Heartbreak - Sa9+ Hey! I’m Cai, and this is my fourth Fan Fiction on SS. My first three Fan Fics are: What the Girls Think, My Best Memory, and An Obsession. However, this Fan Fic is a one-shot. It’s about someone expressing their feelings for someone else whom they love. While I was writing this, I had someone in mind… let’s see if you can figure it out! Enjoy! <3 Cai ----------- I’ve told myself that I wouldn’t cry. That I would stay strong for you. Yet every time I utter those words, the droplets of my soul would pour down my cheeks. Feeling the cold stone of your grave under my fingertips would bring back those awful memories of that day in Godric’s Hollow. And every day, I would ask myself why it had to be you. Why you? Why did you have to disappear from this world? Why did you have to leave me to fend for myself? Those questions will never be answered now. There have been days where I would just run into an open field and scream at the top of my lungs. Just to let out my sadness and my sorrow. I’d scream how much I love you. How much I miss you. And how much I need you. Yet you’d never hear me. For the Heavens above are too far away. And you’ll never know how much you’ve affected me. And out of the two of us, I bet you’re the happy one. For you have all your friends and family up there. While down here, I have no one. No one to talk to. No one to cry with. No one at all. Just me, my thoughts, and my broken heart. I’ll never forget you. I’ll never stop loving you. For you’re the one who had changed my life. And when I’m at home, looking out the window, you’re the one I’m thinking about. And I’ll never betray you. I’ll never leave you! It’s still hard to believe that I’m never going to see you again. Your hair, your eyes, your smile. I miss it all. I miss you. So every year, on this anniversary of your death, I would come and see your name engraved onto stone. And I would swear that I could hear your voice. Smell your scent. Feel your warmth surround me. And all of that would just bring those memories of us together back as well. But I would force myself to stop. I need to get over those memories. I need to stop the pain. And with one final tear, I would ask you: Will you wait for me? |
That was so good. but i just making a guess but i'm probaly wrong. Harry about Ginny> not sure so don't all hate me if i'm wrong just a guess :) :blush: |
That was so sad. So sad. So frikin sad. So so so so sad <#3 *ish totarly in love with it* <333333333 *runs off to spread the word |
Oww It Was Brilliant .. Hoo Could It Be .. I Think It Could Be Ginny About Harry .. but i dono are you going to tell us or keep us gessing? lol .. loved it .. Rachael X |
Sob... that was so..so..beautifully sad. It was really poetic. sigh. I'm thinking its James talkign about lily..wait. they are both dead. i have no idea... |
Cai, you are way too good at writing. Seriously. I love this one!! I want to say James on Lily, but it's like what lena lovegood said; they're both dead. So maybe Ginny with Harry? Except Harry doesn't belong with Godric's Hollow.... :erm: You going to tell us? :shifty: Quote:
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Aww that was so pretty! But very sad too :cry:, I was thinking Lily & James too but of course it isnt :lol:, Ummm I'll say *like everyone else* Ginny & Harry? ^_^. Please tell us who it was Cai!! :flowers:. |
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Evil. I can't wait. Need to know. But if your going to make us wait I guesse I can. I'll just check back. But it was really good. Hope you do more. |
I really enjoyed this it was beautifuly written and if i had to guess i would say Harry and Hermoine hope you tell us soon :) |
Ok... I'll wait *pouts* :lol: Umm I'll take another guess and say is it Mione & Ron? |
Yer Yer ... Take Grace's Answer .. Ron & 'Mione .. |
Will you tell us now? Please Cai :flowers: ^_^ |
Great!! Keep on the good work~ Seriously, I love your stories. I'm still reading, "An Obsession" and "What the Girls Think". I've read "My Best Memory", and it's surprising how a short story can be so great~ -Mindy |
:lol: I know who it is... I know who it is... This was great, Cai. Very sad, but extremely great! Keep up the great work! |
^^ Who is it? It can't be Lily or James, because they died together. I don't think it could be Ginny about Harry, because she's got her entire family. So I think it's Harry about Ginny. Am I right? Anyway, that was beautifully written Cai; you did an awesome job! |
Okay... Okay... I'll tell everyone who it is!! The couple I'm talking about here is... Hermione to Ron... ;) |
*cheers* The Suspense ends *giggles* Aww, that's sad... and you did a great job with not letting onto who it was. Even if you might not have planned it that way :lol: |
Hermione to Ron!?! What happened to Hermione's parents? |
Aww that soooo sweet loved it PAMS |
So sad...I didn't know who it was...but Hermione and Ron...so sad. I don't know why, but I think a lot of one-shot fics are sad. |
Omg that was so sad *sniffles*. Plz tell us who it is Cai. ~Cheyenne~ |
Last update 28 JAN 2007 |
Reactivated 14 JUN 2007 |
Okay, I just happened to LOVEEEEEEE this.It's just so sad. |
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