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Old 11-02-2008, 04:18 AM   #26 (permalink)

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Chapter Six

It had been two days and the letter still lay on the desk, he didn’t want to give it to Lupin but he had only seen Tonk’s once and no one else since he arrived.
“Harry?” called Remus through the door. He sat up and grabbed his glasses and replied “Yeh”
He walked in “So your still here after two days, im surprised you didn’t try to leave”
“You locked the doors and windows I took it as a hint” He pulled a t-shirt over his head covering his bare chest and stood up.
Remus continued to stand in the door way speaking “Well I’m glad you took it like that, breakfast will be ready in ten minutes, and you have a visitor arriving soon so be quick.”
“Who is it?”Harry said looking up knowing it wouldn’t be who he hoped.
“Hermione”
“What does she want?”
“You’ll have to ask her that” he turned and left walking down the staircase leaving Harry to his thoughts.
He showered, changed and made his way downstairs; he nearly smiled seeing the brown bushy hair moving as the young woman spoke animatedly to there host’s but then he remembered that they hadn’t spoken since leaving school months ago.

“Hello Harry” said Tonks brightly, placing plates of toast, eggs and bacon on the table.
“Morning Tonk’s where have you been?” he sat on the other side of the table carefully placing himself as far away from Hermione as he could and refusing to look at her.
“Just on some order business and work, the usual”
“Any news on the Voldie front” Tonk’s nearly choked on her toast, Hermione her tea and Lupin his bacon
“Voldie?” questioned Tonk’s in laughter
“Yeah, makes him sound friendlier, I thought anyway and people don’t wince so much though it’s more choking in your case”
“Oh ok, well ‘Voldie’s’ the same as ever, there hasn’t been any deaths in the last few days but it’s not clear why”
“No deaths isn’t that a good thing”
“Might mean he’s building up to something big, not so good”
“Ahhhh” Harry took a sip of pumpkin juice, and looked at his plate feeling Hermione’s stare upon him,

“Harry” She said before taking another sip from her cup.
“Yes” He picked up toast and bacon putting them on his plate.
“I’m trying here you could at least look at me when you talk”
“I tried those last weeks at school, you didn’t want to know and neither did Ron.”
“Well I’m here now”
He chewed his crust from his toast slowly not bothering to reply still focusing away from her.
“You’re acting childishly now Harry”
“I’m being treated like a child, I might as well act like one for there benefit and yours”

Tonk’s and Remus got there cue to leave them to it when Harry stabbed his bacon with his fork and looked at her angrily.

The room now only held them and Hermione started to talk once more.
“It’s your own fault for acting so stupidly, you should never have involved Ginny in your life until everything was over with you know who”
“You can say Voldemort you know” He stood up to leave abandoning his plate of food, he didn’t feel hungry anyway.
“Just listen to me Harry”
“Why should I, your only going to say the same as everyone else. Im doing as im told, im here and she’s at the burrow what else do you want? Shall I move to the North Pole, or just give my self up to him, I can get a large plate from somewhere all I need is an apple in my mouth and the pictures complete”
“Stop being silly Harry, no one’s asking anymore of you then they already have. You have to be sensible for your sake as well as Ginny’s, If you want to be together at the end of all this -”
“If I make it though to the end of this, the prophesy may have broken but we know what it said”
“What did Dumbledore tell you about how to stop him with the Horcruxes?” she asked meekly as he walked around the room
“What do you care, I’ve told Ginny, know one else needs to know”
“I care, so does Ron and the rest of the Weasley’s there just worried for Ginny”
“Yeh right” he walked out of the door and up the small stair case to his room. He sat on the bed staring out of the window when she burst in.
“Look Harry, stop acting like an idiot. Ginny needs you alive and your going to have to accept any help and advice from me and the order if you want to be. She’s not coping at all, not eating much and lying in bed all day”

“AND THIS IS MY FAULT HOW! YOU ALL ASKED ME TO STAY AWAY, TO SAVE THE WORLD WITHOUT HER AND TO HIDE FROM VOLDEMORT MAKE UP YOUR MIND, CAUSE IM NOT GOING TO BE ABLE TO DO ALL THREE FOR MUCH LONGER!”

He stood up and shouted at her watching her recoil in shock; he had never flown off the handle in front of her like this before.

He pulled out his wand in rage and pointed it at the letter making it float towards her swiftly. “Give this to Ginny; I’ll see you all in school, don’t come to see me again” he sat on the bed as she left the letter in hand.
*****

Ginny sat up wrapped in her quilt, her face pale apart from the large purple bags under her eyes. She was having far from the dreamless sleep she had hoped and was being haunted by images of Harry’s death. There was a knock on the door and Hermione walked in. The glass had been cleaned up the pictures repaired but they now lay in a box under her bed.
“Ginny, I’ve been to see Harry”
“You have?” She looked at her examining her face for details.
“I’m not allowed to tell you where he is”
“I thought as much, how was he?”
“He’s angry”
“What, did you expect he was going to be pleased to see you?”
“No…but just not that angry, it doesn’t seem like him”
“But it is him, how can you think he wouldn’t be angry with you, with Ron, with my whole family as well as Voldemort, and the Order? He’s angry at everyone for everything and because he doesn’t want to fight anymore, but he knows he has too. We understand why you think keeping us apart will make me safe and it easier for him but its not. It’s tearing us both apart, when we do fight we want it to be together were stronger then you all might think”
Hermione didn’t know how to reply, Ginny really did know him better then anyone else.
“Did he say anything to you about me?”
“He gave me this” she handed her the letter.

She read it and smiled, “I take it you read it” Ginny looked at her and Hermione answered shyly “Yes but-”
“It’s ok, it would be confusing for you but I know what the letter really says as it’s addressed to me not you”
“Do you mean a spell?”
“To prevent nosey people like your self and my family from reading the real contents. I suppose to you it said something thing like thanks for the present see you at school”
Hermione nodded “He thanked me and Ron and said he was at the Dursley’s that’s why it never made sense”
“Oh well” She grinned slyly as she folded the letter up and placed it in a draw. “Is there anything else you wanted, apart from to tell me you’ve seen by boyfriend when I can’t or is that it?”
“Please Gin don’t be like that, I want to talk to you as friends like we used to”
“Only Harry can call me Gin, you gave up the right to be my friend when you joined forces with my family to keep us apart”
“Please Ginny, im your friend I always have been I always will be but you know as well as I do this is for the best”
“THIS IS FOR THE BEST? THAT IS WHAT EVERYONE KEEPS SAYING! LOOK AT ME DO I LOOK LIKE THIS IS WORKING FOR ME, DO I LOOK HAPPY! DOES HARRY LOOK LIKE HE’S GOING TO BE ABLE TO FIGHT VOLDEMORT, IS HE HAPPY?”
“No” Hermione stated simply
“Well then” Ginny covered her self fully in the covers as Hermione left the room.
There where no more tears for Ginny to cry and she lay silently willing herself to sleep and failing miserably.
*****

Harry lay on his bed deep in thought, her fiery red hair; chocolate brown eyes and flowery scent made him feel depressed knowing how far away he was from her but he was reassured in the fact he would see her again soon. He closed his eyes drifting in and out of consciousness when a voice woke him up.
“Harry” it called from downstairs,
“Harry”
He pulled himself up and rubbed his eyes, placed his glasses on and walked down the stairs.
“Harry you have another visitor”
“Harry” said the man sitting at the table one hand on a glass of water the other on the table.
“Mr Weasley” he replied, as he sat down opposite him gazing at him directly.
“Ginny, it seems is not coping as well as we thought she would”
“I’ve been told this by Hermione only this morning, why are you telling me as well? It’s not as if im happy about being kept away from her or her not eating or sleeping”
“We think, for Ginny’s sake need you to break off this relationship with her -”
“I won’t do it Mr Weasley”
“Please Harry”
“No, I’m sorry sir”
“You need to see it from our families point of view were doing what we think is right for her”
“I f you take her away from me then you already have then I’ll give myself up to voldemort, you can fight him yourself.”
“You’re being selfish and irresponsible by letting it continue”
“I’d rather die, then let any harm come to her. I’m not going to let anything happen to her no matter what goes on, Mr Weasley, I care for her too much to let her go”
“You have to let her go for both your sakes”
“If I break her heart my own goes with it, I’ll do everything I can to keep her safe and protect her but I don’t think dumping her is going to help either of us”
“If you talk to her, if I arrange a meeting between you two can you get her to leave her room, eat and sleep properly”
Harry nodded
“In a two day’s, the burrow at noon, if she doesn’t get any better”
“Can I talk to her alone?”
“I don’t see why not”
“But I won’t break up with her” Mr Weasley bowed his head in response, then got up to leave, “Goodbye Harry” He walked out the door deep in thought.
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Chapter Seven

Remus Lupin stood in the hallway it was exactly five minutes to twelve and he was waiting for Harry. He came down the stairs, looking brighter then he had the last four days as they walked to just outside the garden gate. Out of nowhere a black cloaked figure appeared it’s silver hand clutching it’s wand an evil smile on its pointed face.

“Peter” smiled Harry drawing his wand, “Isn’t Snape with you or even Bellatrix, I could do with killing some scum and to get the three of you at once would really make my day”

“The dark lord rewarded Severus most kindly for disposing of Dumbledore, and Bellatrix for getting rid of Sirius, imagine what he will do for me when I bring him Harry Potter” he raised his wand.
“Now you don’t want to do that Peter” this time Lupin spoke his own wand pointed at him, Harry stood next to him still smiling.

“You as a werewolf know the powers the dark lord has, even your kind are at his side, why don’t you join them and reap the rewards of faithful service, just think of all the information you could give to our cause my old friend” Peter smiled showing his yellowy pointed teeth and an glint of eagerness in his eyes.

“As appealing as that sounds, I don’t think I’ll take you up on that offer” Lupin stared at him,

“How did you find me?” said Harry,
“I knew you be somewhere with an order member, today Yaxley’s guess was right and here I am”
“You never do anything unless there’s something in it for you, why would he send you and not someone more important?”
“He trusts me more after I gave my hand to bring him back and joined him showing my loyalty” He lifted up his sleeve showing the dark mark branded on his skin. Harry looked at him in disgust.

“I saved you Peter; I stopped Lupin and Sirius killing you. You owe me your life”
“My life belongs to the Dark Lord; you saved me only to save the Werewolf and the blood traitor”
“I saved you because I didn’t want the people I cared about to be murderers over an insignificant piece of dirt like you. I unlike you don’t sell my friends out to save my own skin” Harry walked closer to him his wand now at Pettigrew’s nose. “Give me one reason why I shouldn’t kill you now”
“You don’t kill people; you just get others to do it for you”
“That’s not a reason Peter” Harry was getting angry, the smelly little creature that stood before him had betrayed his parents and got them killed now he was going to get him back.
Peter began to shake; he knew Harry wasn’t kidding as he looked into those emerald eyes fierce with hatred and ready for revenge, “Lily…” Harry whispered, “James… you Peter, you betrayed them, you killed them”

Peter shook his head, tears falling as he knelt on the floor at Harry’s feet.
“The dark Lord has such power, please Harry, im sorry” his wand fell beside him and Harry placed the tip of his own at Peter’s forehead.
“They were your friends, Peter, look what you’ve become without them” the mass in the cloak snivelled and wept. He looked up into the young mans eyes, his face tear stained and swollen. He looked pathetic, like a dirty smelly rat in robes, but he was sorry.

“Forgive me Harry”

Suddenly the silver hand began to quiver. Peter held it up it shone in the sunlight and slowly the amount of silver grew as it crept up his arm. He cried out in pain and lay writhing on the floor as Harry stepped back in surprise. “No!” Peter cried out. Harry kept looking at this happening but knew there was nothing he could do. Harry knelt down but Lupin tried to pull him away. He refused to move and held Peter’s hand as he looked into his eyes. The silver appeared at his feet and other arm climbing its way up to his neck,
“For -” and in a final cry of pain his last breath failed.

Peter Pettigrew was dead.

“I can’t” said Harry letting go of his cold metal hand. He got up and turned away. Lupin raised his wand and conjured a black sheet wrapping the body in it magically. “Go to the burrow, I’ll go to the order with this”

Harry nodded apparating to the garden gate of the Burrow, leaving Lupin with the shrouded corpse. He walked down the path and knocked at the door. Images flashed in his head, he saw Voldemort’s eyes, his wand drawn, and a scream from his mouth. Harry shook his head feeling his scar burn slightly, and his stomach lurch.

*****


He glanced at the clock on the wall it said five to twelve. Harry would be here soon and he didn’t want to see him anywhere near Ginny but there was nothing he could do. He was allowed to attend the burrow meetings but everyone was careful not to tell him where Harry was even Hermione, maybe Ginny was right, maybe Hermione didn’t want him because of who he was. Being friends Harry was fun at times but dangerous as well as stupid, he had done it for six years and no one knew who he was apart from the death eaters, which was not who he had hoped to catch the attention of. He went upstairs and knocked on her door.

“Ginny?”
“What do you want Ronald?” the door remained shut; they hadn’t spoken since she slapped him.
“Nothing” he muttered indistinctly,
“Then go away” came the reply

Ginny sat nervously on her bed; they were letting her see Harry today but why. After everything they had put her through to stop her from seeing him, why would they say “ok” now?

She waited for the sound of his footsteps to go up the long stair case, and looked at her clock it was noon. She walked down the stair case to see her mother in the kitchen preparing lunch.
“You can use the living room to talk to him, take your time you won’t be seeing him again till school if you’re lucky that is”
“What do you mean lucky?”
“Once you’re at school you think he’s going to wait for you after class when he’s got his newts to do and work out what to do about you know who”
“I don’t expect him to, we know what’s important, but seeing each other will keep us both sane”
“Ok but I don’t say I didn’t warn you about him, you’ve got to know him at those weeks in school and your secret visits”
“Ron told you”
“Yes, but like I said you’ve gotten to know him more but he’s not going to get attached to you like you have to him”
“So what do you call sleeping together, if that’s not attached then what is?”
“You told Ron you never…”
“I don’t tell Ron everything” she looked at her mother furiously “Now you’re listening to me, im glad that lie made a difference”
“You don’t lie about things like that, not to me”
“Then listen, I’m with Harry no matter what happens, no matter what you say or do. We are together and nothing will change that”
“Then where is he” said Molly going to the sink with a bowl, the clock said five past.
“Late, what else does it look like?”
“You tell me” she turned from peeling potatoes and looked at her daughter directly, “Why do you think he’s allowed to come today?”
“You tell me” she turned and left to sit in the living room slamming the door behind her.

He wasn’t going to dump her, he knew that he promised and she believed him. She sat waiting, fidgeting with her hair, her jeans the cushions on the couch. Looking at the clock made it worse but she glanced any way, quarter past twelve. Something had happened she knew it, just as she got up there was a popping outside, moving quickly to the window she looked out to see Harry, walking to the door looking pale and agitated his wand still drawn, he knocked and her mother let him in.

*****


“Mrs Weasley” said Harry politely, stepping past her and inside putting his wand away,
“Harry” she replied moving back to the sink,
“Peter Pettigrew’s dead” he looked at her as her face changed to surprise, “You…”
“Voldemort” he replied, she winced and filled up a saucepan with the potatoes,
“Sorry” he noticed her face change at his name “He came after me and Lupin as we were leaving, where’s Ginny?” he looked around the room.
“The living room” She turned back to the sink, “Remus is…?”
“Dealing with the body”
He looked at her back since she wouldn’t turn around. “He’ll be here soon, and Mrs Weasley?”
“Yes Harry”
“Thankyou for letting me see her” he turned and walked in to the living room greeted by a mass of long red hair as Ginny threw herself on him gripping him in a hug.

“What happened?” She asked as Harry sat on the couch and cast the Muffilato spell. She placed herself on his lap looking concerned.
“Peter Pettigrew’s dead”
“How, you didn’t…?”
He took her hand,
“No, no, it was Voldemort; you know that silver hand of his” She nodded “Well it kind of killed him, he said he was sorry and it…” his voice trailed off
She put a hand on her mouth in shock, “But you’re ok”
“Yes” he kissed her forehead “but apparently your not”
“What? What’s wrong with me?”She punched his arm playfully
“Hermione told you she came to see me two days ago I presume”
“Yes and?”
“So did your dad and they both found time to tell me to dump you as well as to tell me you’re not eating or sleeping properly and it’s my fault, that’s why im allowed to see you” he stroked her hair as she lay against his chest. “They hope I can change your mind and make you see reason, I hope I can to”
“I can’t face them all yet”
“But you have to eat and sleep, I can’t have you wasting away for my sake”
She sighed “have lunch with us today and I promise I’ll eat properly until I see you at school them I’m going for junk food” she smiled
He laughed “ok and what about the sleeping and not leaving your room”
“I’ll be sociable again when im not living here”
“You’ve got a while”
“Fine, I’ll talk to the lot of them and I’ll leave my room but you can’t get me to sleep normally”
“Why?”
“Because every time I close my eyes I see…”
“See what?”
“You…dead”
“Gin” he held her closer to him and placed his arms around her back and waist. “You can’t think like that, I’m not going any where, I won’t die for this not when I have you waiting for me and fighting with me”
“I just…”
“I know, but don’t worry about me, just keep yourself safe, fed and not sleep deprived”
“I…”
“Please Ginny” He looked at her seriously, and she nodded nestling herself against his chest, feeling it rise and fall with each breath.

“Now we have that sorted out, can I kiss you?” she smiled looking upward with her head still at his chest.
“I suppose so” he said smiling back.

She moved around to face him and put her arms around his neck, sitting side ways her legs stretched out on the remainder of the couch. He moved placing his hands at her waist and enticed her closer to him with a single soft kiss on the lips. She giggled as he kissed her neck and cheeks and pulled his face towards hers closing her eyes and kissing him passionately. They broke apart foreheads touching both faces smiling, just as lunch was called.

“We’d better go” Said Harry getting up and lifting her with him,
“Yep” said Ginny. They stood looking at each other just for a few seconds before smiling.

They both thought the same thing and moved forward at the same time there lips touching there eyes closed, they kissed like they never had before.

All the emotions they felt over the last few weeks came out, as there arms wrapped tighter around each other and a warm tingling sensation crept through there bodies and they felt at peace with everything.

The room filled with something, something so powerful, so full of hope it emanated from every fibre of there being, it was love.

It was felt throughout the house. As Molly paused putting out lunch, as Ron stopped just for a instant as he watched outside the living room door, Hermione looked up from her book from the garden and Remus stopping mid step as he walked though the front door. They continued what they where doing as Harry and Ginny moved apart still standing, lost in the moment and staring into each others eyes smiling.
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They walked hand in hand to the dinning room,
“Is it ok if Harry stays for lunch?” said Ginny looking her mother,
She nodded and sat down waving her wand causing an extra plate and cutlery to zoom out of the door and place them selves at an empty spot. They sat down next to each other nervously, Ginny still holding tightly on to his hand.

Ron walked in and sat down next to his mother and opposite Harry, Hermione sat the other side of Ron and Lupin took the space left next to Harry. It looked like they had taken sides and Remus glanced at there hands still held tightly under the table. Ron didn’t look up from his plate; Mrs Weasley seemed lost in thought so Hermione spoke first to break the silence.

“Has Luna been round yet, she offered to show me the stream and grounds round her house”
“No, maybe after lunch we could go and see her instead” Ron said poking food round his plate. He gave up; he was more hungry then miserable so began to eat fast hoping to leave soon.

Mrs Weasley then looked up “Harry, how did Pettigrew die?”
He looked shocked to be spoken to mid way through a mouthful of potato; he swallowed quickly and went to reply, when Hermione’s fork dropped on the floor “Pettigrew’s dead?”
“Yes, the hand that Voldemort gave him killed him when he asked me to forgive him” he wouldn’t look at her so focused on the window behind her head.
“He stopped us as we where leaving to come here from where im being kept”
“Where’s that?” Ron looked up curiously
“You know he can’t tell you Ron” said Hermione poking him in the ribs with her fork as she picked it up.
“You know, I bet Ginny does too, why should I be left out of the loop?”
“I don’t know where he’s staying” said Ginny staring at him, “it’s for Harry’s safety”
“And what about your safety, you think if you know who comes here and says ‘hey where’s Harry?’ and you say ‘I don’t know’ he won’t kill you anyway”
“No, but if I did know he would still kill me because I would never tell him”
“And what use is that, then you’re just another dead person and Harry’s off on the run somewhere not even thinking about you”
Harry squeezed her hand and looked at her, she didn’t reply to him but Ron moved his mouth as if to continue,
“Don’t say another word Ron!” said Harry angrily, He took a deep breath to calm himself down and stared at him, he clutched the wand in his pocket with his left hand, still holding Ginny’s hand in his right.
“Don’t Harry” she whispered moving his hand away from his pocket, and placed her head on his shoulder, “he’s just doing it to annoy you”
“Well it’s working” he muttered in reply,

“Harry is staying with me and Tonk’s, and that information is not to leave this room” Ron looked at Lupin, and nodded before he got up to leave, Hermione followed him upstairs where they heard them shout at each other before she came down stairs and went out to the garden burying herself in her book her face red in anger.

Harry and Ginny looked at each other instinctively, let go of each others hands and left the table. Ginny went out to the garden while Harry walked up to Ron’s room and banged on the door.

*****

“What did he say to you Hermione?”Ginny sat at the table facing her looking at the cover of her book which she wouldn’t move from her face.
“Horrible things” she replied,
“Well he’s not the nicest person in the world right now”
“It’s not that I don’t like him it’s just he can be such a pig sometimes”
“That’s just Ron, he unfortunately has no understanding of girls, neither does Harry but at least he tries” she smiled,
“Well in that respect your lucky, but it’s not safe for you to keep seeing him, you know that yet you won’t give up”
“Why should I give him up, Voldie ain’t going to stop me not when I’ve waited so long for him to even notice me let alone call me his girlfriend”
“If ‘Voldie’ doesn’t stop you your mother will”
“If Voldemort wasn’t around she wouldn’t need to stop me, she’s tried all ready and look where it’s got her”
“Ok then, now we no nothing but death will tear you two apart what do I do to shut up Ron on the subject?” Hermione smiled at her sarcastically, looking out from the side of the large book.
“You do like him don’t you?”Ginny smiled back, for the first time in weeks.
Hermione sighed and put her book on the table,
“I do like him, I really do but he’s too, well unstable, jealous, meddlesome and angry at the moment. He won’t talk to you or Harry without getting mad but we all need to stick together the four of us, but I don’t think its going to happen”
“Just let Harry talk to him, they haven’t said anything nice to each other since we left school so this might be a start”
“You haven’t exactly been good to him yourself though”
“Im his sister, im allowed too get angry when he tries to stop me from seeing the boy I love”
“You love Harry?”
“Yes” she looked at her, her gaze unfaltering, “Really?” Hermione looked at her critically
“With all my heart”
“Then we can’t stop you” Hermione smiled and picked up her book, as Ginny sat back in her chair and closed her eyes smiling.

*****

Molly looked at her daughter from the window and closed it quietly,
“You shouldn’t spy on her Molly, just trust her” Lupin was still sitting at the table,
“She says she loves him, what does she know she’s only -”
“Sixteen, the same age as you when you ran off with Arthur wasn’t it”
“Yes but”
“But what”, Said Lupin smiling, “We can’t even keep them away from each other for four days” he took a sip of his drink,
“He’s more dangerous to be with then Arthur, he’s seventeen year old boy, hiding from the darkest wizard of all time and dating her in secret so not to get her killed”
“Well you got me there”
“I’m glad you agree with me”
“I never said anything of the sort, who am I to say that keeping them apart is the best for the both of them. We’ve both seen them together today, I know you saw as well I did that they never let go of each others hands the entire time throughout lunch”
“I did, but what does that show only that there dependant on each other out of fear”
“Or love Molly, Dumbledore always said it was a powerful magic Harry had in him which stopped Voldemort when he was an infant, what if this will help him to defeat him now, then what?”
“I won’t let my daughter be sacrificed for the use of the order or Harry”
“You might not have a choice Molly”
*****

“Ron, open the door”
“Bugger off Harry, I’ve seen you enough for one day and looking at you two… well feeling up my little sister isn’t exactly talking to her is it”
“You spied on us”
“I couldn’t hear you since you did the that spell but seeing it was enough”
“Just open the door and speak to me face to face, let me explain and tell you what we said”
“No”
“Fine” Harry pulled out his wand “Bombarda!” the door flew to the other side of the room bashing against the wall. Ron stood in shock and fumbled for his wand on the table. “Accio” said Harry, Ron’s wand came zooming toward him and he grabbed it looking angry.
“I came to talk about you and Hermione, not duel”
“Then why in Merlins name did you blow my door off the hinges?”
“Well you weren’t going to let me in any other way” Said Harry pointing both wands at him,
“Ron, sit down and listen to me”
He sat on the bed as Harry stood in front of him,
“Tell me exactly why you don’t want me to see your sister, but don’t mention the old Voldie excuse in any way” Harry stood wands still out as he looked at Ron staring at the ground, “Voldie?” said Ron looking up, “who’s? -”
“Scary guy, red eyes, black robes, wants’ me dead so he can live forever”
He nodded showing a glimmer of a smile,
“I don’t want you dating her because she’s my sister”
“How is that a valid reason, I could say I don’t want you dating Hermione cause she’s my friend”
“But you wouldn’t”
“I could though I doubt you’d listen”
“You know how I felt when she dated Dean and Michael, why would you think I’d think any different of you”
“Because I’m your best friend Ron, you’ve stood by me through everything the same as Hermione, I hoped you wouldn’t see me as a threat to Gin, but it’s obvious you do”
“Friends don’t date there little sisters”
“If I had a little sister I wouldn’t stop you, yes I’d be annoyed and surprised but I wouldn’t stop you not if I knew you really liked her, or even loved her just as must as I love Ginny”
“You… love…Ginny?”
“Yes” his hand holding the wands fell to his side in surprising himself,
“You… love…Ginny?” Ron repeated in a daze before he stood up suddenly “YOU CAN’T!”
“Why can’t I Ron?”Harry said pacing back and forth in front of him.
“Because… just because”
“Because isn’t a reason, your acting like Pettigrew, he never gave me a proper answer when I asked him why shouldn’t I kill him, you’d think he would but he didn’t”
“Don’t compare me to him, and I thought you said you didn’t kill him”
“I didn’t, I just came close too…” Harry’s voice trailed off with his thoughts as Peters failed mission came to mind again, “…answer me, why not?” he focused on why he was talking to Ron,
“I don’t know Harry” Ron said sitting down again and held his head in his hands “But If you loved her as much as you said you do you’d stay away for her sake”

“I won’t Ron, I can’t” Harry turned and walked down the stairs to Lupin and Molly sitting in silence in the kitchen.

“We’d best be going now Harry” said Lupin,
“Ginny still outside?” said Harry moving to the window and looking out anxiously,
Molly nodded and then spoke, “Harry, I think you should stay here. Peter knew you where at Lupins and now it’s not safe. They are going to move you again but I think it would be better for them to leave you here and then Tonk’s and Remus can go somewhere else as well rather then staying somewhere the death eaters know you’ve been”
“You’re sure Molly?” Remus looked at her slightly smiling,
She couldn’t speak but nodded.
“Then it’s settled, you stay here and I’ll be back with your belongings” Lupin said standing up.
“Thank you Mrs Weasley” Harry said politely, “Is it ok if I go and tell her?”
“Yes” she got up as Harry left, “I hope for there sakes your right Remus”
“I do too” He walked to the door “Look after them both Molly, and take care of yourself as well as your children”

She nodded as she sat down again hearing the squeals of joy and laughter from the garden. She hoped she was doing the right thing, but until this war was over she knew she wouldn’t find out.
*****

Ron looked down from his window to the garden. He saw Harry tell Ginny something and then she jumped on him obviously happy about what ever it was. He saw them kiss and moved his gaze to Hermione, she looked so beautiful even when she was angry with him, he turned walked out and downstairs to see what the fuss was about.

“What’s going on mum?”
“Harry is staying here until the four of your return to school”
“Oh” he sat down at the table, “Has Lupin gone?”
“He’s bringing back Harry’s things then he and Tonk’s are moving somewhere else”
“So his house isn’t safe anymore”
“Not since Pettigrew found it this morning”
Ron put his head in his hands, “Where is he sleeping?”
“You will be sharing with him, until you sort your problems out, whether you like it or not”
He sighed, “what ever, as long as he doesn’t touch my stuff”
“Do you know how silly you sound Ronald?”
“He’s not my best friend anymore and you can’t force him to be, how can you be ok with them being together?!”
“I don’t know, but what else can I do, look how happy they are”

They did look; Harry sat talking to Hermione, Ginny sitting in his lap as they spoke both smiling and laughing for the first time in days. Ginny and Harry didn’t stop smiling for the rest of the day even as they talked and fell asleep in each other arms on the couch, much to the surprise of Mr Weasley when he came home and found them. He placed a blanket over them and went to the kitchen to Molly sitting in a chair a glass of water next to her and a smile on her face when she saw him.

“Harry’s staying here until school starts, you heard about Pettigrew no doubt?”
“Yes, they said it was the hand you know who gave him” Arthur said sitting down next to her
“Harry told us what happened; did Remus and Tonk’s leave ok?”
“Yes, they’ll be round tomorrow for the meeting, there staying at Tonk’s parents house, it’s had the usual spells placed upon it so they should be ok”
“Arthur, are you alright with Harry staying here. Remus says they should be safe for now”
“Just until school starts then who knows what will happen then”
Molly glanced into the living room at there smiling faces, “They haven’t stopped smiling all day, there even doing it in there sleep”
“Well at least she’s sleeping again” he replied,
Molly nodded
“Come on, you need to sleep too” he turned out the lights and closed the living room door as they climbed the stairs to there room.
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Great post. i'm soooo glad that Mrs. Weasley is warming to the idea of them being together. And Hermione needs to snog Ron sensless, maybe then he'd be ok with Harry and Ginny. Most people become ok with a relationship when they're getting a little action of their own. (Sorry, I had to say it)

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since you have all been the best readers in he world i think you deserve an other chapter, ive been writing busily and have written up to chapter 20, theres just some tweaking and changing to do, so with out further ado ENJOY !

Chapter nine

There were three weeks of happiness following Harry’s removal to the burrow, as he and Ginny spent more time together, discussing each other, Ron and Hermione and how to bring about the down fall of Voldemort.

Ron had been living the hermit’s life since Harry had come to stay, and even though they shared a room they hadn’t spoken properly or even talked about what was said between them that day. Ron said little to any one but was still eating just as furiously showing that what ever was wrong with him was not affecting his appetite.

One afternoon Harry sat on his bed, Ginny next to him as they talked. Ron was downstairs asking Hermione about school work which had long since been completed.

“Gin, Ron’s the only one who still has a problem”
“Well it’s his problem” she replied
“Hmm” He lay back on his pillows, his arms behind his head. She lay down next to him her arm across his chest.
“He was your friend and now he doesn’t want to be, he is still my brother even though I don’t want him to be, count yourself lucky”
“Gin, be nice” he moved an arm to her waist but she moved it away,
“Be nice, why should I?” she sat up her face angry,
“Then don’t be, but he is your brother and he was once my best friend, you are allowed to show some remorse for being mean to him”
“And what if I don’t want to, what if he was so horrible to the both of us I can’t forgive him for what he did and said” she stood up and he sat up looking worried,
“Please Gin, wait a minute and talk to me” he reached for her arm as she moved to leave, “Why, you’re going to defend him after what he said about you not bothering about me if die, or saying horrid stuff when he tried to take me away from you at the Leaky cauldron”
“No but -”
“But what Harry, he just doesn’t want us together because he doesn’t have the guts to ask out Hermione”
“That’s not it Gin” she reached out to the door handle, “Just wait and listen, please Ginny” she turned back and looked in his eyes,
“Fine, be quick, why?”
“He say’s he doesn’t want me with you because you’re his sister”
“That’s not a reason Harry” She moved to leave again,
“Give me a chance I’m trying to explain, he wasn’t exactly clear”
“Keep going then” she said sitting on the end of the bed away from him.
“He was mad when you dated Michael and Dean, but he’s madder at me then you now. He thinks I should have never asked you to be with me because it’s too dangerous and that I’m his best friend and I should have known better then to date his little sister”
“So this is all because he thinks you betrayed him, by asking me out?”
“Yes” Harry replied, “He’s not mad at you, he’s mad at me, so I have to sort this out if I don’t want him killing me in my sleep”

“I would never do that, I’d wait until you were awake” the door opened and Ron walked in “Having your first row were you, sorry I interrupted”
“Well since you where listening you’d know what it was about” Ginny got up and pushed past him to leave. He grabbed her arm “Wait a minute sis, you have to say sorry for that”
“Let me go Ron, or I’ll hex you into oblivion” She smiled drawing her wand and pointing at his chest,
“And if she doesn’t I will” Harry stood up pointing his own wand when Hermione came rushing up the stairs holding a book and parchment.

“Ron you forgot you’re… Ron what are you doing, Harry, Ginny what’s going on?”
“There just having a little lovers tiff, I suppose he’s angry he’s not getting any action while he’s here”
Ginny was about to hex him but Harry was too quick; he moved forward swiftly and punched him in the face.
“I should have done that week’s ago” he said walking past Hermione as she went to Ron’s aid; he knelt on the floor blood pouring on the carpet. Harry went outside into the front garden and out of the gate, Ginny followed but thought better of it when she saw him put his invisibility cloak on and head to the village.

He’ll be fine he just needs to cool off; she thought and headed back inside to see her mother rushing up the stairs wand in hand.

*****


“You shouldn’t have said that Ronald” Hermione sat next to him as Mrs Weasley left
“Why not, it was easy and now we know how crazy he is”
“Harry isn’t crazy, he’s angry because you’re being horrid, immature and behaving like a spoilt brat”
“That simple is it, thanks for clearing that up for me” he lay back on his pillows “You can go now”
“You know you might have stood a chance with me, if you weren’t such a nasty pathetic little creature” she got up to leave when he registered what she said,
“Hey wait a minute, what do you mean might of stood a chance?”
“You know Ron, im not going to answer that, figure it out yourself” She left closing the door behind her leaving him feeling confused and angry with himself for letting her go.

Hermione made her way to Ginny’s room to find her staring out the window looking anxious and worried.
“Where did Harry go?”
“For a walk to calm down, it’s ok though he has his cloak”
“So why you looking so worriedly out of the window every few seconds”
“It’s what I do, how’s the git, has he bled to death yet?”
“Ginny he’s your brother”
“I have five other’s, I think I can manage without that one”
“You say that now, but then what if -”
“I suddenly need him and he’s not there”
“Yes”
“I’ll find away to manage without him”
“Like you did without Harry?”
“Harry’s different; I like Harry I can’t stand Ron”
Hermione sighed “why did he say what he did to make Harry punch him?”
“He was listening to me and Harry arguing”
“You two argue?”Hermione smiled in surprise,
“This would be the first, and it was about Ron” Ginny sat turning to face her, “Now Harry knows I’m right about him, I slapped him, Harry punched him we understand each other perfectly”
“How did you manage to argue about Ron?
“Harry wanted me to be nice to him, I said I wouldn’t, he said if we didn’t figure things out with him Ron would get worse, and tried to tell me why Ron didn’t want us to see each other”
“What is Ron’s problem?”
“He doesn’t want me and Harry together because im his little sister or at least I used to be”
*****

Harry walked his fists clenched angrily. Ginny was right about Ron, they would never be friends again.
He got to the village and made his way into the supermarket wandering around the aisles. The muggle world hadn’t been his home for years now and he felt lost. He left and decided to apparate somewhere quiet, he still had the cloak on so no one would notice.

He drew his wand but a searing pain came over him, he dropped to his knees clutching his scar in agony. Voldemort had opened the connection, but for what purpose. Harry couldn’t move let alone think, he pulled him self up the cloak slipping off. Luckily there was no one around to see as he made his way to a bench holding the cloak and his wand, crawling on the floor.

He sat his head in his hands, sweat dripping from his forehead his scare feeling as though it would rip his head open. He knew he didn’t have the strength to apparate with without splinching himself and that pain on top of everything else wouldn’t do him any good. He took a deep breath and concentrated, but looked up when someone came over.

“Harry! I thought it was you when you fell on the floor but my dad made me go into to the shop, he didn’t see you”
He looked up her bright eyes shining happily as she swayed quite maniacally on the spot her butterbeer cork necklace and radish earring’s moving along with her.
“Are you ok Harry only you don’t look so good?” it wasn’t her swaying it was him.
“Ginny” he whispered before his vision failed as his eyes rolled to the back of his head and he collapsed on the bench.
“Harry? Harry?” he shook him gently “Dad” she called back to the shop “Dad help!” a tall middle aged wizard peaked around the door of the shop
“What is it Luna? I’m - Oh my goodness it’s Harry Potter” he abandoned his purchases and rushed over,
“We best take him to the burrow, the Weasley’s are in the Order they’ll know what to do” he felt his pulse, weak and slow.
“pick up his cloak and wand, lets be going then” He looked around but there was no one and they apparated Xenophilius and Luna holding Harry up between them.

Molly was the first to see them out of the window of the kitchen as she sat listening to the wizard wireless.

“Oh my god, Xeno what happened to him?”
“We don’t know” was Luna’s reply, “I saw him fall on the floor under his cloak, and I didn’t know it was Harry until he sat on the bench clutching his head”
“I was in the shop so I didn’t see anything apart from when Luna called me over” He and Molly placed him on the couch in the living room and Luna ran upstairs to tell Hermione, Ginny and Ron.
“He’s burning up, but his pulse is too quiet and too slow.” She placed a cold, wet flannel on his head as he laid ghostly pale, sweat dripping.

*****

Luna got to the door knocked and opened it; “Hi Luna” said Hermione and Ginny.
Luna didn’t smile but looked at Ginny, her face grim and opened her mouth to speak, “Ha-”
“Harry” Ginny replied for her and ran down the stairs two at a time, Mrs Weasley stopped her before she reached the living room door and held on to her daughters wrists,
“Ginny, you can’t see him, not yet”
“Tell me what’s wrong with him” she tried to break free but her mother held on firmly, “What’s happened to Harry?” she shouted angrily
Her mother replied her face ashen, “We don’t know”
“Let me see him mum, please, just let me see him”
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Chapter ten

Mrs Weasley continued to hold her back,
“We just have to wait there’s nothing else we can do:”
“What do you mean nothing?”
“He’s…we checked his pulse it’s not very strong, he’s holding on but we have to take him to Mungo’s now”
“I’m going” she stopped trying to pull away from her mother and relaxed suddenly, her mother let her go and led her to a chair, “He’ll be ok, he’s going to fight to come back to me” she said quietly “He will won’t he?” She looked at her mother in earnest who couldn’t answer her. The front door opened with Lupin, Bill and Mr Weasley coming in.
“Where is he Molly?” Said Lupin, his face worried and pale the same as the two men next to him.
“The living room with Xeno” she conjured a glass of water and gave it to Ginny, “Drink”

They went in and came out with Harry on a stretcher, “there isn’t any change, but we still don’t know what happened” Said Mr Lovegood,
Ginny stood up, “Shouldn’t we being taking him somewhere” she said agitated, moving closer to Harry. He lay hardly breathing his face pale, and eyes still closed. She held his hand staring at him before letting go and opening the door so they could apparate outside. Bill and Lupin carried the stretcher as Mr Weasley held on to his daughter leading her through the gate and apparating with her to St. Mungo’s.

She was made to sit in the corridor as they checked Harry over. She stared at the wall in front of her the portraits of witches and wizards smiling as they talked to each other and those walking past. Getting up she peaked though the door to see what was going on, no one would tell her anything not even how he had ended up like this. Hermione and Luna came walking rapidly down the hall way towards her.
“Have they told you anything?”
“Nothing” she crossed her arms, “Luna what happened to him?”
“He was on the floor when I first saw him, his cloak slipped off but I didn’t think it was him and my dad dragged me into the shop. I looked out the window and saw him crawling to the bench and he clutched his head, then I knew it was Harry. I went over and he swayed on the seat and then… he said Ginny…then his eyes went white and closed as he flopped onto the bench”
She looked at Ginny her face pale as she spoke, “so it’s Voldemort”
Hermione nodded, as Luna leaned back in a seat.
“I told them he held his head, I hope he’s ok”
“He will be don’t worry” Said Hermione firmly, “He’s going to be fine” she grasped Ginny’s hand in her own as they waited in silence.
Five minutes later Lupin, Bill and Mr Weasley came out with the healer in charge.
“There’s nothing we can do for him apart from wait, there is no telling what’s wrong with him only that dark magic has been used” said the healer looking grim,
“Go and see him” said Mr Weasley, to his daughter, she got up and as Hermione went to let go Ginny pulled her up “and you Luna, im not going in there alone” she looked at them both and Luna took Ginny’s other hand as they walked into the empty ward.
He lay, pale, burning hot, and unmoving. They sat at three chairs and looked down at him, two of them crying, one thinking. Hermione and Luna wiped there eyes both looking at Ginny, she sat quietly and then held his hand in her own. They left the room without her even noticing as she held on hoping for him to wake up.

“Harry you have to wake up, please just open you’re eyes” she whispered quietly
She fell asleep still sitting there refusing to be moved from his side and still holding his hand. Aurors were placed around the ward and hospital, in case it should be known that the boy who lived was on the verge of what appeared to be death.
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Oh my goodness. Harry absolutely has to get better. Please post more soon.
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heart Harry Potter die ! who in Merlins name would do such a thing ?

Chapter Eleven


Harry’s eyes opened but he didn’t know where he was. He looked around and saw his surroundings, an open room similar in size to the great hall at Hogwarts. He looked down at himself he was still in his own body but something had changed, he felt his forehead there was no scar. He heard whispering and searched for the direction of it.

“Hello Harry” Said a voice, hissing from a corner
“What have you done why am I here?”
“I thought we needed to talk and since you subconscious is so openly available, I thought I’d bring you here”
“So im in my own head, I never was any good at Oclumency” he reached for his wand but it wasn’t there
“Foolish child, how can one be inside ones own head, your merely experiencing this whilst you’re in a deep sleep, and I shall tell you now unfortunately magic does not work in this realm. This seems to be a place where I am without the ability to kill you”
“If you were going to kill me you would have done it already instead of wasting my time by bringing me here”
“I will kill you Harry Potter mark my words, but for now it seems you are safe. Your old protector is dead and nothing but the tricks of lesser wizards are keeping you away from me”
“But still you resort to bringing me here”
Harry sat down and closed his eyes to block him out.
“What are you doing?”
“This is my mind, I should be able to get rid of you” he replied smiling
Voldemort moved pacing back and forth his eyes crimson and gleaming with malice; he glanced at the boy, eyes still closed. He moved swiftly and walked over he moved to place his hands around Harry’s neck but was thrown backwards.
“You know for the darkest most powerful wizard of all time you are very, very stupid” Harry stood up walking to Voldemort’s figure on the floor. “My mind, remember, I have control. You should have took me to your place but I bet it’s rather lonely” four figures walked out from the shadows smiling.

Harry looked at them all and turned back to Voldemort as he stood up. His face was filled with rage,
“You are just a child and these people are only your imagination” he sneered in parsel tongue
“The imagination is a powerful weapon Tom” said Dumbledore stepping forward, “without it you wouldn’t be what you are”
“Don’t talk nonsense old man” Voldemort was enraged, standing not knowing how to hold himself without his wand. “You are defeated and nothing will change that, I have beaten you in life as well as death”

Lily and James stepped forward hand in hand, “Our son will kill you, he was born to stop you and we will be with him to guide him”
“Thanks you guys, I do miss you, you know”
“We know” they replied together
“Enough of this sentimental rubbish, I brought you hear to speak to you as an equal, not hear such drivel”
“Then fight him now” Sirius pulled a wand from his pocket and gave it to Harry nodding,
“You can do it Harry, you will beat him” He grinned. Harry moved forward wand raised as Voldemort sneered,
“This maybe your mind, but I am still more powerful” a wand appeared in his hand and he raised it.
Harry stared at him fiercely,
“Not if I don’t think you are, you always seem to forget the finer details in your plans and that’s why they always fail. Let’s talk if you want to talk and duel if you want to duel. Otherwise leave me to my thoughts”
“The boy takes strength from those he has around him, but in the flesh you are weak and pathetic”
“So hurry up and kill me” Harry yelled he was getting angry, and impatient.
“I am Lord Voldemort I answer to nobody”
Harry saw the shadow of fear pass quickly over Voldemort’s snake like face.
“So why are you so scared?” The four people behind Harry stepped back into the darkness, as Harry moved forward circling him holding his wand,
“You said equals so talk to me like a man Tom, you brought me here for a reason so spit it out”
“You dare to call me my worthless father’s name”
“I dare, you said equals, and since you were once a man it’s only fair”
“There is no good and evil, fair and unfair in life boy, there is only power and those to weak to seek it”
“You’ve told me this before, I remember as you where forced out of Quirell’s disintegrating body, where was your power then Tom, since I guess I beat you then as well”
He nodded smiling slightly, “that event has brought us where we are today, and now as grown up in body as you are you still possess the innocence of a child that is so disgusting to me”
Harry made no movement in his face, no smile, no reply but continued to walk around him.

“I chose to see you like this, so I know what you are, what you hope to be and what you would rather be” he smiled, and Harry flinched his head tingled and he felt it as his scar reappeared.
“I can see your weaknesses with out the… discomfort of possessing you, I can feel the power you hold though it doesn’t match up to mine, and I know your every desire, especially for the girl that looks so much like your dear mud blood mother”
Harry stopped mid step and looked at him,
“You know nothing of friendship, love, hopes and dreams, so stay away from mine”
He laughed cruelly, “You think I care for what you hope, for who you say you love, you shall not succeed boy, you will not win and I will kill you”
“If its you im supposed to be scared of, I have nothing to fear, you can’t kill me here or in the real world so what is there to be scared of”
“That I will kill you, your blood traitor and mud blood friends as well as anyone else who gets in my way”
“Death is not important, but you Tom, you fear it”
“I FEAR NOTHING” The scream reverberated around the room and Harry raised his wand,
“So why kill Pettigrew when he begged me forgiveness?”
“He was useless, a loss to know one but his mother who already thought he was dead”
“So why kill him?”
“To show those who dare to disobey me what there reward will be”
Harry stared his gaze unfaltering, his green eyes fixed on his red ones.
“You can’t win Harry Potter, you can try to protect her all you want but I can feel how you burn for her”
“I won’t let you near her”
Voldemort laughed “Just like your father, weak for a woman even as he died”
He raised his wand higher but Harry didn’t even flinch,
“I’ve had a nice chat with you but now it’s time for you to leave” Harry pointed the wand at Voldemort,
“You will see her life extinguished Harry, and only then will I truly kill you”
“LEAVE NOW”A jet of red light shot from his wand and hit Voldemort it the chest.

The room went silent and Harry’s eyes closed again, he felt himself hit the floor and his glasses fall off before darkness crept over him and he slept.
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Great post. I didn't see that coming. Did Harry kill Voldie while they were in his mind? Will everything be ok? Please post again soon, I can't wait for more!!
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