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Old 08-11-2005, 09:02 PM   #1 (permalink)
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hey guys! so this fic is actually already full written, and i've just realized that it's not been up here...just on FF! so here it is, expect fast updates if i have anice audience..hope you like it...

basic plot: hermione/draco ship, everyopne's in their last year and hermione has to make some big decisions about her life once she starts having feelings for draco...

Prologue

It was a quiet Sunday morning when Hermione got her letter. She and her parents had just gotten back from Church and she was going upstairs to change out of her dress and into some jeans.

As she pulled a 'Manchester United' Tee-shirt over her head, she heard a tap-tapping on her window. She looked up to see a school owl and went to open the window. As she relieved the owl of it's burden and it flew away, Hermione noted how much thicker and heavier the letter was than usual. She opened and took out two sheets of paper. she took the first and read,

Dear Ms. Granger,

This is just reminding you that the Hogwarts Express will leave from King Cross Platform 9 3/4 on September 1st as usual.

Have a nice rest of your break.

Proffessor M. McGonnagal

Deputy Headmistress

Laying this piece of paper aside she took the other up in her hands. Her eyes grew wide as she read it and then she turned back to the enfvelope. She turned it upsideown and out fell..a shiny new Head Girl badge. She shrieked her excitement, grabbed it and ran downstairs to tell her parents the good news.


Chapter One: Going Back

On September first, Hermione found herself boarding the train on Platform 9 3/4 once again. As she said good-bye to her parents and stowed her luggage in an empty room, Hermione began changing into her robes. Just as she was pinning her 'Head Girl' badge to her chest, the compartment door slid open. She turned to see her two best friends in the world. She smiled and they beamed back. They lugged their stuff into the compartment before giving her hugs.

"God, i missed you guys sooo much..I'm really sorry we couldn't meet in Diagon Alley, that last week was hectic." she said, the words tumbling from her like water.

"Oh, that fine Mione. So, what's that" harry asked grinning at her shiny new badge.

"No way, Lemme see hermione." said Ron excitedly. She just giggled and smiled.

"We always new you'd get it but still, we're so proud of you." added Harry. Hermione noticed Ron didnít have a badge on his robes.

"Where's your Ron?" she asked.

"Oh, I err, didn't get Head Boy." he said, the excitement quickly leaving his voice.

"Oh I'm so sorry, I didn't mean-" hermione started apolegetically.

"No, it's fine. I don't mind who it is as long as it's not-" he started but stopped as the door slid back again.

"-Malfoy" Harry finished Ron's sentence as a tall muscualr boy with bright blonde hair and piercing grey eyes stepped into the compartment. He sneered as she saw the other's reactions. Hermione felt her stomach begin to knot as she saw the glint coming from the front of his Robes. Malfoy had been made Head Boy. Just her luck. The second piece of parchment had been about her newly appointed position and had also said that the Head Boy and Girl would be sharing a common room.

She turned her eyes back to his evil face.

"What do you want, Malfoy? No one here cares for your company." she spat, eyes glaring.

"What do I want? Isn't it obvious..you're supposed to be the smartest girl in school Granger. " he replied cooly.

"Just spit out what you want" said Harry harshly. He and Ron were rolling up their sleeves.

"I want Granger." he said simply.

"WHAT?!" the threesome exploded.

"Well, if you three still haven't noticed, Iím head boy and she's Head Girl. We have to go to the front of the train to talk to McGonnagal. Didn't you read the letter, Granger?" he asked her snidly.

"Yes I did. Sorry guys but he's right. I'll be back as soon as possible." she said sadly.

"Fine, but don't you touch her, Malfoy, or you'll wish-" Ron started.

"Yeah yeah, I'll bring your Mudblood back in one piece." he said, then he shut the door behind them before Ron and Harry could launch themselves at him.

As Hermione followed Draco down the corridor she mentally cursed him. How could he be so incredibly mean? It just seemed impossibly inconprehensible. When they got to the end of the hallway, they reached the door Hermione had stepped through when she had been made a prefect. As she reached for the door handle, he slapped it away.

"I don't want you contaminating EVERYTHING I have to touch this year Granger. So hands off all the doorknobs." then he threw her a signature smirk and walked through the door, leaving her to fume outside. She walked through the door after him, sending death glares his way. He pushed some 5th years off a couch and layed down on it, acting like he owned the place. Just then, Professor McGonnagal walked in.

"Oh, Mister Malfoy, don't take up all the space. This room does not belong to you. And don't give me that look, do you want to lose points for Slytherin before term even starts?" she gave him an annoyed look. Hermione smiled and shot a 'haha' look at him which he returned with (though it was a rather babyish move) sticking his tongue out at her. Hermione was taken aback and flipped him off to show her appreciation.

"Really, Ms. Granger. Please don't use that vulgar display in my presense. You too are toeing the line. I would have thought better of you. The both of you are Heads of the student body and I therefore expect the best behavior out of you. This includes your interaction with each other as well. You will be civil to your fellow houses- ALL your fellow houses." she gave them both piercing looks that clearly said, 'you better take this seriously.'

"Now, on to business, " she continued," 5th years, welcome. This is all going to be new for you so listen up. 6th years, I hope you know the drill but for some of you" she looked sternly at a 6th year boy who was flirting with the 5th year next to him, "it might be a good idea to stick around and get reaquainted with your duties. I will leave this up to Ms. Granger and Mr. Malfoy. I have business to attend to now so if you please direct your attention to the Head Boy and Girl I will see you at the school." and with that she straightened her witches hat and walked from the compartment.

Seconds later, Draco got up and followed her out lazily.

"Where are you going?" hermione asked him.

"I'm leaving, " he said as heis hand fell on the doorknob, " you can deal with this, you're a big girl now."

"Oh no you don't, " she said under her breathe before, "Petrificus, Totalus!" Malfoy went stiff as a board and fell the ground. All the prefects from the houses besides Slytherin laughed and aplauded Hermione who put her wand away, smiling. She shut the door and moved him off to the side.

"Now, Mister Malfoy, as long as your just laying there, please listen up, " and with that she began informing the prefects of their duties. When she was done she let them go and then turned to Draco.

"Are you ready to be resonable?" she asked him. He couldn't move but his eyes shone with hatred for her.

"That's what I thought." then she muttered the countercurse and watched as he got up slowly.

While he was doing that, she was picking up a envelope labled 'Head Boy and Head Girl'

"I hate you Granger, " he said darkly.

"Oh, I love you too, Malfoy, " she said coldly.

"What's that you've got?" he asked snidly and she unfolded the letter and began reading.

"It's from Dumbeldore, it says to meet him after the feast to be taken to our common room and then we'll be given our first assignment." she said.

"Assignment, what assignment," he asked quizzically.

"Apparently YOU didn't read the letter all the way through. It said that we would be completing tasks throughout the year, TOGETHER." she said the last word with great difficulty. " Now if you excuse me I have to go throw up and then get back to my friends." she said darkly before stuffing the letter into his hands and storming out the door. She didn't know it, but he watched her long after the door shut.




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i checked this morning and i had two replies (hi guys, i love you!) and then came backa few hours later and had two more...very exciting...i'm glad y'all like it so much, so here i some more!

Chapter Two: *~Moving In~*

After Hermione left the compartment, she travelled back down the train to meet Harry and Ron. She pulled back the door and smiled to find them sitting under a large pile of sweets off the trolly and arguing over none other than: quidditch. They offered her a Chocolate frog which she glady accepted. Sitting down, Hermione pulled out her copy of 'Advanced Potions: Brewing Magic' by Marty Simmer and left off where she had it bookmarked. It was the only book she not managed to complete over the summer and the idea of stepping onto Hogwarts grounds without reading the last 10 pages was driving her nuts. She read,

The time spell is works much better than a time turner but is also much more complicated. It takes over a year to brew and some of the ingrediants take longer to find. The advantage of this potion over the Time Altering device is that it can transport the drinker forward as well as backward, and can go by years, not just hours...

The passage went on to talk about all kinds of stuff Hermione had known for years, but it fasinated her all the same. As she snapped the finished book shut, Hermione thought back to her third year when she and Harry had used the time turner to save Sirius and Buckbeak. She made sure not to bring this up in front of Harry; she knew how sensitive he was about the subject of Godfather. When the two boys saw she had closed her book, they stopped debating whether The Cannons were better than the Montrose Magpies, a team who Harry had taken to following himself. They had become quite good in the last few years and this had created a miniscule rivalry between Harry and Ron; only in quidditch though (of course)!

"So, Hermione, how'd it go?" Harry asked her.

"Oh, it was fine. I had to curse Malfoy, you know the usual." she said, as offhandedly as possible while trying to suppress a huge grin along with a large fit of the giggles.

"What?! Thas' gweat Hermny" Ron congratulated her through a mouthful of Cauldron Cakes.

"Thanks Ron," she said back.

Soon the Train began to slow and finally it came to a halt at Hogsmeade station. Hermione said good-bye to Crookshanks while Harry and Ron bid their Owls ado, and the trio stepped off onto the station, linked arms, and made their way to a carriage. They managed to get one to themselves and once the door was closed, it began to rumble forward. The winged horses gave Hermione the creeps and it was all she could do to supress a bout of the shivers as best she could. When the carriage trundled to a stop, she got out and followed the boys into the entrance Hall. She breathed deep the smell of Hogwarts and smiled broadly. Somewhere to her left she heard Harry mumble (as though he thought no one heard)

"It's good to be home"

This made Hermione smile brighter as the trio stepped into the great hall and took their seats at the Gryffindor Table.

All around the Gryffindor table people were congratulating Hermione on her badge. She just smiled and said thanks but inside she was glowing. She had never been more proud of herself. Just as she was starting to wonder when Dumbledore would stand up, he did.

"Welcome back Students! Another year at Hogwarts is beginning, but before it can start, we need to sort our new students into their houses. The sorting Ceremony will begin momentarily. Until then I ask you to be patient and chitchat amongst yourselves." he sat back down and began talking with the blonde woman next to him.

"Who's that?" asked Harry and Ron simultameously. They appeared to be transfixed by the woman's laugh.

"Well, I assume she's our new Defense Against the Dark Arts Teacher. Rob, I mean Proffessor Wechter, had to leave at the end of last year to go help the ministry with something. Remember?" she said as though speaking to someone a few fries short of a Happy Meal. Professor Wechter had been their coolest teacher (Besides Lupin of course); he had even let them call him by his first name, but only during class when other teachers weren't around.

Just then, the double doors opened and Professor McGonagal walked in followed by a stream of nervous looking first year students. One at the back seemed to be physically trembling with fright. Hermione smiled at him as he walked by in an attempt to calm him down but he just squeaked and latched on to the girl in front of him who seemed to be his twin sister. She pushed him off of her and gave him a cruel look.

As they reached the front of the hall, a stool and a frayed wizardís hat were placed in front of the top table. Harry recognized it as the hat he had begged not to put him in Slytherin 6 years before while Hermione remembered it comtemplating whether she was smarter or braver. She had insisted she was smarter but the hat had been defiant and put her in Gryffindor. She thanked it for that now.

Just then, the hat cleared its' throat, opened the rip at its' rim and began to sing.

different colour green..whatever..lol..i forgot i wrote a sorting song.. i have check and see if it'[s any good before i put it up! lol

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I like the excerpt from the Potions textbook. It definitely adds a touch of realism to the story. You always include little details like that in your writing and that makes it so much better! Keep up the good work! Can't wait for the next update!
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Hey thats awesome u capture the hogwarts-ish atmosphere qiute grandly[beaming]...n do write in that sorting hat song....wonder what it'd say though....[thinking]...PAMS PAMS PAMS
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wow...didn't know this would go down so well..here's more then! it's just the song which i've checked to make sure is not rubbish and it's not..if i may say so myself..lol. it's got a weird tune tho...hmmmm...
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Chapter 4: The Sorting Hat Song

So many many scores before,

When I belonged to Gryffindor,

He had three friends who shared a dream,

That one day these walls would be more than they seem.

But when the four got old and grey,

They had to figure out a way,

To keep their students set apart,

By what was found inside their hearts.

They could belong in Gryffyndor,

The house of my protector,

The brave and strong are the ones you'll find,

Residing in this sector.

Or maybe Ravenclaw is more to their taste,

Rowenna always did enjoy a mind straining race.

Indeed perhaps it's Hufflepuff where you will make your friends,

The love found inside this house contains no bounds nor ends.

Yet some belong with Slytherin,

For the cunning and slick are found herein.

So now that you have heard your choices,

and these four no longer have their voices,

It's up to me to decide your fate,

I'm sure what I choose will turn out great.

So plop me round your little ears,

and don't be shy,

For find the house with your fitting peers,

Well that I'll surely try.

more soon, hello new readers!

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i love that you guys love the fic so much but if i keep going at this rate it'll be over in 2 weeks and then you'll all be sad lol

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Chapter Five: Sortings and Assignments

Hermione clapped and cheered along with everyone else at the hat finished, bowed and became silent. Proff. McGonagal now stepped forward again holding a roll of parchment.

"As I call your name, you will step forward and the hat will sort you." she said as she surveyed the students over her glasses.

"Accuna, Abel" A small boy with black hair stepped forward. He held his head high and it seemed to Hermione that he was not at all nervous. He sat down on the chair and placed the hat on his head. After a few seconds of contemplation the hat gave it's decision.

"HUFFLEPUFF!" The boy looked very put out as he removed the hat from his head, handed it roughly to Proff. McGongagal and sulked over to the semi- cheering table. The Hufflepuffs seemed just as unhappy to have such a snotty bratty little kid as he was to be put in that house. (A/N Nothing aganst Hufflepuff, this from the boys P.O.V.)

Then came 'Allen, Mark'. A good looking boy with black hair up in a ramp in the front of his head stepped up. He didn't look as nervous as some but as the hat dropped over his eyes, his hands were trembling. Then the hat shouted, "RAVENCLAW!" and he walked over to the table and sat down with afew 2nd year girls who were all giggling madly.

They got past 'Butler, Paxton' (Slytherin!), 'Begody, Browning' (Gryffindor!) and 'Hotaling, Catherine' (Gryffindor!). They finally reached the K's with 'Krane, Elizabeth' who was put into Ravenclaw. As she hopped off the stool, 'MaClaverty, Mick' became a Gryffindor and 'Marshall, Jessica' joined him.

Finally after 'Raper, Caroline' was sorted into Ravenclaw, only two kids remained; the twins were still waiting for their turns.

McGonagal rustled her parchment before reading, 'Win, Alexis'. A girl with blonde hair and bright blue eyes walked up, calm as anything and sat on the stool. The hat had hardly touched her head when it shouted, "SLYTHERIN!" The girl handed the hat (rather roughly) to Proff. McGonagal before strolling off to the house on the far side of the hall. Whistling and catcalls could be heard coming from quite a few of the underclassmen boys as she sat down. Hermione could only remember one other person ever having been decided that fast: Draco malfoy. This girl was clearly one to be avoided. Then came the final name.

"Win, Alexander'. The hall became quiet once again as the small boy stepped forward, visibly trembling from head to toe. As he moved towards the stool, he tripped over one of his untied shoelaces and fell on his face. Most of the hall gasped, hoping he was ok, but the Slytherin table (including Alexis) sent taunts and insults his way. Crabbe could be heard yelling 'Have a nice trip, see you next fall' followed by loud guffawing. Hermione rolled her eyes and shot a nasty glare towards the table. Suprisingly, it was returned by a boy with platinum blonde hair. Had she meant to look at Malfoy or had that been a coincidece?

She returned her gaze to the front of the room where the boy had stood up and nearing the stool. as he turned around, Hermione could see a single tear fall down his cheek. Her heart went out to him. Then the hat dropped down over his face and all that could be seen was the top of his tie. After a while of no deision, Hermione was beginning to get nervous for him. Then finally after what must have been 3 or 4 minutes, the hat shouted out "HUFFLEPUFF!" The boy looked so relieved that he shoved the hat back at McGonagal and ran to his table where he was recieved by tumultuous applause and many handshakes. Hermione was glad he had such a loving house to lift his spirits.

Dumbeldore stood and the hall became silent once more.

"Let the feast, begin!" he said, and with those words, the table in front of them filled with food. You couldn't tell by her size but Hermione could eat a lot. She piled mashed potaoes, peas, asparagus and pasta onto her plate. When the students were full with that food, the desserts began to appear. Hermione had 3 large cupcakes and a chocolate mousse. Finally they were all done with the treats as well and Dumbledore stood up.

"Just a few quick announcements before we send you all off to bed. First, a reminder to our older students and a notice to our first years, the forbidden forrest is strictly out of bounds to all." he smiled at this and then continued. "Right, and secondly, as our returning students may have noticed we have a new member of the staff this year." he motioned to the woman on his left, "Mr. Wechter went back to his post at the ministry at the end of last term and so now we have the pleasure of having Proffessor Cepelak as our new Defenese Against the Dark Arts teacher. Could you all join me in welcoming her. Yes do stand up, Rachel." he said as he clapped. She stood and the students clapped as well. Whistling could be heard from all four of the tables and at this she smiled. Hermione poked Harry and Ron,

"Look at Snape" she said. He didn't look too happy. Apparently upset at once again missing the shot at taking the post he had always wanted, Snape's lip was curling and it seemed to be a huge effort for him to smile.

"Thank you, yes, that's good." Dumbledore beamed."Now, lastly, a new list of what is not allowed on these grounds has been posted on Mr. Filch's door. I suggest you all take a look to keep yourselves out of trouble. I would like to see the Head Boy and Girl up here, but everyone else may go to bed. Prefects lead your houses to the common room please, Goodnight!" then he sat back down. As Hermione stood to go up to the top table, Harry and Ron wished her luck.

"Thanks, see you guys as soon as possible" she replied, before going to see Dumbledore.

As Hermione made her way up to the top table, she felt someone come up along side her and turned to see Maloy there.

"Here we go, Mud- err, Granger." he said when they were two feet from Dumbledore.

"Ahh, Mr. Malfoy, Miss Granger, follow me and listen up I will be giving you instructions as we walk but make sure to also pay attention to where we are going. You will need to find your common room on your own after this" He smiled at them and then walked through a door behind the staff table Hermione had never really paid attention to before.

"Now, as you know, you will be having tasks to complete throughout the year," he said while walking down a hallway filled with paintings of old head boys and girls. They all smiled at Hermione as she worked hard to keep up with him. For an old man, Dumbledore could move pretty fast. Even Draco was having trouble keeping up. Dumbledore was now explaining that these tasks included planning parties and organizing house meetings, etc.

"Now, to get to your dormitory, you can either take this hallway or take the door to the right of Professor McGonagal's office, go up two sets of stairs, turn left and you will find your self on," he paused as they rounded a corner, "this hallway" he finished. The paintings ended but Hermione could see one at the end of the desolate hall. When they reached it she realized it was another head painting. One of a 17 year old girl with curly brown hair and a wide smile who was standing next to a tall boy with slicked back hair and penetrating grey eyes.

"Err, Proffessor, is that...us?" she asked tentatively.

"Yes it is, now the password for this week is peppermint toad and it will be up to you two to change it every Sunday. You will have to tell the portrait TOGETHER what the new password is. They won't let either of you in if one of you tries to change the password alone. Understand?" he looked at them and they nodded.

"Good, now your first assignment is on the desk, have a good night." and with that, he was off. Draco gave the password and the portrait swung open. The two stepped inside and examined their new living spaces.

The common room was decorated in greens, reds, silvers, and golds. There was a slytherin banner on one wall and a gryffindor one on the opposite wall. A large couch and two cushy armchairs stood infont of a blazing fire. On the far wall were two doors. Hermione looked at Draco who cocked his eyebrow and motioned to them. She nodded and they walked over. Opening the first door Hermione saw a very odd looking room. The walls, floor and door were a deep blood red while the bedsheets, ceiling and the door inside the room room were a bone chilling black. Hermione didn't like the look of the room and closed the door quickly. She turned to see Draco making a disqusted face.

"I think that one is yours" he said, jerking his thumb at the other door.

"Yes, and I think this one belongs to you." she replied. They switched places and opened their new doors. Hermione now saw Pink walls and a pink bedspread. The ceiling, floors and doors were a clean white.

"Yes! My favourite colours!" they both exclaimed at the same time. They turned simultameously.

"THOSE are your favourite colours? God help you," they added at the same time. Hermione giggled and a little bit of the steelieness left Draco's eyes for a second, but it was soon back.

"Let's meet back out here in ten minutes. That's gives us a little time to start unpacking and then we can read our assignment." she offered.

"Yeah sure, see you in ten Granger." and then he slipped through his doorway. Hermione imitated his movement and walked inside her room. She walked to the other door and opened it to find a huge closet. She figured she could cartwheel in it, and so she did. She laughed as she fell to the floor; she never was any good at gymnastics. She put all her robes and cloaks on the hangers given to her and then started putting her muggle clothing into the dresser next to her bed. Just as she was neatly folding her trousers she heard a faint knocking on the door.

"Come in," she said, while placing the garments into the bottom drawer of her dresser.

"Err, what's this Granger?" she heard Draco's voice float over to her from the doorway. She stood and turned to see him holding what looked like a miniature vaccum. It appeared they would be cleaning their own rooms this year.

She walked over to him.

"Ok, this is called a vaccum-" she started.

"A wacume? What do you do with it?" he asked puzzled.

"If you let me finish. It's Vaccum, not Wacume, by the way. Now, since electricity doesn't work on the ground I expect these run off magic," she searched the machine for a minute and found a note attached to one of the nozzels.

"Ahh, here we go. "To turn the vaccum on, tap it with your wand and say 'inizio' and to stop it say 'arresto'". Well that's easy enough. Now, Malfoy, the point of a vaccum is to clean floors, usually carpets" she stopped to point at her carpet. "When it gets dirty you start the vaccum, run it backwards and forwards across the entire carpet a few times and then stop the vaccum. You'll need to do this about once a week. To empty the vaccum open this compartment, remove the bag and put it in the trash. The note says the house elves will take out our trash and will supply our vaccums with news bags if they find it empty," she said this maybe a little too fast because Draco now looked more puzzled than ever.

"Err, ok, you'll have to go over that again when I use it. You wanna go read our assignment now?" he asked.

"Sure," she followed him out of the room and placed the vaccum next to his door for him to put back later. She walked over the desk in the corner of the room and found an envelope. She handed it to Draco.

"You want to read it?" she asked him politely.

"Err, sure," he ripped open the envelope and scanned the paper, "'your first assignment is to simply get along for a week straight. No name calling, you will use each other's first names, not last names and no fighting. This seems to me to be a very simple task and if you fail, there will be serious consequences'" he read, " oh great, this is gonna be horrible." he sighed, plopping down on the chair next to him.

"Don't say that. Let's just try our best and we'll hopefully get through this week." she yawned.

"You look tired, go to bed," he said. She smiled.

"I will, goodnight" she faltered, " err, Draco"

"'Night, umm, Hermione"

So many spelling mistakes in that! ahhh, took forever...

p.s. everyone's names in that chapter (kids getting sorted, the new teach etc) are people i know...you'll notice i was sorted into Gryffindor after my friend Mick, lol.

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NEW READER!!!!! Hello. You are a great writer and this fic is awsome!!! I love it!! I also lurveeeeeeeeeeee Hermy and Draco fics there my fav. Poat more soon. PAMS!!!
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