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Dumbledore continued on, neither desiring nor expecting a response from Proudfoot. He seemed quite merry, but there was an iron thread running through his words that Tonks wasn’t quite prepared for. He knew what he wanted of them, and in spite of themselves, the four Aurors were going to give that and only that.

“I expect all four of you will want to be on hand for the arrival of the Hogwarts Express tomorrow. It usually pulls into the station around 7:30, give or take 30 seconds. Depends on the weather through Lancashire. I also expect you’ll want to watch as the students get off to ensure their safety, but we have numerous measures in place once they are through the castle gates. There is no need for you to travel up with them this time ‘round.” He glanced at each of them again before continuing.

“You’re here, I know, to offer the school your protection, so I suspect you’ll have some sort of schedule worked out as to who comes to the school and when. We’ll have to set up a method of communication between your headquarters and the school, but that should be easy enough.” He paused expectantly as he looked to Proudfoot.

“Erm… righto,” Proudfoot scratched his bald spot and stared at the pile of papers in his hands. Tonks knew that look. What had appeared to be organized lists and charts at headquarters now paled under the immediate scrutiny of Dumbledore. Poor old Proudfoot was feeling like a fool. It was cruel of Dumbledore, in a way, to put him at a disadvantage like that, but Tonks was sure he did it for a good reason. Nothing like demonstrating once and for all who would be in charge while the Aurors came to call.

“I do have a schedule in here. Somewhere,” he shuffled the file and pulled out a bit of parchment. Shoving it across the table at Dumbledore, Proudfoot gave Tonks a helpless look. He was a big man, not fat but solidly built. Tonks had always appreciated that about him, and she thought it unfortunate that he looked like a lumbering oaf sitting across from the slender and genteel Dumbledore.

Despite his courtly appearance, there was something not quite right about Dumbledore. She watched him shift uncomfortably in his seat, one hand clenched tightly over the other. The hidden hand was dark, the skin that was visible looking to be brittle, almost burnt.

Perhaps she made a noise, or perhaps Dumbledore was really as canny as she always suspected, but Tonks looked up from studying his hand to catch Dumbledore’s watchful gaze. He revealed his charred hand to her curious eyes, his expression unreadable.

“Wh-“ Tonks opened her mouth to ask about his injury, but an elbow to the ribs stopped her. Snape had dug into her side beneath the cover of the table, his expression flat and unwavering. “Ow,” she curled her lip in a snarl and jerked around to face the rest of the Aurors again.

“Now is not the time for such questions, you foolish child,” Snape’s voice was low enough that the three other Aurors didn’t look up from where they were bent over the parchment pages Proudfoot held.

“I’m not a child, Snape, and I’m most definitely not your student anymore,” Tonks spoke out of the corner of her mouth, taking in the discussion between the Headmaster and her colleagues with the part of her brain that wasn’t working itself up into a right dither over Snape’s treatment.

“Then act like it,” she could hear the sneer in his voice, and Tonks turned her head to see if his expression matched. The movement caught Savage’s attention.

“Normally, Professor, you’d be quite correct. Nymphadora-love has always been the best candidate for undercover work, but her disguises have been… half-hearted lately. Real mystery about the department, that is,” he grinned proudly. His smugness at having revealed her failings faded with a loud “Oomph” as one of the other men kicked him under the table.

Tonks felt, rather than saw, Snape turn and study the mousy curls that surrounded her face. It was such an odd, awful color on her pale, heart-shaped face, and it surprised her that no one had thought it wrong sooner. Thinking of the hair brought Remus to mind. It was such a nice color on him, falling baby-fine across his forehead as they worked. A bit gray at the temples, but it did make him look ever so distinguished.

“Pity,” Snape’s voice was a sarcastic purr just at her ear. Tonks shivered, and it took all her training not to shy away from that breath of air against her hair. “Seems our little Nymphadora has a taste for monsters.”

“Only when I’m really hungry,” Tonks said, louder than she intended. She pushed back from the table and stumbled out of her chair towards the door. A glance over her shoulder gave her more reason to hurry from the room. The other three Aurors watched her in confusion, and Snape actually managed to look mildly surprised. But it was Dumbledore’s expression that drove her completely from the room. His eyes were sad and wise, and Tonks was sure he knew what her problem was as completely as Snape, although Dumbledore didn’t have to use mind reading tricks to figure it out.

“I’ll be testing the firewhiskey for poison,” Tonks shut the door hard behind her, leaving Dumbledore’s pity behind her. She already felt sorry for herself. She certainly didn’t need help.
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I really apologize for taking so long... I think I"m starting to despise this fic. I'll love it again soon. This was a hard section to write in some ways. I knew what I wanted to say, but didn't seem to have teh skill to say it. Hope it is easier for you all! Special treat... the first five readers to respond will be mentioned in the next installment.
I completely understand where you are coming from and have been there (for a long time) myself. Take your time, great work like yours is worth waiting for.

First 5 readers! I better get moving here.... (I see Andrew beat me hehe ) (He knows I tease - right? )


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hehe If only muggle transportation was so punctual. *recalls the LIRR and shudders*

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“Erm… righto,” Proudfoot scratched his bald spot and stared at the pile of papers in his hands. Tonks knew that look. What had appeared to be organized lists and charts at headquarters now paled under the immediate scrutiny of Dumbledore. Poor old Proudfoot was feeling like a fool. It was cruel of Dumbledore, in a way, to put him at a disadvantage like that, but Tonks was sure he did it for a good reason. Nothing like demonstrating once and for all who would be in charge while the Aurors came to call.
I love this. I know that Dumbledore must have this hard edge to him, as he would never got where he is without it. It's just that in canon, from Harry's perspective you just don't see it like this.

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And this too, of course. We know what he's been going through and that would add an edge to anyone. to Ern's characterization skills.

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“Wh-“ Tonks opened her mouth to ask about his injury, but an elbow to the ribs stopped her. Snape had dug into her side beneath the cover of the table, his expression flat and unwavering. “Ow,” she curled her lip in a snarl and jerked around to face the rest of the Aurors again.

“Now is not the time for such questions, you foolish child,” Snape’s voice was low enough that the three other Aurors didn’t look up from where they were bent over the parchment pages Proudfoot held.
I just love Snape. There. I said it. I'm a Sirius lover, but a closet Snape lover too.

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I love this paragraph. 'Nuff said.

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“Only when I’m really hungry,” Tonks said, louder than she intended.
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Poor Tonks!

I loved the update, my dear Ern! As usual, you out-did yourself, no matter how modest you will be about it. You are the best!
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yay you posted. I can't wait for more, and just for you, my fav lines. hehe.

edit: Erm, lets try this again.

That's Dumbledore through and through. He never let the ministry boss him around on how to run the school and he won't let the aurors or Scrimgeour (sp) either.
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And I love how you have included details from the book that coincide with this year. It makes it really easy to read and enjoy.
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And I also appreciate that Dumbledore isn't afraid to trust those with an inquisitive mind.
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I was slightly confused here. Did Savage make this comment? I think I remember to angst between them but I'll just go back and reread some portions to double check.
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“Normally, Professor, you’d be quite correct. Nymphadora-love has always been the best candidate for undercover work, but her disguises have been… half-hearted lately. Real mystery about the department, that is,” he grinned proudly. His smugness at having revealed her failings faded with a loud “Oomph” as one of the other men kicked him under the table.
tsk tsk, Snape should not be listening into people's minds.
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And so Snape should feel surprised. A glance over her shoulder gave her more reason to hurry from the room.
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Well, if Dumbledore knows about it, maybe he can help with it. Who knows. though he did seem pretty pre-occupied during the whole book.
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As always, it was absolutely fantastic. You are an extremely gifted writer. Keep it up and of course, pams, hehe, when you can.

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I loved the descriptions in that paragraph. Very well done!
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I love this story. It's really still one of my three favs. But definitely my fav in this genre.

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I wish I could provide longer installments, actually, but I always want to post as soon as I can. Thanks, sweetheart.

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I love this. I know that Dumbledore must have this hard edge to him, as he would never got where he is without it. It's just that in canon, from Harry's perspective you just don't see it like this.
I think if you look at Dumbledore from an unbiased perspective, we can see that from his treatment of people like Dawlish and the Dursleys, his agenda is always more important than who he might have to railroad. He's not cruel... but he can be cruel. If that makes sense.

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I just love Snape. There. I said it. I'm a Sirius lover, but a closet Snape lover too.
I found both Snape and Dumbledore hard to write. I love Snape too, and I wanted to make him snarky, but not out of character. He always ends up being so cranky in fics, but I don't see that he's cranky in canon, aside from to Harry.

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And I love how you have included details from the book that coincide with this year. It makes it really easy to read and enjoy.
That's the tricky part, actually. It isn't apparent as I'm rereading what I'll have to remember from later... and I've already been called on one canon issue. Too bad she's not reading anymore *dies and pokes Christy*

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Definitely, and he trusts Tonks. They have a history beyond what we've seen in the book, or I can't see her being trusted to be in the Order. She's earned a spot, and I think that he'd let her in farther than any of her counterparts.

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I was slightly confused here. Did Savage make this comment? I think I remember to angst between them but I'll just go back and reread some portions to double check.
Sorry to be confusing! It WAS Savage.

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tsk tsk, Snape should not be listening into people's minds.
I have my theories that Snape uses his powers more often than we realize. It's quite a theory too... I should write it out sometime. Anyway... he has to know later... you see what I mean? All the balls to keep in the air!

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You made the top five! I always think "How would Kris write Snape?" whenever I have to do Snapely characterizations.

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Hehe... it isn't even a very important paragraph, but I like it too. Odd that. Thanks for the praise. It means a lot, coming from a die-hard Tonksy like you.

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Don't worry bout disliking the story for the moment, as mentioned before, it will pass and your enthusiasm will double up.
I go through phases. I don't dislike it right now because it is poorly written or because I can't figure out what should come next. I just struggle because there's SO much I want to write .

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I just read the whole thing in one sitting snf I have to say I LOVE EVERYTHING!!! every little detail has been thought out and just....wow I begged so that I could stay up and finish reading it I lvoe your work so much....me wants a book of it
Aww... I hope you aren't too tired after that. Thank you for your kind words. No books in the near future.



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Old 05-28-2006, 05:17 AM   #249 (permalink)
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