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Kiss Me, Quick <A One-Shot> - Sa13+ I got this idea, as usual, out of the blue. Enjoy! Her green eyes bore deeply into his, although they were partially hidden by his black hair and the shade of the Beech Tree. "I am truly sorry." He said, softly, tilting his head a bit to the left as he saw her eyes flicker quickly from his. "I don't know, Severus." She said, hesitating before speaking his name. "You've told me that... so many times... I just don't know anymore." Her hands slipped into his and a smile twitched on each of their faces. "Please," he implored, "Please Lil' ...trust me." "I don't know if I can!" She started, "Every time I do... my heart ends up breaking, Severus, and..." She mouthed wordlessly for a moment and turned away. He frowned a bit, "Lily...?" He stroked her red hair gently, and she eventually turned to him. "I love you." He said, simply. She smiled and a single, crystal-like tear dropped from her cheek. "Kiss me." She said suddenly, and Severus merely blinked. "Kiss me, Severus... please." He could feel his heart beating heavily in his chest, and was certain that if neither of them did anything, it would surely burst. In an instant of thrill, they kissed. After a brief moment, Lily took his hands in hers and looked to him, "I love you too, Sev." He smiled, "Why is it," he said softly, "that I can hear a 'but' coming?" She smiled sadly, "But," his heart sank, "I'm not meant for you, Sev." He shook his head slightly in a moment of denial and absolute shock. "...I ..." But he knew it was no use, he let his pale hands drop out of hers. The Black eyes became hollow and desperate, whilst the Green had a feeling of regret. Lily's eyes filled with a few tears before she picked up her knapsack from under the tree and left Severus standing in the spring wind, watching his destiny trod off across the grass. And that's all she wrote. I do say, I didn't even know I could write like that... I'm not a romantic person.... :hmmm: |
i loved it!... really sad though... |
That was great! But sad. *sniffles* |
Thankies! That story was the result of daydreaming at four in the morning! |
really good! Is this a one shot or will it coninue? |
One-Shot. Although i'm starting to wish i'd continued it :worried: |
hmm. I love SeVans ships...I LOVED ITT! *huggles you* it was SPLENDID!! keep on writing!! *Kate* |
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Okay, I couldn't resist from reading this.. although I dislike the seVans ship, very much.. This was a very good one shot, Definitally worth reading. :yes: Very nice Nanc! :glomp: :lol: Romantic person or not, you could have fooled me :P :D |
Aww! That was so sad. I am not usually sev/lilly shipper but I couldn't resist it! It was really sweet and romantic even if you say you're not. ;) -*~ Shirel ~*- |
I'm not a SevAns shipper either *blech!* But, that's the way the idea came to me... :shifty: *plots* |
I read this yesterday but didn't have time to post, but I must say that was so good! I love seVans ships, and that was perfect! I loved it! Love, Lena xXx |
Thats so swet and romantic but yet so sad and i'm practically crying now. Bravo ~*<3*~ Heather |
Aww. =[ So cute. |
That was brilliant |
That was such a good one shot loved it. |
HEllo NEw REader Pretty Good Soo far |
Thx, Thx, Thx! :glomp: |
OMG!! That was absolutely amazing! I loved it! |
Mucho thankies. I do like this one... *Contemplates* |
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