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Tonks took far more time getting ready for her trip to Grimmauld than necessary, especially considering she ended up in ripped jeans and an old rock-and-roll t-shirt with a hole in the sleeve. Still, it took a lot of thought and several attempts before she settled on violet hair, which looked surprisingly good with her lime green shirt.

She finally apparated to Grimmauld, and her stomach gave an odd twist. Last time she’d been here, Sirius had been skulking about the place growling at everyone and generally being unhappy about having to stay indoors all the time. It would be odd to be in the dark old house without the constant motion of the Order and without knowing that Sirius was banging things around to demonstrate his displeasure. Still, it was a necessary evil, and Tonks was glad Remus would be there too.

He waited for her on the stoop with the door keys jangling in his hands. They’d locked up tight as soon as they realized the Death Eaters might now have access to their headquarters, and no one had been in since then. Remus gave her a look that was almost a smile but not quite, and Tonks understood it perfectly. He felt it too.

“Sky High Pixie Parade?” He pointed at her green t-shirt and looked slightly bemused.

“Found it at a shop on Diagon Alley. I love this shirt,” Tonks pulled it out a bit and stared at the glittery pixies. “The shirt lasted longer than the band did, but they were around a bit about 20 years ago. I guess they were awful.”

He stood and put the key in the lock. “No, they were awful, but I’m surprised you’ve heard of them. I think Wormtail listened to them...” He turned to jiggle the key, and she knew he was trying to hide his reaction to talking openly about Peter Pettigrew. “You’re too young to know that band.”

Remus pushed the door open and disappeared into the darkness. “I’m not that young,” Tonks grumbled as she climbed the steps after him. “I’m not a…” The rug was curled up in front of the doorway, and Tonks fell into the yawning darkness. Remus caught her arm, and she could just make him out. He put his finger to his lips to indicate quiet, and Tonks sulked silently.

They held an organizational meeting in the parlor, safe from the mad portrait of Tonks’ great aunt Black. Tonks tossed herself into one of the old chairs and immediately raised a cloud of dust. Coughing, she slid to the floor and looked to Remus. “What exactly do we need to do?”

“Remove any trace of us here at the house. They know we were here, but they don’t know who exactly. That’s important, especially after Emmeline,” he paused for a moment, considering the loss of a trusted Order member only days before. “We have to keep those loyal to Dumbledore safe, but the cleaning really shouldn’t take too long…” He scrubbed at the slight stubble on his chin and looked around the room as if a glaring sign might jump out at them and flash their names in neon letters.

Tonks crossed her legs and propped her chin on her hand. “I think we should take a peek in the attic and in Kreacher’s hole. I’d hate to leave any Dark trinkets for the Death Eaters to use against us.”

Nodding slowly, Remus offered Tonks his hand up off the floor. “Good idea, then. We can start in the kitchen and the general living areas before checking out the rooms upstairs. Or did you want to split up and…”

Tonks squeezed his hand before letting go. “I’d rather stick together, if you don’t mind.” He nodded wordlessly, and they headed for the kitchen.
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Gotta love her fashion sense!

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She finally apparated to Grimmauld, and her stomach gave an odd twist. Last time she’d been here, Sirius had been skulking about the place growling at everyone and generally being unhappy about having to stay indoors all the time. It would be odd to be in the dark old house without the constant motion of the Order and without knowing that Sirius was banging things around to demonstrate his displeasure. Still, it was a necessary evil, and Tonks was glad Remus would be there too.
Oh, I feel like this is going to be creepy. Such a strange feeling it must be. And the Sirius reference.... *sigh* I just thought that was so troubling. *hugs Sirius*

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“Found it at a shop on Diagon Alley. I love this shirt,” Tonks pulled it out a bit and stared at the glittery pixies. “The shirt lasted longer than the band did, but they were around a bit about 20 years ago. I guess they were awful.”

He stood and put the key in the lock. “No, they were awful, but I’m surprised you’ve heard of them. I think Wormtail listened to them...” He turned to jiggle the key, and she knew he was trying to hide his reaction to talking openly about Peter Pettigrew. “You’re too young to know that band.”
That was a very cute exchange! Hmmm... How old is Tonks exactly? I always pictured her to be about Bill or Charlie's age... Which would make her about 10 years younger then Remus... Am I wrong?

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Remus pushed the door open and disappeared into the darkness. “I’m not that young,” Tonks grumbled as she climbed the steps after him. “I’m not a…” The rug was curled up in front of the doorway, and Tonks fell into the yawning darkness. Remus caught her arm, and she could just make him out. He put his finger to his lips to indicate quiet, and Tonks sulked silently.
See? Creepy...

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I'd want to stay close to Remus too... *ahem* Good idea!

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*Rolling on the floor in manical laughter* he he he.;lol: You're too much, Ern, darling. That was super cool, love. Your descriptions are beautifully wonderfully rockingly SUPER DPER BRILLIANT!!!! *Open-mouthed* *Yayness*

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*Swoons* What else can I do???? You have a way of putting forward the simplest sentence in such a way that you make a person float on cloud nine! Yayness!!!

Ern, you're the bestest! YAYNESS!!!!!!!!!!! *I love that word*That update was simply mind-blowing and it drew me in. I just returned from the airport, and need to catch up on my sleep, but I just had to read it to the end. Your descriptions are so accurate. You're the first writer I've known who can write romance without writing romance. Confusing isn't it? But you can do it. That pos tcertainly couldn't be called "Romantic" yet it had a touch of romance in it that awed me. It was very stimulating, spicy and ---- ADDICTIVE!!! Well done, Ern.

YOU ROCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YaYnEsS zzZZZzzz.......*Smooches* The characters look just as much realistic as JK's. Rowling just - sort of - well, jumped up at that T/L relation, but you're doing it properly - the way it should be. Actually, I think you beat JK at that point. Keep it up and PAMS.


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**Sulks** So, I'm late once more but I will live to the day that someone beats Lissylove to an update...

Anyhoo, on with the show. I'd quote reply but it would probably end up very weird with Siry included every couple of words so I'll pass up this update.
But, anyway, the update was awesome...I love the chemistry between Lupin and I know I keep saying this but you have Tonks' character down sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooo well! I mean the whole wardrobe decision and the remark about not being that young was truly her canon!

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They moved quickly through the house, more quickly than either of them expected. Each room was carefully checked for personal possessions which were then shrunk and tossed into a bag Remus was keeping in his pocket. Thus far, they’d found many objects belonging to the Weasley children, including socks and some odd flasks that Tonks was sure belonged to the twins. Molly had also left some kitchen utensils, and there was a pile of fuses they knew belonged to Arthur. Even Moody had left his spare peg leg under one of the upstairs beds.

After each room was cleared, Tonks would perform a housekeeping spell her mother had taught her when she was a child. It worked as a vacuum, sucking up all the hair and bits in the carpet. No sense in leaving something behind to go into Polyjuice potion if they could help it.

The hardest part was removing traces of Sirius from the house. They wanted to be sure no one would ever use Harry’s love for Sirius to hurt him, and so they had to be sure to remove his possessions from a house that had never been a home to him. As a child, he’d been an outcast and later disowned by the people that should have loved him most, and when he’d returned as an adult, it had served as a prison and a reminder that one can’t always escape the depth of one’s roots.

Finally, however, the house was clean, and Tonks and Remus dragged out a heavy crate to store Dark artifacts in. Most of the house had been purged during the Order’s year long stay, but more than a few items were still squirreled away in nooks and crannies. Remus found a trunk in the attic, and Tonks chased Kreacher out of his hole to find his stash before the two met back in the sitting room.

“What about this?” Tonks held up a tall urn containing the ashes of some long-dead relative. She placed it carefully in the crate before looking to Remus.

“Wouldn’t want anyone to raise whoever that is, so we’ll hold onto it,” he tossed a metal gauntlet into the trunk, and it clanked ominously against a metallic box and an ugly old locket. “Isn’t it amazing the kinds of things you keep? How much can you tell about a person by looking in their attic or their closets?”

“Stay out of my closets,” Tonks teased, making a face at a particularly gruesome book she’d found before she hurled it into the crate. “It will eat you alive. I don’t hang things up and I don’t fold them, and if it doesn’t smell… it must be clean.”

Remus frowned and visibly shuddered. “Remind me to intervene on behalf of your wardrobe someday. We’ll have a little cleaning party. You’ll love it… there will be shelves and even hooks for your clothes. Hooks! Imagine it.”

She laughed and reached over the ottoman to grab the next item, an antique picture frame she knew they’d probably leave behind. It was just a bit too far beyond her reach, however, and Tonks toppled out of her chair and bounced off the ottoman. She looked up at Remus from the floor, and he was already laughing.

“Don’t laugh,” she giggled, but her eyes were watering from her own laughter. Through the tears, she watched Remus stand and offer her his hand. In a heartbeat, she put her hand in his, and he pulled her up abruptly.

She didn’t know how it happened. One moment she was giggling about her fall, and the next she had moved right into Remus’s arms. Her hands moved into his hair, and she tilted her chin just so… and kissed him. Part of her brain was wondering how she’d ended up like this, and the rest of her brain was wondering why she hadn’t tried it before when it was so absolutely lovely.

He kissed her back. At least, it seemed that he did, because his hand was on the small of her back, drawing her to him, and the other was touching her hair where it was wispy at her temple. It was all too perfect.

And then Remus shoved her from him hard enough that she tripped back over the ottoman and hit the floor. “What did you do?” His voice was low and dangerous.

“I kissed you,” she tilted her head and looked up at him from her spot on the floor.

“Why?” His features were unreadable, which was odd for Tonks. She could always read him. Always.

“Wanted to.” She hoped her flippant answer would break the tension and bring back their camaraderie, but he just glared at her.

“What are you playing at, Tonks? You can’t just… this isn’t a game,” he snapped before he shocked her by turning on his heel and leaving the room. The outer door slamming let her know that he’d left the house altogether.

Apparently, it also alerted Mrs. Black’s portrait in the front hall. Tonks moved woodenly to pull open the parlor door, which allowed her to hear every word that the portrait screamed. “Mutants! Blood traitors! Out of my house… out out out!” Her words were vile, and Tonks threw her sponge half-heartedly at the picture.

“Shut up, you bat.” The portrait blinked and paused before resuming her tirade. Tonks stood helplessly for a moment before she made a sound like a sob and chucked another sponge, followed by the entire bucket of water. It clanked against the frame before landing in a puddle on the floor.

“I said shut up! You… you horrible horrible creature! Why couldn’t you love him? And even after he spent all those years in Azkaban, and he came back and just wanted to live his life. You still had to make it horrible. You killed him. You did. You and all your kind killed him…” She sniffed loudly and wiped her streaming eyes as she sank to the floor.

Mrs. Black was silent as she stared at the sobbing girl before her. With an audible sniff, the curtains around the portrait clicked closed, and Tonks was alone again. She was always alone.
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[X] I loved some of your original ideas in this, like the whole Polyjuice thing. Very nice

[X] They eventually kissed!!!!

[X] Remus is a meany and an old bat lol, petes sake, he secretly loved it

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Hate you? **Wonders** Hehe, Drama=Gooooooooooood!
Okay, So after your little teaser, I couldn't help myself to read all of it forgetting all about the quote replies...Yes. Bad me. It was a bit addicting and once I started readed I got sucked into reading on and on. It was actually nothing what I expected to happen. We got back into Lupin's character in HBP when he ran off so that was a plus. I loved the bit with the painting. Your took the words right out of my head and let them out through Tonks. Anyhoo, things are getting interesting,
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This is so very sad. It always affects me to read things like this about Sirius. Very well written.

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“What about this?” Tonks held up a tall urn containing the ashes of some long-dead relative. She placed it carefully in the crate before looking to Remus.
I wonder who it is

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“Wouldn’t want anyone to raise whoever that is, so we’ll hold onto it,” he tossed a metal gauntlet into the trunk, and it clanked ominously against a metallic box and an ugly old locket. “Isn’t it amazing the kinds of things you keep? How much can you tell about a person by looking in their attic or their closets?”
It's true, you can tell a lot about a person. And I bet the things in this house say a lot! This is such a Remus thing to think about too. Again, you are so great at sticking to canon Ern!

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“Stay out of my closets,” Tonks teased, making a face at a particularly gruesome book she’d found before she hurled it into the crate. “It will eat you alive. I don’t hang things up and I don’t fold them, and if it doesn’t smell… it must be clean.”
I'm with Tonks! I hate to fold and hang stuff... hehe

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Remus frowned and visibly shuddered. “Remind me to intervene on behalf of your wardrobe someday. We’ll have a little cleaning party. You’ll love it… there will be shelves and even hooks for your clothes. Hooks! Imagine it.”
bahahahahaha I love this! I like seeing Remus banter a little with her!

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She didn’t know how it happened. One moment she was giggling about her fall, and the next she had moved right into Remus’s arms. Her hands moved into his hair, and she tilted her chin just so… and kissed him. Part of her brain was wondering how she’d ended up like this, and the rest of her brain was wondering why she hadn’t tried it before when it was so absolutely lovely.

He kissed her back. At least, it seemed that he did, because his hand was on the small of her back, drawing her to him, and the other was touching her hair where it was wispy at her temple. It was all too perfect.
Lovely! First kiss!

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“What are you playing at, Tonks? You can’t just… this isn’t a game,” he snapped before he shocked her by turning on his heel and leaving the room. The outer door slamming let her know that he’d left the house altogether.
That whole dialogue after the kiss - so well done! I really do think he would react this way. He would never just give in and want a relationship yet, or feel like he is worthy of her affection. Well, honestly, we know he doesn't give in til the end of HBP. This was awesome!

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Apparently, it also alerted Mrs. Black’s portrait in the front hall. Tonks moved woodenly to pull open the parlor door, which allowed her to hear every word that the portrait screamed. “Mutants! Blood traitors! Out of my house… out out out!” Her words were vile, and Tonks threw her sponge half-heartedly at the picture.
Mrs. Black *sigh* always the same. This item can definitely be left behind. Burn it.

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“I said shut up! You… you horrible horrible creature! Why couldn’t you love him? And even after he spent all those years in Azkaban, and he came back and just wanted to live his life. You still had to make it horrible. You killed him. You did. You and all your kind killed him…” She sniffed loudly and wiped her streaming eyes as she sank to the floor.
See? I'm always so affected by Sirius. You're making me cry. I mean it, I'm crying with Tonks. You captured the emotion so perfectly.

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Mrs. Black was silent as she stared at the sobbing girl before her. With an audible sniff, the curtains around the portrait clicked closed, and Tonks was alone again. She was always alone.
So sad! OMG Ern, I could never hate you for writing something that makes me sad. I expected this post to be dark, given Remus and Tonks' task. You know what it means? You just write this so well, that I feel what the characters do. This was so great! *clings to Ern for comfort*
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I can't believe I haven't checked back on this fic in so long!! So sorry I've been neglecting it.

I'm way too lazy to quote everything I liked, so I'll just leave my comments. LOL.

The scene where Bill announced the engagement was well written. You captured the reactions of the characters very well. And the whole beauty insight part, I absolutely loved it.

The ending of the last update, with Tonks shouting at the Mrs. Black's portrait was brilliant. It was the perfect spot to stop. Especially after the kiss. Not only that, but I love the way Tonks is shouting right back at the portrait. It seems like all her feelings about Sirius have just spilled over and she needed some way to let them out.

One thing I've noticed about your writing so far is your ability to make the transition from a humour situation to a more dramatic one seamlessly. I feel that's one of the hardest things to do as a writer, and it's wonderful to find someone who is able to write those transitions as well as you can.

And again, a million apologies for being so neglectful!
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You all are so super super lovely and sweet and I adore you. You don't know how much it helps me to want to write and update because you are so supportive. Anyway... let me respond to comments, and then I have an announcement.

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[X] I loved some of your original ideas in this, like the whole Polyjuice thing. Very nice
[X] They eventually kissed!!!!
[X] Remus is a meany and an old bat lol, petes sake, he secretly loved it
[X] *hugs poor alone Tonks*
*Thanks... I want this fic to be all my own but to reflect back on what we know to be true in HBP
*You knew they would. Eventually.
*We'll see... don't yell at him. He's my peanut.
*She needs hugs.

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^That was amaizing,I cant belive Remus acted like that,Cant wait for the next post.
How did you expect him to act? *twiddles thumbs* You might have to wait a while .

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Okay, So after your little teaser, I couldn't help myself to read all of it forgetting all about the quote replies...Yes. Bad me. It was a bit addicting and once I started readed I got sucked into reading on and on. It was actually nothing what I expected to happen. We got back into Lupin's character in HBP when he ran off so that was a plus. I loved the bit with the painting. Your took the words right out of my head and let them out through Tonks. Anyhoo, things are getting interesting,
Well... I meant hate because most people want the kissing to be all fluffy and uber sweet, but we know we can't get that just yet. I'm glad you liked Lupin's reaction and Tonks' rant. She surprised me with it, but I can't say that it was totally unexpected.

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Very true! Excellent! I hadn't thought of that, but it would be a danger for some people.
That's what I was thinking about in regards to the "cleaning". Actually not that sure where the sponges came from. Haha.

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This is so very sad. It always affects me to read things like this about Sirius. Very well written.
I don't find Sirius's death as sad as I find his life, but the good bit is that he was defending Harry when he fell. But still... I would wish happiness on the Marauder's, and so far they've had a lot of death and sorrow.

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It's true, you can tell a lot about a person. And I bet the things in this house say a lot! This is such a Remus thing to think about too. Again, you are so great at sticking to canon Ern!
I have this theory that you can tell loads of people by the stuff they keep or carry, and it's fascinating to dig through someone's purse or closet or read the messages in their yearbook. It's like reading between the lines, and I love it.

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That whole dialogue after the kiss - so well done! I really do think he would react this way. He would never just give in and want a relationship yet, or feel like he is worthy of her affection. Well, honestly, we know he doesn't give in til the end of HBP. This was awesome!
Kisses are hard. Really hard to write, so I'm glad you think it turned out well. Remus is easy to write because he's so good and noble, and yet he thinks so little of himself. I sure do love him. *sigh* He's dreamy.

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So sad! OMG Ern, I could never hate you for writing something that makes me sad. I expected this post to be dark, given Remus and Tonks' task. You know what it means? You just write this so well, that I feel what the characters do. This was so great!
I'm glad you cried, 'cause that's how I felt about it. I'm not sure why Tonks seems to separate herself from other people, but she does it often, and then feels so lonely. I suspect she feels alone because of her special powers.

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The ending of the last update, with Tonks shouting at the Mrs. Black's portrait was brilliant. It was the perfect spot to stop. Especially after the kiss. Not only that, but I love the way Tonks is shouting right back at the portrait. It seems like all her feelings about Sirius have just spilled over and she needed some way to let them out.

One thing I've noticed about your writing so far is your ability to make the transition from a humour situation to a more dramatic one seamlessly. I feel that's one of the hardest things to do as a writer, and it's wonderful to find someone who is able to write those transitions as well as you can.
No fear, dear one... I'm just glad you came back to catch up. Any comments you leave are a bonus.

As for Tonks and Mrs. Black... I know that Tonks has a lot of emotions, and she wears them right out there, as we'll probably see as we progress further. Like I said above... I was a bit shocked by her outburst, but in the end, I should have known she'd react that way.

I think transitions are something I struggle with, so I'm glad that you think I do a good job of it. I want humor to color my work, because that's just the way JK herself writes. It's the serious stuff that comes harder for me. Again... thanks .




Okay, so here's the deal. I'm taking a short hiatus from my fic. But don't panic... I'm taking a break so that I can make a small gift for my faithful and lovely readers. I want to offer each of you who have read and posted for me a small personal ficlet/drabble. If you're interested, please PM me the following and I'll post your fic in another thread:

*Your favorite ship OR three of your favorite characters. I'll love you forever if you step outside the box.
*A scene you've always wanted to see played out OR three objects I have to use in the ficlet/drabble.

I love you all!
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