to someone.

"It's okay... We was just talking" Jamie said as he smiled at Ginny who smiled back.

As Harry watched this, Alicia's voice echoed round his head.

'Harry please listen to me! You can't keep this up forever!'

'No. Look, I can cope on my own!' Harry shot at her and he noticed the smile on her face falter slightly before receiving an answer.

'I know that! But you can't do this without us! I'm sorry I didn't tell you... But you need to start talking to us again! You, I, We need each other!'

At this point Harry had had enough and started to pull Ginny towards the stairs.

'HARRY!' Alicia's thoughts were cut short as Jamie turned to talk to her.

"Harry, what did Alicia want?" Ginny said as she climbed the stairs next to him.

"Nothing... How did you know-" Harry began as he looked at her, a smile playing on his lips.

"The look on you face... The way she was staring at you..." She said as she shrugged her shoulders.

"Anyway... What were we doing?" Harry said as he wrapped his arms round Ginny, pinning her arms to her side.

"Hey! Cheater! Not fair!" She squealed as she tried to get free but was unsuccessful.
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Two weeks had passed and Harry was still not talking to Alicia. He had ended up talking to Ron and Jamie the night before and they had made him realise how childish he was being. He has apologized to Hermione but still hadn't seen Alicia.

'Desperate times call for desperate measures...' Harry thought as he fell onto his camp bed. "Jamie? You seen Alicia anywhere?" He asked as he turned to look at Jamie.

"Nope... Haven't seen her all day actually... Why?" Jamie said as he continued hunting round the room for one of Ron's missing chess pieces.

"I need to speak to her abou-" Harry cut his sentence short and grabbed his head in pain.

"Harry? Harry, you okay?" When Harry shook his head, Jamie started panicking. "Oh... Okay... Wait here... ALICIA! ALICIA, WHERE ARE YOU?" He shouted as he ran out the room and down the stairs.

As Jamie's footsteps disappeared, Harry sat up and shot his head straight back down again as footsteps echoed up to him.

"Harry? What is it?" Alicia's voice was worried as she shut the door on them. "Is it him?"

As Harry heard the click of the door, he sat up quickly, causing Alicia to step back slightly.

"I'm sorry" Harry said as he stared at Alicia's worried face framed by green curls.

Alicia looked back with a blank expression until it clicked.

"Harry James Potter! You little- Is that it? I'm sorry? Ooh... You deserve to be cursed right now!" Alicia said as she hit him on the arm.

"Alicia! Don't! OW! Stop! I'm sorry! OW!" Harry said as she continued to hit him. "OW! JAMIE! OW! Alicia!" Harry repeated as he turned to the door.

"Yeah... ALICIA! Stop, stop, stop!" Jamie said as he ran into the room and tried to get her off Harry.

"Ooh... I hate you! I thought it was him and you was faking it all along! And you!" She said as she turned on Jamie. "You called me up here!"

"Yes I called you up here but I swear I didn't know he was faking!" Jamie said quickly, raising his hands as she pointed a finger at him.


After a long silence and a couple of hugs, Alicia had calmed down and forgiven Harry.

"Your such a wimp Jamie..." Ron laughed as Harry finished telling him what happened. "I can't believe you were scared of Alicia... I mean..." Ron changed his tone quickly as Alicia threw him a look.

This caused Harry and Jamie to start laughing and Ginny to roll her eyes.

"You were saying..." Jamie said as he calmed down and looked at Ron, who watching Alicia out the corner of his eye, causing Jamie to laugh again.

"Anyone for Quidditch?" Ginny asked and Ron threw her a grateful look. Smiling, Ginny looked round the room before leaving. "Hey, has anyone seen Hermione?"

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Hermione was sitting in the kitchen talking to Alicia when Jamie came down looking for her.

"Alicia! Did you not hear me shouting? Never mind!" He grabbed her hand and pulled her up as she went to answer.

"OW! Jamie! Whats wro-" She began, trying to free herself from Jamie's vice- like grip on her wrist.

"Harry's scar... Ron's room" Jamie said and Alicia rushed past him and up the stairs.

Hermione watched as Alicia and Jamie went out of sight.

'I hope Harry's okay...' She thought as she heard a knock on the door.

"It's open..." She said, thinking it was Ron again. Hearing two sets of feet, she turned around and froze.

"Y- Y- Y- You!" She stuttered as she slowly stood up and faced the unexpected visitors.


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Chapter 6 (Part 1)


"I wouldn't do that if I were you..." The closest of the two flicked their wand slightly and Hermione's own wand landed neatly in their hand.

"W- what do you w- want?" Hermione asked, flinching slightly as the people in front of her raised their wands at her again.

"You survived the attack this idiot was sent to perform... And killing you here is just too easy... So we've come to collect you..." Her voice was loud and clear, her tone made it clear that she would prefer to kill Hermione.

"Now now Bella... Play nice..." Lucius' voice was patronizing and Hermione glanced round the room towards the door.

"And what if I don't come quiet?" It was obvious that she was buying herself time but it seemed to work.

"Curses... Force... Death" Bellatrix said casually as she listed off different things she would do to Hermione.

"Bella, your spoiling the surprise..." Lucius said slowly as he sneered down at Hermione, who glanced at the door again.

'I could scream... No, their spells will hit me first' Hermione thought as they stepped forwards.

Making a split decision, Hermione left with the two Death Eaters quietly.

Five minutes after the three of them had walked out the back door, the kitchen door opened and Harry, Ron, Ginny, Jamie and Alicia walked into the kitchen talking.
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"Naa... Ginny's a better Chaser than a Seeker" Harry pointed out as he took a chair which was pushed back from the table.

"Yeah, your only saying that coz your a Seeker as well..." Ron said as he moved a wand laying on the counter away so he could sit there.

"You know... I think that the only person who hasn't given their opinion is Hermione..." Ginny pointed out as she looked round the empty room. "Where is she anyway?"

"I was talking with her in here before Harry threw his fake fit... I dunno where she went though..." Alicia said as she jumped down from the table.

She walked forwards with the idea to sit down next to Jamie and her arm brushed against the chair.

"OUCH!" Alicia jumped back and grabbed her arm. The slightest touch had caused a deep shade of red to appear on her arm. "All I done was touch that chair" She said as she pointed towards Harry's chair.

She walked forwards slightly and crouched down beside the chair.

"Err... Al? What are you doing?" Jamie said as he watched her.

"Harry? How was that chair positioned when you sat on it?" Her voice was blank, matching her expression and eyes.

"Well... it was pushed away from the table... like whoever had sat on it had got up in a hurry..." Harry said, becoming more confused with every word he said.

'Whats the matter? What'd you see?' Jamie's voice echoed in Alicia's head long enough for her to stand up and turn to look at him.

'I didn't need to see anything... I just know it...'

"Get your cloak Harry... We're going for a trip..." Alicia said as she looked at him.


Each face in the room was sullen. All they knew was Hermione was in danger.

Alicia sat in the corner, mumbling to herself while odd words and phrases floated over to the others sitting round the table in the kitchen.

"Ginny... I want-" Harry began but Ginny cut her off.

"No. I'm coming with you. There's no way you can make me stay here this time. She's like my sister!" She said quietly as Alicia twitched slightly.

"Together is better" Alicia's voice wafted towards them on the now silent air. "How? Didn't hear anything... Made no noise? Clever... Bella?"

The rest was cut off by Harry leaping to his feet and his chair flying backwards into the door.

"BELLA?!? YOU MEAN BELLATRIX? WHERE! I'LL KILL HER IF SHE DOES ANYTHING..." The slight mention of Bellatrix's name was enough to set Harry off. After all, she was the one that killed Sirius. This would be the first time Harry had seen her after the fight in the Ministry.

"Harry... Calm down! Alicia's trying to figure out where they are!" Ron's voice was loud, but not loud enough to drown out Alicia's next words.

"No... They can't get in there... Thats impossible" Harry watched as she opened her eyes and stared straight at him. "I know where they are..."

"Where? Tell me! We're already packed and ready... Alicia, where are they!" Harry didn't understand why his voice held a slight hint of pleading, but apparently, Alicia did.

"I understand... Harry, Hermione says that they've put up extra security measures round the house..." Her eyes were watering slightly, her face held something that was like a bad memory.

"Where...''

"Sirius'..."

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Thats the end of that chapter... I'm gonna start Chapter 7 now and post it as soon as i can...

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Chapter 7 (Part 1)


They had to practically tie Harry down as they reached Number 12, Grimmauld Place.

"Harry please calm down..." Alicia's attempts were useless.

"No Alicia... They dont belong here... Where's Hermione?" Harry said as he pulled himself out of her grip.

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Chapter 7 (Part 1)


They had to practically tie Harry down as they reached Number 12, Grimmauld Place.

"Harry please calm down..." Alicia's attempts were useless.

"No Alicia... They dont belong here... Where's Hermione?" Harry said as he pulled himself out of her grip.

~*~


I have to go... My mate wants to go out... I'll finish this when i have the chance!!
"Umm... She doesn't know... It could be any of those rooms we couldn't get into. All she knows is that there's no furniture" Alicia said quickly.

"Well then..." Harry didn't finish his sentence as he ran forwards towards the door which opened for him.

'Harry... What if it's a trap? What if they want you not Hermione?'

'Alicia, they HAVE Hermione... We're here to get her and go...' Harry's thought was angry as it swam through Alicia's head.

They had switched to thoughts now as they passed the portait of Mrs Black. Reaching the second floor the argument stopped all together.

'Hermione? Can you here me?'

'Alicia? Where are you?' Alicia looked round quickly before turning to Harry. ''She's here... On this level... But I'm not sure what room...''

''What if we each take a door?'' Harry jumped at the sound of Jamie's voice before nodding. He totally forgot that Ginny, Ron and Jamie was with them.

They each moved towards one of the doors on the landing. Alicia and Jamie taking the door on the right, Ron taking the middle door and Ginny and Harry taking the left- hand door.

''Ready?'' Alicia's voice was quiet as she reached out a hand for the door handle. The others nodded and swung their doors wide open before entering.

''Not in here... Although it looks like someone was...'' Ron said as he walked back out onto the landing and headed for Harry and Ginny.

''Not in here either... Although Alicia's picking something up'' Jamie said as he left Alicia in the dusty room and followed Ron.

''Well... There's no furniture...'' Ginny said as she turned to look at Jamie and her brother as they entered the room.

''Yeah... But there's no Hermione either!'' Harry said as he turned round in a full circle, looking round the room.

''Maybe... She can hear us... And we just can't see her'' Ron said before walking towards the corner. "Hermione? Can you hear us?''

A soft, muffled noise echoed round the room, causing Harry, Ron, Ginny and Jamie to look at each other before turning towards the bookshelf.

''NO''

Harry turned round as he reached out a hand. Alicia's voice was loud and clear.

''Al?'' Jamie said cautiously as he turned as well.

''Don't touch that door...'' Ginny turned to look at Harry with a confused look.

''There's a secret door there? How come we didn't find it?''

''It's new...'' Alicia appeared in the doorway and walked forwards. ''Hermione just told me... They made it to hold people from the new prophecy... Once they go in they can't get out''

''Well... Who do we know what would help thats not?'' Ron said, causing Ginny to roll her eyes slightly.

''That would be everyone... Its not who, it's how do we get him here...''

''Him?'' Jamie asked as he turned to look at her. But Harry laughed.

''Neville! Why didn't I think of it... Umm... Alicia?''

'No. I'm staying here... I know whats happening...'

Harry nodded and turned towards Ginny.

''Oh no... You promised I could help! I'm not leaving!'' She shook her head and backed away slightly.

''Look... You would be helping! And, you'd be straight back with Neville... Come on Gin''

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Absolutely great story. Please post more soon.

I checked out your site, and your fan fiction wall. I was very excited to see that my story made it on your list of favorites. Just so you know i've posted a bunch more chapters since you last posted on mine. 15 more chapters to be exact.

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Neville's not a part of the prophecy so they can call on him to help...

I have to stick my laptop on charge so I'll post in a bit...

Oh and Tori, I caught up and love it very much!! Your a very fast writer!
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