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I saw a Muggle picture once about a man in a coma. He seemed to wake up all at once, and he blinked sleepily at his family as if he’d had a lovely nap. And that was it! He was just awake and everyone was brilliant and they lived happily every after.

And then there was me. Hannah said that I woke up several times, just enough to flutter my eyelids and then go back to sleep, but there was a day that I first remember being aware of the room I was in. There was just darkness for a while, although I could hear some voices chatting. Arguing, in fact, over whether or not unconscious people want to hear articles from Witches’ Weekly about which Quidditch players have gained the most weight. For the record… they don’t.

The next thing I noticed was the smell. My bed at home smells like lavender and chamomile, but the flat pillow under my head smelled about the way it felt. Or maybe it was just that my mouth tasted like rabbit fur. Not that I’ve ever eaten rabbit fur.

My eyelids fluttered, but the room was just so bright. Not just bright, but stark and white and blinding. It took a few tries before I could open my eyes completely to take it all in. The sight of the Mungo’s hospital room made me want to slip deep back into a coma again. I had to be the worst Auror ever if I was in this bed, and try as I might, I couldn’t remember how I’d got here.

Hannah was holding my hand, which you would think was a sweet thing to do, until you realized that she was painting my fingernails a sparkly pink color. She grinned happily as soon as she saw me open my eyes. “Hullo, Sue. You really do want to hear about Quidditch players, right? Tell Neville. He’s been beastly about it.” She made faces at her husband, who I spotted lurking near the door. Oh, he’d brought me a plant. Shocking.

“Did you put a rabbit in my mouth?” I whispered, my voice scratchy and scarce from disuse. I studied the shiny leaves of the plant Neville had brought. Was it fake? Honestly, that was insulting!

Hannah glanced back at Neville before resuming her work on my hand with complete concentration. “Brain damage. No, darling. A house fell on your head. Potter and Weasley pulled you out, and then they got a bloody newspaper article written about them. And they called you Suzette Boone, the great idiots, and forgot to mention how brave you were.”

“Don’t tell her that, Han! Maybe she doesn’t want to hear about it,” Neville protested weakly from the doorway. “How do you feel, Sue?”

“Like a house fell on my head, and then someone fed me a rabbit with the fur still on,” I protested, my voice sounding like rusty pipes. “I don’t have any more brain damage than before. Could I get some water, please?” Neville rushed off to find a cup.

Hannah admired the nail polish before glancing up at me. “I really am glad you’re awake. I was worried about you.” For all of her pretended silliness, Hannah was a sweetheart and my very best friend.

“Sale at Malkin’s you need me for?” I closed my eyes and let her do her worst to my poor hands.

“Someone has to carry my bags,” Hannah insisted. “You owe me too, because Weasley kept asking strangers to give you a sponge bath. I don’t know why Hermione lets him stay in the house.” Her voice was so light, I knew she was keeping something from me.

“What’s wrong with me? Aside from the part with the house and my head.”

She gave me a sharp look. “Nothing, really. Two broken ribs, broken wrist, ten stitches in your head, both shins broken, and a really nasty knock to the head that kept you out for a few days. You’re fine.” Perhaps being an Auror had jaded me, because that did sound fine.

“Then what’s the look about? It can’t possibly be because the Quidditch players are all gaining weight. They ran a similar article two months ago. Just say it.” My throat hurt from all the talking, and my head hurt from the worrying. It’s easier to deal with worry when you know where the attack is coming from.

“They want you up at the Ministry as soon as you’re on your feet,” Hannah tossed her magazine on the floor. “For Nott’s trial. He’s going to be sentenced to life in Azkaban, but they still want your testimony. Stupid really. He’s already there, you know. Azkaban. I don’t know what difference it makes if you’re there or not, since they have everyone else’s testimony…” I let Hannah prattle on. I really did surround myself with long-winded friends, didn’t I?
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Too bad its sooooooooo not like that.

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Never know it could be good.

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No, not the worst Auror just one who is in active dangerous duty.

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Hooray for pink! Nonnie would approve.

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It was only brain damage. Ish nuthin. Everything Potter and Weasley do is newsworthy. hehe

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She gave me a sharp look. “Nothing, really. Two broken ribs, broken wrist, ten stitches in your head, both shins broken, and a really nasty knock to the head that kept you out for a few days. You’re fine.” Perhaps being an Auror had jaded me, because that did sound fine.
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Interesting to see what she says.

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All the better for quiet people who don't want to think up things to say.

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Of course she had to make a snide remark after I asked her to keep talking to me so she wouldn’t pass out. At least she was more herself now. "You want me to make conversation? What shall we talk about? Why don't you tell me why you're being so kind?"

She couldn’t figure that one out for herself? Honestly, they picked the oddest people for aurors. "You're hurt," I said, mentally adding the 'badly'. I wasn’t about to add my thoughts from earlier; better she think I was helping her solely out of the goodness of my heart and not a desire to stay a free man. I grunted as I lifted a particularly heavy stone. My back was going to kill me in the morning.

"And you're not going to let me die? I'm shocked." She smiled (or, I guessed she did as there still wasn’t light enough to see by) and stayed still. "Let me help. I want to help."

I sighed and shifted the rest of the rock off her right leg. Forget trying to be nice. She wasn’t buying it anyway. "If I've told you once, I've told you a thousand times, "I'm not a death eater." I'm not even that bad of a guy. Just because my family dabbles in the dark arts and my father is a death eater, doesn't make me heartless... Besides, you think I want to be stuck in here with a stiff?"

"And I wish I could tell you and make you believe me... but I'm not a mindless goon. I believed you the first time. Or at least the second time. You don't have to be a Death Eater to be concerned about your own skin.”

And that’s why she kept making remarks about me being a Death Eater or a bad guy? I rolled my eyes at her and thought they’d better let me off for putting up with this, even if they didn’t believe this was all an accident triggered by the Ministry’s own idiots. "Yeah, that’s it exactly. How is it going to look if you're buried and I'm just sitting there in the corner, twiddling my thumbs and watching?" I replied, making a lot more grunting noises as I shifted the last of the rubble. I collapsed beside her, huffing and puffing. Oh yeah, I was definitely going to have a killer backache in the morning.

"Oh," she answered, and she giggled a bit madly. "So you're still saving your own skin. Are you okay?" She reached out and patted my face. I wasn’t really sure what to think of that, though it wasn’t entirely unwelcome. Even tough guys need a bit of human contact in the midst of a harrowing experience.

"Yeah, I just don't like working like a common muggle," I said and then I paused as I thought I heard voices. "Do you hear that?" I asked Bones.

"I hear you," she mumbled before giggling. "You're being so loud. Be quiet so I can sleep."

"No! You can't sleep yet," I said, worried what the rescuers might think to see her all banged up and unconscious with me just standing here. The noises were getting close but, would they get here in time? “You can sleep after they get here and you tell them I'm not a death eater.”

Susan sighed like she didn’t believe me. "Call for help."

"HELP! We're in here!" I called before realizing I obeyed her order. I cursed myself mentally but, thought I heard a reply. "We're trapped!"

"I think I hear mumbling," I told Bones, my ear pressed against the 'wall'. "I"ve got Bones in here! She's hurt!" I shouted for the benefit of the rescuers. That illicited a few shouts, people calling others over, I guessed.

"You idiot... they're going to think you..." She fell silent as light appeared through cracks in the rubble around them. "Harry?"

“We’re in here,” I shouted and moved toward the light, starting to pull back some of the rock. I finally moved enough to get my hand through when the light went away.

The light came back and grew steadily brighter. Soon rocks began to pull away from the hole to reveal several shadowed faces. "Harry," Bones smiled. Somehow she’d managed to get herself upright but, as soon as she said the name, she slumped against me.

I caught her before she could hit her head again. But, before I could do much of anything else, the aurors were pushing through the remaining rocks and shouting at me to move away from Bones. I rested her carefully on the ground and as soon as I was backing away, the spell hit me and I was suddenly bound. I opened my mouth to defend myself but, they silenced me as soon as had started to say, "Wait."

I cursed mentally as they whisked Bones away, still unconscious and unable to tell them anything at all. It was exactly what I’d feared would happen. Why hadn’t she just stayed laying still? If only she had stayed still like I told her to, she might have been awake to tell them that I wasn’t a bad guy. I was just so angry and couldn’t do a thing about it.

As soon as Bones was away, the aurors surrounded me and were dragging me out of the rubble without any regard to my well being. I was hurt more on that trip out of the house than when it kept crashing down on us. They were cursing me (not literally) the whole time and before I knew what was happening, I was standing outside a tall fortress surrounded by ocean on all four sides. There was no other land in sight and the cliffs were sheer. They made a big deal of snapping my wand in half, though it had to have been Bones’ because we never did recover mine. Served her right after all she’d put me through.

After that, they shoved me into a cell, unbound me, and shoved prison garments on me. At least the Ministry had stopped using dementors for jailors, though the accommodations were much improved. I was alone, bruised, hungry, and certain I’d never leave this place except for the trial where I’d surely be found guilty of crimes I never committed.
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Since the first day I became an Auror, I had heard the old adage bandied about by the aging Aurors in the office. It didn’t mean a single thing to me until I arrived at Azkaban. It wasn’t exactly where they came to die, but most of those aging Aurors took shifts at Azkaban once they were too old to be in the field. As I stared up at the brick wall in front of me, waves crashing against the old stones and spraying my carefully straightened hair, it wasn’t hard to figure out why they referred to this place as Hell. It was dark and depressing, even without the dementors.

I banged carefully at the hinged doors, immediately having to pull a splinter from my knuckle. This place was miserable, and I wouldn’t wish it on my worst enemy. Except that I sort of had, and now I had to try to make it right again. Having a conscience was such a burden. What must it be like to be a Death Eater and have no conscience at all? I probably never would have had a house fall on me, that was for sure. My newly healed ribs still pulled when I stretched, and I was waiting for the faint pink scar in my hairline to disappear.

Once the wooden door swung open to admit me, I paused in the drafty corridor to straighten myself out. Last time he’d seen me, I was looking particularly grubby and unconscious, and he’d obviously had the upper hand. I don’t know what I was trying to prove by starching my robes so that they barely moved and wrapping my hair in a rather too-stylish French twist. I didn’t really care what he thought of me, afterall. I just didn’t want to be the silly little Hufflepuff in a hole to him. I wanted to be the big impressive Auror. A grown up woman Auror.

The Auror on duty, an ancient man named Grubbin, grinned at me in a charming yet toothless way. It was hard not to smile back at him. “C’mon, girly! Gots to be done by lunch, y’hear? You be done by lunch!”

I nodded and said solemnly, “I’ll be done by lunch, Grubbs. I’ll be done as soon as I can.”

“That’s a good girly. Less’go.” He hobbled down the long corridor, and I scurried after him. After a few hurried steps, I slowed and threw my head back, trying to walk like the calm and cool Auror I knew I was.

Grubbins threw open a door, and I paused outside. So much for calm and cool Auror. There were a lot of things to say, and I wasn’t sure in that moment that I could remember my name.

“Girly!” He pulled back the huge latch on the door and gave me a look. “Less’go! I nodded at him shortly and stepped up the opening door.
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I had been sleeping, I think. I couldn’t remember if it was day or night or how many days, weeks, or even months I had been sitting there, bored to tears and convinced I would go mad even before the trial. Then, I heard the click of a key in the lock, saw the outline of a shape in the darkened hallway through the cold iron bars of the only window in the entire cell, and then the guard entered. Without a word he and a fellow came at me and I was bound with anti-magic shackles. I was forced to my feet and then led under a careful guard to a meeting room of sorts. They refused to tell me who I was meeting and insisted on escorting me all the way to the most uncomfortable of the two chairs, pushing me in it and then ensuring the chains snaked through the appropriate rings on it before stepping out of the room.

It was only after the guards left that I looked up from my feet which I had been staring at since the moment they entered my cell and found Bones sitting across from me. She folded her hands on the shaky little table between us and watched me without expression, though I guessed she was probably searching for something to say. "Hi," was the best she could come up with as I sat in chains in front of her after saving her life.

"What are you doing here?" I asked, not managing to keep the bitterness out of my voice and I didn’t care either. Stupid girl. She was supposed to stay awake to keep me out of this place and here she sat saying “hi” without even an apology for being such an idiot and landing me in this mess.

Her face tightened in spite of how blank it had already been. "Very friendly, Nott. I should think you'd want visitors."

Visitors?!?! She thought he wanted visitors?!?! He wanted out of here?!?! I would have screamed at her if I thought it would help but, Bones and her Hufflepuff ways probably wouldn’t even understand why I was screaming at her. "I told you not to move. You moved and then you passed out before you could tell them I was innocent," I said in a rush and with an accusing tone. It was all her fault I was here and I'd had nothing to do but convince myself of that while I sat in prison doing nothing.

She quirked the corner of her mouth, seemingly tempted to smile. "You've been wanting to say that for a while, yes?"

Was she patronizing me now? What gave her the right to patronize me after all she put me through? I was seething and perhaps it was a good thing I was chained to the chair and unable to perform even the simplest of magics. "Don't laugh at me. I'm going to be in here forever and you're laughing?" I asked as I glared at her. "Why are you here? To gloat?"

She shook her head. "For all that you spend so much energy on feeling misunderstood and mistreated, you really make no effort to understand other people." Bones studied her hands.

What did she expect when I was being misunderstood? That I’d just roll over and accept being misunderstood and then put forth effort to make sure someone else’s feelings weren’t being hurt? It was such a Hufflepuff thing of her to say. Soft. That’s what they were; they’d let you walk all over them if you wanted. "Forgive my impatience but, I'd like to know why you're here," I sighed and wanted to rub my temples but, couldn't due to the restraints. I sighed again and realized I didn’t want to be here; I’d rather sit alone than deal with Susan Bones again. "It's more comfortable in my cell.
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I love the creativity of this story. Its such an unusual plot, and such unusual characters it makes for a really good read. Keep it up!
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Wow. Nott would rather be in his cell than chatting with me? I gave him a hard look. "Forgive me for not being flattered that you prefer solitary confinement to my company. Maybe I'll just send you back there." I rose to my feet. Dramatics sometimes came very naturally to me.

"You're not chained to your chair," Nott complained. The whiner. "If you're just going to sit there arguing with me, then I might as well go back." Honestly, at that moment, I wished I COULD just send him back to his cell. Serve him right, the measly ungrateful snake.

Instead, I chose a more… forceful approach. I leaned forward and banged my fist hard on the table, letting the clang echo around the room before speaking. "I'm not arguing with you. Why are you always so quick to take offense?" The hitting and the yelling DID make me feel better, but only for a moment. It wasn’t in my nature to be intentionally cruel. Closing my eyes, I counted to ten and took a deep calming breath. "They asked me to testify at your trial, you know."

"I'm surprised they even bothered," Nott replied. "And perhaps I'm quick to take offense because you Aurors are quick to jump to conclusions." Not exactly the curious, grateful response I was hoping for. Too quickly, I was caught up in arguing with him again.

"Saying you Aurors is like saying 'You Hufflepuffs' or 'You Slytherins'," my eyes flew back open and I glared at him. "But I… admit that I may have been hasty in my judgment of you." He didn’t deserve that admission a bit.

"Yeah? That makes me feel so much better," he replied, unable to keep the sarcasm in check. His voice was dripping with it, and I was suddenly very tired of fighting with him.

"Won't give an inch?" I sighed. In its own way, his anger and lack of interest in the outcome of his own trial made a sort of sick sense. "You think you're just going to live and die here, don't you? Have you lost all hope?"

He studied the top of the table with the expression of a sullen little boy. "Yeah, that's pretty much it. I don't know if it's better or worse that the Dementors are gone," he replied, trying to sound as if he didn't care.

"You're so certain that I wouldn't go to court for you?" I couldn’t help but return to my seat when he was being so… nearly decent. Perhaps we could make it through one conversation with a peaceful outcome.

Nott scoffed, and I’m sure he would have rolled his eyes if he were willing to look up from the table. "Would they even believe you? Obviously I injured you on purpose and then obliviated you or put you under the Imperius curse. Yeah, the Imperius curse, and there's no way they'd know."

You know, it was REALLY starting to hurt my feelings that everyone thought I was so worthless. My voice rose again and I pounded the table for emphasis. "I'm an Auror! My word has weight to it, Nott, whether you find it to be true or not."

"Fine," he said, pouting. I wondered if he cared at all about the outcome of his trial, but he finally couldn’t help but break the silence. "Are you really going to testify in my defense?"

"The trial was yesterday," I answered tersely, sticking my lip out just like his to mock his pouting.
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