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Old 01-16-2006, 01:02 AM   #51 (permalink)

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Well... *hides* I'm posting anyway. It's long, but there's a lot that goes on.




Bill had at least the decency to look embarrassed at Fleur’s apparently unintentional rudeness. He looked around in discomfort before clearing his throat and rising to his feet, glass in hand.

“A toast?” Arthur questioned, already smiling and raising his glass as well.

“An announcement, actually,” Bill looked so uncomfortable, and Tonks wondered fleetingly why she’d thought him so brave and spontaneous. This was his family. What was he on about? “I thought that since we’re all together, this would be an excellent time for me to announce that I’ve asked Fleur to marry me. And she said yes.” He smiled fondly at Fleur before sitting.

The sound of Tonks’ fork hitting her plate when she dropped it could be clearly heard over the absolute silence in the room. Fleur smiled grandly, clearly ready to be welcomed to the family, and when welcome did not come, she flipped her hair and picked up her glass of water for a dainty sip.

“Of course, we must wait until next summer to marry so zat I ‘ave time to get ready. I am needing a dress, and we must find a place to ‘ave the ceremony and party. Ze ‘ouse is far too small for ze wedding my Bill ‘as promised me.” She blew him a kiss across the table. It was like some sort of awful joke, with this conceited woman and an awkward Bill and the family just staring.

Molly made a choking sound, coming to life for the first time. “Ceremony? Married… you can’t just…” Her eyes darted from Bill to Fleur before sweeping to Tonks. She could feel Molly’s blame and recrimination. With a wail, Molly pushed back from the table and escaped into the living room. Arthur followed.

“Mum is really happy,” Ginny nodded, piling potatoes on her plate. Ron stared stupidly at Fleur’s hair until Ginny poked him with her fork. He jumped. “Happy,” Ron mumbled.

“Yeah, she always cries when she’s happy,” Fred rolled his eyes and started to fill his plate. George nodded. “Sometimes she even shouts incoherently and gets really red in the face. Ecstatic.”

“Excuse me,” Tonks pushed her chair back as well and escaped in an entirely different direction than Molly and Arthur. She let the kitchen door slam behind her, and the temperature change hit her full force. It was summer, but the weather had been unusually damp and foggy. Tonks knew the reason for it, but on this evening, it was welcome after the hot kitchen and the hotter stress-filled moments within it.

The moonlight lit the backyard, making it almost as bright as day. Tonks slid down on the stoop and buried her face from the beauty of it. She didn’t want to think about the moonlight, although a part of her was aware of exactly how many days until the full moon.

The kitchen door slammed shut behind Tonks, and she kept her face buried from Remus’s intrusion. She should have known he’d come. “Don’t cry, Tonks,” he patted her back and sat on the stoop next to her.

“I’m not crying,” her voice was muffled by her sleeve being pressed against her mouth, but he understood her words regardless.

“Of course you aren’t,” he patted her back again before continuing. “I just hate to see you so upset about this Bill thing…”

Tonks sat up so quickly Remus nearly fell off the steps. The look of blazing anger on her face clearly surprised him. “Upset about Bill? Don’t be an idiot, Lupin. I’m upset that I was invited here tonight and made to feel as if I were wanted as a friend, rather than intended as some sort of distraction to keep Bill from his little creampuff. I’m upset that somehow this is my fault for not being good enough for Bill Weasley.”

She trailed off, her frustration and anger making a liar of her. Angry tears crept down her face. Remus brushed them away with his thumb. “First off, don’t call me Lupin as if you’re angry with me as well. And second off… you know Molly is fond of you. Don’t blame her for what she does in her grief. You should be flattered she wanted you as a daughter-in-law.”

Tonks sniffed and leaned her head against his shoulder. “I suppose. Only… let me be upset about it for a little bit longer. I don’t want to go back in there and deal with the creampuff just yet.”

Remus chuckled at her, and she felt his fingers on her navy curls. “You’re sure this isn’t jealousy? Aren’t you in love with Bill after all?”

“Love?” Tonks tilted her head on his shoulder to give him an ironic look. “No. I mean… I don’t know. My heart isn’t broken, so I don’t suppose I do care for Bill in that way. Maybe the most effective way for me to get over him was for him to choose a girl like… that. I guess the Bill I thought he was didn’t turn out to be the Bill he really was.”

“Try that again, but this time try to make sense,” Remus encouraged, pressing his cheek against her forehead. He was so warm, and it felt nice in the chilly night air.

“I think I kind of made him to be more than he was. I had a crush on this adventurous, mysterious man, but I filled in all the blanks to make him… someone I could love. But in the end, he proved he wasn’t who I thought he was simply because he picked Fleur. What does she have aside from remarkable good looks?”

“Not a single thing,” Remus admitted, and Tonks could feel his smile against her forehead. She smiled in response, feeling light. “Do you want to get out of here?”

“Shouldn’t we go back inside?” She didn’t move, content to just lean against him and soak up his warmth. This had been a rather nice evening in spite of things.

“Under the circumstances, I think we should run far away. We’re going to live through a year of these awkward family dinners, so we might as well skip out while we still can. Let’s make a date to meet in a few days. I need help clearing Order things out of Grimmauld.” Remus tried to sound so jocular, but his grip told Tonks that he was dreading the trip to Sirius’s family home.

“It’s a date,” she smiled at her words.
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Great, post...It's a great story since we get to look in places JK has told us so little about. Places we want answers for and to see. If I were Bill I would have taken Tonks but I am sort of glad he didn't so now Remus has someone. Remus is one of my favorite character and I do hope he finds happiness.
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Ahhhhhhh Bill, I do have trouble seeing what he sees in Fleur. Even after... well... you know, I wasn't totally buying Fleur. "Apparently" unintentional. I wonder.

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“An announcement, actually,” Bill looked so uncomfortable, and Tonks wondered fleetingly why she’d thought him so brave and spontaneous. This was his family. What was he on about? “I thought that since we’re all together, this would be an excellent time for me to announce that I’ve asked Fleur to marry me. And she said yes.” He smiled fondly at Fleur before sitting.
Oh, but I think he is brave, dropping news like that ! After what she just said?

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The sound of Tonks’ fork hitting her plate when she dropped it could be clearly heard over the absolute silence in the room. Fleur smiled grandly, clearly ready to be welcomed to the family, and when welcome did not come, she flipped her hair and picked up her glass of water for a dainty sip.
I love your timing! The way you led up to the humor! I could just perfectly picture that! The announcement then *clank* of the fork and Fleur's reaction - priceless!

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“Of course, we must wait until next summer to marry so zat I ‘ave time to get ready. I am needing a dress, and we must find a place to ‘ave the ceremony and party. Ze ‘ouse is far too small for ze wedding my Bill ‘as promised me.” She blew him a kiss across the table. It was like some sort of awful joke, with this conceited woman and an awkward Bill and the family just staring.
OMG! How much of this is clueless on Fleur's part? Or does she just enjoy the reaction she is getting? She's got to know! This is so how I picture her.

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Molly made a choking sound, coming to life for the first time. “Ceremony? Married… you can’t just…” Her eyes darted from Bill to Fleur before sweeping to Tonks. She could feel Molly’s blame and recrimination. With a wail, Molly pushed back from the table and escaped into the living room. Arthur followed.
Poor Molly! Poor Arthur actually! He has to make peace now...

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“Mum is really happy,” Ginny nodded, piling potatoes on her plate. Ron stared stupidly at Fleur’s hair until Ginny poked him with her fork. He jumped. “Happy,” Ron mumbled.

“Yeah, she always cries when she’s happy,” Fred rolled his eyes and started to fill his plate. George nodded. “Sometimes she even shouts incoherently and gets really red in the face. Ecstatic.”
You see? Timing again! You go from drama back to the humor and it plays out so well! Your dialogue is awesome! hehehe Ginny, Fred and George's comments are spot on! Loved it!

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She didn’t want to think about the moonlight, although a part of her was aware of exactly how many days until the full moon.
Is there an unconscious reason she knows this? methinks yes...

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Tonks sat up so quickly Remus nearly fell off the steps. The look of blazing anger on her face clearly surprised him. “Upset about Bill? Don’t be an idiot, Lupin. I’m upset that I was invited here tonight and made to feel as if I were wanted as a friend, rather than intended as some sort of distraction to keep Bill from his little creampuff. I’m upset that somehow this is my fault for not being good enough for Bill Weasley.”
I completely understand where she is coming from!

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She trailed off, her frustration and anger making a liar of her. Angry tears crept down her face. Remus brushed them away with his thumb. “First off, don’t call me Lupin as if you’re angry with me as well. And second off… you know Molly is fond of you. Don’t blame her for what she does in her grief. You should be flattered she wanted you as a daughter-in-law.”
But I'm glad he gave it back to her a bit! A reality check to show who she is talking to and he's right.

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“Try that again, but this time try to make sense,” Remus encouraged, pressing his cheek against her forehead. He was so warm, and it felt nice in the chilly night air.
And he touched her hair before too!

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“I think I kind of made him to be more than he was. I had a crush on this adventurous, mysterious man, but I filled in all the blanks to make him… someone I could love. But in the end, he proved he wasn’t who I thought he was simply because he picked Fleur. What does she have aside from remarkable good looks?”

“Not a single thing,” Remus admitted, and Tonks could feel his smile against her forehead. She smiled in response, feeling light. “Do you want to get out of here?”
This was such a great moment! And I know what she means... it can be easy to fall in love with an idea... what we think we want...

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“It’s a date,” she smiled at her words.
that's gonna be a rough one. Wow. Grimmauld. But I really look forward to what may be revealed...

*tackles Ern* Thank you for posting! And you so didn't need to hide! This was awesome! I love this fic! I am so hooked!
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She didn’t want to think about the moonlight, although a part of her was aware of exactly how many days until the full moon.
Is this a hint for later?
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but it doesn't rhyme!!! *slapself* just kiddin, I just finished reading the whole thing in one sitting (do I get a gold star?) and I love it. As usual, you're doing a wonderful job at developing what we "think" will happen by the time we get to HBP. And a much more wonderful way to travel there when you take us than to see how JKR just jumped to the relationship between Lupin and Tonks. Nice start. I solemnly swear to read as you update instead of waiting from now on......."mischief managed"
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This i just THE backgroundstory to Tonks/Lupin and they match perfectly. I so want to see the follow-up.
Cassirin, you're a genius coming up with this.
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The face Remus was making now… now that one she couldn’t read.
:O I always thought Fleur was awesome in GOF. But then in HBP it seemed she was this little oddball that kept showing up at the wrong times. Ever since then I haven’t liked her. The way you wrote her was....So cannon. At least in my eyes....Now as for the Fleur lovers out there... Haha...
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THE MORE THE MERRIER! Lmao, Seriously if you ever have extra posts, please it’d do us a great favor instead of waiting....((Well, I plan to get my act together and catch these updates when you first post them instead of the slowness lately)) Then again, many great writers know that making us wait is bittersweet... Whatever you choose is fine....

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Awwwwwwwwww....I feel sorry for him. I’m sorry but I have no idea what he sees in her aside from beauty. It’s not that I hate her **Cough** It’s just that I don’t get her...Sometimes she may seem cool, ((In instance end of HBP)) but the rest of the time she’s just too snobby to care.
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**Cough** Let the madness begin....**Cough** Poor Bill...
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It was like some sort of awful joke, with this conceited woman and an awkward Bill and the family just staring.
EXACTLY my sum-up of the scene....Haha, I’m loving the way you write her though. At least this way, I know it’s not only me that sees her in this way. **Hides from all the Fleur fans** Haha, this is so funny because my sister got engaged a couple months ago and this is almost identical to it. It’s great that you add a bit of normality and such. Then again, I was rooting for a little more magic to be involved...Would’ve loved some silverware accidently thrown into Fleurs hair....
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“Mum is really happy,” Ginny nodded, piling potatoes on her plate. Ron stared stupidly at Fleur’s hair until Ginny poked him with her fork. He jumped. “Happy,” Ron mumbled.
HAHA.... Finally, a word from them. I was actually beggining to think they weren’t going to have any say in this... *Grins** Wonder where Fred and George are...
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Yeah, she always cries when she’s happy,” Fred rolled his eyes and started to fill his plate. George nodded. “Sometimes she even shouts incoherently and gets really red in the face. Ecstatic
See, that’s the greatness about this, you’ve played all your cards right. I mean, it’s pretty obvious what each character will do but you have it where we’re still entertained. Something new with a bit of something old gets right on the spot...The only character’s reaction as of this point that I’m clueless on is Lupin...I mean, will he act annoyed since we know he likes her? Or what will Tonks do? **Continues reading and shuts up**
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Excuse me,” Tonks pushed her chair back as well and escaped in an entirely different direction than Molly and Arthur.
. . . Okay, somewhat different from what I thought would happen but similar...But, for some reason I’m having doubts that Lupin will follow.
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“Of course you aren’t,” he patted her back again before continuing. “I just hate to see you so upset about this Bill thing…”
Bill thing? So typical Then again, what would he say? Fleur thing? That would’ve surely given Tonks a reason to let off some steam...But is it just me or does Tonks like Bill a bit more than canon? I always thought she had a “crush” on him but I never thought she’d be crushed over the news of his marriage...Then again that’s love...But did Tonks LOVE Bill? I don’t think so.
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Upset about Bill? Don’t be an idiot, Lupin. I’m upset that I was invited here tonight and made to feel as if I were wanted as a friend.
There we go. That’s mucho more like it...Haha...Then again maybe this is a cover? **Hopes not**
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Tonks sniffed and leaned her head against his shoulder. “I suppose. Only… let me be upset about it for a little bit longer. I don’t want to go back in there and deal with the creampuff just yet
Creampuff? Just as Phlegm....Haha...What would Fleur say to her? She better apologize...
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Maybe the most effective way for me to get over him was for him to choose a girl like… that. I guess the Bill I thought he was didn’t turn out to be the Bill he really was.”
Haha, Who wouldn’t? I feel sorry for her...I also feel sorry for Bill. Then again, maybe they make each other whole? [/end cheesy line] Who knows? All I know is this little convo between Lupin and Tonks is too cute for words! I mean I had to read over the paragraph to actually catch on to the chemistry between them. **Reads it again and Squees**
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Let’s make a date to meet in a few days. I need help clearing Order things out of Grimmauld.” Remus tried to sound so jocular, but his grip told Tonks that he was dreading the trip to Sirius’s family home.

“It’s a date,” she smiled at her words.
**SNIFFS** Sorry, I didn’t like the end. How could they even think about having a date cleaning out my Siry’s things? **Sniffs** I’m gonna be a grouch though the next update... Though I love the Mauraders more than all the hp characters, Siry tops them all...And I just never liked the end of Ootp. But, you’d think that Tonks would be a bit more sympathetic towards her cousins death...It’s considered love as well...Pfft, maybe she’s just “in the moment” as they say.

Anyhoo, Great Update! Can’t wait for more!

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Great, post...It's a great story since we get to look in places JK has told us so little about. Places we want answers for and to see. If I were Bill I would have taken Tonks but I am sort of glad he didn't so now Remus has someone. Remus is one of my favorite character and I do hope he finds happiness.
The thing about Bill is... he isn't all that Tonks thought he was. How could he be if he liked the creampuff? HM? *snuggles* I"m glad you're reading.

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She isn't clueless so much as hungry for constant attention and approval, I think. I hate to say it, and humanize her, but I think she's... a little insecure. *gasp*

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That's the beauty of my Remus. He can handle my Tonks. I wonder if anyone else can.

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that's gonna be a rough one. Wow. Grimmauld. But I really look forward to what may be revealed...

*tackles Ern* Thank you for posting! And you so didn't need to hide! This was awesome! I love this fic! I am so hooked!
SOMEthing probably will be revealed. You're my slave-driving biggest fan person. Hahaha.

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Is this a hint for later?
Well... it isn't exaclty a mystery who she'll end up with... but yeah!

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but it doesn't rhyme!!! *slapself* just kiddin, I just finished reading the whole thing in one sitting (do I get a gold star?) and I love it. As usual, you're doing a wonderful job at developing what we "think" will happen by the time we get to HBP. And a much more wonderful way to travel there when you take us than to see how JKR just jumped to the relationship between Lupin and Tonks. Nice start. I solemnly swear to read as you update instead of waiting from now on......."mischief managed"
If it rhymed... I'd stink. So... you're actually quite lucky. *huggles* Thank you for reading my fic! I can't wait to hear your thoughts on my updates.

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This i just THE backgroundstory to Tonks/Lupin and they match perfectly. I so want to see the follow-up.
Cassirin, you're a genius coming up with this.
Oh and I follow some storylines, not every twist of your mind or I'd be on a seriously big rollercoastter.
I would love to hear your thoughts some time. Seriously. *snuggles*
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*New Reader Alert Sirens Go Off* Excellent Work, Ern, darl. Keep it up. Excellent descriptions, thrilling plot and all. Beautifully constructed ficcie, this one. Yayness!!! I should have checked it out earlier. I have to go to the airport now, so I'll post a longer review later.



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Yes.... the Fleur lovers out there will hate me, but... I'd love to read a Fleur story in which she is portrayed realistically and accurately instead of as some sort of symbol of all that is good and lovely and French in the world.

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EXACTLY my sum-up of the scene....Haha, I’m loving the way you write her though. At least this way, I know it’s not only me that sees her in this way. **Hides from all the Fleur fans** Haha, this is so funny because my sister got engaged a couple months ago and this is almost identical to it. It’s great that you add a bit of normality and such. Then again, I was rooting for a little more magic to be involved...Would’ve loved some silverware accidently thrown into Fleurs hair....
No, no... we have to be NICE to our future sister-in-law, silly bunny. I'm glad this seems realistic to you. It's hard sometimes to meet that line that JK meets... realism in an entirely unrealistic world.

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See, that’s the greatness about this, you’ve played all your cards right. I mean, it’s pretty obvious what each character will do but you have it where we’re still entertained. Something new with a bit of something old gets right on the spot...The only character’s reaction as of this point that I’m clueless on is Lupin...I mean, will he act annoyed since we know he likes her? Or what will Tonks do? **Continues reading and shuts up**
I'm glad you post comments as you read, because it lets me know what you think as you think them. I love the Weasleys and I wish I could fit them in more... I'll try. I will.

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But is it just me or does Tonks like Bill a bit more than canon? I always thought she had a “crush” on him but I never thought she’d be crushed over the news of his marriage...Then again that’s love...But did Tonks LOVE Bill? I don’t think so.
I will never NEVER take you outside of canon. I promise. However, I might take you outside of your interpretation of canon. I don't know if JK intended Tonks to crush on Bill, but he seemed like a pretty boy idol type... so I thought she just might. I'm working on the progression here, so I need some conflict.

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Who knows? All I know is this little convo between Lupin and Tonks is too cute for words! I mean I had to read over the paragraph to actually catch on to the chemistry between them. **Reads it again and Squees**
Yup, gots to read carefully. What they're saying and what they're doing contradict each other sometimes.

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But, you’d think that Tonks would be a bit more sympathetic towards her cousins death...It’s considered love as well...Pfft, maybe she’s just “in the moment” as they say.
I hate that you think so little of Tonks, and of me for writing her that way . I thought it was clear that Lupin was inviting her along because he needed the company... and as for Tonks, she's pleased by the invite. Sirius's death is hard on her. I love your input *huggle*.

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Hi! I absolutely love this story. The detail that you go into for specific characters is fantastic. The Tonks and Lupin "ship" is my absolute favorite. Keep it up. I look forward to the next post.
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