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Ottery & Teddy, duh! *Because this isn't a loaded answer LOL 8 38.10%
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"Hello everyone this is Mary Hart, with Entertainment Tonight, coming to you live from Paris France for what is being called the most last-minute hodge podge event in the wizarding world ... with celebrities from all around the globe coming to the ball, like Kristen Bell, Hollywood movie star; Evita Sparrow witch siren whose hit single "I put a spell on you" is burning up the charts. And walking down the carpet now is Professor Dumbledore of the Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. Oh, my goodness could this event actually be the party of the season? Is that the ghost of ..."

Seamus and Dean were holding back Ottery who very much wanted to pelt Mary Hart with hors d'oeuvres. "Why that saucy little witch."

"Ottery calm down, you're supposed to be greeting the guests," the boy's remarked, as Mr. Simian opened the door and let them out of their cars onto the red carpet into the party.

"And coming in now is none other than Professor Snape, of Hogwarts, wearing stunning robes ... are they Armani or Madame Malkin's?" Mary asked.

"They're Wiz-Mart, now move woman!" the Potion's Master exclaimed.

Undeterred or perhaps just too foolish to know better Mary kept on with the questioning. "And what's that little trinket around your neck professor? Could that be the very same the Eye of Azaroth?"

"Would you like to see me test it out on you?" Professor Snape replied.

"I'm sure you didn't mean that, Severus," Professor Dumbledore remarked coming to the Potion's Master's rescue.

"Quite the contrary, Headmaster, I'm sure I did," he whispered.

Mr. Simian sensing trouble grabbed Mary Hart and threw her over his shoulder. "Well, hello there big ape, where are you taking me? To the Empire State?" she laughed.

"Nowhere so fancy," Mr. Simian replied throwing her out on the curb, then flinging the camera man after.

A ridiculously ornate black carriage with gold trimming arrived at the same time that a silver black zeppelin was flying over the glass roof of the Hotel Villa Royale Montsouris. The carriage was pulled by six white horses with plumes on their heads, the coachman carrying a long black whip which he didn't need to crack. The majestic creatures looked like Lipizzaner stallions. They were gorgeous creatures commanding the attention of everyone there as the carriages occupants had planned. While everyone watched them, no one watched the enchanted glass ceiling of the ballroom and past that the cloaked zeppelin from which Teddy would make his grand entrance at the appropriate time.

As Mr. Simian walked up to open the door a voice could be heard saying, "I do so love making a grand entrance," and from out of the carriage appeared first Draco Malfoy being shoved out by Blaise Zabini who wanted to make a grander impression with his entrance.

"Don't push me you idiot!" Draco exclaimed in a whisper.

"You should have announced me, Malfoy," Blaise remarked smiling and waving at everyone.

The boys were elegantly dressed in the finest robes money could buy. All eyes on them.

"Oh, crap," Draco said, his palm at his face.

"What is it you fool," Blaise said through a smiling face. "Now is really the worst time to be telling me you forgot your wand or something. The plan has to go on."

"In all our haste to make ready for the party, we forgot to get dates," Draco replied.

Blaise blinked at that slightly perplexed. Perhaps, his master plan had not accounted for everything. He blushed, "Oops." Took Draco by the elbow and walked him into the hotel.

Behind their carriage a small taxi cab pulled up and out of it bounced out Ginny, Luna, Mr. & Mrs. Weasley all of them looking awed and completely out of place in front of the grand hotel. It didn't help any that a giant gorilla was standing in front of them asking for invitations.

"Have you seen a blaargerglarger?" Luna asked. "They usually congregate where ever there's lots of music."

"Can't say's I have ma'am," Mr. Simian replied. "I'll be keeping an eye on them, just the same."

"Thank you," Luna replied.

"Those are beautiful moons and stars on your dress," Mr. Simian said about Luna's accents on her dress. A long black gown she had added silver stars and moons to accentuate the dark velvet. On her head a matching hat that she had made with a long rim like a summer hat in black with dangling bats from it.

"Thank you," Luna replied, "It's a Vera Wang, original."

Ginny giggled at that and added, "With modifications," and suddenly the sound of a werewolf howling came from Luna's dress. Some of the moons were full moons.



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Lipizzaner Stallions, are without a doubt in my opinion the most beautiful and talented horses on this planet. I love them. They are most spectacular in every way!
"Wizmart" how funny is that?! Was Mary referring to Snape, (because he is so white) or did a real ghost show up? And he's wearing the Eye of Azaroth! The painting will be in a display for the right people to be tempted? (my guess) And the reluctant guest? Can't wait to see who this is! It would be too funny if it was Hermione, and she was snagged by Draco to be his date. But, that's just a funny thought. I can't wait to find out who it is really.
Your Gorilla is wonderful, I hope he's well paid.
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And I think it's gonna be a long long time
Till touch down brings me round again to find
I'm not the man they think I am at home
Oh no no no I'm a rocket man


She looked so resplendent in her black dress, all the silver shinning under the candlelight of the ballroom. He could see her from across the ballroom as she entered on the arm of that buffoon Ron Weasley. Draco broke his cup of punch.

"Sir, please allow me," one of the house elves said quickly clearing up the mess with a finger snap. Draco did not even notice. Blaise sighed, and drank his drink, resigned as always to the fate of the brokenhearted, melancholy, happy-through-the-sadness, young one, little knowing that time would care that ache, that lonely hollow that resided in his heart would give way someday in the future to the certainty that someone loves you and that the world is not so sad as they say. Still, that would be far in the future. At present all he could do is watch with a broken heart.

"I hope you don't mind coming with me Ginny," Harry said giving the girl a sweet smile. Ginny for her part couldn't talk. She smiled back and managed to mumble something akin to, "'sokay."

"Oh love," Mrs. Weasley said blushing. "It's so beautiful. Just like the graduation day ball." Mrs. Weasley's eyes began to water.

"You were beautiful then as you are now," Mr. Weasley said, quick to press his romantic advantage.

"Oh Arthur," Molly remarked. "You always were a scamp trying to get me to sneak out so we could swing in that haunted swing by the lake." She giggled.

"If I remember correctly, Mrs. Weasley, you had no objection to me sneaking up the sidewall of the castle to come get you from the girl's dormitory on that full moon night."

"Arthur, you remembered."

"You in your pink dress, your hair done up and the scent of the strawberry vines you'd ..."

"I'd conjured up so that you could climb up the wall," Molly blushed. "But how did you know that I'd conjured those vines?"

"Because by the next day they'd been picked clean and they were out of season. They were June bearing in the middle of May."

Molly turned from him. "And what makes you think Mr. Weasley they were conjured up for you?"

"A little bird told me. And Jessica Merryweather couldn't stop blabbing about it to all the girl's. It's how I got in trouble for sneaking into the girl's dormitory." Arthur replied as his wife laughed. "If I remember correctly I had detention for a month after school was out."

"Oh, Arthur," Molly remarked and gazing into his eyes she smiled. He smiled back thinking over the course of their lives and how things had changed since those days in their happy youth. How their love had blazed wildly like a prairie fire and now with their children, with time, adventures and such between them they realized their love now had settled into a long burning steady flame. It warmed their hearts and the hearts of those they loved, gone where the giant burning flashes of youthful passion but so were the almost snuffed out col embers of possible disillusionment. No, their fire burned steady but it burned true for their love would last forever.

"Please Mrs. Weasley, may I have this ..." before Arthur could finish Mrs. Weasley hugged him and held him tight to her. Kissed his lips as The Carpenters song, "We've only just begun" began to play.



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Professor Snape kept staring at the painting and trying very hard not to twitch. It was difficult. It was the oddest painting he had ever seen yet he could not keep his eyes away from it.

"It is isn't it?" Professor Dumbledore queried.

"Yes, professor, it is a horcrux but I doubt that it belongs to the Dark Lord, sir. I am not sure what to tell you except that I don't know whose it is."

"A vile thing, Severus. I will destroy it. Once Ottery is done with it."

"Why do you trust that bumbling fool, headmaster? The boy is clearly an idiot. He doesn't know what the devil he's talk about half the time and his potions end up exploding more often than doing anything else."

"That's because they're explosive potions, Professor Snape," Ottery replied. "Teddy likes blowing stuff up."

"Why am I here again?" Professor Snape remarked, his annoyance clear on his face as the day was long.

"You're the prize in the crown jewel of my plot, Professor. I'm using you as bait for Octavius, the painting as bait for Conrad, well payment really and the star of Azorath as the other prize for capturing a certain miscreant who thought he could take my place as leader of Ottery's Love Brigade. Nobody crosses me and lives."

"I've crossed you time and again, Mr. St. Catchpole. I don't know what the devil you're talking about."

"Yeah, well, that's because you're hiding under Professor Dumbledore's skirts."

"Impedimenta!" Professor Snape fired a spell. Ottery ran across the room laughing, while Professor Dumbledore said at them, "I don't wear skirts."



"Ottery thinks he's so smart, doesn't he?" Conrad exclaimed taking a drink from his glass. :bubbly: "The silly fool. I'm almost tempted to steal the painting under his nose, but we've made a deal and I don't see any point in going back on it."

"I should hope not Mr. Fate, I would hate to have to evict you." Mr. Simian exclaimed standing behind him.

"So, when does the action start?" Giovanni asked Blaise walking up behind him.

"Soon. Very soon. I need all the players to be here. Teddy's on the airship, Draco is making an as of himself over there fawning on that Ravenclaw, you're here and I'm here so that leaves us waiting for ..."

"Wow. She's pretty," Giovanni exclaimed.

"Excuse me," Blaise said.

"The girl on his arm. I didn't know we could bring dates," the red head said grabbing a handful of hors d'oeuvres from a passing waiter. The guy winked it was the Swede from Ottery's airship but Giovanni didn't recognize him.

"I can't believe I let you talk me into this," Madison said giggling. She look radiant in a very body tight light blue dress that accented her figure, her long hair cascading around her graceful bare neck. On her arm, dressed in equally resplendent robes was Freddie blushing shyly his bow tie too tight, his cloak long and dark cascading down his back, a rapier at his side.

"I can't believe I'm doing this," Freddie said.

"Hey Freddie!" Ottery screamed as he ran past the boy and ducked a blast from Professor Snape who was still following him.

Adam walked in. He couldn't believe that Octavius was going to try something so bold. To steal the painting and try to take out Professor Snape. It was ridiculous. Ludicrous really, but he had no intention of being involved, he was merely here to see the show.



Next Up: Fireworks

Replies: I first heard about the Stallions in one of Marguerite Henry's books, Connie. I loved their story, I haven't read it in years, I should ... but I have too many other books to read Nope Mary was not referring to Snape I couldn't think up of an interesting dead person to write so ... And Snape is the reluctant guest Connie, c'mon, why would he want to be anywhere there's fun and laughter? Thank you for sticking it out. I'm drawing this to a close soon. Senorita Maxie where are you? You better be posting to your story or holding up a bank ... *Is the sheriff of this here town* LOL
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"Oh, Arthur," Molly remarked and gazing into his eyes she smiled. He smiled back thinking over the course of their lives and how things had changed since those days in their happy youth. How their love had blazed wildly like a prairie fire and now with their children, with time, adventures and such between them they realized their love now had settled into a long burning steady flame. It warmed their hearts and the hearts of those they loved, gone where the giant burning flashes of youthful passion but so were the almost snuffed out col embers of possible disillusionment. No, their fire burned steady but it burned true for their love would last forever.
Absotively the most beautiful truth!!!!!!!!!!!! My eyes watered the whole way through this very charming, cute, moving, touching, funny, dreamy,... and if I had time I could come up with still more adjectives to describe this post. Ottery, you must make all the effort you can to keep writing no matter what. You are obviously blessed with great insight. I love this story, and laughing at you saying you need help finding an ending. It's not so, and you are too cute trying to scare us like that. Oh, And speaking of fics Connie I'm still waiting to read yours Sweet of you, but don't hold your breath. I decided on an alternative ending, so I'm on a writing rampage, and got loads to go. It's definitely not a one_shot though!
All right, I have to hope this doesn't count as a double post, cause I was typing up my reply to your post, and I just get it posted to see you had a new post. Now this reply is for the one you just put up. I need to say that my eyes haven't been dry for the last 1/2 hour. First cause the 1st post was so beautiful, now because I was laughing so hard. My side hurts now too. Oh well, it's good for me. I love it that Snape is bait!!!! How great is that? And I must say I am surprised the reluctant guest was Snape. I know he was a reluctant guest for Slughorn, but I didn't think even Dumbledore could make him go to Ottery's ball! And look at what a good time he's having. I wish I could go.

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Don't want detention with Snape.

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This story seriously refuses to end Connie. I keep remembering stupid plot threads I left behind or something ... I seriously can't make it come to a close I just can't. And they do count as double posts Connie you better stop before a mod sees you. Neways, when you sign in if you look at any post you posted, you'll see those stupid blue buttons. On your posts there's an extra one called EDIT and if you click on it, it will let you edit your post so you can add stuff. If you want I mean. I don't want you getting into trouble because of me. Also, on other people's posts is one that says QUOTE and if you click it you can quote that whole post or just do this around what you want to quote.

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Or if you want it seriously super easy look for the icon that looks like a word balloon and select the text you want on your post and click that icon. Simple, no?

As for what you said ... you really do flatter me. I'd suggest you stop. Kelly is the jealous type ...




Octavius watched from the top of the glass roof. It was simple really one clear shot would kill Professor Snape from a distance and all would be well. Still, where was the fun in that? How could he let the Death Stalkers be known, where the recognition if it was a simple covert assassination. No. It was time to stop skulking in the shadows and come out. It was time to bring the fight to the forefront of it all. There was talk of a Triwizard Tournament coming that would bring Durmstrang students and their teacher to Hogwarts. Karkaroff would be within reach. Oh sweet vengeance.



"I wonder who the idiot down there is?" Teddy thought to himself. "I could crash the zeppelin on him, teach him to be nosy."



Ottery had lost Professor Snape somewhere in the crowd of golds, blues, reds, blacks all swirling like windmills to a Russian waltz, likely Tchaikovsky because Ottery loved him so much. The boy was panting, it had been a while since any man had chased him so vigorously, and he found it humorous that it should be Professor Snape. Usually, when someone followed you like that it meant instant death or love at long last.

"Sir, I've ordered more bubbly to be brought up and ... why are you sweating, Ottery? You haven't been on the dance floor, yet."

"Spying on me Tiffany?!" the dark haired boy exclaimed.

"Not really. I've got more interesting things to do," the girl replied.

"Whatever. What do you think of the party. We've got a good turnout, no?"

Tiffany looked around. Famous people from all walks of life both muggle and wizarding world people were mingling and dipping strawberries in the chocolate fountain, laughing, dancing and making every kind of merry you could imagine. By all expectations it was a roaring success. Where Ottery's plan was concerned it was still up in the air, as for herself, she couldn't help feeling like it was an utter failure. Something or someone was missing. Someone had been missing for a while now, and she was growing tired of it.

Ottery was a love. A raging oaf sometimes, but a love. Seamus and Dean were cute and always together but, they too, were just sweet boys who followed orders when they were told. What she wanted, what she missed, was Teddy's crazyness and that was no where to be found. His randomness and absolute abandon. It just made life interesting sometimes. Honestly, all the time. Ottery's inanities were predictable but with Teddy ... well.

"An absolute success story, sir," Tiffany replied.

"Wanna do a polka?" Ottery asked.

"I'm afraid I'm going to have to bow out, sir," the festivities are about to begin.



Next Up or Down: The Fireworks I promised ... maybe ...

It's easy to lose yourself in the eyes of your love when you are in love. This was Freddie as he danced with Madison. It had been a difficult life, full of sadness and sorrows having had to lose so much, having had to hide who he was and always being hassled by the aurors or the authorities when they knew what he was. Freddie had taken it all in stride. Still, he would never have believed before he had given in to Madison that life could be this happy.

Lost in his lover's eyes as they danced across the dance floor he did not notice the group of people walking in to the ballroom. They were wearing red clothes, and long black capes, they had their wands out though not many people seemed to notice that and they were young. The looks of stupid idiocy and naive willingness to follow were discreetly hidden under the facade of brainwashed belief in their righteousness.

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Go ahead and flatter yourself, Kelly knows she's got noth'en to worry about with me. I hope Teddy doesn't hurt himself fixing Octavios's nose Tiffany needs him to show up healthy. And Freddy is so adorable, but he better snap to so he doesn't get hurt when the fireworks start. I'm loven this story, sorry it won't end for you. Maybe you should put in a request for some sweet potatoes and corn bread, it did wonders for you the last time you had it.
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It's easy to lose yourself in the eyes of your love when you are in love. This was Freddie as he danced with Madison. It had been a difficult life, full of sadness and sorrows having had to lose so much, having had to hide who he was and always being hassled by the aurors or the authorities when they knew what he was. Freddie had taken it all in stride. Still, he would never have believed before he had given in to Madison that life could be this happy.

Lost in his lover's eyes as they danced across the dance floor he did not notice the group of people walking in to the ballroom. They were wearing red clothes, and long black capes, they had their wands out though not many people seemed to notice that and they were young. The looks of stupid idiocy and naive willingness to follow were discreetly hidden under the facade of brainwashed belief in their righteousness.


"Now that all the players are in place," Blaise said, looking at his pocket watch, "we can begin the show, no, Draco?" He said, but next to him was only Giovanni who couldn't reply for having a face stuffed with shrimp.

"This is going to be a disaster isn't it?" Blaise said.

Giovanni nodded.

Draco walked up to Luna, who was standing with Ginny, Ron and Harry.

"Luna," Draco said.

"What are you doing here, Malfoy?" Harry asked, derision in his voice. Ginny stood next to him meekly. Draco looked elegant in his dress robes, the very picture of handsomeness like Harry, but he'd come to talk to Luna.

"Yeah, Malfoy, what you want?" Ron asked cracking his knuckles.

"I heard they were serving escargot Ron why don't you go get some and let me talk to your friend." The blonde haired boy remarked with a wicked grin.

"If you're just here to insult my friends Malfoy," Luna started.

"No. I ... I wanted to ask you something."

"Well, go on. So you can get," Ron said.

"Harry, I think I'd like to dance. This is a pretty song," Ginny said. She didn't want to be near Malfoy any longer. She couldn't stand it. None of the boys she loved loved her.

"Go on Harry, I think Ginny really likes this song," Luna remarked. "Ron can you get me some punch?"

"I don't know Luna, Draco's a git and ..."

She put her hand on the boys arm. Ron reluctantly walked off. His eyes , however, never left Malfoy.

Above them, Octavius smiled and pointing his wand to the sky, cast a spell. Teddy for his part yawned bored. Most assignments with Ottery never proved to be so boring. Where was all the action? Leaning over the side of the airship Arceus he watched down below and fell over as a bolt of lightning struck the side of the ship.

"Did that idiot mean to do that?" Teddy wondered. Taking his wand out he fired at the boy who stood on the roof laughing.

"Of course, I meant to do that. I'm not some amateur. Nothing and no one is going to stand in the way of my vengeance." He disapparated as at the same instant the lights inside the Hotel all flickered out.

Professor Dumbledore had just walked out to go into the little wizards room as Professor Snape had just gotten his hands around Ottery's throat when the lights went out.

"What the devil?" people began to cry out. "Merlin's beard this is ludicrous."

None of them knew what was about to happen.

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"Luna ... I," before Draco could come to say something, whatever the devil it was he had to get off his chest, perhaps how lovely she looked, or maybe he would have asked her to a dance, offered her punch or really expensive jewelry or the likeliest which would have involved Draco feeling ashamed of his feelings and insulting her, but we shall never know dear readers because just then the lights went out.

In a chapter appropriately named: The night the lights went out in Georgia

A thousand voices in a sea of night cried out, "Lumos," but no light came for a shadow spell cloaked the room letting only the moonlight and the cities lights illuminate the dark.

"What the devil's going on here, I can't turn on my wand," someone cried out.

"... a spell even a first year can use ..."

"Ottery get your hands off my ..."

"I'm being choked ... isn't me."

"Teddy wasn't invited tot his shindig was he?"

From around the room lights came on at the end of wands like an army of candle lights which indeed they were and in the midst of the room on the dance floor stood Octavius.

"Greetings everyone, please don't be alarmed we aren't here to harm most of you," the blaggard said laughing with the audacity of one born and bred to assume their role in life as superior to the majority. He had come from money, one of the last Blacks alive, rich and powerful his mother had raised him to believe his station in life was to lead, to avenge and to do with the world as he pleased. "We're here for only one thing, we've come to kill a pest in your midst. A blight on the wizarding world. A former Death Eater who skulks around you like a deserving citizen when in fact he's nothing more than trash, a cockroach on the cake of high society."

"Amen," Ottery exclaimed, as Snape's grip slackened.

"Seriously, those idiots," Blaise laughed, took a drink from his glass and signaled for the others to move.

Giovanni walked quietly and without bringing too much attention to himself in the general direction of the center of the ballroom, a distraction if they were to need one, now that someone else had volunteered for the job. Also he was to cover their exits once Freddie moved in to steal the item.

Freddie looked around. Ottery was in the ballroom somewhere, he had to talk to him. Had he let Blaise run the show, or had Blaise just usurped his place in his absence? Time had run out and there wasn't anything to do but to pick a side. The problem was which one?

"Madison look I've got to," but she pressed a finger to his whispering lips.

"Lights gentlemen, please. We're not cowards who skulk in the night, like Death Eaters." Octavius cried out and the lights went on.

The revelations were begun. The painting was missing. Professor Snape was no longer wearing the Star of Azorath, and Mr. Simian was very angry at the intruders.

"I hate to steal and run, my sincerest apologies Ottery, but I don't make deals with fools," Conrad Fate exclaimed laughing as he ran out the front door.

"Funny, neither do I," Ottery exclaimed. Still, the loss of the star of Azorath was the greater emergency, that and the Death Stalkers presence.

"Maybe we should get out of here," Madison remarked to Freddie.

"I've got to talk to Ottery," the boy stubborn to the end, replied.

"I'm sorry, Freddie," Madison said and disapparated before the boy's eyes.

"Don't everyone start leaving, we haven't killed our guest of honor," Octavius exclaimed.

"Enough of these shenanigans, nobody ruins my party except Teddy," Ottery yelled.

Seamus looked at Dean and Dean looked at Seamus, "That's our cue," they said together and that's when the fighting began.

"Death and vengeance on all traitors and Death Eaters," Octavius cried out. "Kill anyone who stands in the way!"

Mr. Simian did not take kindly to being sneaked past so he grabbed the two closest Death Stalkers, who were easy to spot in their uniforms, and started grabbing them and swinging them around. Professor Snape the object of attack stood wand in hand at the ready. Ottery next to him, smiled.

"I hope you don't mind being bait, Professor Snape?!" the dark haired boy exclaimed.

"Not if you don't mind detention the first day of next term," the Potion's Master replied.

"Draco Malfoy, die!" an all too eager Death Stalker remarked coming at the boy with a knife.

"I Don't think so," said Luna Lovegood. She had her wand in her hand as she turned the knife into a rubber chicken and the boy fell down struck by lightning. Luna and Draco turned to see Blaise smiling from across the dance floor.

Ron, Harry and Ginny looked at each other nodded wordlessly took out their wands and started blasting away. Seamus and Dean meanwhile ran out the front door. Mr. Simian knocked over a few other Death Stalkers as people started running out, screaming, or stealing massive amounts of hors d'oeuvres.

Adam for his part turned his wand on himself, changed the color of his outfit, grabbed a drink from the tray a passing Swede was holding while he punched someone else with one hand. He had only to wait for his part in the whole affair and soon it would be over and he would be free of Octavius.

"Did you really think I didn't know you'd betray me," he heard a voice whisper in his ear.

Before he could turn around there was a flash of green light, "Avada Kedavra!" The last words he ever heard.

"Holy cow, they aren't playing!" Ottery exclaimed.

"Of course not, fool. They're here to kill." Professor Snape replied as he deflected a spell with his wand and sent a curse after the fool that had dared fire at him.



AN: WTF?????!!!!!!11111 is going on?
Who else will die? Did Madison really just ditch Freddie at the ball? What did Conrad Fate steal? Where the devil are Seamus and Dean going? What's happened to Teddy? Isn't that Swede impressive handling a bar fight and not spilling his drinks? Ottery and Professor Snape team up? Where are my socks? Having a hard time remembering all the characters? Because I sure am! And where the devil is Clucky? Could she be the ace-in-the-hole Ottery needs or is she still just romancing the stone? Why doesn't this story make any sense? Did you remember to turn off the stove? These and other less important questions are likely not to be answered in the next post. Still, it's nice to ask them, isn't it?



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OMG! You're like my only reader now Connie, this story is so weird it's freaked everyone out of this thread oh well, you can't make an omelette without heavy artillery. Teddy always says that. Normal people beat eggs, Teddy annhilates them.

Thank you for sticking around Connie, you PWN. And I'm not trying to scare you ... but this story is coming to a rapid conclusion ... sometime in 2010 at the rate I'm going. That's why I started killing people. Let the death tolls begin!

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"You know Rainy days and Mondays always get me down," Teddy exclaimed as he held on to a long rope tied to the airship, dangling precariously over the top of the hotel. "I'm going to kill Blaise, then I'm going to strangle that manic otter, then I'm going to the pub."

The airship Arceus was on fire, her cre were desperately trying to turn off the fires before they hit the balloon and the helium ignited, just the same a tear on the side of the balloon was leaking slowly so one way or another the airship was coming down amongst a muggle population.



Conrad Fate was laughing as he ran down the street. It was a couple of blocks before he slowed down his pace. Ottery had been a fool to believe that he would make a deal with anyone. He wanted the painting, and having had Ottery run off with it under his nose had been evil, he had made Conrad look like a fool in thieving circles. The fool had even explained it, his old Mexican proverb that said, "thief who steals from a thief earns 100 years of forgiveness."

Conrad would have gone along with the deal but Ottery had been holding out on him. The little bug ger had the star of Azorath, or at least he had had it until a couple of minutes ago. He laughed.

"Conrad," someone's voice spoke out of the shadows of an alley.

"You're crazy if you think I'm walking in there," he replied.

A girl in a long white cloak appeared. She pulled the hood of her cloak down and smiled. Conrad thought to himself, "If she's pulling her hood down with her hands she doesn't have her wand out." He quickly pulled his out.

"Conrad, what are you doing?"

"What does it look like I'm doing love?"

"I thought we had a deal."

"Oh, and Ottery and I didn't just have an agreement? Love, I'm a thief not a charitable organization. I'm sorry if you can't make the distinction. This really is going to hurt you more than it's going to hurt me."

"You can't, I'm all alone and defenseless," she cried.

"I expected more bravado from you Madison, pity. I can't have you leading Ottery and his goons to my lair, and while I normally don't like doing this I will in your case, Avada Kedavra!" There was a bright flash of green light in the city of lights.



"I don't know how you idiots got in here in the first place," Mr. Simian exclaimed as he had two Death Stalkers in a head lock one in each arm, "But I can assure you. I'm bouncing you, which is what I do with trash." Slamming their heads through the hotel wall he left them dangling there unconscious.

"Mr. Simian, please." Ottery exclaimed. "I'm going to lose my deposit," Ottery cried out.

"Is that what you're worried about St. Catchpole?" Professor Snape asked as he cast a shield spell to protect the boy and himself.

"Why are you following me? Can't you see me running from you? It's you they're trying to kill. This isn't going to plan at all." Ottery complained as he fired a bat bogey hex.

"Where is the headmaster? Is he safe?" Snape asked.

"The last time I saw him he was trying to avoid Mary Hart, that woman is a vulture. Seriously. Freedom of the press shouldn't extend to harassment." Ottery deflected a spell then another, then another as quick as he fired them he swatted them aside. He wasn't the real target, Snape was but he was busy attending to other attacks. They were standing back to back Ottery and the Potion's Master. "Snape, I think we're in the middle of a trap. That's Octavius. Dang that kids good. Let me get a shot off ..." Suddenly, Ottery was struck by a flying goblet, it distracted him enough to cause him to miss and the stunning spell slammed into him sending him crashing into a table.

"I've got you now Snape!" Octavius cried out. "How I've waited for this you traitorous ..."

Crack!

Out of Professor Snape's wand a giant whip lashed out, with a flick of his wrist he'd whipped the boy across the face silencing him. There was no look of pride or smugness on Professor Snape's face. There was no joy in his life, he'd long since resigned himself to being one of the living dead.

"Madison! Madison! I can't believe I trusted you ... I can't. I can't ..." Freddie was angry to say the least. So when he got struck by a stray spell and he fell over he was not any happier. Quite the contrary he was angry, and while he fell down human he stood up as a werewolf.

"Grrrrrraaaaaaaaaargh!" He screamed tearing off his clothes. There was pain and anguish in the werewolf howl that followed.

"Holy fritters!" Giovanni exclaimed that wasn't in the plan. Blaise what are ... Blaise? Blaise?" Giovanni turned to search for his companion but he was nowhere to be found. "Oh great. We've been had. Draco!"

"Your father was a Death Eater, therefore you're a Death Eater by association."

"That's ridiculous. Any excuse will serve a tyrant."

"I didn't know you read Aesop, Draco." Luna exclaimed.

"There's a lot about me ..."

"Look at me when I'm fighting you!" the Death Stalker exclaimed firing hex after spell at them. Luna deflected them while Draco fired spells back but neither of them seemed very interested in the fight, at least not half as much as they were in their conversation.

"Blaise where did you go you useless sod." Giovanni cried.

"I'd worry more about your fate little boy," a voice cried out. Giovanni turned in time to see Laura. He smiled as he ran to hug her, when suddnely he felt a knife at his side.

"What the ..." he stepped back. "Laura ... I ... I'm ... I didn't ..." he fell to his knees.

"That's not Laura," Prince exclaimed picking up the boy's wand with his teeth. "Revelacion!" In an instant the girl that had looked like Laura turned into a stone statue. "It's a golem."

"Then stop it." Giovanni exclaimed.

"Why do I always have to do everything around here?!" Prince exclaimed dropping the wand.

"What? Seriously? I'm bleeding here ..." Giovanni cried out.

"Excuses, excuses with you." Prince cried out turning his back on the golem.

"Look out!" Giovanni exclaimed and threw himself over his friend as the golem pointed her wand at the cat.

"Avada Kedavra!"



Looks like a lot of deaths in this one ... but seriously I'm having a hard time keeping up with all the characters this way I can weed them out, slowly. Points to Connie for guessing that it was Octavius who killed Adam and that Conrad ran out with ... wait you didn't well you were close. MOre twists than a roller coaster. Promise.

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"Look at me when I'm fighting you!" the Death Stalker exclaimed firing hex after spell at them. Luna deflected them while Draco fired spells back but neither of them seemed very interested in the fight, at least not half as much as they were in their conversation.
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"Ah, forget this. Who wants to live forever?" Teddy said, pulling out a cigar, lighting it and letting go of the rope. Besides it looked like they were having fun down there. The brown haired boy came falling down, wand in hand and smashed through the glass top dome window of the hotel.

Ron seeing something coming through the ceiling quickly fired a wind spell to keep the glass from falling on the guests. Harry seeing that Ginny was right where Teddy would fall launched himself at her, knocked her over and out of harms way as they both went slidding on the slippery dance floor knocking a few people over along the way.

Now a golem isn't a living thing, therefore firing a death spell at it will not kill it but the force of the spell is so strong that it doesn't leave the thing unharmed, as Giovanni soon found out. As he lay over his cat Prince he waited for the killing spell but it was not the golem who had sent it. Seeing a bright flash of green he suddenly felt his back pelted with rocks as the creatures head exploded over them.

"Well, that was close," Giovanni exclaimed.

Prince's muffled reply came from under him and the boy stood up.

"Sorry pal."

"I should kill you ..." Prince replied, while Giovanni grinned sheepishly.

Elsewhere in the ballroom the Swede was knocking heads having decided to drop the tray with the drinks, actually he'd thrown it as a boomerang and knocked out an Australian Death Stalker. Fighting and punching and kicking, the Swede made his way to Mr. Simian.

"Looks like we're not winning," he said to Mr. Simian who didn't understand because he didn't speak Scandanavian.

"You know, I should probably learn Scandanavian," Mr. Simian remarked.

The Swede nodded. They looked at each other and smiled both of them having had the same thought and then they said together, "Fastball special."

Laughing, Mr. Simian picked up The Swede and flung him across the room a Octavius. Ottery was just standing up when he saw the tall, muscular blonde headed man coming at him.

"Oh snap! Things really aren't going to plan." Before he could say anything else someone else knocked into him and threw him to the ground. And while Ottery went slamming back into the ground, The Swede went crashing into Octavius.

It was just at that instant that Professor Dumbledore decided to walk out of the bathroom and found the room dimly lit, on fire, a complete mess and the band wasn't playing.

"WTF?????!!!!" Dumbledore exclaimed. "Lumos Maximus!" he cried out lighting the room.

Seeing the situation he took his wand and with a swing of it created a tornado in the center of the room, a magical wind that extended magical tendrils and picked up one by one the Death Stalkers leaving them all neatly tied up and in a pile in the center of the room.

"Oh my gosh," someone exclaimed.

There were tears and people started to come out of hiding, while others put down their wands to pick up drinks. The ballroom was a mess.

From where he was sitting on top of Ottery drinking Teddy said, "Wow, Otts, you sure know how to throw a party."

"I'd like to throw it at you, right now!" the dark haired boy exclaimed. "Get off of me!"



"You're cute Conrad, but did you think yours was the first death spell I'd ever had to avoid?" Madison replied laughing. She'd ducked and kicked her leg out throwing the boy off his feet and making him lose his wand. "Don't let your opponent get too close to you."

"You witch!" the boy exclaimed but by then Madison was standing over him her wand at his face.

"You really are a sore loser, aren't you Conrad?" She tisked tisked him and said, "Accio star." Out of his robe pockets came the Star of Azorath as expected into the girl's hand. "And just to make sure you're not going to be a bother, incarcerous" With a wink and a smile she was gone.

But down the street from the hotel muggles were screaming in fright as a werewolf ran down the streets of Paris tearing everything asunder in a love struck rage.



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To many things to quote, so I'll just pick a few things to comment on. Ron was clever with his wind spell to protect everyone from the glass.
I'm so glad Giovanni didn't get killed.
Mr. Simian and the Swede make a great team, although they don't speak the same language, they think the same.
Conrad's not as smart as he thinks he is. Good for Madison for being as clever as she knows she is!
Poor Freddie! Poor Madison? (not a question for you to answer, I'm just thinking)
Teddy did good not to make a single explotion.
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You look so disbelieving
At my suitcase by the door
My taxi's on it's way here
I can't take it anymore

Lately you've forgotten
What loving me is about
Well,now you've got five minutes
To figure it out

You've got five minutes
To tell me what I've needed to hear
You've got five minutes
To get me to believe you're sincere
That's not much time to change my mind
It'll take a miracle no doubt
And you've got five minutes
To figure it out


Now: The Stunning Conclusion to ... ah forget it. *proceeds to write another 5000 chapters*

Freddie rampaged through the city of Paris. A werewolf is a large angry creature when out of control, a large furry slathering angry brute of intense strength and ferocity. Under some circumstances a werewolf can control himself putting her emotions under control, but in times of a full moon night or situations were a were is put under undue stress or made angry then the werewolf's intellectual capacities will be overrun by feral emotions. This was the case with Freddie Valentine who felt himself betrayed by Madison.

Surely, she had only agreed to come with him to the ball to steal the painting. What a fool he had been. That had been Freddie's thinking. Freddie the werewolf didn't care why he was angry only that he was and he wanted to share the pain.

Freddie picked a car up by the rear fender and flipped it over, as people ran screaming from the street. He growled and slathered saliva all over the street and made a wolfish laugh as a group of muggle cops stood in a line and started firing at him. He howled in pain as the bullets pierced his skin. They hurt. Especially when they came back out and his body healed itself his muscles re-knitting the torn muscles. He fell on all fours and howled menacingly at them and ran after them slashing.



Conrad lay on the floor cursing Madison as she watched the muggle police cars with their sirens blaring drive past her. Her bracelet made her impervious to their looks as well as their bullets, it cast an aura of 'don't look this way' or 'nothing is happening here you'd care to see' which made muggles completely disinterested in her and her actions. It was part of what made her getaways successful. But then again stealing from Muggles was easy and she only really wore it for situations like this one where she needed to beat some stupid boy out in the middle of the street.

While Conrad cussed her out she got a terrible feeling and clutching the star to her heart she pulled up her cloak and started running in the direction of all the commotion. It was on the way from the hotel but clearly it was not the hotel.

"It was a pleasure stealing from you, Conrad," she said as she ran. She didn't really mean it. Madison had tried to make it sound as gleeful as possible but something in her heart ♥ kept worrying her.



"So, what are we going to do about this?" Prince asked his companion.

The red haired boy smiled where he sat. "It sure is a mess."

"Yeah, so are we actually. Only you would think to wear a white suit to a ball when everyone else is wearing tuxedos. Thank goodness subtlety was not the word of the evening." Prince remarked.

Giovanni stuck his tongue out. "We'll have to sort all this mess out later, I've got someone I've got to find."

"She's at the airport, her flight leaves in about fifty minutes. It's all the way across town though and ..."

"What? Who are you talking about?"

"Laura. She's got tickets. If you run really fast you might be able to stop the plane before it leaves or not let her get on it." Prince looked at his friend with a gleeful smile. Giovanni hugged him. "Time's running."

"You coming with me?" Giovanni asked.

The cat nodded and climbed onto the boy's shoulder. As Giovanni stood up, Mr. Simian pointed him out to a group of aurors. Ottery started screaming, "I want to talk to you red!"

"Sorry, Otts, maybe laters?" the boy grinned mischievously dropped a super stink bomb and started fleeing. Prince neglected to point out that he had friends in customs who would hold Laura from boarding the plane until they arrived.

Elsewhere, Blaise cackled. He had the painting. Sure he had lost the Star of Azorath, Conrad had betrayed him as well, but then that meant he didn't have to share the money from the sale of the hideous thing. He couldn't believe Ottery was in the painting. Just the same he had gotten clean away leaving the others behind. Laura had been the perfect distraction for Giovanni, Prince had proved not to be a problem and Freddie had fallen so head over heels in love that ... well it had worked out for the best.

He walked into a carriage waiting at the back of the hotel, closed the door never paying attention to who had opened the door, or who the driver was. Blaise smacked the top of the carriage to signal the driver and popped his head out the window to say, "The portal station. Ineed to be in India before noon."

The boy driving tipped his hat and smiled. "Aye, sir."

Blaise couldn't help thinking the voice sounded somewhat familiar but he payed it no mind. He didn't mingle with coachmen why would he know him? He pulled out a mirror from his pocket and said the magic words that would let him speak to the painting's buyer.

"You got it?" came the voice from the shadows.

"Yes, Macavity, I have your quaint little painting. I trust you have the gold I need."

"But of course, though I still can't understand why a rich little boy like you needs gold he could steal from his parents more easily. You've obviously a flexible moral compass."

"I need it to buy spells and such and I don't want it to be traceable. Dark objects and such trinkets. It's nothing to do with them there's no point in bringing my trouble to them. They're my family after all."

"Well look at that, will you? The boy has a heart."

"I have your painting that's all you need to know. I'll see you in India."

"With my painting if you want to see your gold and another sunrise."

"Your threats are so quaint." Blaise replied putting the mirror away. Dealing with trash and second rate villains was such a hassle.



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Oh, I want so for Freddie and Madison to be ok. To think just that morning they had such a time on the motorcycle ride to the park and they had such a wonerful time. Sweet sorrow it is this tragic time. (Steve's watching Ivanhoe and I think it's clouding my thoughts.)
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A man on a mission.
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I hope this guy can make good on his threat. Great post Ottery! Till your next post then.
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Clucky was a plucky chicken, but she was also technically a free-agent. She didn't belong to Ottery's group, not technically, she just happened to be Seamus' favorite chicken. Neither did she belong to that cocky rooster back at the barn but that didn't mean she didn't like him. It simply meant, when you're in Paris it's okay to fall in love, isn't it?

Clucky felt so happy in that rooster's arms. They were roosting together at the top of Notre Dame watching the city around them. The sunrise had come and he had cockadoodledoed her a beautiful serenade. It was time to be going but she didn't want to go. Clucky did not want to leave him. Still, soon she must. The plucky hen looked at her watch. The time was nearing.

"Cluck," she said.

"But I love you, my lovely feathery egg laying chicken you," Armand said, in French of course.

"Pu-kawk!"

"I know, my sweet dove of love. But stay with me another moment," he clucked.

She pecked at the roof of the old church. Surely, Seamus, Ottery and the others could handle things ... boys weren't completely stupid, as exampled by Armand. Still, her duties called.

"Pukaaaak!"

"My sweet love," he said, "Thank you. You make me so happy spending these moments with me."

It was hard to resist a chicken who knew French, Clucky knew. Especially, in the city of love. ♥

Because love makes us stupid


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"The first words out of your mouth should always be expelliarmus, you daft idiot. I would have thought by now--," before she could finish however, Teddy had slugged the woman and laid her flat.
He WHAT????? Oh no he did not! *slaps Teddy* Didn't your momma ever teach you that you don't hit girls?

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"Those are beautiful moons and stars on your dress," Mr. Simian said about Luna's accents on her dress. A long black gown she had added silver stars and moons to accentuate the dark velvet. On her head a matching hat that she had made with a long rim like a summer hat in black with dangling bats from it.

"Thank you," Luna replied, "It's a Vera Wang, original."

Ginny giggled at that and added, "With modifications," and suddenly the sound of a werewolf howling came from Luna's dress. Some of the moons were full moons.
I loved this. Very cute and very Luna, whom I adore, as you know.

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"Yeah, well, that's because you're hiding under Professor Dumbledore's skirts."

"Impedimenta!" Professor Snape fired a spell. Ottery ran across the room laughing, while Professor Dumbledore said at them, "I don't wear skirts."
*loves Dumbleydore* You write Snape marvellously well.

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Ginny stood next to him meekly
huh? I think my eyesight is failing since when is Ginny meek? Even in an a/u? This must be Ginny from Dimension W. I don't like her very much. She deserves Draco.

I almost forgot, I adore the scene with Molly and Aurthur.

If I were Reader's Digest though, I would so cut the Death Stalkers, they're annoying me. I no likey them. And where is Sebastion?

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I expected more bravado from you Madison, pity. I can't have you leading Ottery and his goons to my lair, and while I normally don't like doing this I will in your case, Avada Kedavra!" There was a bright flash of green light in the city of lights.
I am no longer speaking to you.

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"Excuses, excuses with you." Prince cried out turning his back on the golem.

"Look out!" Giovanni exclaimed and threw himself over his friend as the golem pointed her wand at the cat.

"Avada Kedavra!"
If I were speaking to you, I wouldn't be now.

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"Well, that was close," Giovanni exclaimed.
Ok, so maybe I'm talking to you a little bit. However, this is the second time someone has exclaimed without actually doing so

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Seeing the situation he took his wand and with a swing of it created a tornado in the center of the room, a magical wind that extended magical tendrils and picked up one by one the Death Stalkers leaving them all neatly tied up and in a pile in the center of the room.
See, this is why I love Dumbledore. Very nice

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"You're cute Conrad, but did you think yours was the first death spell I'd ever had to avoid?" Madison replied laughing. She'd ducked and kicked her leg out throwing the boy off his feet and making him lose his wand. "Don't let your opponent get too close to you."

"You witch!" the boy exclaimed but by then Madison was standing over him her wand at his face.

"You really are a sore loser, aren't you Conrad?" She tisked tisked him and said, "Accio star." Out of his robe pockets came the Star of Azorath as expected into the girl's hand. "And just to make sure you're not going to be a bother, incarcerous" With a wink and a smile she was gone.

But down the street from the hotel muggles were screaming in fright as a werewolf ran down the streets of Paris tearing everything asunder in a love struck rage.

*runningjumpssmoochiesglompsschnugglesforever*

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"Laura. She's got tickets. If you run really fast you might be able to stop the plane before it leaves or not let her get on it." Prince looked at his friend with a gleeful smile. Giovanni hugged him. "Time's running."
Or he could, idk, apparate! I swear, boys always have to do everything the hard way!

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"Yes, Macavity, I have your quaint little painting. I trust you have the gold I need."

"But of course, though I still can't understand why a rich little boy like you needs gold he could steal from his parents more easily. You've obviously a flexible moral compass."

"I need it to buy spells and such and I don't want it to be traceable. Dark objects and such trinkets. It's nothing to do with them there's no point in bringing my trouble to them. They're my family after all."

"Well look at that, will you? The boy has a heart."

"I have your painting that's all you need to know. I'll see you in India."

"With my painting if you want to see your gold and another sunrise."

"Your threats are so quaint." Blaise replied putting the mirror away. Dealing with trash and second rate villains was such a hassle.
flexible moral compass, indeed. And a little too chatty to be a real villian. Seriously, does he think Macavity (brilliant, btw) really cares? What is this, sharing time? Seriously.


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Some days it doesn't pay to get out of bed and some days you wouldn't get into a bed with someone if they paid you to. For Ottery, today felt as if the bed were on fire and he'd have to pay for it. Flaming beds not withstanding, Ottery was in a very dejected mood.

"They ruined my ball, and Zac Efron didn't even show up," the boy cried.

"Buck up, Otts," Teddy said, striking a match against the boy's tuxedo. "Look at it this way, at least you caught the bad guys."

"That would be nice if Freddie wasn't off tearing up downtown Paris."

"There's no point standing around here, then," Teddy remarked. "Let's go werewolf huntin'!"

Ottery sighed. Teddy was right. Even with the ball a shambles, Mary Hart screaming that she'd lost one of her shoes, the Death Stalkers all caught, and a few dead bodies Ottery did not have time to wallow in his sorrows, not when a friend was in dire need.

"Who is here who can help us?" Ottery asked.

"The Swede is needed for clean up duty, so's Dumbledore," Teddy explained, "Professor Snape ..."

Here Professor Snape gave Teddy a grievously menacing stare. Ottery proceeded to clamp the boy's mouth shut and answered for him, "Professor Snape has done enough for us Teds, I think he'll be heading home now to a nice cup of tea, no?"

The Potion's Master dusted his robes and with a menacing glare at Ottery disapparated.

"Coward!" Teddy exclaimed.

"Ah shut up Teds, who else is going with us?"

"Ron, Harry and me," Ginny added as she and the boys showed up.

"Hey Gin, didn't know you were here," Ottery exclaimed.

"Well you weren't the only one," Ginny replied softly. Ottery patted her shoulder.

"Yeah, Otts, how can we help?" Ron asked.

"I guess it's us against the werewolf. We better sneak out before your Mum finds us though Ron." Already Ottery was scanning the room for Mrs. Weasley but she and Mr. Weasley were so wrapped up sitting at their table enjoying each others company and drink that they would not notice their two youngest gone for a bit. "Professor Dumbledore?" Ottery asked.

"I'll take care of things here Ottery, bring back Freddie all right," the Headmaster replied. The boy nodded and taking his wand out led his friends out of the ballroom.

Of in a corner somewhere Luna was standing against a pillar, Draco's hand on one side of her face and talking to her. Ginny looked at them as she walked through the fallen rubble and debris. It must be wonderful to be in love and have someone love you, she thought to herself. She wondered if she would ever get to feel that herself and sighed.

"Coming Ginny?" Harry asked holding his hand out to her to help her past the rubble.

She nodded using both her hands to pick up her crimson velvet dress and making a point of not taking the proffered hand she walked past him. Then outside, she exclaimed, "Oh bother this!" and with a flick of her wand her dress turned into pants and a cloak.

"Nice fashion, Gin," Ottery said winking.

Ron looked surly at his friend but Ottery winked at him too in a kind way and led the group down the street following the rampage left behind in Freddie's wake.



Giovanni and Prince were running down a city street. Running past the lights, past the people, past the world in a blur, past a blue haired, blue eyed boy tied up on the sidewalk.

"You should have stopped and helped," Prince exclaimed in the boy's ear.

"What? And miss catching Laura? I don't think so."

"You know, we could just borrow a Vespa, you know?" Prince suggested evilly.

Coming to a sudden stop, Giovanni turned to his feline friend and smiled at him wickedly. It wasn't coincidence that next to them was a cherry red Vespa parked and with two helmets on the seat.

"Look, it even has a basket on the front where I can sit," Prince said, laughing.

In seconds, the cat was in the basket, Giovanni was plunking a helmet on his head and another on Prince and they were riding off in someone else's bike but this was Paris and the note they'd left explained that it was necessary for the pursuit of love and the motorcyclist could please wait and it would be returned with a full tank of gas later. Which it was.



"Well this is a fine mess, Ottery's gotten into," Mr. Simian complained as he swept the floor of the ballroom.

"Oh, I don't know. Ther'es nothing that can't be coped, with a little help from our friends," Professor Dumbledore said as he turned and walked out. Over his shoulder he fired a spell and the ballroom started to right itself. Tables turned up, broken glass flew up and became hole over the skylight, and everything arranged itself as it was before all elegant and nice. The band started up a new song and Mr. and Mrs. Weasley walked over to the dance floor once again, happily oblivious to everything going on.

For some, life was good.



Madison looked all around her at the smashed cars and the broken street lights, the people huddling crying under the pouring water from the broken fire hydrant. In the midst of it all, the police trying to keep everyone away and past them a large grayish beast, with long brown matted hair, a bloody maw and angry eyes.

It didn't take her long to realize that it was Freddie.

"Oh my g--"

French Aurors had arrived at the scene and were walking behind the police. They meant to subdue the beast. In the distance an airship was falling from the sky burning.

She had to think fast.

"Oh my gosh, look at that airship falling!" she exclaimed.

The aurors seemed to notice it for the first time.

"Someone has to do something about it, or else all of Paris will burn."

"What?" the chief auror looked at her.

"I'm a clairvoyant," she exclaimed. "Leave the werewolf, that airship is the real threat."

"We can't possibly leave ..."

Madison didn't like doing it but sometimes needs must. Silently and expertly she used an unforgivable and sent the chief of the aurors after the airship. He ordered his men after the airship and despite their hesitance they left the tiring werewolf standing in the middle of the street.

The werewolf ran at the girl who was standing alone in the middle of the street. It stopped before her and growled at her menacingly. Madison did not cringe but rather slapped him hard across the face. The werewolf made to bite her then stopped when it saw her crying. Freddie raised his head up to the sky and howled.

"I've got a clear shot Otts," Teddy exclaimed.

"And silver bullets no less. Don't take it, Teds, that's our friend Freddie."

"I'm sure he wouldn't want us letting him go on a rampage," Teddy gruffly complained, eager to try out his new werewolf killer silver bullets.

"Yes, but I'm sure he'd like us to do everything we could to stop him first, no?"

"Liberal, commie, namby pants," Teddy uttered under his breath still looking at Freddie through his scope.

The werewolf howled at the moon and the girl cried.

"I can't believe you Freddie Valentine," the girl cried. "I can't believe you'd think so little of me. Did you really think ... I wouldn't come back? Did you think I could ever ..." she let her tears fall silently. A wolfish paw brushed them away from her cheek and she ran into the beasts arms. "You idiot. Boys are so stupid."

Slowly he transformed back from a werewolf into a boy and Madison was holding Freddie in her arms. He fell to his knees and she after him.

"I'm ... I'm ... sorry Maddie. I ... just ... love you," he said in explanation and apology.

She held him tight and he fainted in her arms. She brushed his hair away from his face and kissed it. She blushed then. He was naked.



NEXT: The REAL ENDING I SWEAR! or Loose threads make a fine coat.
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I love it, it seems to connect so well. VAIR nice.

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Poor Freddie -? *pets him* Me no like, no like at all. =[
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I think she needs a hug. I like the leetle heart, you know. <3
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Ginny better not make me get angry with her. What does she expect from Harry? I mean why would Harry want to have anything to do with her, when she won't talk to him and makes a point to leave whenever he shows up. It was her he took to the ball. And his first thought and action when the roof caved in was to get her safe. He shielded her body with his, totally exposing him to falling debris, magic spells and curses! She should've stole a kiss from him when they were sliding across the floor. That would have gotten his attention. And looking for love from Draco, when she's still got feelings for Harry? She better see what she's got in front of her, than looking around for what she's missing. Now that I have that off my chest, I'm willing to except the fact that she's very young, and also, she always resented Dean (in the books) when he offered her his help.
Super post Ottery, you've done a wonderful job bringing out my emotions, which is what happens to me when I read a really great book. I look forward to reading your next post, and THANK YOU! THANK YOU! THANK YOU! for Madison and Freddie's get together. Beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Giovanni, pure sweetness. (good for him Prince is with him) And lastly I must say again, I love Dumbledores magic. Brilliant Oh, and I am following your Christmas fic. and it looks to be another superfantabulous novel, by the tremendously talented ~Ottery St.Catchpole Catch ya later
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The summer was not yet done but the owls to Hogwarts were going out. The summer breezes still flowed through the green leaves of the trees, on branches where birds still sang sweetly to the squirrels who ran frantically preparing for the fall across the paved streets of the rich neighborhoods of Paris. The ball had been a raging success with everyone except Mary Hart and Professor Snape, Ottery's skills at creating 'lavish, explosive, ballroom affairs' still in tip form accord to the social pages of Paris Wizard Match! Ottery couldn't help but laugh at that as he sat on the veranda overlooking Paris.

"So, what? Are we supposed to sit here and cool our heels while Blaise gets away with the painting!?" the brown haired boy exclaimed.

"I have the star of Azorath," Ottery replied taking a sip of his tea. "Here, have a bagel."

Teddy flicked his wand and the bagel exploded in Ottery's hand. Ottery for his part took his wand out and emptied the jar of marmalade over the boy's head. Teddy then proceeded to randomly cause objects to fling themselves at the dark haired boy.

"Oh, yeah!" Ottery exclaimed. His shield spell deflected most of them, Ottery then wrapped the tablecloth around his friend sealing him like a mummy. "How'd you like thaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!"

Tiffany walked into the room clipboard in hand, rolled her eyes and would have walked out but for the fact that the boys were not done trying to spell each other. Somehow or other Teddy had gotten his wand to peek out of his wrappings and used a Levicorpus spell on Ottery.

"If you two are quite done," she remarked.

Ottery yelled, "Not on your life. He started it!"

Teddy's muffled voice cried out something to the effect of, "It'll be a cold day in a hot place when I ..."

"Expelliarmus!" Tiffany cried out disarming the boy's. She used her wand to send a sofa to where Ottery would land and proceeded to spin Teddy out of his strait jacket.

"Madison returned the star of Azorath, as you already know Otts. She and Freddie are on holiday right now. The muggle authorities and witnesses have all been duly memory charmed. Reparations for all the damages are coming out of Conrad Fate's considerably long pockets. That boy has a vaster fortune than Gringott's. Conrad, however, is missing. So we don't get a reward. The money we did get from his Paris flat was, of course, confiscated by the French Ministry of Magic. Dumbledore sent an owl, "Thank you for the fun time Ottery, but next time I'm laying off the spicy burritos." Mary Hart sent you one too, but I don't like to use that kind of language, so I've put it on your desk."

Teddy sat down lit a cigar and smiled at the girl. Tiffany made as if she had seen nothing and she were not actually in possession of the boy's weapons.

"Giovanni and Prince sent a box of chocolates and Laura says hello."

"So, everyone gets a happy ending, boo hoo. I'll cry tears later when you give me my wand back and I can conjure a hankie." Teddy replied.

"What about operation: recoup revenge and resume?"

"That ... should be taking place, right about now," Tiffany said as she looked at her watch.




"I hate India, it's always so dang muggy," Blaise complained as the short boy waved the long fan over him. "And don't stand so close servant, you're crowding me."

"Yes memsaib," the boy replied bowing and walking back. Colin fought every urge to hex the Slytherin brat.

"Where is that insufferable cat, anyways?" Blaise exclaimed.

The doors opened wide and a giant painted elephant walked into the room. Sitting on an ornamented palanquin on the creatures back a black cat sat. "You called?"

"Macavity, it's a pleasure to finally meet you. I've got this ... horrid thing and if it's all the same I'd like to be rid of it. Did you bring the gold?"

"Show me the painting the cat said from where he lounged on his palanquin.

"Show me the gold," Blaise replied.

"Such impudence from one so young." The cat turned to the shirtless boy next to him and the boy using his wand lowered a trunk to the floor. The boy looked oddly familiar to Blaise but as the trunk popped open and the gold caught the light from the sun his greed got the better against curiosity.

"The painting." Macavity remarked and Blaise threw a large tube up to the cat. The boy caught it, opened it and unraveled the painting.

"Now if you'd just let me borrow one of your boys," Blaise said.

"I'm afraid I can't be doing that," Macavity replied.

"Oh, yes. The unforseen betrayal. I hadn't expected that." Blaise said in a bored voice. "Boys," and from out of nowhere boys came out. The boy with the fan dropped it and pulled out a wand from his dhoti pointed it at Blaise. The boys standing behind him had their wands out as well. "It looks like a draw Macavity. My men against yours."

The cat purred and the elephant moved his head raised his trunk and let the cat walk onto it. As the elephant lowered his trunk the cat's fur turned from black to white. "Nyaow!" Prince winked at Blaise.

"You aren't Macavity."

"Of course not, but he didn't seem to mind me borrowing his identity or this regal palace. And your men aren't your men."

The boy on the elephant jumped down and Blaise recognized him as Neville Longbottom, the boy with the fan was Colin Creevy. He turned and found that his men were actually Laura and Giovanni in disguise.

"What? How?"

"Ottery wasn't born yesterday, Zabini." Prince replied.

"No, actually he's about 100 years old," Giovanni remarked, "and he holds it well."

"He also has the loyalest friends," Neville added. "Came to pic k us up a few weeks late but he remembered Colin and me back at the museum."

"Well, I guess you can't win them all. What are you going to do with me now?"

"Oh, I'm sure Ottery has some little favor or other to ask of you!" Prince exclaimed. "You've got to pay for playing your prank."

"I'm sure I will," Blaise complained. He hated being under obligation to anyone and Ottery had a bad habit of asking for odd favors at the most inopportune times.

Epilogue


Aboard the newly refurbished didn't crash down in flames after all and looking especially lovely airship Arceus Madison and Freddie talked. They walked around the deck as the ship flew over the Atlantic. The sun was falling like a fiery wreck into the sea burning the ocean waters in pinks, purples, and orange sherbet. They stopped along the deck and looked out over the ocean.

"I thought for sure you'd left me at the ball, Madison. I thought you'd stolen the painting or the star and you'd run off without me. I thought you were using me." Freddie confessed too ashamed to look at her.

"Well, you're an idiot then. I was always working for Ottery. He's given me a chance when no one else would. He's always believed in me and he gave me his friendship and ..." she paused for dramatic effect. Freddie looked at her a little wounded.

"Were you and Ottery, more than friends?"

"Oh, yes."

"Oh," Freddie exclaimed dejectedly.

"Business partners, friends, and well almost like siblings." She laughed aloud. He also gave me lots and lots of chocolate."

"Silly!" he exclaimed. "You're gonna pay for that." She laughed and he started to tickle her.

"Freddie, stop. You wouldn't dare. Freddie!" she cried and ran off laughing the boy following right behind her.

The Swede whistled as he remarked something from the bar. Clucky answered in the affirmative, "Cluck caaaaaaaaaaaw!" she said, fondly remembering that Chanticleer in France she'd left behind.

Meanwhile in India, Seamus and Dean were lost on the streets of Mumbai where an owl was looking to drop them another owl incorrectly.

"Are you sure this is where Ottery told us the trap was going to go down?" Seamus asked.

Dean looked at the map. "Seriously, Seamus, I can't read Indian."

Luckily for them the Patil twins were in town visiting family. They'd run into each other and there would be another whirlwind adventure for them before the summer was through.

The Ever Lovin' End



AN: Any plot holes are solely the fault of my other two fics and Nanowrimo which are begging for undue attention. Loves ...
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