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Love Is Dangerous

Chapter 1:
Young Love Stinks


Rose Weasley sat in Transfiguration doodling in her notebook, completely oblivious to what the professor was saying. The lined paper was covered in hearts, a few with writing in it. Some said D.T + R.W, or Mrs. Derek Turner.

Rose and Derek had been dating since their fifth year, and Rose really thought she had found the one, the one for her. “Ms. Weasley? Ms. Weasley! Kindly pay attention to the class. You can doodle how much you love Mr. Turner later.” Professor Quinn said turning back to the chalkboard. Rose blushed, her cheeks matching the color of her hair. “Sorry professor.” She replied closing her notebook. She was glad that Derek wasn’t in the same class as her. He was seven floors below her in Potions.

The bell rang ending the day of classes. Rose grabbed her things, putting them away in her bag. She slung the bag onto her shoulder and left the room for the Gryffindor Common Room. As she walked down the corridor her cousin Albus came out of an empty classroom. Rose smiled at him and asked, “Hey Al. Had a good day?” Albus returned the smile. “Yeah, it was pretty good. Glad the weekend is starting.” He replied sighing. His day hadn’t been that great. He had just finished making a fool of himself in front of Elizabeth Carter.

Rose nodded. “Yeah me too. Finally get to spend time with Derek.”

“Must be hard to find time together. Since he’s in Ravenclaw and all. What’s worse is that it’s N.E.W.T year.”

Rose nodded again, but smiled. “We made time in our busy study schedule for a date tonight.” They arrived outside the Fat Lady’s portrait and Al gave the password before replying. “Oh that’s nice.” Rose and Albus walked through the portrait hole into the cheery common room. They said goodbye and went off towards their own dormitory.

Rose set her bag down next to her bed and flung her wardrobe open. She sorted through her closet, looking for a dress to wear. She pulled a green one out and put it on with black capri tights that went up to her knees. She found matching heels and pinned her hair up.

She looked herself over in the mirror and grabbed her purse, leaving the dorm just as one of her roommates came in. “Going somewhere Rose?” She asked smiling. “Hey Jen, got a date with Derek.” Rose replied. “Well have fun then.”

Rose closed the dorm door and went down to the entrance hall to wait for Derek. He arrived a few minutes later, a small smile on his face. He looked at Rose and said, “You look nice.” Rose smiled back and twirled around, showing her dress off. “Why thank you. Shall we get going? My treat tonight.” She asked holding her purse up. Derek nodded simply and took Rose’s hand.

They walked to Hogsmeade, talking about how their day had been and how they hated having so much homework. Finally they arrived at the little village, making their way over to the new restaurant, Madam Florres’s Kitchen.

The little house elf seated them, giving them their menus. Through the entire evening Rose felt that Derek was a little distant from her, not his normal talkative self. She decided to let it pass, he would probably tell her later, she thought smiling at Derek.


•••


“I had a good time Derek.” Rose said as the two arrived outside the portrait hole. Derek nodded and turned ready to leave, but Rose grabbed his wrist, forcing him to look at her. “Derek what’s going on with you?” She searched his hazel with her brown ones. They were the only trait that she had inherited from her mother.

Derek sighed taking Roses hands in his. “Rose, I…I don’t know this – uh – relationship.” He began, unsure on how to say what he was trying to say. “Rose I love you, but I can't…we can’t go out anymore.” Derek finished, letting go of Roses hands.

Her brown eyes were swimming with tears that Rose couldn’t keep them from sliding down her face. Derek was breaking up her? She looked at him, furious and yelled, “Derek you don’t tell a girl you love her and then dump her!” Derek shrugged and walked off to his own common room.

Rose stood there in the empty corridor, tears streaming down her face. The Fat Lady looked down at the young, crying, red head. She clicked her tongue and hiccupped. “Young love,” Hiccup. “So…sp dangerous.” Another hiccup. Rose turned to face the painting. “Oh shut up you drunk old hag!” She then began running, where? She didn’t know, just as long as she was far from that horrid spot.

She ended up outside, by the lake. Rose sat down by the edge of the water, taking her shoes off. New tear formed and fell down her cheeks. ‘This can’t get any worse!’ She thought sobbing.


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Scorpius left the Transfiguration classroom, chuckling at what Professor Quinn had said the Rose. She was such a teenage girl, doodling hearts in her notebook, thinking about her boyfriend 24/7, so like a girl. He arrived in the Slytherin Common Room and sat down on a coach, relaxing at the thought of a weekend. It was only two weeks into the term and they had already been loaded with homework from every class!

As Scorpius relaxed on the couch by the fire, his best friend Kelly Zambini came down from the girl’s dormitory. Unlike most of the girls in school, Kelly was totally different. She was more of a tom boy, growing up with three older brothers. Kelly noticed her friend sitting on the coach and walked over to him. “If I see one more shade of pink eye shadow, I’m going to puke my eye lids off.” Kelly said sitting down next to the bleach blond.

“Poppy and her friends trying to give you a make over again?” Scorpius asked referring to Poppy Parkinson. Yup, Pansy Parkinson’s daughter. Poppy’s father had died a ‘mysterious’ death when she was only three, so she went under her mothers maiden name.

“Yeah, and I was so close to hexing her. So CLOSE!” Kelly said whining. “I hate having to share a room with those ego sized freaks.” She added glaring at in the direction of her dorm. “So how was your day?” Kelly asked after a period of silence. “Fine, Weasley was yelled at for being all lovey dovey about Turner in Transfiguration.” Scorpius replied laughing.

The two friends joked about all the couples in their year for a while, before Scorpius looked at the clock. “How about we go down to eat dinner? I have to go the Astronomy Tower after.” He said getting up and picking his bag up. Kelly agreed and they headed upstairs to the Great Hall. They sat down at the Slytherin Table and were soon joined by Lloyd Goyle and Herald Crabbe.

“Where have you two been?” Kelly asked taking a bite from her burger. “Just gave Weasley’s younger brother a swirly.” Lloyd replied chuckling. Herald simply nodded his head, stuffing chicken wing after chicken wing into his mouth. ‘It’s amazing that he doesn’t choke with all that food in his big mouth.’ Kelly thought staring at Herald, a disgusted look on her face.

They all talked about their day, but were interrupted when Poppy arrived and sat down next to Scorpius, staring lovingly at him. “Hey Scorpius.” She said all giggly. Scorpius rolled his steel gray eyes and replied. “Hey Poppy.” This caused even more giggled to erupt from Poppy. “So I was wondering if you wanted to go for a walk around the lake with me.” She said pouting her pug-like face. Scorpius looked at an imaginary watch on his wrist and grabbed his bag. “Uh look at the time! I need to go to-uh-the place I need to go to. Maybe some other time Poppy.” Scorpius said rushing out the Great Hall.

He rushed upstairs to the Astronomy Tower, looking back to make sure Poppy and her group of girl friends weren’t following him. He arrived in the high tower and breathed in and out heavily. He set his things down and began doing his star chart. After and hour or so of boring work, Scorpius turned the head of the telescope down towards the lake. He saw a figure sitting at the edge. It was a girl, her hair tied up and she was wearing a lovely outfit.

Scorpius looked around him and grabbed some parchment he wrote down a message and folded it up into a air plane. He set a charm and sent of towards the girl.

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hahahaha! That was funny!
I loved how Poppy is like Pansy!
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Chapter 3:
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Rose sat near the lake, tears no longer spilling down her face. No the tears had been replaced with anger. How could he do that to me, she thought, how can he tell me his loves me and then just dump me?! Rose was ready to go back to the common room when she felt something poke her back. “OW!” She yelled snatching the plane. She opened it up and read it.

Hi.

Ok, this is weird, Rose thought looking around to see if she could find the sender. No one else but Rose was outside. She folded the piece of paper up and rushed upstairs to the common room. She barged into the girl’s dormitory and ran over to her bed. She took out a quill and began writing.

Ok, who are you and why are you writing to me?!

Rose took out her wand and tapped the paper. It folded itself into the air plane and flew out the window just as Lily entered the room. Rose looked at her and hid her wand. “Rose is something wrong?” Lily asked noticing her cousins red eyes and wet cheeks. “Uh no. Nothings wrong.” Rose said sitting down on her bed. Lily frowned and sat down on the bed next to Rose’s. “Really, because I heard the Derek dumped you.”

“Who told you that?!” Rose demanded. “The Fat Drunk Lady.” Lily replied simply. “So is it true.” She asked looking at Rose. Rose leaned onto her pillow and nodded, a new set of tears flooding her brown eyes. “He…told he loved me and just….” But before she could finish she started bawling her eyes out. Lily got up from her seat and moved over to Rose, putting an arm around her and comforting her, saying things like:

“It’s ok Rosie. It’ll be ok”

“Derek’s a scum bag, he has clue what he’s missing out on.”

“Want me to hex him?”

Rose laughed at the last remark and stood up, walking over to the bathroom. “Thanks Lil.” She said washing her face. She changed into her pajamas and sat back down on her bed next to Lily. “I’ll see you tomorrow; I need to study for a huge Transfiguration test.” She said standing up. “You got any butter beer? I’ll need it to stay up.” Rose nodded. “In my wardrobe; under my extra robes.” Lily walked over to the wardrobe and took two butter beers, thanked Rose, and left for her own dorm room.

•••

Scorpius waited in the Astronomy Tower, passing back and forth, back and forth, waiting for the mystery girl to reply. Sure his greeting had been rather short, but she had rushed off, maybe to get a quill so she could reply. He heard a swoosh from outside the window and turned to look at it, hoping to see a paper air plane.

Scorpius turned and saw what he was hoping to see. He took the air plane and opened it. He laughed slightly, expecting the reply. ‘Of course.’ He thought picking up his quill, his Astronomy homework long forgotten. He wrote a reply and tapped the paper, sending it off.

•••

Rose looked at the window as the plane flew in and landed on her drawer. She picked it up soundlessly and unfolded it.

I’ll go by Mr. PB so we don’t give our identities away. And I saw you by the lake. You looked like you were crying. Why?

Mr. PB


Rose:

Ok, I guess I’ll be Smarty Girl.
I was crying because, well, my boyfriend broke up with me.
But I don’t think you would understand that.

Smarty Girl


Scorpius:

Oh, I’m sorry to hear that.
And I’ve had my heart broken by girls before. Though I except it’s different when a guy breaks up with you.

Mr. PB


The conversation went on for hours until Scorpius was caught upstairs by the care taker. He didn’t get a chance to send Smarty Girl and reply, so Rose sat in her bed waiting till four in the morning for Mr. PB to reply.

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Scorpius woke the next morning, his arm sore from having to scrub the owlery walls, floors, runway, everything that the owls pooped on, which was……EVERYTHING! What was worse was that he had been forced to use a toothbrush. He groaned as he sat up in his bed, rubbing his arm.

As he brushed his teeth (close to gagging) he remembered that he had not sent a reply to Smarty Girl. He closed his eyes, groaning at how stupid he was. He really wanted to meet the girl yet he was to dumb not to send her a reply, even after he returned from detention.

Spitting into the sink, Scorpius decided to write the girl a reply after breakfast. She would understand, right? He took his shower and headed upstairs to the Great Hall, sitting down at the Slytherin Table next to Kelly, Lloyd, and Herald. “Morning guys.” He said placing some sausages on his plate. “Where were you? We stayed up till one waiting for you to come back from the tower.” Herald said stuffing scrambled eggs into his already full mouth.

Scorpius cut a piece of his sausage out and chewed it slowly before responding. “I….fell asleep.” He lied. He didn’t want Lloyd and Herald to know that he had met a girl, those two couldn’t keep a secret if their pointless lives depended on it. Scorpius also didn’t feel comfortable telling Kelly yet either. True she was his best friend and he would eventually tell her either way, but right now just wasn’t the best time.

His three friends went on eating, not noticing the lie. “Heard Xander gave you detention.” Kelly said buttering some toast. Scorpius nodded, placing another piece of sausage in his mouth. He looked around the table and noticed Poppy looking at him, no not looking, staring! She noticed Scorpius watching her and blushed, returning to her empty plate.

“You should have seen her last night. She kept coming over to my bed asking where you were and when you were coming back. I was so close to strangling her toothpick neck.” Kelly said demonstrating on the piece of toast she was holding. Scorpius chuckled and set his fork down, getting up, and as he reached the twin oak doors, she came running up.

“Scorpy! Wait!” Poppy yelled waving her arms frantically. Scorpius sighed and waited for Poppy to catch up. She stopped next to him, pouting her face, making her look exactly like her pug faced mother. “Where were you last night? I waited and waited and you never showed up.” She said. “None of your business Poppy.” Scorpius replied. “Oh well, there’s a Hogsmeade trip today. Everyone’s leaving in 10 minutes, wanna come with me?” Poppy asked rocking back and forth20on her heels. Scorpius rolled his eyes. ‘I might as well. Maybe she’ll leave me alone if I go’ Scorpius thought. “Sure Poppy, I’d love to go with you. Meet in the entrance hall.” He said winking at her. Poppy squealed, running back to her friends to tell them the good news.

Scorpius rolled his eyes again, making his way back to his dorms. ‘What did I just do?!’ He thought.

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Rose sat at the Gryffindor Table, dark circles under her brown eyes. Hugo took a break from demolishing his food and looked at his older sister. “Swomtwing wong Wose? You wook weepy?” He said. Rose shook her head and poured herself a goblet of pumpkin juice. “I was just up really, really late.” She said taking a sip. She heard a squeal, almost like a pig squeal and looked around to see if she could find the owner of the sound. She saw Poppy Parkinson running to her friends, an excited expression on her pug like face. Her vision moved to the oak doors where Scorpius Malfoy stood, rolling his eyes and looking disgusted, before leaving the hall.

Rose continued sipping her juice, which miraculously woke her up quite a bit, until it was time to go to Hogsmeade. Rose had agreed early that day to go the little wizard village with Lily, Hugo, and Albus. She followed her cousins and sibling out of the Great Hall and into the Entrance Hall. She waited while the kooky old caretaker checked their permission slips.

Then finally she was on her way to her favorite thing about Hogwarts. Th[/FONT]ey arrived, stepping onto the main street of the town. “Well where to first guys?” Lily asked looking around anxiously at the stores. “How ‘bouts we go see if Uncle George is at the shop?” Rose asked heading for Weasley’s Wizard Wheezes.

A few years before even James Potter had begun Hogwarts, George had went ahead and bought Zonkos out, for the memory of his twin brother. The four walked up to the store and peered in through the glass. The store was already packed full of students, you could barely see anything. “There! I think I see him!” Albus said spotting some bright red hair deep in the store. They all rushed into the store, pushing and shoving their way to the counter. George stood behind the wooden aisle, placing some Wonderwitch Products on the shelf behind him. “Hey Uncle George.” Lily said looking at the produ cts. George turned around to face his nieces and nephews. “Oh, hey! Nice to see all of you here.” He said smiling.

“Great to see you too. You’re normal never here when we have trips.” Rose said smiling. “So got anything new?” They all asked after a while. George laughed and began showing them the new products. Rose left the shop with five Patented Daydream Charms, Lily with Patented Daydream Charms, Albus with a month supply of Skiving Snackbox, and Hugo with Shielding Hats and Peruvian Instant Darkness Powder. As they exited the shop an owl flew down near them and landed on Rose’s shoulder. “What the heck?” She mumbled taking the note from the bird. She looked at the front of the folded up paper and smiled to herself, slipping it into her pocket.

“What was that Rosie?” Albus asked raising an eyebrow. “Nothing, just a note from a professor.” Rose said. She didn’t want to tell her cousins and brother that she was talking to a guy she didn’t even know. They would probably yell at her for being dumb and maybe even tell her overprotective father and mother (though Hermione wasn’t overprotective). The other three shrugged and began walking down the street again, looking for their next stop.

They stopped outside a store to look at the window display, when Rose felt a tap on her shoulder. She turned around to face Derek. He smiled at her, causing her to blush slightly. “Hey. Great day, huh?” He said cheerfully, as if nothing had happened the night before. Rose pushed her thoughts on how cute he w as to the side and looked him up and down, a puzzled look on her face. “You look familiar; did I see you in the zoo parade?” She asked walking away. Albus, Hugo, and Lily tried to hold their laughter in. This was so unlike Rose. When they could no longer hold it in, they burst out laughing, clutching their stomachs from laughing so hard. Derek still stood there looked shocked. They looked up at him. “Next time you mess with her, she won’t be so nice.” Hugo said. “Believe me I should know.” And with that, they walked off to look for Rose.

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