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Old 02-09-2006, 05:04 PM   #126 (permalink)
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That Chrocked my socks. It was short, but nevertheless sweet and as wonderful as possible. I found so much to dote upon and think over. YAYNESS!!!!!!
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When she considered how long it takes to sabotage her life, Tonks thought in terms of months or years. It was impossible to think in terms of split second decisions. One moment shouldn’t collapse a life like a house of cards. It shouldn’t have that kind of power.
Yes, that is so saddening. Sometimes, I brood over that too and feel so defenseless and vulnerable.

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But it was clear that’s what had happened in the days after the incident at Grimmauld Place. Tonks found that nothing was going right. She kept locking herself out of her flat. She lost a number of warrants and memos at work. All her favorite clothing was ruined in a series of bizarre accidents. In simple terms, Tonks was having a bad time of it. A very bad time, indeed.
*Sob* I wish things will soon get better for my Tonksy. She's not exactly having the time of her life, is she?

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Not to mention that she was having trouble changing again. Her hair was stuck at a peculiar shade of sandy brown that looked quite frumpy on Tonks. She recognized the shade at once, but she pretended not to, and she couldn’t will up enough strength to change it.
Why do things have to get worse for my Tonks, Oh well, dam* it I think the fates are aggainst her ---- at least my inner eyes tells me so.

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And all of this was because, in a moment of blind stupidity, Tonks had given in to youthful impulse and kissed her best mate. Remus had to be furious at her, or else terrified she would do it again, because he was studiously avoiding her. Not that she could blame him.
Why can't they just end up together with a lovable kiss? Well, I get it --- I get it. Things just can't be so easy...But I wish Lupin wouldn't avoid her like that.

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Her awful week and the loss of her closest friend could easily have led Tonks to believe she was destined to be alone, but Molly continued to pester her for another visit. Tonks knew that Molly was probably just trying to throw her at Bill again, but she was so sick of being alone with herself… and that was how she found herself at the Burrow in late August.
Oh, my poor Tonks.

That was an adorable chapter once more, Ern. Excellent descriptions as usual. Well, I'll just say my trademark word:
YAYNESS! YAYNESS! YAYNESS!!!!!!!!!!!!
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I love it!!! I really hope you win, try for me (and everyone else of course!!!) Even though it was short that was very goood, like always! I just love the way you write I dont know how to describe it, its just awesome...I especially love how you desribe how one moment shouldnt change everything.. so true! Please post more soon!!!!!!!!!!!

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Okay... here's a nice long bit to make up for the last update. My muse died... we had to get out the AED to get her going again. Leaving you on a bit of a cliffhanger again. You can thank Lissy and Christy for their arm twisting.



Dinner was not nearly the festive affair one would want if they were seeking distraction. The twins weren’t around, as they’d finally finished moving their belongings into the flat above their store, and the only new addition to the house was that curly-headed girl who was friends with Ron and Harry. Hermione was her name. It was the kind of name that made you wonder if her parents really liked her all that much. A name like Nymphadora.

Of course, Fleur and Bill were still there, but Tonks found she didn’t care at all. She really didn’t care about anything, and she only felt relief when dinner ended and Molly snapped at Ginny for asking Tonks yet again to make her nose look like a pig’s.

“Mum!” Ginny crossed her arm and tossed her hair over her shoulder in a waterfall of crimson and gold. If Tonks had felt like herself, she’d want to make her hair that shade to see how it looked. “I was just trying to…”

“I know what you were trying to do,” Molly snapped and her glare sent Ginny scurrying after Ron and Hermione. “Let me just finish up the dinner dishes, dear, and we’ll have a nice cup of tea.”

Tonks mumbled indistinctly as Molly finished cleaning up the huge meal she’d created in hope it would patch things up between the two of them. Instead of creating peace, Tonks could see that Molly was troubled even yet by the silence that lay chokingly heavy on the kitchen. Tonks wanted to speak, wanted to not be yet another thing for Molly to fret over, but she felt like her emotions were wrapped inside a thick blanket. Struggling to unearth some feeling just made her more and more tired.

“So…” Every movement Molly made was decisive and concise as she brought two steaming mugs of tea towards the table. They stared warily at each other for a long moment, and Tonks could hear yelling from the floor above her, followed by slamming doors and stomping feet. Her apartment was so quiet… too quiet.

“So?” Tonk tilted her head to the side and studied the clear dark liquid in her cup. It rippled as she blew across the surface. Molly’s voice startled her from her reverie; Tonks jumped, splashing tea onto her hand.

“SO,” Molly plunged along, heedless of any awkwardness, “what exactly is it? Are you angry with me?”

Tonks had nearly forgotten that whole episode in the Weasley kitchen. It had only been a few days, but any feelings of betrayal or dismay were wiped clear by the fact that her best mate hated her and she couldn’t fix it. “What? Oh… no. No, Molly. I was angry with you, in the beginning, but now I’m just… not.”

Molly nodded sagely and sipped her tea. “Something else, is it? Are you going to tell me or do we have to play twenty questions?”

Tonks sighed and stared at the ripples in her tea again. There was a particularly large leaf that had managed its way into her cup, and she watched it dance in circles across the liquid. “I’m fine, Molly. I’m really fine. Work stress, you know?”

“Sweetheart, I live with a man who works for the Ministry and has always stood publicly with the rest of the Order. Of course I know. But I don’t think… is it about a man?”

Tonks looked up, the denial already falling from her lips. “No… no, nothing like that. It’s just that Remus and I…” She considered. “Well, I suppose that Remus is a man, but the way you say it sounds so…” Tonks shrugged, a helpless gesture. “It’s about Remus.”

“So you’ve figured it out, then?” The tilt of Molly’s head was infuriating.

“Figured what out, exactly?”

“Tonks,” Molly took her hand and looked at her intently. “You’re in love with Remus, dear.”
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“Tonks,” Molly took her hand and looked at her intently. “You’re in love with Remus, dear.”
tee hee I think that was my favorite part. I can totally see this in my head: Molly reaching across the table and taking Tonks' hand and patting it gently with her other hand while telling her she's in love with Remus as if she's telling her some really awful news.

Beautiful writing, Erin my dear. I'm sorry I didn't catch the timeline issue, I'm awful with those kinds of things which is why I try not to write so close to canon. I love canon but, I'm just not that good. LOL
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hehehe Only cus I worked last night dear Cass, oh yes....

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Hermione was her name. It was the kind of name that made you wonder if her parents really liked her all that much. A name like Nymphadora.
hehe Isn't it mean of parents to chose unusual names? Especialy hard to say ones...

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Of course, Fleur and Bill were still there, but Tonks found she didn’t care at all. She really didn’t care about anything, and she only felt relief when dinner ended and Molly snapped at Ginny for asking Tonks yet again to make her nose look like a pig’s.
bahahahaha Poor Tonks though. I bet it gets annoying to have people ask you to perform for them all the time.

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“Mum!” Ginny crossed her arm and tossed her hair over her shoulder in a waterfall of crimson and gold. If Tonks had felt like herself, she’d want to make her hair that shade to see how it looked. “I was just trying to…”

“I know what you were trying to do,” Molly snapped and her glare sent Ginny scurrying after Ron and Hermione. “Let me just finish up the dinner dishes, dear, and we’ll have a nice cup of tea.”
I'd like hair like that too. Very pretty description! And of course Molly knows what Ginny was up to... She seems to know all... (hehe the mom legilimens talent)

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That is an awesome description! I know exactly how that feels.

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They stared warily at each other for a long moment, and Tonks could hear yelling from the floor above her, followed by slamming doors and stomping feet. Her apartment was so quiet… too quiet.
cus I understand this too.

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Tonks looked up, the denial already falling from her lips. “No… no, nothing like that. It’s just that Remus and I…” She considered. “Well, I suppose that Remus is a man, but the way you say it sounds so…” Tonks shrugged, a helpless gesture. “It’s about Remus.”
I'm so glad she is opening up, even a little, to Molly. She is such a nice lady, I would too.

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“Tonks,” Molly took her hand and looked at her intently. “You’re in love with Remus, dear.”
See? The mom legilimens talent! That instinct mom's possess.

Very , very lovely post dear Erin! I'd never believe we had to revive that muse of yours.

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Beautiful writing, Erin my dear. I'm sorry I didn't catch the timeline issue, I'm awful with those kinds of things which is why I try not to write so close to canon. I love canon but, I'm just not that good. LOL
I agree 100% with Kris! And I didn't catch the issue either I too find it fun deviating from canon. You make it so natural, though, I'd never question your facts.

*Erin scratches Lissy and Kris from her canon-addict beta reader list*
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I love that. Just reading it makes me giggle.

Molly is so motherly in this update. It's a nice contrast to her trying to set up Tonks and Bill before. It seems like she always knows things about the characters before they know themselves.

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I love the post ALMOST as much as I love you. And that's a heck of a lot of love.
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I love that part BEYOND words!!! That was a GREAT post it was soo cute!!!! Post more soon please!
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Molly a therapist? hmm I love it The last sentence was just amazing. Very long chapter but when you look at it not a lot happened, expert writer we have here tee hee. Awesome update Ern, PAMS and BUMPS!
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I really am working on it. I promise. I've spoiled you all so much by updating too often *wink*.

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