sitemap
FOLLOW SNITCHSEEKER:

Email Us!
Visit the Official WB SHop!

Hogwarts RPG

Students: 9820
Classes: 15
Professors: 13

13501229
742240
View Points

Members

There are 297 users online including...
abreedancarr , Yaya , sweetpinkpixie , Waterloo , hermionesclone , ershadskjero , Lislchen , natekka , Muzrobil , disneydisney

20 members
277 guests.

Members in Chat:



If this is your first visit, be sure to check out the FAQ by clicking the link above. You may have to register before you can post: click the register link above to proceed. To start viewing messages, select the forum that you want to visit from the selection below.

Go Back   SnitchSeeker.com > Forums > Floo Network (Extra Fun) > Honeydukes (FanFiction) > Honeydukes Register (Finished FanFiction) > Finished Fanworks


Finished Fanworks Home to all the completed stories and poetry that our authors have written.

 
 
LinkBack Thread Tools
Old 06-28-2004, 06:19 AM   #1 (permalink)
Slytherin
Streeler
 
hplover_143's Avatar
 
Join Date: May 2004
Location: turn around
Posts: 246
Default Just a Bet? D/H - Sa13+

This was written before the HBP, so yes the ideas and stuff don't make sense with the sixth book. Thanks everyone for all your support, and all the PM's I'm still receiving!!
________

Draco,
Hey you little brat. I know you’ll be very pleased with the news I bare.
I, your bestest cousin ever, Chris, will be coming to your school this year! Can you believe it?
So, are there a lot of hot girls at Hogwarts? See you on the train!

Chris

Draco quickly scanned the letter again to make sure he was reading right. His overly self-centered cousin was going to Hogwarts?

‘You’ve got to be kidding me...’ Draco mumbled and dropped down on his bed.

‘Draco! Get down here now! We're going to Diagon Alley!’ Draco heard his mother screech through the echoing mansion.

He got up and went down the stairs where he met his angry mother.

‘Come, we’re going by floo powder.’ She told him.

His mom had been very upset since his dad, Lucius Malfoy was put in Azkaban prison.
Draco was pretty mad, but didn’t mind much. He just didn’t like their over sized mansion so empty.

They bought everything for school when they got to Diagon Alley. Draco saw a few Hogwarts students, including Harry Potter. How Draco despised that stupid git. It was because of him that Lucius was put away.

*

Draco awoke early the next day, getting barely any sleep. He made sure everything he needed was packed away for his sixth year at Hogwarts.
His mother brought him to the train by Muggle transportation, in something called a car. It was surprisingly comfortable. Who knew muggles could make such a thing? Still, brooms were better.

Draco boarded the train and it began to move. He looked around to find Crabbe or Goyle when he bumped into a muscular seventh year.

‘Draco! I’ve been looking for you!’ Draco looked up where his conceited cousin Chris stood.

‘Chris, what a nice surprise...’ Draco said dully.

They walked by some giggling sixth year girls who blushed when Chris flashed a grin at them.

‘Oh hey Crabbe, Goyle. This is Christopher, my cousin.’ Draco said entering the compartment.

‘Ahem, call me Chris. And you are?’ Chris asked.

‘Gregory Goyle.’

‘And you must be Crabbe right? I've heard of you.’ Chris said sitting down.

‘Yeah. Are you in your sixth year too?’ Crabbe asked.

‘Nope, seventh.’ Chris informed him.

‘So tell me about the girls in your school.’ Chris said halfway through the ride.

‘Uh, most of the girls like Draco.’ Goyle said,

Chris looked at Draco who nodded, looking smug.

‘Yeah right! They like this little brat?’ Chris asked very stunned.

‘Of course! I could have any girl in the school I want!’ Draco said now being as conceited as Chris. It ran in the family, arrogance.

‘Really? Any girl?’ Chris asked and Draco nodded. Chris had an idea suddenly. 'So, who's the nerdiest, ugliest girl in your school?'

'That would have to be Granger. I hate her so bad, that filthy mudblood.' Draco replied with a look of disgust on his face.

'Really? Oh ok. So you know how you said you could get any girl? I want you to get with this Granger girl.' Chris said grinning with satisfaction.

'WHAT? No way.' Draco said. 'She's friends with Potter.'
__________________
My fics:
"Just A Bet?"-- finished
Shades of Grey

Last edited by hplover_143; 12-28-2005 at 05:46 AM.
hplover_143 is offline  
Old 06-28-2004, 04:45 PM   #2 (permalink)
Ravenclaw
Dementor
 
Sea_Angel's Avatar
 
Join Date: Aug 2003
Location: Canada
Posts: 95
Default

YAY im first to post!!!!!! wow this is gettin really good. plz post more story a.s.a.p.!!!!!!!!
__________________
*~*Some Memories Weren't Meant To Leave Traces*~*
Sea_Angel is offline  
Old 06-28-2004, 05:27 PM   #3 (permalink)
Gryffindor
Red Cap
 
malfoylover1408's Avatar
 
Join Date: Dec 2003
Location: m own personal ****
Posts: 86
Default

I love it,very nice start. Keep Posting!
(yeah I am the 2nd reader)
__________________
i love happy bunny!!!!!!!!!!
malfoylover1408 is offline  
Old 06-28-2004, 06:27 PM   #4 (permalink)
Gryffindor
Red Cap
 
Join Date: Aug 2003
Posts: 77
Default

This looks good! plz post!
BlackCat is offline  
Old 06-28-2004, 06:54 PM   #5 (permalink)
Hufflepuff
Jarvey
 
cho_chang8888's Avatar
 
Join Date: Oct 2003
Location: *In the gym at RBJH stocking a certain redhead*
Posts: 577
Default

ahhh!! Please post!! this is gonna be funny and awesome!! lol!! pams!!!
__________________
JOIN HOGWARTS ADCADEMY!!
cho_chang8888 is offline  
Old 06-28-2004, 07:05 PM   #6 (permalink)
Ravenclaw
Firecrab
 
devils_work's Avatar
 
Join Date: Nov 2003
Location: leapfrog pond
Posts: 918
Default

Nice start! I really like it. Except why is the Chris also called Jake?
__________________
the truth is just an undiscovered lie.
devils_work is offline  
Old 06-28-2004, 07:06 PM   #7 (permalink)
Ravenclaw
Firecrab
 
meesimouseiskool's Avatar
 
Join Date: Feb 2004
Location: Virginia, U.S.A.
Posts: 844
Default

Great start! One thing- sometimes Chris is called Chris, and a few times he was called Jake... I'm kinda confused. Can you explain it to me? It might be super obvious; sometimes I can't see something if it's dancing in a hula skirt in front of me. It's awesome, though. I'll be waiting...
__________________

[FODW] [STDTST] [FF] [X]
~Une rose est beauté*-
meesimouseiskool is offline  
Old 06-28-2004, 07:42 PM   #8 (permalink)
Ravenclaw
Imp
 
bookaholic's Avatar
 
Join Date: Apr 2004
Location: California
Posts: 417
Default

Keep going! This is really good!
__________________
I'm a proud Severus Snape/Minerva McGonagall shipper, and here is the fanfic that proves it!http://www.snitchseeker.com/vb3/showthread.php?t=15104
You can also find my biography of Tom Riddle here!http://www.snitchseeker.com/vb3/showthread.php?t=14721
bookaholic is offline  
Old 06-28-2004, 07:56 PM   #9 (permalink)
Slytherin
Streeler
 
hplover_143's Avatar
 
Join Date: May 2004
Location: turn around
Posts: 246
Default

They chatted some more then wound up in the Great Hall, waiting for the Sorting to finish. There were only a few additions to the Slytherin house this year.

Finally, the feast began. Chris, once again, brought up the subject of girls.

‘So where is this Granger you speak of?’ Chris asked searching the Hall. He was sorted privately and of course, ended up in Slytherin.

‘Over there.’ Crabbe pointed to the Gryffindor table.

‘NO WAY? That’s the ugliest girl in the school? But she’s gorgeous!’ Chris stated, staring in amazement.

She was gorgeous, Draco had to admit. Hermione had changed completely over the summer. She had grown into her body very well and her brown hair was not so bushy anymore, but smooth and wavy. She had attracted many boys attention since they were all gawking at her and pretending to listen to every word she said.

‘You couldn’t get her! Look at all those guys around her, she could pick any one, why would she want you?’ Chris asked.

‘I could so get her. Almost all the girls love me!’ Draco said conceitedly.

‘Really? Fine, I bet you... twenty galleons you can’t get with her.’ Chris said rummaging around in his pockets.

‘I’ll take that bet!’ Draco said agreeing.

‘Hey I want in on this!’ Goyle said. ‘I think you can’t get her. She’s gotten far too beautiful for you.’ Draco glared at Goyle while Chris grinned at him.

‘I think you can’t get her either. Sorry Malfoy! But, well look at her!’ Crabbe agreed, while Chris smirked.

‘Fine. You'll all see. Soon enough, you’ll see her clinging to my arm.’ Draco said and shook hands with Chris.

‘It’s a deal then.’ Chris said. ‘20 galleons. For each of us of course.’

'You mean for me. And that's 60 all together.' Draco said to the three, and turned to look at Granger, who caught his eye and gave him a dirty look.
__________________
My fics:
"Just A Bet?"-- finished
Shades of Grey

Last edited by hplover_143; 12-28-2005 at 05:49 AM.
hplover_143 is offline  
Old 06-28-2004, 08:26 PM   #10 (permalink)
Gryffindor
Official -()- Seeker
*glompsz and runsz*
Padfoot & Lissy's Candy
Ramora
 
SUPERQUEENRD's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jun 2004
Location: over there :p !
Posts: 5,693
Default

Hey I'm a new reader and I have to say that your story is really good! PAMS!PAMS!PAMS!PAMS!PAMS!
__________________
she finally stopped playinq their song ;; when she realized she was dancing . » a l o n e ...♥♥
SUPERQUEENRD is offline  
Old 06-28-2004, 08:49 PM   #11 (permalink)
Ravenclaw
Dementor
 
Sea_Angel's Avatar
 
Join Date: Aug 2003
Location: Canada
Posts: 95
Default

WOW! THIS IS GETTIN VERY GOOD! PLZ POST MORE A.S.A.P.!!!!! plz?
__________________
*~*Some Memories Weren't Meant To Leave Traces*~*
Sea_Angel is offline  
Old 06-28-2004, 10:41 PM   #12 (permalink)
Ravenclaw
Firecrab
 
devils_work's Avatar
 
Join Date: Nov 2003
Location: leapfrog pond
Posts: 918
Default

Nice update! Oh, now I understand the Chris-Jake thing. Except you forgot to change it at one part in the second post too...
__________________
the truth is just an undiscovered lie.
devils_work is offline  
Old 06-28-2004, 11:43 PM   #13 (permalink)
Salsa_Radcliffe
Guest
 
Posts: n/a
Default

commmeeeee onnnnnnnnnnnnn posssstttt morrrreee plzzzz
u started off really well so plz continue.
:flowersmile:
 
Old 06-29-2004, 12:39 AM   #14 (permalink)
Slytherin
Dugbog
 
Join Date: Sep 2003
Location: Milwaukee, Wisconsin
Posts: 100
Default

Man,lol this is so funny. Draco is actually going to pull this off. Come on! LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is going to be so funny. Bet u 10 galleons that he falls in love with her and he or any other slytherin tells Hermione that it was all a bet. :whisle:
Dracos_b.b_gurl is offline  
Old 06-29-2004, 02:26 AM   #15 (permalink)
Gryffindor
Puffskein
 
Join Date: Feb 2004
Location: Somewhere, Far, Far away...
Posts: 1,701
Default

Wow! New reader- this is really good! I like it! I love Hermione and Draco stories- they are SOOOO meant for eachother! Keep it coming! PAMS BUMPS!
Brittany
Chocolat64 is offline  
Old 06-29-2004, 02:47 AM   #16 (permalink)
Slytherin
Streeler
 
hplover_143's Avatar
 
Join Date: May 2004
Location: turn around
Posts: 246
Default

sorry about the chris/jake thingy..
I need to edit a bit better next time. thanks for telling me though. =)
i'll try to post later...
__________________
My fics:
"Just A Bet?"-- finished
Shades of Grey
hplover_143 is offline  
Old 06-29-2004, 03:01 AM   #17 (permalink)
Hufflepuff
Murtlap
 
ShadowfaxSpeed's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jun 2004
Location: Dublin
Posts: 57
Default

wow this is really good! its only the begining but Im hooked all redy! plz add more sooon! (new reader)
ShadowfaxSpeed is offline  
Old 06-30-2004, 01:59 AM   #18 (permalink)
Ravenclaw
Gnome
 
HPFFF730's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jul 2003
Posts: 359
Default

Pretty good ff so far! ^^

Keep up the good work! Please post soon! :flowersmile:
__________________
I feel so broken up

And I give up

I just want to tell you so you know

Here I go, scream my lungs out and try to get to you

You are my only one
HPFFF730 is offline  
Old 06-30-2004, 02:55 AM   #19 (permalink)
Slytherin
Streeler
 
hplover_143's Avatar
 
Join Date: May 2004
Location: turn around
Posts: 246
Default

Here's some more...

Chris walked through the halls having almost everyone say hi to him. He had gotten very popular in just a few days. Almost every girl had a crush on him.

There was hardly any girl who didn’t like him just a bit. Of course, he was almost like the perfect guy. He was extremely good looking. Tall, in shape and athletic. He had dark hair that fell slightly over his intense, deep blue eyes, and his nose and lips? Perfect. Of course, even if he was the ugliest guy in the school, it wouldn’t matter because his personality could back him up. He was charming, witty, funny and sweet. He was like the perfect guy a girl could ask for. Even the guys thought he was cool, he fit in perfectly with everyone.

He only saved the conceited-ness for Draco, who he loved tormenting by talking about himself all day.

‘Draco, what’s up?’ Chris said as he sat down at the Slytherin table for breakfast. It was the third day of classes today.

‘Hey.’ Draco said stuffing his face with food.

‘So, when exactly were you planning to even talk to Hermione?’ Chris asked.
Draco froze and looked at him. ‘Ah, thought I forgot huh?’

Draco shook his head no. ‘I was going to today.’ He lied.

‘Sure, well, since it seems like I would win the bet, I think we should raise the prize. How about ten more galleons, so thirty galleons to the winner.’ Chris said, very sure of himself.

‘Fine by me.’ Draco said.

Draco decided he couldn’t let his cousin win this. It would only make him more conceited. He had to find a way to talk to Hermione soon.

Piece of cake.. Draco thought to himself, as he walked behind Hermione in the hallway. It would be a matter of minutes before Hermione was drooling on him.

‘Granger! Hey.’ Draco greeted her somewhat nervously.

‘What do you want Malfoy?’ Hermione snapped coldly.

‘Just saying hi. Don’t gotta get all bit-’

‘Don’t even say it. Now I have to get to class and your wasting my time.’ Hermione said and walked around the corner.

Huh...it might not be that easy.. Draco thought standing in the middle of the hallway. Well, what was it now, 90 galleons wouldn't be that much to lose..
____
replies are welcomed..

NOTE: NEXT POST IS ON PAGE 6

*just to save you some searching time..*
__________________
My fics:
"Just A Bet?"-- finished
Shades of Grey

Last edited by hplover_143; 01-16-2006 at 11:20 PM.
hplover_143 is offline  
Old 06-30-2004, 03:56 AM   #20 (permalink)
Hufflepuff
Murtlap
 
ShadowfaxSpeed's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jun 2004
Location: Dublin
Posts: 57
Default

ur a great writer! PAMS! im hooked!
ShadowfaxSpeed is offline  
Old 06-30-2004, 04:30 AM   #21 (permalink)
Hufflepuff
Jarvey
 
cho_chang8888's Avatar
 
Join Date: Oct 2003
Location: *In the gym at RBJH stocking a certain redhead*
Posts: 577
Default

AWESOME WRITER!!! I"M HOOKED TOO!!!PLEASE WRITE MORE!!! PAMS!!!
__________________
JOIN HOGWARTS ADCADEMY!!
cho_chang8888 is offline  
Old 07-01-2004, 12:06 PM   #22 (permalink)
Hufflepuff
Jarvey
 
"ChoChang"'s Avatar
 
Join Date: Oct 2003
Location: Portugal
Posts: 550
Default

I'm a new reader!
Well, all I can say is that I'm liking the story so far! You can really captivate people to read your story! PAMS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :sorcerer:
__________________
.:.Portugal for the World Cup.:.
"ChoChang" is offline  
Old 07-01-2004, 04:33 PM   #23 (permalink)
Ravenclaw
Augurey
 
cooly_s's Avatar
 
Join Date: Mar 2004
Location: box
Posts: 11,840
Default

Quote:
Originally posted by "ChoChang"@Jul 1 2004, 04:40 AM
I'm a new reader!
Well, all I can say is that I'm liking the story so far! You can really captivate people to read your story! PAMS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :sorcerer:
I agree!
Post more!
__________________

Huge thanks to Amber for these icons!
cooly_s is offline  
Old 07-02-2004, 04:08 AM   #24 (permalink)
Gryffindor
Bundimun
 
Join Date: Jun 2004
Location: Canada
Posts: 22
Default

great fanfic!! love it! keep posting..
gryffindor_rocks! is offline  
Old 07-02-2004, 10:16 AM   #25 (permalink)
Gryffindor
Red Cap
 
Granger_gurl_rox's Avatar
 
Join Date: Apr 2004
Location: England
Posts: 79
Default

Hey, new reader, this is great. i think conceited Draco is funny lol

Quote:
Huh...it might not be that easy.. Draco thought standing in the middle of the hallway.
This is gonna (and already is) great!!

PAMS!!!
Granger_gurl_rox is offline  
 

Thread Tools

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Trackbacks are On
Pingbacks are On
Refbacks are Off



All times are GMT. The time now is 05:26 PM.


Homework Help Service


This Harry Potter and Wizarding World fan website and community is not endorsed by Hogwarts, Harry Potter, J.K. Rowling, Warner Bros., Daniel Radcliffe, Emma Watson, Rupert Grint, Quidditch, Deathly Hallows, Sorcerer's Stone, Wizards, Muggles, No-Maj, MACUSA, Newt Scamander, Video Games, Half-Blood Prince, Orders of the Phoenix, Goblet of Fire, Philosopher's Stones, Chamber of Secret, Pottermore, Fantastic Beasts and Where to Find Them, Eddie Redmayne, Cursed Child, or any other official Harry Potter source.

All content is copyright ©2002 - 2016, SnitchSeeker.com unless stated otherwise. Privacy Policy

Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.4
Copyright ©2000 - 2019, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
LinkBacks Enabled by vBSEO 3.3.2 © 2009, Crawlability, Inc.
Site designed by Richard Harris Design

1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 40 41 42 43 44 45 46 47 48 49 50 51 52 53 54 55 56 57 58 59 60 61 62 63 64 65 66 67 68 69 70 71 72 73 74 75 76 77 78 79 80 81 82 83 84 85 86 87 88 89 90 91 92 93 94 95 96 97 98 99 100 101 102 103 104 105 106 107 108 109 110 111 112 113 114 115 116 117 118 119 120 121 122 123 124 125 126 127 128 129 130 131 132 133 134 135 136 137 138 139 140 141 142 143 144 145 146 147 148 149 150 151 152 153 154 155 156 157 158 159 160 161 162 163 164 165 166 167 168 169 170 171 172 173 174 175 176