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08-15-2010, 11:50 PM
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| | Erkling
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Disclaimer: I don't own the Percy Jackson Series or the Harry Potter Series they were made by the Rick Riordan and J.K. Rowling.Thanks to hermionesclone for helping me out with the title. 
Forever Seventeen;
Chapter One: A little to much to know about Me! Five minutes that's all it took. Yes really five minutes. For me to hate Rachel Lennings. She used to cover it up that she had never hated me but I know she does and now it's been on year since we've known each other and guess what? We still hate each other. It just doesn't surprise anyone that we hate eat other. I mean if she did come off so mean or seeming like she's stuck up then I would've been happy to have been her friend. But we don't have anything in common unless being in love with Nico Di Angelo but the other thing is I'm in love with a Son of Zeus his name is Brian and he's very sweet but I have a thing for Sons of Hades. I don't know why but I do. Mabye it's because most of them come off as dark and mysterious. There like bad boys in a way just because of who there father is. Once you get to know Hades then you'll know that he's not a bad person but just don't get him mad. It'll be the last thing you'll ever and I mean EVER do.
Most people always say to me. 'Wow it must be nice to live up at Mt. Olympus and to be with the Gods and Goddesses.' I wish that was true at most times it's very nice but other times it's just a pain the butt to have to deal with the Gods and Goddesses fighting all the time. I get along quite well with all of the Gods and Goddesses wel except one, Aphrodite. She hates me. You may that say that I'm going a bit overboard, I wish I was but I'm not. She put a curse on me somehow with her little son Cupid's help. It was in 1910 when she put the curse on me and so now it's one hundred years later and I still can't be with a guy without there being a war. You see I fell in love with two Sons of Hades oh and not at the same time. The first one was Jasper Lee, he was so sweet and kind as can be for his father being Hades. But sadly we both fell in love and then the First World War was started don't tell me how but it was my fault completely. Ares and Aphrodite made the war happen. Then a Jasper died when the war started and I just kept crying myself to sleep until I met Jase Cooper. Jase was also a Son of Hades too. He reminded me of Jasper but I loved Jase's name it was so different and weird but also pretty cool. But then it was my fault for another start of another war can you guess which one, World War II. Not long after Jase because Ares killed him. Ugh stupid Ares. But that;s pretty much it for my early love life.
Every couple of years or so I always got to my favorite magical school ever Hogwarts. I love that place. I don't have to do any school work but I love going to the classes just to refresh my memory about all the wizarding things. I love studying it even if some of it is still the same. She can make some new friends and see some old friends. The castle is amazing. It's so huge and beautiful and tons of secrect passageways. Those are alway the best. I have alot of Wizard and Witches as friends and I love them all in a friendly way. There like my second family and there always there for me. Sometimes I like them more than my real family. And they all listen alot better than my family. Oi my family is so bad at listening to each that it ends up being funny. I hope you liked chapter one! Comments please. Good and Bad comments welcomed!
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lord knows it's taken a hell of a beating, a little bit of love is all that it's needing
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Five minutes that's all it took. Yes really five minutes. For me to hate Rachel Lennings.
Rachel: Oh hunny, 5 minutes? It took me 5 seconds! Quote:
I mean if she did come off so mean or seeming like she's stuck up then I would've been happy to have been her friend.
Rach: O_o ME? I am not the stuck up one! Ohhh no, that's you babe. Quote:
But we don't have anything in common unless being in love with Nico Di Angelo but the other thing is I'm in love with a Son of Zeus his name is Brian and he's very sweet but I have a thing for Sons of Hades.
Rach:  Maybe two...considering I dated Bry for awhile...Merlin... Quote:
I get along quite well with all of the Gods and Goddesses wel except one, Aphrodite.
Rachel: Okay, three. Hate her. She hates me. Quote:
Not long after Jase because Ares killed him. Ugh stupid Ares.
Rachel: *growls* Careful girl, that's my daddy your talking about.
xD I love it Bre! And despite her groaning, I think Rachel does too. 
WONDERFUL! And I can't wait for your next postie! <333
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08-19-2010, 02:45 AM
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| | Erkling
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Rachel: Oh hunny, 5 minutes? It took me 5 seconds! Rosaline: More like 1 second really but Ididn't want to seem mean. Quote: Rach: O_o ME? I am not the stuck up one! Ohhh no, that's you babe. Rosaline: Check again. Quote: Rach: Maybe two...considering I dated Bry for awhile...Merlin... Rosaline: Well your not anymore I am. Arn't you dating Nico still. Quote: Rachel: Okay, three. Hate her. She hates me. Rosaline: I think everyone hates her. Quote:
Rachel: *growls* Careful girl, that's my daddy your talking about. Rosaline: Your point.
xD I love it Bre! And despite her groaning, I think Rachel does too.
WONDERFUL! And I can't wait for your next postie! <333
Lurve, your new Numbah 1 stalker! <3 Aww tanks Chelle. I'm glad you lurve it. I'll post again very,very soon.
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08-19-2010, 07:21 PM
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| | Erkling
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i got a heart like a truck, it's been drug through the mud, runs on dreams
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08-21-2010, 02:35 PM
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I read this last night but I couldn't comment o I''m onna comment right now.
First of all love Percy Jackson and I'm glad that he has older sister and I'm really starting to like her too. There's something different about her. I really love her name alot and I just can't wait to read some more.
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08-22-2010, 10:35 PM
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| | Pogrebin
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Eep! It's up! And it's a crossover of Percy Jackson and HP! EEP!  Aw! You mentioned me! ='] That makes me feel so happy! And no problem! 
First line is brilliant! A great opening! Rachel Lennings doesn't sound like a very good person!  She loves a lot of people! And Sons of Hades? Ooh! Who knew evil can look good? Wow! They seriously are evil! I certainly don't want to get in their bad books! Oh dear! First Rachel and now Aphrodite? This isn't good! Cupid's mum! Wow! I know i shouldn't laugh at someone's misery but this reminds me of history! Ah! That's sad! Starting WWI and losing someone you love! Poor girl! Oh no! Things just got worse didn't they? Starting WWII is bad! Losing another loved one! *sigh* Poor girl! Yay! Hogwarts! The way you described it... wow! You've kept it very similar to the way JK described it in HP! Well done!
Sorry for the late reply! I love all the elements of the FF! Like, the historical, the god's and goddesses and the magical element! Love it! Can't wait for more!
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08-25-2010, 11:06 PM
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| | Erkling
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Disclaimer: I don't own the Percy Jackson Series or the Harry Potter Series they were made by the Rick Riordan and J.K. Rowling. Thanks to hermionesclone for helping me out with the title.
Chapter Two: About Me in Detail Well there are some things that everyone needs to know about me and what are some of these things well you'll find out right now!
First of all I'm Rosaline Ameilia Vandwalker, I have long dark brown/ black hair with big natural curls, I have the brightest dark blue eyes ever. But when I'm mad or sad they turn ice blue and sometimes scare people. I was born on August 18th, 1844. My mother is Rachel Vandawaker and she is a mean lady she is also still alive, she's vampire. My father is Poseidon God of the Seas and Earthquakes and creator of Horses. I have a demi god sister names Rosalie Vandawalker and she is also twelve years older than me and she hates my guts. Her father is Zeus King of Gods and other stuff that I don't feel like saying because it's always about him. I was turned immortal by Zeus on my seventeenth birthday in 1861. But he also turned my sister immortal when she turned twenty nine, that same year. Personally I think my family is messed up and that's just my mother and my sister. I could've ended up worse. Then there's my bother Percy. He has a way of acting selfish at times. He can be an idiot and play dumb but he means well, sometimes. Then there are times when he just says things that make be want to have never been turned immotal. If he only knew why I talk about Mt. Olympus alot.
Now I have to tell you about some people including my brother and some of the people that I call my friends and famous demigods that I've met over the years. First is the world famous band The Beatles back in the 1960's all four of them used to be my best friends. I was their biggest fan. John, Paul, Ringo and George were also very funny and kind and they never let fame go to there head. Every year they would back to Camp Half-Blood and act like normal demigods and they would visit there godly parents. The next one is Nico, that's the Son of Hades that I'm in love with. He doesn't act like a true Child of Hades. Then there's Ruby she's Nico's sister. She has this sorta bubbly feeling everytime your around her. Brian, Son of Zeus, he's very sweet and I'm in love with him for very different reasons. I'm not going to tell you those reasons right now though. Now I have two best friends that have been immortal for about as long as I have been and they're also brothers. Damon and Stefan Salvatore. Put it this way they are both very hot and they don't look like there father at all. I got to meet there mother. She's a very nice lady. I knew her before I was immortal. There;s not much to know about her because she didn't live that long. I only met her a few times. There's one special thing about Damon and Stefan there vampire's and not the ones that sparkle. Damon, hmm how can I explain Damon. He likes to party and drink human blood and he can get a bit out of control but he knows power very well. Stefan, I think of Stefan as very down to earth and sweet and kind and caring. How do I know this well used to live with both of them. It was in the 60's. Those were the days. I wish some people really grew up in the 60's. It was the best time ever, well besides the 80's because of all the hairbands. That was when all music was good and not annoying.
Over the years I have learned to deal with the loss of loved ones and the heartbreak oh yeah an of course the crazy times with the Salvatore brothers. I miss them. I should give them a surprise visit seeing as they live in the same house as they did forty years ago and I still have my key to there house.
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i got a heart like a truck, it's been drug through the mud, runs on dreams
& gasoline & that ole highway holds the key, it's got a lead foot down when it's leaving
lord knows it's taken a hell of a beating, a little bit of love is all that it's needing
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08-28-2010, 07:21 PM
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Ok. So i thought that it posted and it turns out it didn't!  Well, i'll post it again!
I like the way you started describing her in the second chapter! Like, it's a good way to make the first one more dramatic!  Wow! Some name! Rosaline Amelia Vandwalker! Sounds nice but powerful! Ooh! Ice blue! I'd hate to look at those eyes when she's angry or upset! OMG! A mother who's a vampire and a father who's Poseidon! Wow! Some family! And being related to Zeus! Talk about pressure! Wow! Being turned immortal on your seventeenth birthday! Some birthday present! Ah! I get the title! It makes sense!  She talks about Mt. Olympus a lot? I wonder why... OMG! The Beatles! I LOVE them! They're such a great band! And you've made them into demi gods! Wow! She's in love with Nico? Hope this doesn't lead to another war! Rosaline's in love with Brain for different reasons? I wonder what the reasons are!  Damn and Stefan! The first thing you've said to describe them is that they're hot! I like that! Ooh! They're vampires? I love another description: "not the ones that sparkle". That made me laugh! Wow! She lived with them! And in the 60's as well! I've always heard people saying that the 60's were the best years in history! Now i just wish i had a time machine... Oh wow! That's so true! You have to learn to deal with loss! It's only then that you can move on! Aw! A surprise visit would be nice!
So sorry about the late reply! Well, this is another chapter that i love! Can't wait for more!
Kita
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| | Erkling
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Thank you so much for the long post and it's okay that you replied late. I haven't been getting that many replies anyway. I think in the last Percy Jackson book or one of the books the author said that the Beatles were demigods. I'm loving the very long comment. I love Stefan and Damon and the Vampire Diaries. Thank you so much for reading Kita. I'll have to get a couple more chapter's up before school starts for me.
Bre
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i got a heart like a truck, it's been drug through the mud, runs on dreams
& gasoline & that ole highway holds the key, it's got a lead foot down when it's leaving
lord knows it's taken a hell of a beating, a little bit of love is all that it's needing
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I loved it Bre! it's wonderful and i love reading your stories  keep writing!
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| | Erkling
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Forever Seventeen;
Chapter Three: Pros and Cons about being Immortal and other stuff. This is what everyone says to me weither it's at Hogwarts or Camp Half-Blood. 'It must be great to be immortal,' or 'Living Forever on end must be awesome,' or something like 'You must've had alot of friends in your time,' Well it is true I do have alot of immortal and mortal friends that is very much the truth but there are some pros and cons about being immortal and there are pros and cons about everything in life. I guess I'll start with the cons; when you have mortal friends weither they are witches and wizards or humans they grow old and die and I'm always there at my friends funerals and it does make me really sad because some of them I'm very close to. Another con is, if I fall in love with a mortal I can't give up my immortality for them and Zeus won't turn the mortal, immortal like myself and the rest of the Gods and Goddesses and it makes me very angery and I also cry alot because I hate telling the guys that. Well I'm going to stop there for cons because there are so many more. Let's go to the pros now. I don't age, I can still have children if I choose to just like the Gods, I don't have any wrinkles, I'm inshape all of the time, I get more powers than I did when was mortal, I get to see how the years have changed and how fast the years go by, I'm one of the lucky few to talk to the Gods. There are many more where that can from.
See I don't know what else to tell any of you lovely people right now. The things I want to tell you I can because you need to know more about me before I can tell you anything deep.
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i got a heart like a truck, it's been drug through the mud, runs on dreams
& gasoline & that ole highway holds the key, it's got a lead foot down when it's leaving
lord knows it's taken a hell of a beating, a little bit of love is all that it's needing
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Wow this FF is just very amazing I'm surprised that you don't have anymore readers. You seem (to me) to be a great writer and you really go in depth with the feels of Miss Rosaline. I really like the added part about The Vampire Diaries. Pure awesomeness. Well I hope you get some more readers because when you do you will deserve them.
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Bre! I'm so sorry, once again, about my late reply. I wasn't able to come on SS for long so i couldn't reply to much. I've been keeping a document titles "SS things to do" and i've been typing my comment on there. Sorry! 
I love the way you started off! Mainly because i thought along the lines of everyone else when i heard that Rosaline was immortal. Oh that's true! There are pros and cons about everything in life! Wow! Oh no! That's sad! Seeing all your mortal friends die like that. Oh dear! Falling in love with a mortal only knowing that you can't be with him forever!  I would hate it if that happened to me. Oh wow! So many pros! No wonder i was secretly jealous of Rosaline being immortal. Aw! I got called lovely along with some other people! Yay! Ah! The last sentence makes a lot of sense! It's the same with normal people; you need to know the basics before you know the secrets.
Sorry once again! That was a great chapter! Loved it!
Kita
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