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Old 01-04-2006, 04:20 AM   #26 (permalink)

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Yhis has by far been the most fun update to write. Oops. *claps hands over her mouth* I'll just go over there and let you read it... *mumblemumble*



For all of Molly Weasley’s more charming attributes, there was no escaping that she was a bit of a nag. Her family and friends could dress it up and call it hard-headedness or stubbornness, but in the end, she was still a nag. Perhaps she was only like this with those she loved, but it didn’t make it any easier for Tonks when the third owl arrived.

“Frippery and feathers, Tonks, this isn’t the bloody social club. Can you kindly have your personal mail delivered elsewhere?” She glanced at the irate man glaring over the cubicle wall at her before tossing the unread note into a pile.

“Calm yourself, Savage. Your face is almost as purple as my hairstyle, and no one’s face is naturally that color. If you keel over, I won’t bother to call the Healers. I’ll just knock down the wall between our desks and get myself a bit of room.” The man made a loud hmph before disappearing again behind his desk.

It wasn’t that Tonks disliked the Weasleys. To the contrary, they were a taste of the home life she missed so dreadfully. Still, everytime she got near them, she broke something or fell over something, and Molly would get that terrible wearied look on her face. Almost as if she couldn’t wait for Tonks to get out of the house so she could go over things with a Correcting Spell to put them back in order. Life was hard enough without feeling wrong all the time.

“If ye keep threatenin’ yer coworkers, no one will watch yer back in the field,” a raspy voice told her sagely. Tonks grinned and spun her chair to face Moody. “Come on then, girlie. Don’t have all day to waste flappin’ m’gums.”

Tonks gave a cheeky grin and kicked her legs up on the filing cabinet, crossed at the ankle. She admired her dragon skin boots studiously. “Where are we going, Mad Eye? Bit of a trek for Death Eaters? Extra training venture?” Her stomach was churning with anticipation.

“Supper,” he tapped her feet with his peg leg, causing them to fall from the cabinet top. “At the Burrow. Molly sent me to fetch ye, said yer ignoring her owls. Wut’s a smart girl like you doin’ that fer?”

Tonks made a face and started to organize the mass of warrants that had collected on her desk. “I’m not hungry, and it’s unfair to come in here and make me think we’ve got an adventure brewing. I got all excited for nothing. I almost changed my hair color in your honor.” She made a pouty face and refused to make eye contact. It wasn’t her most professional demeanor, and she didn’t want to look up and catch a look of dismay on her mentor’s face.

“Molly said ye’d be tough as a stubborn puffapod to crack. She was right.” He shook his head and Tonks looked up to watch his crazy eye roll around in his head to check the vicinity.

“But puffapods are easy to crack. You just drop them on the ground and they…”

“Jes so,” Moody nodded, stumping out of her cubicle to look up and down the aisle specutively. “And so are ye. I’m to tell you that young William will be joining us fer supper tonight.” He paused and sniffed the air before clomping down the corridor.

Tonks jumped to her feet and peered out the corridor after him. He had stopped and was tasting a bit of pumpkin bread someone had left sitting on the table in the common area. Moody took a bite, spit it out, and then ate an entire slice in two mouthfuls. “Oh,” she answered, rather pathetically.

“Oh?” He turned but didn’t move back down the corridor towards her. “Oh?”

“What time is supper?”
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An update! (acts all surprised hehe) Dang it, missed it by like 20 minutes last night!

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hehehe *huggles*

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For all of Molly Weasley’s more charming attributes, there was no escaping that she was a bit of a nag. Her family and friends could dress it up and call it hard-headedness or stubbornness, but in the end, she was still a nag.
You have such a great way with words. This description played out so perfectly. Right on target on Molly and so funny!

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“Calm yourself, Savage. Your face is almost as purple as my hairstyle, and no one’s face is naturally that color. If you keel over, I won’t bother to call the Healers. I’ll just knock down the wall between our desks and get myself a bit of room.” The man made a loud hmph before disappearing again behind his desk.
Buahahahahahahahahahaha!

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It wasn’t that Tonks disliked the Weasleys. To the contrary, they were a taste of the home life she missed so dreadfully. Still, everytime she got near them, she broke something or fell over something, and Molly would get that terrible wearied look on her face. Almost as if she couldn’t wait for Tonks to get out of the house so she could go over things with a Correcting Spell to put them back in order. Life was hard enough without feeling wrong all the time.
So much insight here. I can really picture that she would feel this way. We have such limited information on her in canon, but using what we have, I like how you flesh her out and let us see how she must feel. I especially love that last line.

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Tonks made a face and started to organize the mass of warrants that had collected on her desk. “I’m not hungry, and it’s unfair to come in here and make me think we’ve got an adventure brewing. I got all excited for nothing. I almost changed my hair color in your honor.” She made a pouty face and refused to make eye contact. It wasn’t her most professional demeanor, and she didn’t want to look up and catch a look of dismay on her mentor’s face.
Using humor to cover up how she feels, reminds me a bit of her cousin too... Well they were raised by similar people... I really like how you wrote this.

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Molly said ye’d be tough as a stubborn puffapod to crack. She was right.” He shook his head and Tonks looked up to watch his crazy eye roll around in his head to check the vicinity.

But puffapods are easy to crack. You just drop them on the ground and they…”

Jes so,” Moody nodded, stumping out of her cubicle to look up and down the aisle specutively. “And so are ye. I’m to tell you that young William will be joining us fer supper tonight.” He paused and sniffed the air before clomping down the corridor.
I love it! More humor and insight and so much meaning here. And a hint at Molly's plot to fix Tonks and Bill up and get rid of Phlegm. hehehehehe

This was a great post! I can tell you had fun with it, and I had a lot of fun reading!

*anticipates more*

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Oooooh! I agree!
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Haha, It's these kind of things that really get me into a fic...I'm one of the few who love ALL cliffies...But in this case, you're just teasing **Continues reading**

Well, For one- Awesome update! It was hilarious! I like how your fic is getting a bit looser..Humor like you used is always a plus!
You have all your characters in canon and the fic is finally heating up...
We all know what Mrs.Weasley is planning but I'm sure you have much more suprises planned out.
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I love Tonk's attitude and the humor she has. And like Kris, totally can't wait for you to be published tee hee.
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william? Did I miss out on a character? Or are you brewing on something? Or is William = Bill? Mmmm,nice update.
*whistles* I'm brewing. Always brewing. Thanks for the praise.

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*giggles* I loved that update. I can't wait for more more more!!!! (and that novel )
You're a tease. Think they'll let me write my first novel about Tonks. Does JK loan out her characters? Hmm?

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An update! (acts all surprised hehe) Dang it, missed it by like 20 minutes last night!
I warned you in advance and everything. You should never sleep. Point learned.

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So much insight here. I can really picture that she would feel this way. We have such limited information on her in canon, but using what we have, I like how you flesh her out and let us see how she must feel. I especially love that last line.
I don't think I realized until I started writing how much I understand Tonks in some ways. I'm fairly clumsy and socially awkward at times, and sometimes as much as I want to be with people, I'm just TIRED of feeling like I'm wrong or doing it wrong. So I feel that part of her. *holds her*

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Using humor to cover up how she feels, reminds me a bit of her cousin too... Well they were raised by similar people... I really like how you wrote this.
I think Tonks is FULL of unprofessional quirks. Hehe. Tonks is totally a product of her parents, and I hope I get a chance to flesh that out later. I know them, because I know Tonks, but it hasn't really been appropriate to talk about them yet. Hm. Nor her relationship with Sirius. We shall see how it all progresses.

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I love it! More humor and insight and so much meaning here. And a hint at Molly's plot to fix Tonks and Bill up and get rid of Phlegm. hehehehehe

This was a great post! I can tell you had fun with it, and I had a lot of fun reading!
Molly is fun, but Phlegm herself will be funner. ACK! SPOILER! *dies* And funner isn't even a word. MURPH.

I did have loads of fun, and I was hoping it would be fun for everyone to read. I love dialogue SO.

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Haha, It's these kind of things that really get me into a fic...I'm one of the few who love ALL cliffies...But in this case, you're just teasing **Continues reading**
Is it possible to really write this fic with a cliffie? I mean... you know where I'll end up. I'll just have to try to surprise you all along the way.

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Well, For one- Awesome update! It was hilarious! I like how your fic is getting a bit looser..Humor like you used is always a plus!
It's always been easier for me to write humor and/or irony. I'm glad you thought I was funny, and I'm really glad the voice of the fic is getting easier to read. Tonks is living in my head!

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You have all your characters in canon and the fic is finally heating up...
We all know what Mrs.Weasley is planning but I'm sure you have much more suprises planned out.
You know what Molly is planning, but do you know what Tonks is thinking? Hehehe. It's about the greatest compliment that you think my characters are all in canon. Thank you!

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Wow, what a compliment. Thank you. I'm a total English nerd, so my grammar and spelling are insanely anal. Hehe. As I said to Tina, I'm very flattered that you find me to be within canon. JK gave us so much to work with... and it makes me crazy when people do so very non-canony things with her characters. If I put Snape in a pink tux and cut his hair, he stops being Snape. And then he stops being interesting.

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OMG that is so awesoneney!!! *blushes at sight of own fic * that is... OMG just so brilliant, I love it *faints*
If you link me up, I'll check it out. Thank you so much for reading and for being such a sweetie. I bet your fic is lovely .

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EEEEEE love love love love! Soooo good! *fangirl squee* tee hee

*huggles you*

I love Tonk's attitude and the humor she has. And like Kris, totally can't wait for you to be published tee hee.
My fangirl! YAY! *huggles back*

I love Tonks' and I'm SO sad that I'm going to have to do mean things to her. I hope she stays light hearted enough to keep me from strangling Her Royal Angstiness, or... bad things will happen.


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So you're brewing, eh?

I can see why you had fun writing this post. I've noticed some underlying humor in your previous posts, but this one was just outright funny. It was a nice and clean mood change.

One thing I love about your writing is your grammar. It is so refreshing to find a well-written fic that is easy to read and flows well because it's grammatically correct. So kudos for that.

I want to know whe you get published.
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Always, always. My little brain is always spinning. I plot in the shower, in the car, at work... I'm so productive *sigh*

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I can see why you had fun writing this post. I've noticed some underlying humor in your previous posts, but this one was just outright funny. It was a nice and clean mood change.
The humor is actually easier for me than the drama, action, or angst, so I'm glad that you think my sense of humor is funny. The mood has changed, and I'm concerned that this will end up being an angsty fic. Tonks is dark in HBP... but I'm hoping I can still play out her sarcastic, ironic side.

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One thing I love about your writing is your grammar. It is so refreshing to find a well-written fic that is easy to read and flows well because it's grammatically correct. So kudos for that.
I was almost an English major and I was an editor for several things in high school. I've got it so deeply ingrained that I proof read people's work without asking now. I couldn't write this and not do it right, but I really appreciate that this is a major draw for you. I know I like to read fics that are clearly presented as well.


I appreciate your comments... now tell me your names, and no one gets hurt *threatens*
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I think it is wonderful that you can make up such a wonderful story I jus love it. Can wait to read the rest.
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Lala... *sigh* My brain has malfunctioned, but here is the first half of this scene. The second half is lodged somewhere in my brain and no amount of headhitting will call it forth.




“If you touch me with your wand again, I’m going to take it away from you,” Remus scolded Molly with mock severity. He elbowed her gently, and Molly turned a brilliant shade of red before resuming her job of ushering the crowd to the table. It was Molly’s constant desire to patch Remus’s robes, and he always caught her in it.

Tonks laughed and followed the crowd. It was a good sized group; five Weasley children and three extra Order members made the crowd rowdy. Oh, and there was also Bill’s young protégée. She had veela good looks, and she kept flipping her head of silvery hair around as if to make sure everyone saw it. Tonks rolled her eyes.

Metamorphagii had perhaps a more healthy view on human beauty than the average Witch or Wizard. What did it mean to be really beautiful anyway? Tonks could change her nose and eyes and hair and even her figure to look just like this pretty girl, but she’d still be Tonks no matter what she looked like. If beauty was that easy to fake, if it really had no indication of who she really was, then it wasn’t worth having. She had never wished to be beautiful, and she never missed it.

The group bustled about the table, and Molly pulled Tonks out of one chair and stuck her into another quite forcibly. Fleur huffed as Tonks now filled the spot next to Bill. She proceeded to flounce around the table to swing gracefully into the chair across from him. The young woman had a strange affect on those around her. Ron kept dropping silverware. Moody actually took out his eyeball to polish it before offering her a sip from his flask. Remus stared fixedly ahead at a spot on Tonks’ plate. In fact, he stared so hard that Molly got nervous and performed a washing charm just in case he was eyeing the miniscule amounts of dirt.

Remus’s eyes rose to meet Tonks’, and she could tell most of what he was thinking. It was no secret that she had a bit of a crush on Bill Weasley. At least… she hoped it was a secret from Bill, but most everyone else seemed to know. It had to be the earring and the ponytail, but it was mostly that he was a bit dangerous and unpredictable. She liked that.

Fleur sipped from her glass as if she were a princess holding a champagne flute. Tonks dropped her cup and mopped up the liquid as Molly sighed. “I ‘ave ‘eard all about you, Tonks,” Fleur shaped her name like rocks clunking together. “Bill, ‘e is telling me zese great zings, but ‘ere I am thinking… ‘e was a very naughty boy. ‘e was making me think you were… ‘ow do you say? I thought you would be prettier.”

The face Remus was making now… now that one she couldn’t read.
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grrrr... I never really liked Fleur. I think you did a great job of summing her up. I also liked your mini-treatise on beauty. Very well done.

*waits for part 2 of scene whatever we're on*
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A post ! *loves on the Ern for being a better person then me*

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Lala... *sigh* My brain has malfunctioned, but here is the first half of this scene. The second half is lodged somewhere in my brain and no amount of headhitting will call it forth.
NoooOOooO! Don't do that!

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“If you touch me with your wand again, I’m going to take it away from you,” Remus scolded Molly with mock severity. He elbowed her gently, and Molly turned a brilliant shade of red before resuming her job of ushering the crowd to the table. It was Molly’s constant desire to patch Remus’s robes, and he always caught her in it.
Buahahahahahaha ! I love it! I never would have thought of that, but I could so see it happening!

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It sounds like fun! I wanna go!

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Enter Phlegm! hehehe

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I just love this paragraph. Wonderful insight! And again, I never would have thought of it that way, but it seems so natural and "oh yeah, of course she thinks that!" when you write it. Are you channeling Tonks?

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The plot !

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Remus’s eyes rose to meet Tonks’, and she could tell most of what he was thinking. It was no secret that she had a bit of a crush on Bill Weasley. At least… she hoped it was a secret from Bill, but most everyone else seemed to know. It had to be the earring and the ponytail, but it was mostly that he was a bit dangerous and unpredictable. She liked that.
So she does have a crush on him. I would too! In fact, I think I do... hehe

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Fleur sipped from her glass as if she were a princess holding a champagne flute. Tonks dropped her cup and mopped up the liquid as Molly sighed. “I ‘ave ‘eard all about you, Tonks,” Fleur shaped her name like rocks clunking together. “Bill, ‘e is telling me zese great zings, but ‘ere I am thinking… ‘e was a very naughty boy. ‘e was making me think you were… ‘ow do you say? I thought you would be prettier.”
That Fleur!!! I hate people who do that. Start off sounding like a compliment and then insulting you. Grrrr...

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Ooohh I think I know!

Thank you for the update! Now don't hit your head anymore! The rest will come! And I look forward to it!
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OMGeesh, you update to quickly lol. I love it all, like seriously. You have got Tonks down to a perfect 'T', clumsy-ness and all. I love the way you play Fleur and that last line was certainly a Fleur thing to say lol. Also I loved Molly placing Tonks beside Bill, how sneaky of her

Keep up the good work mah Ern *schnuggle*
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Well, definitely can't wait for the next one, but I think I start to understand your brewing ,though. Keep up.
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Hiya new reader here,This is a great fic,I love Tonks.

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grrrr... I never really liked Fleur. I think you did a great job of summing her up. I also liked your mini-treatise on beauty. Very well done.
I'm not her biggest fan. She's fun to write though, and I think it would be interesting to write an entire fic from her perspective in which she was... as JK intended instead of some frilly little VeelaSue. As for my treatise, that's Tonks. All Tonks.

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Buahahahahahaha ! I love it! I never would have thought of that, but I could so see it happening!
I think Molly mothers anyone she can, and we only get to see her doing it to Harry. Poor Remus... I think he's too proud to let anyone take care of him.

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I just love this paragraph. Wonderful insight! And again, I never would have thought of it that way, but it seems so natural and "oh yeah, of course she thinks that!" when you write it. Are you channeling Tonks?
The answer is... yes! I think I am, and it scares me. I just can't see her getting bent out of shape about how she looks when she knows how unimportant looks are.

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That Fleur!!! I hate people who do that. Start off sounding like a compliment and then insulting you. Grrrr...
Seriously... Fleur is all manipulative girl. What does that Bill see in her? Oh wait... we'll get to that, I think.

And Lis... I promise to behave and not hit my head anymore. Yup.

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OMGeesh, you update to quickly lol. I love it all, like seriously. You have got Tonks down to a perfect 'T', clumsy-ness and all. I love the way you play Fleur and that last line was certainly a Fleur thing to say lol. Also I loved Molly placing Tonks beside Bill, how sneaky of her
*snuggles back* I'll slow down for you, Lee. *ties hands together* I'm glad you like my Tonks. She's growing on me, that's for sure. She loves Molly, in spite of her meddling.

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Well, definitely can't wait for the next one, but I think I start to understand your brewing ,though. Keep up.
If you know what's going on, you should let me in on it. I hope you don't really understand the twists and turns of my mind... it's a scary place!

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Hiya new reader here,This is a great fic,I love Tonks.
Aw, thanks, Helen. I'm glad you liked the fic, and Tonks is one of my favorites as well. Thanks for reading!
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So... here's the thing. I have my next update ready, but I just posted. And I need to behave myself and not post constantly and run out of things to post... should I post it? Hmm?
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So... here's the thing. I have my next update ready, but I just posted. And I need to behave myself and not post constantly and run out of things to post... should I post it? Hmm?
Tease! As a writer, I totally understand what you mean about posting too much too soon. But as a reader, I say bring it on! hehe Post!
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