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Old 01-17-2006, 07:22 PM   #76 (permalink)
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Sneak! A new update? Why wasn't I informed?

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This chick was insufferable. In addition to being too sarcastic for her own good, she had the courage of a toothpick… none.
A toothpick!

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She probably thought I had some nefarious plot to seal her in the hole so I wouldn’t have to listen to her or risk her knocking me unconscious with rocks falling from the ceiling when she bumped into the walls.
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She was still afraid this was some big ruse of mine to get her close enough to do some dark magic on her or some such rubbish. How many times did I have to insist that I wasn’t a death eater before she believed me?
He's such a suspicious guy! hehe plots everywhere

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"Lumos", Susan murmured the words, and I watched as her face burst into happiness when the wand lit in her hands. "My wand." She grasped it to her chest, looking as if she'd just found her lifeline.

"A truly touching reunion," I sneered.
Sarcasm! I love it!


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tee hee Thanks oodles of noodles guys.

Lissy: you crack me up, you doof! That toothpick line was one of those 'first word that pops into your head' type moments. I went all at myself and then decided it wort of worked so, I left it. I mean, how much courage could a sliver of wood have, anyway?

in other news: Xander just fell asleep in his crib for a nap so I'm going to go shower so I'm not all stinky anymore. [/random]
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Very original. I definitely how this is going to evolve. Really like how there's no shipping in and still this tension of i don't trust but i need that person for now.

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I could practically feel the sarcasm choking his words, and my lit wand swung up to catch the look of disdain on his face. “Shut up,” I bit my words off, studying Nott’s face in the sickly light. All my Auror training was coming back to me now that my wand was in my hand. “Let’s not forget who’s in charge now. You’re still under investigation for owning criminal artifacts.” My voice wavered. ”Nox,” the wand went dark, and we could no longer study each others’ faces.

“What are you going to do, hex me?” his laugh sounded as if it would hit the hair and fracture into a million pieces, it was so cold and brittle. “Why’d you turn out the light? Let’s try and find a hole or something now that we have light.”

“I want some rules in place,” I answered, proud that my voice remained level. “I want to trust you when you say you’re not a Death Eater, but I’m at a distinct disadvantage. Can you give me any indication of why I should believe you?”

Nott moved in the darkness in front of me, and when his voice came, it sounded hollow. “Light your wand.” I felt something brush my ear, and my guts twisted as I jerked back.

”L-lumos,” my wand hand jerked instinctively, and the welcome yellow light poured from its tip once again, sudden and bright. It had been his hand near my head, and I studied the clear expanse of his arm. No Dark Mark. “Thank you,” I turned my wand to study the rubble blocking us in.

Like a lump, Nott settled back on his elbows and watched me work. “You’re welcome,” his tone was sarcastic again. Not a lump, I reminded myself. A wounded animal. How would I feel if someone judged me as inept and stupid because I was a Hufflepuff? Oh wait… that’s exactly how Nott treated me. I didn’t feel bad for him. At all. None.

Focusing once again on the task at hand, I studied the blockage in front of me. Only a small bit was lit at a time, and I couldn’t move that fast because I was forced to crawl using only one hand. The other clutched my wand as if it were all I had in the world. At this moment… it was.

Finally, I covered the whole expanse from where we’d found my wand to where the beams met the basement wall. The light of my wand fell on a heavy beam, and I sighed. “Nothing yet,” I peered over my shoulder to where Nott sat, just lit enough to make out his lounging form.
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Woohoo, love it. I adore the way you write. It's so real,clear and well, good.

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I was tired of doing all the work around here so, after she was satisfied that I wasn’t a Death Eater, as evidenced by my unmarked arm, I sat back and lounged while she scurried about. One of these days, she’d get it through that thick Hufflepuff head of hers that just because I happened to own a few dark objects doesn’t automatically mean that I’m a Death Eater. While she was crawling around looking for some way out, I thought I heard something but, with all her caterwauling I couldn’t tell for sure. "Wait. Shhh," I sat still listening and held out a hand to her that she may or may not have been able to see. "Do you hear that? Like stones tumbling down stone?"

I watched as Susan stilled and appeared to listen carefully. "What is that?" Her voice sounded fearful, and I wondered if she even cared. She seemed to have given up on being tough which was fine with me. I hate pretense. "Is the house... falling again?"

I couldn’t help it. I snorted with derision. "No, but maybe there's someone there," I replied before shouting. "HELLO?!?!"

"It's too soon... there's no one here," Susan crossed her arms and frowned at the sick light on the end of her wand.

Too soon? What kind of outfit were they running? Shouldn’t they be prepared for this kind of thing during raids? I’d expected someone to come running as soon as the house fell down. Didn’t the ‘good’ guys post guards outside of a residence to make sure no one got away or tried to throw things out of windows or something? I just had to believe they weren’t as stupid as I feared because if they were, I’d be stuck down here forever with the poster girl for Hufflepuff. "But there's movement. Maybe it's the rest of your idiot auror friends," I said and strained, listening for any sign that it was human movement and not just the crumbled house settling.

I swore loudly and sat back down when I didn't hear anything else. I guess they were as stupid as I thought and I was going to spend the rest of my life stuck in here with Susan Bones. Then, she started talking again and I could feel a headache starting. Why couldn’t we just be quiet so we didn’t miss any sounds of possible rescuers? "They aren't idiots. Auror training is very complicated and extensive. We weed the idiots out the first week or so," Susan said and it sounded like she was smiling. "We should figure out how to make noise to help them find us."

"Why don't you try doing that thing where you knock rocks on my head, I'm sure that will illicit some noise and you might even knock me unconscious in the process. Or, you can use that handy piece of wood you got in your hand." It wasn’t a very helpful thing to say but, I was irritable, I admit it. You’d be irritable too if a bunch of aurors barged into your house and knocked it down on top of you for no reason other than the fact that they were too stupid to just leave well enough alone.

Of course, she sounded a bit irritable herself but, it wasn’t my fault she and her friends trapped her down here with me. "Yes, of course... because I did that on purpose. If I was trying to knock you out, I would have. I'm not a total duffer, Nott."

I could hear her tapping her wand against the wall and wondered if she’d attempt to cast some sort of spell. I put my arms over the top of my head just in case, to try and save myself from any trauma to the head should the rocks start falling again. As if reading my mind, she continued, "Do you suppose a loud noise would bring more down on us?"

Unfortunately, I didn’t have any better suggestions and I’d rather die in a cave in with a quick blow to the head than stay here as we were. "It could but, what choice have we got? You wanted to try and draw attention to ourselves..." I still wasn't sure I really wanted to risk another cave in but, anything was better than sitting here with her in the semi-darkness.
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I know just what he means *nods* I have a few dark objects too and I'm no Death Eater hehe

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"Why don't you try doing that thing where you knock rocks on my head, I'm sure that will illicit some noise and you might even knock me unconscious in the process. Or, you can use that handy piece of wood you got in your hand." It wasn’t a very helpful thing to say but, I was irritable, I admit it. You’d be irritable too if a bunch of aurors barged into your house and knocked it down on top of you for no reason other than the fact that they were too stupid to just leave well enough alone.
bahahahaha I would be irritible too, yes.

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hehe Now you guys have to post again real soon or I'll have to just start bugging you to tell me what happenes...
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I wanted to try and draw attention? If I recalled correctly, I was the one advocating waiting for help to arrive. Nott was the one pushing us to find a way out at any cost. The irony was so rich in his voice, I could tell he blamed the team for bringing this house down around ears even without seeing his face. While I might be willing to take some of the blame, I most certainly wasn’t at fault for doing my job. Who kept weapons of mass destruction in their house, anyway?

“Alright,” I despised the tremor in my voice, but I would show him I wasn’t the coward he thought me. Even if it meant we’d both die. I had to grin at that irony myself. Flicking my wand in the darkness, I cast an incantation learned early on in Auror training. The intention was to create a loud, reverberating noise, much like a gong, that could be heard over distance by rescuers or fellow Aurors. Both applied now.

As the spell left my wand tip in a pulse of light and sound, my wand cracked against a boulder in front of me. I felt the reverberations as much as heard them as the noise echoed through the air, through my very body, and through the rocks around us. Still clinging to my wand, I pressed my palms against my ears.

There was a noise steadily growing louder as the gong faded away. Through the sickly flickering glare of my wandlight, I spotted Nott moving in my direction. His motions were slow and choppy and his lips were moving, but my ears seemed only to hear the silence left by the fading gong and that odd rumbling noise.

Finally, sounds began to match the world around me, and Nott moved at a normal speed again. “Bones!” he was shouting at me and reaching forward just as I figured out what the rumbling noise was. Rocks tumbled down on either side of me, and I threw myself forward towards Nott.

I didn’t make it, and the world went dark once again.





Hahahaha... you thought we'd died, but we're alive. ALIVE! Ahem... anyway, my post is short because stupid Susan likes being unconscious. Stupid Susan.
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