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What can you say when someone you’re intentionally needling tells you they’ve saved your life. Nothing comes immediately to mind, so I just stayed quiet for a bit. "Well then," my voice was falsely chipper as I tried to make light of the whole thing. "Thank you for tackling me. I like not being dead." I went quiet again. Seems to be my typical response when chatting with Nott. I almost missed Potter’s quasi-witty banter. "And for the record, I wouldn't have shaken the box,” I finally added, mimicking his tone of voice from earlier.

"Good for you," he sneered, and I stifled the urge to throw debris at the sound of his voice. There was a rather nicely shaped brick that was sitting next to me, and I actually touched it in the dark. "Find a way out yet? Or have you forgotten that you have our wands?"

"Oh," I hated that he had a good point and released the brick. At least it wasn’t going anywhere. I sat up and patted the front of my robe, followed by both side pockets and even my jumper underneath. Nothing. I patted them again, banging my elbow against something as I twisted around in the dark space. Where could they have fallen out at? I know I’d had them before, but… "I... I don’t have them."

Sarcasm dripped from Nott’s voice. "Lovely," he said. I counted much, much higher than 10 before I was able to not reach for the brick and toss it at his smug Slytherin head.

"No, it's NOT lovely," I snapped, still patting about in my pockets to no end. It isn’t as if wands are small things that get lost in a pocket’s crease, afterall. "My robes are filthy and tattered, but they're in place. They must have fallen out when you tackled me.” I remembered that he’d tackled me in order to keep me from that great coma that never ends, and I added, “Not that I'm complaining." No reason to give the man a reason to gloat about it, afterall.


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oh-oh...wands are missing? this cannot be a good thing...what if Nott finds them both first and is really motivated to get away and leave her there...where are the others? are they dead or just trapped like they are?
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What had I done to deserve being trapped in the ruins of my own house with an inept auror? I rolled my eyes at the fact she hadn’t even thought to check her pockets for our wands, not that they’d do any good getting us out. The bricks and building materials had been charmed so that they couldn’t be tampered with. The only reason the talisman in the box had managed to level the place was the fact that the magic in it counteracted the charms and wards in place on the house. But, at least with the wands, we’d have some light and a few conjured amenities. Though, when I thought about it, maybe I didn’t want light. I didn’t want to have to look at the inept auror for hours on end until… “Well, then I suppose we wait to be rescued. Your friends are still in the hole and the Ministry won't want to risk a 'Death Eater' like me running loose."

"Do you suppose they're okay?" she asked me and I rolled my eyes again.

The girl didn’t think, did she? How in Merlin’s name did she ever manage to make it through auror training? "The floor is reinforced by more than just enchantments. They should be fine," I offhandedly replied as I stood up and banged my head, cursing loudly.

"Careful. Don't want to bring the ceiling down on us," Susan laughed.

I couldn’t believe she said that. As soon as I got my wand back, I was going to kill her. That comment was completely baseless and stupid. Not to mention the fact that she’d laughed at me for injuring myself further after saving her life. Next time, I’m not going to bother being noble. I glared at her, though she couldn't see it and I couldn't tell where she really was. It made me feel marginally better at any rate. "Do something useful and help me try to find one of the wands," I growled.

She sniffled and I heard her move, like she was wiping her eyes or something. "What do you want me to do? Lumos." Her tone was playful and sarcastic.

We could suddenly see the faint outline of fallen wood. A line of warm golden light reached out onto the floor. My countenance brightened and I crawled toward the source of light. Once we had a wand we should be able to get out of here and away from each other. "Ouch! Watch it," I said as I bonked heads with her.
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It's the best fanfic I have read! Have you ever thought of a writing career? It's a lot more interesting than most of the stuff in the book stores! PLEASE POST MORE!
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He was scaring me. Most of me knew that he wasn’t doing it on purpose, but the fact was… being trapped like this was bringing back memories I didn’t want to remember of the war. Memories I’d buried as I triumphed in Auror training and tried to prove that I was brave. I’m not brave.

"Where did you come from?" I tried to scrabble away from Nott in the dark. I wanted as much distance between the two of us as I could get. Granted, we were trapped in a hole together, and I had no idea how big the space was. I’d have much preferred him on the opposite side of the hole regardless. And how did he move so quietly? It was unnerving. As I crab walked away from him, I ran into the wall of rubble behind me, knocking rocks down around us. The light from the wand disappeared.

"Where do you...?" Nott cursed loudly in the dark, and I heard a soft thump and something like an “oomph.” All I could guess was that one of the falling rocks had hit Nott. It would be too much to hope that it had hit his head and knocked him out cold.

Definitely too much to ask… I sighed as I heard his voice again in the dark. "Perfect. Lumos," his voice held a note of desperation, and I wished that nothing would happen for both our sakes. Nothing did. I knew it was my fault, that I’d been jumpy and scared and ridiculous, causing the minor cave-in, but more than that… I really wanted Nott to go back to his side of the hole. If I just sat tight, maybe he’d take the hint. I breathed.

I had just settled into a calming stupor, when his voice broke into my thoughts. "No more sudden moves. Is your wand still buried?" he asked, his voice exasperated. I could almost smile at the situation if it weren’t dark and he weren’t… him.

"Why don't you try looking for your wand?" I cursed my voice for coming out all high pitched and nervous, and I plugged right away at making up for it. "My wand is clearly buried. Try looking for yours." There… no nonsense and calm. Logical and almost witty. Perfect.

"I did, but maybe you were too busy trying to cause more rocks to rain down on us to hear me." His scathing tone cut down any beliefs I might have had that I was at all clever and deserving of being rescued. If I were back at Hogwarts, I might be tempted to feel sorry for myself. I wasn’t, however, and I was also a fully trained Auror. I was… I was a grown up, darn it, and I deserved to be treated like it. Of course, my response to his constant poking and condescension was to act in the most mature manner I could muster.

"You're right. I'm trying to kill us. How did you guess my dastardly plan? And after I kill us, I'm going to force us to listen to old Celestina Warbeck albums until we die a second time. I'm truly evil."
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Yeh that sounds like your best bet, not only will it be fun for us but it will be fun for use to see if your characters develop to that stage Can't wait for the next update gals
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