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I really am working on it. I promise. I've spoiled you all so much by updating too often *wink*.

In other news, I completed a ficlet for Lissy by request over in Sweets for the Sweet (link in my siggy). It has Siiiiiirius in it. *prods*

I'd love to do ficlets for anyone who requests one.
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Tonks jerked her hand from Molly’s and stared at her as if she’d suddenly sprouted antlers. “What are you on about? I’m not in love with Remus.”

“What were you going to tell me about Remus then?” Molly cocked her head to the side and gave her an infuriatingly steady, patient look. It made Tonks feel as if she were going mad and no one was letting her in on it.

“I kissed him,” Tonks tried to explain, but Molly simply looked triumphant. “No, it wasn’t because I’m in love with him.” She jumped up and sloshed tea all over the table. With a sigh, Tonks reached for the towel and knocked over Molly’s mug as well.

Molly stilled Tonks’ nervous hands and had the table cleaned and the cups refilled with two flicks of her wand. “Of course not, dearie. You kissed him because that’s what friends do.”

Tonks sipped her tea slowly and glared at Molly over the rim of the cup. “It was an accident.”

“So…” Molly weighed her words, and Tonks realized she could hear the house settling for the night all around her. “So you’re telling me that your lips fell onto his? Or did you black out, only to regain consciousness in Remus’s embrace?”

Tonks shivered at the memory of her kiss with Remus. “You make it sound so… awful.” And it wasn’t awful. For all that it had ruined her friendship with Remus, it had rather been one of the nicest moments in her young life.

“Not awful, dearie,” Molly shook her head and her eyes went to the clock in the laundry basket at a thump in the hall. “I just don’t want you confused on what you feel for dear Remus. You wouldn’t have kissed him if all you had were friendly feelings.”

Tonks opened and shut her mouth before she let her mind grasp what Molly was asking of her. Why had she kissed Remus? Aside from being in the moment and in close proximity, there had to be a reason. If given the chance, would she like to kiss Remus again? That was a no brainer… definitely.

“Your mouth is hanging open like a Warbling Gingerpuff flower. Did you think of something, or have you fallen asleep in your tea?” Molly seemed to be laughing at her as she smoothed her worn green dressing gown, but Tonks couldn’t be offended by it.

“I…” Tonks was perfecting the noiseless opening and shutting of her mouth. “I’m in love with Remus. Oh…” She thunked her head against the table repeatedly. “This is such a very bad bad thing.”

“Bad?” Molly’s voice went suddenly sharp, and Tonks eyed her from where her cheek was pressed hard against the table’s wood grain. “What makes it so bad? Because he’s so old, you mean?”

“Old?” Tonks rolled her forehead to the table and considered pounding her head again. “To the contrary, I think he believes me too young for him. I think I prefer men a bit older. He’s much steadier and kinder than men my own age.” She couldn’t help but think of Bill and his frilly fluff of a fiancée.

“So then it must be that he’s a werewolf,” Molly moved impatiently to the stove, lighting it with her wand before she began to toss items into a large pot. It was far too late to be making food, and yet… Molly was cooking. “All your precious training and spending time with Remus, and you have that same old bloody prejudice. I ought to owl your mother and…”

Tonks held up a hand to stave off Molly’s ranting. “It isn’t that he’s a werewolf. You know me… I like the dangerous. Remus is like the best of both worlds.” She had to keep herself from sighing over him. Where was that impulse coming from? She was turning into… a lovesick nincompoop.

Molly turned at the stove and waved her wand impatiently. A legion of onions and potatoes chopped themselves and marched into the pot without so much as a glance from her. The pot settled on an unlit backburner, and Molly returned to the table. “So what’s so bad about being in love with Remus?”

Tonks couldn’t stand the penetration of Molly’s stare, and she studied her cup of tea again. There was that same little tea leaf floating around and around and… “He’s my best mate. If he knew that I felt like this, then he would go all odd on me and not want to be mates anymore. I can stand it if he doesn’t want to love me as a woman, but I couldn’t stand not to have his friendship.”

Molly refilled both their mugs. “I think you…” She was interrupted by a sharp knock on the door, and Tonks was shocked that anyone would visit at the late hour. She was then shocked by the fact that she had the energy to be shocked by anything. Before she had time to think on that, she realized that Molly had opened the door to Dumbledore and Harry.

“Hello, Professor. Wotcher, Harry,” she tried to smile, but it was worse than a failure. Her mouth didn’t even tip up at the corners, and she wanted to be away from scrutiny. Dumbledore watched her knowingly, and Harry’s intent gaze was fixed on her miserably brown hair. “I’d better be off. Thanks for the tea and sympathy, Molly.”

Dumbledore tried to argue politely as she gathered her cloak, but it was clear now that Molly had been staying up with her in expectation of Harry’s arrival, and the boy clearly needed some food and a long sleep. These days… who didn’t need a decent meal and some dreamless sleep?

“Dear, why not come to dinner at the weekend? Remus and Mad-Eye are coming…?” Molly thought she was being so subtle, but Tonks felt pain at the mention of his name. If he knew she was coming, he wouldn’t come, and it hurt too much to know that he was really avoiding her.

“No, really, Molly… thanks anyway… Good night, everyone.” She pulled her cloak tightly around herself and apparated as soon as she was surrounded by the dark of night.
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Omgosh I so get what Tonks is going through. Totally completely sucks liking your best friend *pets her*

Tee hee I love Molly's subtle sarcasm in this post.

And I like how Tonks comes to the decision shes in love with him. And the realization of that setting in.

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I love love love love LOVED it! (and not just because I'm madly in love with longer updates )

I can sympathize to some extent but, having lived the best friend turns husband and now having a son with him, I'm tempted to just say, "Get over it and go kiss him again!" As you know, the change of Shawn and my relationship was brought about by kissing.

I also noticed a bit of our SID character dynamic coming into play here (coincidence, I'm sure, but it gave me tingly feelings just the same):
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There was more I was going to say but, I can't quite remember it all right now. Oh... I absolutely adore the way you tied it in with HBP, even going so far as using some of the dialog from the book. eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee I LOVED THIS UPDATED AND I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!!! [/flaming]
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“What were you going to tell me about Remus then?” Molly cocked her head to the side and gave her an infuriatingly steady, patient look. It made Tonks feel as if she were going mad and no one was letting her in on it.
I know that look, and I'm on the receiving end most of the time too! hehe

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lmao Good one Molly! That would be a nice way to regain consciousness though...

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I love Molly's dialogue in this! This is great! Poor Tonks!

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There ya go! hehe And - no it's not!

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“Old?” Tonks rolled her forehead to the table and considered pounding her head again. “To the contrary, I think he believes me too young for him. I think I prefer men a bit older. He’s much steadier and kinder than men my own age.” She couldn’t help but think of Bill and his frilly fluff of a fiancée.
Meh! He's not that old! But true about kinder! And frilly fluff of a fiancée - gotta rememebr that one! hehe

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I know Kris highlighted this one... But I just love that insight!

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Ditto with Kris again... Stephen and I were friends first too and I felt the way Tonks does.

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“Hello, Professor. Wotcher, Harry,” she tried to smile, but it was worse than a failure. Her mouth didn’t even tip up at the corners, and she wanted to be away from scrutiny. Dumbledore watched her knowingly, and Harry’s intent gaze was fixed on her miserably brown hair. “I’d better be off. Thanks for the tea and sympathy, Molly.”
I love how you integrated canon! Filled in the gap of what was going on before Harry showed up. This is so awesomely done.

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Poor unhappy Tonks. *sigh*

Can't find the right words to express how terrific this update was Ern! Loved it!
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All I can say is that I LOVE this story and I love Molly Weasley! That was a great great great post please post more when you have time!!!!!! I got sooo excitedd when I saw your post i nearly hopped up and down!!!!!! (ok so maybe i did hop up and down..thats normal.. right?!)

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Molly and Tonks are both so cute, you just want to squeeze them lol. Very long and very good update, I LOVE the fact that you've related it to the book and not changed anything, its brilliant Keep it up my Ern *pounce*
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You slipped in right before I went away so I missed your post. but now I've read it and it is wonderful. This is sunch a good Molly/Tonks moment and adding that bit of HBP at the end was great. Good post and I hope for more but not at any great speed.
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I utterly love your post. So great. Poor Tonks. I want to see Tonks happy. Huggles.

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Time was an odd thing. Days and weeks could pass in the blink of an eye, while a few short moments stretched on into infinity. The reverse could be true as well… those times you wanted to drag out and savor were inevitably too short, and time seemed to stand still when you had no joy in your life to color the long, empty days. Tonks, swiveling slightly in her chair and tapping her pencil against the table, was getting to be an expert at long, empty days.

She’d seen Remus that morning on her way in to work. He was in the lift, his fingers clenched white on a stack of papers, and Tonks had watched his mouth open and close stupidly before he darted out on the appropriate floor. All this time, and he still wouldn’t forgive her for her absolute stupidity. She wasn’t about to forgive herself either.

“Tonks! Hello-ooo?” She blinked and looked dully at the red-faced man sitting next to her. “If you don’t stop tapping your pencil, I’m going to take it from you and…” He proceeded to detail the anatomically improbable things he planned to do with her pencil, and Tonks meekly laid it down.

Savage grunted in digust and looked back towards the front of the common area. All the Aurors had been called together for their weekly meeting, but no one had arrived yet to take control of things. “And that’s another thing. You used to tell me off and make it actually enjoyable to snap at you. This mousey Tonks act is getting old. Whatever it is that’s bothering you, snap out it!”

The man’s diatribe faded into background noise as Tonks tugged on her still sandy brown hair and attempted to pull her thoughts together. She thought again of Remus in the lift, followed by her conversation with Molly, followed by her shared moment with Remus at Grimmauld…

“That’ll be enough. I want silence,” Tonks withdrew from her quiet self-torture to eye Scrimgeour. In spite of the fact that the man was no longer Head of the department, he still frequented these meetings. It didn’t take a genius to see that he was still firmly in control of the Aurors.

Scrimgeour cleared his throat and gave each of them a personal penetrating stare. “We… have a mandate. We have a clear purpose from the Wizarding society that we are sworn to protect, and you each must live up to that purpose.” His yellow-eyed glare caught each Auror by turn as he wound himself up into a royal rant against the general laziness of the current Aurors and their clear role in the fight against He-Who-Must-Not-Be-Named.

Tonks let her mind wander. She knew her role in Wizarding society. They all did. Being an Auror was too hard and too dangerous for someone to get into it for the glory. That’s what the Hit Wizards were for. Everyone knew that department would take anyone who could tell which way to hold a wand.

“… and Shacklebolt tells me that there have been several thwarted attempts on the Minister’s life, but he feels we’re on a downward slide in attacks on that office…” The mention of Kingsley perked Tonks’ ears a bit, but she soon grew melancholy again at the reminder that she was without another of her dearest friends. It was grand that he’d been given such a brilliant assignment, but she was miserable without Kingsley AND Remus. And of course, she was avoiding the rest of the Order out of a sick desire to punish herself by avoiding any mention of Remus.

She was pulled from her reverie once again by movement around her. Scrimgeour was talking about something other than his usual nonsense, and she was missing it. “…so I want a few Aurors to take up residence in the village and assist in guarding the school.” The school was… Hogwarts, and Tonks hand shot up even before her counterparts.

Scrimgeour’s gaze slid across Tonks twice before any other hands went up in the air. “Proudfoot… Savage…” He glared at a few of the Aurors sitting in the front row, urging them with his eyes to put up their hands. Finally, another hand went up. “Yes… good. Dawlish.”

Tonks couldn’t fault Dawlish for not wanting to volunteer. He’d been dragged along to Hogwarts last year and made to look the fool when Dumbledore slipped through his very fingers. It took a lot of courage for Dawlish to voluntarily return to Hogwarts, especially with Dumbledore back in charge.

The Minister of Magic’s eyes roved the group again, and he could no longer avoid the petite woman in the back row, stabbing her hand fiercely in the air almost violently. “Fine… Nymphadora will join Dawlish, Savage, and Proudfoot at the group house in Hogsmeade.” There was an obvious frown creasing the corners of his mouth and eyes, but Tonks was victorious.

It didn’t matter if Scrimgeour didn’t trust her because she was young and female; she was going to Hogwarts. Up until this moment, she hadn’t realized that the best thing would be for her to get away from her empty apartment and all the little things that were reminding her of Remus. And what better assignment than to be near Harry and the other children? She settled back into her chair, her arms crossed, and listened to the rest of the meeting, feeling better about her life than she had in a long while.
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Awesome update! Well worth the wait. I love:

[x] The general way you play Tonks
[x] Your use of canon!
[x] The fact that you played Scrimgeour
[x] You always update nice, healthy posts
[x] The assignment in general
[x] How Remus is still being childish over the kiss

Well done Ern, I can't wait for more!!!

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I didn't have my net connection for a long, long time now, so I couldn't come. I'm really sorry, but I often have break-downs. As for your so many updates, I can find no words good enough.

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*loves Ern*

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Time was an odd thing. Days and weeks could pass in the blink of an eye, while a few short moments stretched on into infinity. The reverse could be true as well… those times you wanted to drag out and savor were inevitably too short, and time seemed to stand still when you had no joy in your life to color the long, empty days.
I love this paragraph. It's so true and I relate so much. Very well said.

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All this time, and he still wouldn’t forgive her for her absolute stupidity. She wasn’t about to forgive herself either.
Knowing him, he's having his own guilt issues.

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“Tonks! Hello-ooo?” She blinked and looked dully at the red-faced man sitting next to her. “If you don’t stop tapping your pencil, I’m going to take it from you and…” He proceeded to detail the anatomically improbable things he planned to do with her pencil, and Tonks meekly laid it down.
Very good!

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His yellow-eyed glare caught each Auror by turn as he wound himself up into a royal rant against the general laziness of the current Aurors and their clear role in the fight against He-Who-Must-Not-Be-Named.
Now that's motivational speechmaking! hehe

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That’s what the Hit Wizards were for. Everyone knew that department would take anyone who could tell which way to hold a wand.
Ohhh! Interesting department!

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And of course, she was avoiding the rest of the Order out of a sick desire to punish herself by avoiding any mention of Remus.
I just love how you write her. This is something I know so many of us would do and it makes us relate so much.

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Tonks couldn’t fault Dawlish for not wanting to volunteer. He’d been dragged along to Hogwarts last year and made to look the fool when Dumbledore slipped through his very fingers. It took a lot of courage for Dawlish to voluntarily return to Hogwarts, especially with Dumbledore back in charge.
*remembers well* hehe

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And what better assignment than to be near Harry and the other children?
Excellent! Awesome way to introduce how she got the assignment!

Loved the update, always worth the wait dear Ern!

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P.S - I bet Lissy yet again, mwhahahaha
Lee! I was at work when this posted! hehe Ern knows who her #1 fan is and forgives me... *bats eyelashes*
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Old 03-20-2006, 04:12 PM   #175 (permalink)
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