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Old 07-29-2004, 12:49 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Dangerous Love

I am warning everyone now that this will not be an entirely happy story but I promise a happy ending because otherwise the story would be utter crap. This fic has a medium amount of violence in it so you are for-warned. However, this is a serious fic and I worked hard on it so I hope you enjoy it. Other than that, happy reading!

Summery: Hermione thought she new Viktor Krum and she thought she had everything under control but sometimes things fall way to out of control for anyone to cope with...

***These are flashbacks***

Chapter One: Bubble, bubble…
Hermione turned the key and opened the door to Krum’s apartment.
“Home,” she said quietly. She pulled her bags into the room and shut the door behind her. Viktor wouldn’t be home for at least two hours. That gave her enough time to settle in and start dinner for when he got back.
Hermione had recently decided to move in with her long-term boyfriend, Viktor Krum. He had been asking her to move into his lavish apartment with him ever since she had graduated from Hogwarts two years ago.

Krum could offer Hermione anything and everything she could ever ask for. He was rich, famous and attractive, and best of all, he loved her. He told her so everyday, and everyday she smiled when he said it. But Hermione had gotten more than a glamorous new apartment when Krum had dropped the spare key into her hand.

***”Viktor, could you come here?” Hermione called from the bedroom. He walked through the door in his quidditch robes from the game he had just played in.
“Vat is it, Hermy-o-ninny?” he replied, sitting down next to her on the bed.
“Well, I’ve been thinking about a lot of stuff between me and you…about our relationship and where it’s going,” she started. His brow furrowed.
“Hermy, you are not fallen out of love vith me, haff you?” he questioned in his sad broken accent.
“Oh, gosh no!” Hermione reassured him. He smiled.
“Good, vat is it, then?” he cupped her cheek in his hand.
“I was thinking that I really want us to move to the next level,” she said. Viktor glanced up at the ceiling.
“I am not understanding. This is the top floor off building,” he replied, his forehead wrinkling.
She giggled. “No Viktor, I want to move in with you. I want to because I love you and I think it’s right now,” she explained. Now a grin spread across his face.
“I love you too, Hermy.” He kissed her hard, his lips pressing against hers until he forced them open. His tongue explored the crevices of her mouth and she giggled into him.
He pulled away from her and took her hands in his. She noticed he was shaking.
“What’s wrong?” she asked.
“I haf somfink vor you,” he stood and crossed the room. He rummaged in his sock drawer for a minute before returning with a deep red velvet box. He dropped to one knee, still in his robes, and raised his eyes to hers. Hermione’s breath caught in her throat.
“Hermy-o-ninny, vill you-“
“Yes!” she screamed before he could finish. She jumped on top of him and squealed delightedly as he slid the ring on her finger. ***

Now Hermione looked again at the diamond. It had been all over the news by that night. Hermione had received several owls from angry Krum fans but he had handled everything very well. Soon the reporters stopped knocking on their doors and Hermione was free to move in without fear of being ambushed. She planned to change some things now that she would be living here, too. The first addition was a television. Hermione had managed to find a wizard who had learned a spell for cable. She had insisted that they buy a DVD player too, because she didn’t want her collection to go to waste. She still wanted to keep some of her life a little muggle.

The big day was only a month away and Hermione was starting to get antsy. Moving in added extra pressure, too. Hermione still tried to stay as calm as possible. She unpacked most of her stuff and then did a little work on seating arrangements. They were getting very difficult now that half the guests had sent an RSVP and the others hadn’t. Hermione quickly found it wasn’t a good idea to seat anyone from Ron’s team near anyone from the Bulgarian team and it appeared that keeping ex’s from each other was going to prove more tricky than expected.

At six O’clock Hermione began to make some dinner in the kitchen. Just as the water began to boil, she heard Viktor open the door.
“Hermy?” he called, dropping his luggage in the front room. She came to meet him in her apron.
“Cute,” he commented when he saw her.
“Thank-you. How did your match go?’ she asked giving him a hug.
“Ve von. I missed you so much I am not knowing how I caught the snitch!” he replied, kissing her nose. “Vat is smelling so yummy?” he asked, sniffing the air.
“Dinner. It’ll be ready in about 10 minutes. Why don’t you go unpack,” she suggested.
“I love you,” he told her as he carried his stuff into the bedroom. She just smiled as she went back into the kitchen.



There you go, the long wait is over!!!! But remember it will not be this happy by any means for the whole of the fic. Just to warn everyone.

This is a really serious fic and I hope it sends a message and I hope you like it as much as my others!


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WOW, hermione & viktor are getting married! yay!

i love the way you write viktor's accent- just like JKR herself!

and i am ok with it not having a happy ending- it will be more interesting!

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You allready have me hooked! It's looking good so far. I hate it will be sad though. :ermsmile:
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ahhh, I need more replies guys!! This is what I get for taking away readers to Beta for me, lol.

Chapter two: …toil and trouble


One Month Later
“I now pronounce you husband and wife. You may kiss the bride,” the minister finished. Hermione leaned in and gave Viktor a little kiss. She didn’t want to get too intimate because otherwise she might find herself on top of him in front of all these people and she feared that may be taking it a bit too far (1). Hermione beamed at Viktor and they turned to walk down the aisle together. Everyone clapped and cheered and for a little while, Hermione forgot about the bruises on her body. Hermione could remember when it had started, that awful night he had lost control. But as she smiled at everyone in the pews, Hermione tried to push that memory away to make room for a new start.

***Take this laundry. I need it done vor tonight,” Viktor showed Hermione a basket of clothes.
“Viktor, I can’t today,” Hermione replied as she packed her purse. Hermione worked for the ‘Daily Prophet’ as the chief editor. She had three copies due by five and she knew she wouldn’t be home until much later than that.
“You vill do this vor me,” he said. A little harshness in his voice made Hermione stand and look at him.
“Excuse me? Viktor, I said that I’m too busy. I have three copies due today and I have to do some extra work tonight because I’m going to be away for a week. You know, for our honeymoon (2). That’s the thing you do after two people get married, remember?” She checked her watch. She was late and she really didn’t need this.
“You don’t haff to vork. I make enough vor both of us,” he replied, trying hard to keep his temper in check.
“I don’t do it for the money, Viktor. I like my job and I like helping sustain this relationship. I can’t do your laundry. I’m sorry but I have to go now,” she turned to leave but Viktor pulled her back by her wrist and threw her on the floor.
“Ouch! Viktor, what the-“
“You vill listen to me and you vill obey me. Soon you vill be my vife and then you vill belong to me,” he sneered. His eyes were wide and he looked somewhat crazed.
“Viktor, you’re scaring me,” Hermione said as she began to cry. He still had a hold on her wrist and it was becoming very painful.
Instead of replying he just hit her, bringing his hand down across her cheek. Then he let go of her and covered his own face in his hands. Hermione gingerly touched her cheek. She flinched at the pain.
Hermione slowly got up and picked up the phone.
“Lynn? Hey, it’s Hermione.”
Pause.
“Yes, I got that. Thank-you, it was lovely. I think we’re hanging it in the kitchen,” she shot a look at Viktor. “Can you tell Mr. Clark I won’t be in today so I need someone to send me my work.” Pause. “Yes, I’m fine. I’m just a little sick. Don’t want to have the sniffles on the big day,” she forced a laugh. “Ok, thanks, Lynn. Bye.” She hung up the phone and turned to see Viktor standing in the doorway.
“I got you some ice,” he said, returning with a cold bag.
“I am sorry,” he added, placing the bag on her swollen cheek.
“I know,” she replied. Hermione didn’t know why she said that.
“You vill do my laundry?” he asked. Hermione swallowed hard.
“Yes,”***

The fights became more frequent and Viktor seemed to snap at every little thing, but after that first incident he always made sure to hit her where she could hide it. Hermione always forgave him. Each time he apologized and convinced her that he really did love her. Hermione even got herself to believe that it was just his way of dealing with the nervousness and that it would stop after the wedding.
Viktor didn’t hit Hermione for a long time after they got back from the honeymoon. She told herself she had been right about him being nervous and everything went back to the way it had been. They decorated the apartment and went on trips. Hermione’s bruises faded soon enough and it was as if all the incidents were forgotten because there wasn’t a physical reminder anymore.
Everyone else thought they were the perfect couple. They hosted victory parties for the Bulgarian team and a month after their first anniversary Hermione and Viktor received some exciting news. They gathered all of their close friends and family for a party.
Hermione tapped on her glass.
“First, we would like to thank everyone for coming tonight. We’re very pleased to give you some news we’ve been keeping to ourselves for the last two weeks,” Hermione started. She turned to Viktor to take over.
“Ve vould like to tell you,” he looked warmly at Hermione, “that ve are having a baby!” he finished happily. There was clapping and Hermione distinctly heard Harry and Ron woot their approval. Hermione hugged people for what seemed like forever before she got to her friends. “We’re so excited for you!” Harry told her, beaming.
“Yeah, Krum is one lucky guy,” Ron said, blushing slightly.
“He better treat you right, Hermione,” added Ginny. Hermione’s smile faltered just a little but she regained her composure to assure them.
“He will. Thanks for coming guys. I’ll see you on Saturday?” she asked.
“Can’t wait,” Ron replied. They all kissed her good-bye and headed for the door.

The event went almost without a hitch, but just before they got into bed Viktor took Hermione by the shoulders.
“What, Viktor?” she asked, trying to smile.
“It is mine, yes?” he asked. Hermione actually rolled her eyes here.
“Of course it’s yours. I love you and only you,” she kissed him before turning out the lights and climbing into bed.

“Hey!” Hermione waved as they made their way outside the locker rooms to meet Harry, Ron and Ginny. Viktor gave her a kiss and then headed towards the Bulgarian locker room.
“Hey, Hermione. Can’t really talk. Game starts in an hour so I gotta go get ready,” said Ron. He was in his happy yet jumpy pre-match mood.
“Ok, good luck! I hate these games, I never know who to root for!” she replied, laughing.
‘Cheer for them, they need it!” Ron joked before heading through the doors. Hermione turned to Harry and Ginny who hugged her.
‘You look good, Hermione,” Harry said.
“Thanks,” she replied.
“Let’s go get our seats, we can chat up there!” Ginny said.

Before Hermione knew it, the ref was walking out onto the field and Lee Jordan (England’s official commentator) was magically raising his voice to shout out names.
“Please welcome the English National Team, Wood, Dodwell, Trice, Robinson, Armstrong aaaaannddd, Weasley!” Hermione clapped and cheered as Ron flew out onto the field.
“And now put your hands together for the Bulgarian National Team! Dimitrov, Schovin, Kras, Volchanov, Volkov aaaaanndd Krum!” the sound from the crowd was deafening. Krum flew out and circled the pitch heading towards the Top Box. He stopped in front of the window to write, ‘I Love You,” in sparkling gold letters. He blew Hermione a kiss before flying to his starting position where he was greeted by snickers from his teammates and squeals from the female population in the crowd.
“He’s so cute, Hermione!” giggled Ginny.
“Yeah, you have a really great guy and I’m happy for you,” added Harry.
“And there goes the quaffle, the game has begun! And it’s Vol kov, Volchanov, back to, no! It’s been intercepted by Dodwell! Passes to Trice, Robinson, Dodwell, Trice, gosh she’s a beauty,” Lee said as Jeni Trice caught the quaffle from Dodwell. She aimed and threw.
“And this beauty scores! Ten points to England, well done!” Trice winked at Lee before zooming back to action.
Just then Harry’s wand started to vibrate. He waved it and a hologram man flowed out of the tip. The hologram opened his mouth.
“Potter, you’re needed at the ministry, it’s urgent!” Then it disappeared. Harry sighed.
“Sorry, guys. The life of an auror,” he said, standing.
“Its ok, Harry. You heard the hologram man, he said it was urgent business Agent Potter,” Hermione replied in a fake serious voice even though she couldn’t help giggling. Harry laughed.
Tell Ron what happened and that I’m sorry,” he said.
“I will. And I’ll call you later,” Hermione said, kissing him on the cheek.
“Bye, Hermione. See you, Ginny,” he left with a pop!

“Yay! Well done, Ron!” Hermione bounded towards the locker room after the game.
“Woah, slow down there. Going insane can’t be good for the baby,” he said, smiling.
“Good point, Dr. Weasley,” she laughed.
“Speaking of which. It’s a really early gift but I want my godchild to be the best dressed baby on the block,” he said. Ron reached into his bag and pulled out a bib, hat, pajamas and a pair of socks with, ‘Quidditch is my life’ on them.
“And don’t tell lover boy but I got this, too,” he held out a tiny shirt with the English National Team’s logo on it. Hermione put a finger to her lip.
“Not a word,” she replied.
“Not a vord about vat?” asked Viktor, coming up behind her.
“Nothing,” she said, hurriedly checking the shirt was safely out of sight in her bag.
“Vell, let’s go. Good game,” he added to Ron before they dissaperated. Hermione headed quickly to the bedroom but he followed her.
“Vat is it? Vat can I not know?” he asked. He was trying to be calm but Hermione knew that if she didn’t say the right thing, he would snap.
“Just a present Ron gave me,” she said offhandedly.
“A present?” he was frowning.
“Yeah. For the baby,” she added hoping he would get the hint it wasn’ t jewelry and drop it.
“Vell, if it is vor the baby, I should get to see it, too. That baby is haff mine,” he replied. Hermione hid her disgust at how he claimed ownership to their unborn child.
“Fine,” she handed him the shirt.
“It von’t vear it,” he said, tossing it into the fireplace.
“Viktor! I can’t believe you did that!” Hermione shouted at him.
“Don’t talk to me that vay or there vill be no baby to vear your stupid clothes,” he snapped.
“You will not threaten my child!” yelled Hermione.
“Our child!” he screamed, pushing her into the wall. Hermione’s head hit the wall and she slid down to the floor. A hand fell across her cheek.
“Stop,” she tried to say, shielding her stomach. But Viktor was pulling her up and slamming her against the wall again.
“This is vat you deserve!” he shouted at her as he punched her in the jaw and scratched her arm. As she fell to the ground, helpless with pain, he kicked her in the stomach. He left her there and a second later Hermione heard him leave. She flinched as the door shut loudly. Hermione lifted herself up and gingerly began packing a suitcase. Hermione walked down the stairs as quickly as possible and reached the curb. She drew her hood up to shield her face from view and flagged down the Knight Bus.

Hermione lifted her finger and pushed the button, hoping he was in. Her clothes were soaked through from the rain that had begun to fall. Now that her hood was down again her hair fell in wet clumps around her dripping face. Her eyes were on her feet as the door opened.
“Hermione? My god, what happened to you?” he asked.
“Hi, harry. Can I come in?”



Wow, that was so much longer than I remembered writing it! Lol. It gets a lot rougher in this chapter (obviously) but don’t worry, you don’t see much violence or Viktor throughout the rest of the fic. I’m reminding everyone here that this fic is only five chapters, Btw which is why it is moving so fast. But don’t worry, I have chapter 3 and 4 written so you’ll get those soon!

And no comments on Harry’s wand vibrating please lol.

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(1) For an idea of how far is too far I suggest ‘Four Weddings and a Funeral’

(2) I also suggest ‘Four Weddings…’ for information on the origin of the word ‘honeymoon. Very insightful film.
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WOW!!! Hi that is really a good story!!Please post more!! Im getting excited!!!
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yay! new reader, ok, for anyone new coming to the story or anyone I didn't PM, if you want an update on when I added to my stories you have to either leave you e-mail address here or PM it to me.

chapter 3 will be up in like a week cuz I'm going to NC for 6 days and I still have to get it finished by my Betas, I hope I have lots of replies when I get back! *crosses fingers*

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Oh my God!! Victor just cometed merder! Why did Hermione marry him in the first place? She should have gotten a sign the first time he hit her! It's good but, sad! I hope you have fun in NY!
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Great fic so far! sad though...but of course you said it would be so there you go! Krum is evil! hey, i should put that on a shirt! anyways...
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VERY GOOD!! Krum should go to Azkaban!!
Post more soon!!!
Have fun in NC (whatever that is! )!!!!!!
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krums a jerk, at least she went running to harry

great fic PAMS
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PAMS! so glad you started another FF! :sorcerer:
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hey new reader
this is really good
keep posting

Krum is sooo mean
glad she got out of there, instead of carrying on being stupid and pretending it will all go away.
good job she went to Harry and not Ron, because Ron will definetly kill him straight away, and Harry will listen then kill him lol
mean mean mean krum
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DIE, KRUM, DIE!!!!! Everybody chant along with me!!!!
DIE, KRUM, DIE!!!!!
DIE, KRUM, DIE!!!!!!......................................


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OMG i can't believe i missed the 2nd post! *cries*:ermsmile:

woah there is only 2 words for it- domestic violence

and another 5 words for it- awesome post, i need more!

i think harry has a thing for hermione (i'm reading between the lines here!)

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LOL, Jes do you think your readers have dirty minds? *cough*

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p.s. DIE, KRUM, DIE!!!!!
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This ff is really good!
I can't believe he hit her! Well, at least she had the common sense to leave when her child was in danger.





DIE, KRUM, DIE!!!!!!!
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YAY! soo many replies!! I just got back from North Carolina (NC) and it's like 1 in the morning (darn airlines!) so I can't add now but I have number 3 done so it will go up tomorrow..well today, lol.

die, Krum, die? has a nice ring to it, lol. maybe you should all put that on a t-shirt, lol.

anyway, promise more when I wake up...

thanx again to all my awesome readers!!

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woohoo, your back! can't wait for chapter 3!! *dances*
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Jes is bak!! :sorcerer:

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heehee, you guys are fiunny. lol. (took me a sec to get it too, and it's my sn..uh ohh, lol)

ok, the promised third chapter!

Chapter Three: Facing changes (i couldn't think of anything so i put together ideas from by betas!)


Harry held back the door to let her in. Hermione made her way straight to the couch where she dropped her suitcase and fell, crying, onto the floor. Harry ran to pick her up. Footsteps creaked on the landing.
“Harry, who is it?” asked a voice.
“It’s Hermione. Go back to bed Carrie, I’ll be there soon.” Then he turned back to Hermione.
“What is wrong? You have to tell me so I can help you,” he said softly to her.
“I can’t tell you. Ouch, OUCH!” she cried, grabbing her stomach.
“Oh god, is something wrong with the baby?” he asked. When Hermione didn’t reply he ran upstairs and returned with a coat and a set of keys. Harry carried Hermione out to the car.
“What-“
“We’re going to the hospital,” he told her.

When Hermione woke up she found herself in a hospital bed. A big machine floating to the left of her was beeping every few seconds. Then she turned her head to the right.
“Harry?” she asked. He lifted his head.
“Oh thank God you’re awake. You’ve been asleep for two days,” he looked relieved but a hint of worry still showed on his face.
“Two days? And you’ve been here the whole time?” she smiled as he nodded hi head.
“The whole time. I couldn’t leave you. Mind you, you must have set a record for the most visitors while unconscious,” he laughed.
“Who came?” she asked, glad that people had stopped by to see her.
“Let’s see. The whole Weasley family, even Bill and Charlie came! And Lavender and Parvati brought you those flowers. Neville stopped by and Dumbledore came…” he continued rattling off names but Hermione didn’t hear him say Viktor. “…and, oh yeah, Professor McGonagall got all the teachers to sign this card for you,” he finished.
“No one else?” she asked, just in case he had forgotten.
“Well, your Mum and Dad are in the lobby. Do you want me to go get them?” he offered.
“Not now. I just want to rest. You can go home, Harry,” she said.
“Oh no, I’m staying until you get better and then I’m taking you home with me until Viktor gets back from that tournament. Bad timing, eh?” he told her. Hermione was sure she couldn’t remember anything about a tournament this week. He usually asked her to go with him.
Just then the nurse walked in. She carried a tray of rattling medicine and a clipboard.
“Welcome back, Mrs. Krum!” she said as she changed Hermione’s fluids. It was just then that Hermione realized how many tubes were stuck in her.
“I hope you’re feeling better because we have some questions to ask you. Would you like your brother to stay in the room?” she asked. Harry flattened his bangs.
“Oh he’s not-“ she started. But then she saw the look on Harry’s face. “Uhh, he can stay. He probably remembers more than me,” she forced a laugh.
“Very well. On your chart we have noted several cuts and bruises. How did you get these and are they a result of why you are here?” she asked. Hermione swallowed hard.
“Uhh, yes. They are why I am here. I, I fell down the stairs. In my um, brother’s house, I tripped on the landing and fell,” she lied, saying the first thing that came to her mind.
“I see. Now, Mrs. Krum, are you aware of the delicate state you are in?” the nurse continued.
“Yes. I, oh God, is my baby ok?” Hermione asked, suddenly remembering Viktor kick her in the stomach.
“Everything looks pretty good but we still need to get the results back from our tests. We’ll have that information for you tomorrow. Your parents are filling out your forms so you just rest up,” the nurse smiled at Hermione and left the room.
“Why did you tell them that you’re my brother?’ she asked, her scolding tone setting in.
“It’s the only way they would let me stay in the room. Why did you lie about falling down the stairs?” he asked, hitting her with a dark glare. Hermione then realized it was a bad idea to say to the accident had taken place at Harry’s house. Of course he would know she was lying.
“I don’t know what you are talking about. I fell in the apartment, I just said your house to try and keep up with your stupid lie. Now, thank-you for coming, Harry but can I please talk to my parents?” she asked maybe a little harsher than she meant.
“Yeah, of course,” he said, sighing. Harry kissed her on of the forehead and left the room.

“Mrs. Krum, good morning!” called the nurse as she came into the room the next day. Hermione winced at the name. The nurse pulled back the shades causing Hermione to blink furiously as the light poured in.
“We have your results back,” the nurse said. Hermione was suddenly wide-awake. She clutched her stomach instinctively.
“And….” She asked, holding her breath.
“And you and the baby are both going to be fine! The fall bruised the wall of your uterus slightly but it was not close enough to the fetus to damage any growth that was going on. Your very lucky,” she was smiling.
“Oh thank God,” Hermione said. “Thank-you! I can’t tell you how grateful I am.”
“It’s my pleasure. And I have a something for you. We took pictures of the baby when we were just looking for very obvious problems. Would you like to see the photos?” she asked.
“Oh, yes. Of course,” replied Hermione, resting against the headboard and holding out her hands.
The nurse handed her several pictures that were, of course, moving. Hermione watched as the barely formed child moved around. The doctors had already told her that it wouldn’t really develop until the fifth month when she would start to get very large.
“Gosh, it’s so active for just three months,”
“Yes, and her brain impulses are amazing. This one’s going to be a bright child,” the nurse replied, pointing to the baby’s minute head. Hermione nodded.
“Wait a minute. Her?” Hermione asked. The nurse covered her mouth with her hand.
“I’m so sorry,” she said, blushing furiously.
“No, it’s fine. Now we can start planning,” Hermione smiled at the nurse. “Thank-you,” she said again.
“It’s no problem. You can keep those. Now eat your breakfast. You’ll need your strength if you’re going home tonight!” the nurse said.
“Home. Right, thanks,” Hermione replied quietly.

That night the nurse returned. She carried a pair of Hermione’s clothes that someone had brought her. Once she was done changing, the nurse handed her a phone.
“Would you like to call someone to come and pick you up? You have no strength to apparate in your condition.”
Hermione picked up the phone. She couldn’t call Viktor and she didn’t want to call Harry. Ron was away at a promotional thing, which left,
“Ginny? Hey, yeah it’s me,” Hermione said into the phone.
Pause.
“Yeah, we’re both fine. Look, Ginny, can you come pick me up from the hospital? Room 212,” pause. “Thanks, Gin. See you soon, bye,” she hung up. A few minutes later Ginny walked into the room. She gave Hermione a hug.
“You ready?” she asked.
“Yep, everything’s signed,” she said good-bye to the nurse and followed Ginny down the stairs, through the lobby and out to the sidewalk. It was weird after being in the same room for so long to now be back outside with all these people running around. Ginny called a cab. When they got home Hermione dropped her stuff off in the guestroom.
“Hey! You hungry?” Ginny called up the stirs.
“Starved. I could eat a hippogriff!” Hermione replied as she walked into the kitchen.
“Good. You want take out? Or I could make some pasta or something,” Ginny offered, opening a cabinet.
“Pizza’s fine. They told me I should be feeling better for the next three months. No more puking or headaches!” Hermione giggled happily.

20 minutes later Hermione opened the box of pizza and breathed in the deep aroma wafting towards her nose.
“Yummm, ham and pineapple. Thanks, Gin,” she said, pulling out a slice. She took a bite and then promptly spit it back out.
“Yuck!” she said, dropping her slice on top of the box.
“What?” asked Ginny, taking a bite.
“That was disgusting,” Hermione said as she poured herself a glass of apple juice to try and get rid of the taste.
“I think it’s good. Oh well, look in the fridge and see if there is anything you want,” Ginny said, taking another slice. Hermione opened the fridge door and peered inside. She pulled out a can and opened it.
“Yummm, she said, sitting back down with her mouth full. Ginny looked at the can and wrinkled her nose.
“Beets? You hate beets!” she cried.
“Oh well, I like them now,” Hermione replied, shrugging. “They said I may start to experience differences in appetite,” she added.
“Well they were right,” Ginny giggled, eyeing the beets.

Hermione called her boss the next day. He told her Harry had informed him of her accident and that it was fine if she took a little while off to recover. He sent his best wishes to both her and the baby. One day Ginny came to her with some bad news.
“Hermione, the magazine needs me to be away for a little bit to work on an article,” she said over breakfast on Hermione’s third day staying with her. Hermione looked up from the paper.
“Oh, where are you going?” she asked.
“America. For a month,” she said sadly. Hermione looked at her and nodded her head slowly.
“I can’t leave you here alone. Not for that long,” Ginny said. She cleared her throat, “That’s why I called Harry,” she added.
“WHAT?” Hermione spat out her juice. She couldn’t believe her ears.
“He said you could stay at their place for a while. As long as you need to get back on your feet. And Viktor comes home soon, right? Then you can move back in,” she said cheerfully.
Hermione nodded. “When do you leave?” she asked in a hollow voice.
“Tonight,” Ginny said quietly. “I’ll bring you over before I leave. Hermione, I know you and Harry are having some fight right now but he’s just trying to help. Please, just try to be happy,” she said.
Hermione stood. “I have to go pack.”

That night Ginny drove Hermione to Harry’s house. They were silent for most of the trip. When Ginny pulled up outside of the house she turned off the engine and looked over at Hermione.
“Look, I know this pregnancy is really freaking you out and God knows I’m glad it not me having the baby!” Hermione allowed herself a smile. Ginny had never been too keen on the whole birth idea. She planned to adopt if she ever wanted kids. “But I want you to know that you are going to get though it and when you do, you’re going to look back and be glad you had friends like Harry because he loved you. We all do,” she squeezed Hermione’s hands and got out to get Hermione’s stuff from the boot. Hermione opened her door and turned to Ginny.
“Thanks, Gin. I know your right and I know you all care about me,” she said.
“That’s my job as a friend,” Ginny replied. They hugged and Hermione let one tear fall onto Ginny’s jumper.
“Like I said. Give him a chance because he means well, even if it doesn’t always seem like it. And don’t eat all his beets. You know he loves them,” she joked. Hermione let herself laugh.
“Have a good time in the states,” she said.
“I will. Harry’s letting me leave the car here so you can use it if you need to,” she checked her watch. “Oh, I have to get going. Take care of yourself, I’ll see you soon.”
“Bye,” Hermione waved. Ginny picked up her luggage and with a slight * pop * she disappeared.
Hermione picked up her own suitcase and walked to the door.


Wow, ok so maybe not shorter than the second chapter, lol. so that was a happier chapter and chapter four needs to be typed and read by my Betas (who are great!) so give me a few days..the faster y'all reply, the sooner i get the next chapter up!

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p.s. before you ask, yes, Harry is married. she doesn't really play a major role in the fic, she does some stuff with Hermione but other than that she's just a nothing character. I needed her basically to stop myself making this into a romance fic. lol
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yay great update!
i don't know why but i was so scared that hermione was going to lose her baby- and its a girl! awwww :flowersmile:
i'm felling kinda emotional at the moment...(mother nature...lol)

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ooh yay the babys fine
its a girl, and its gonna take after Hermione and be smart! yay!
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I'm thrilled that her and her baby are fine!
But she should really tell someone the truth about Krum. :ermsmile:
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Wow! That was so great! I love the long ones. Hermione needs to tell somebody! And don't go back to Krum! Die Krum Die!
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